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Episode starts
Chinki gives death glare…. nd twinkle winks at her….
Ishika: twinkle u r still on 5 nd i m on 8…
Twinkle: what…??? Now chinki if i became talli (drunk) na dn u have to handle me…. okay…
Chinki: i won’t…. i m going(She goes from der)
At last twinkle 14 nd ishika give up on 13…..
Twinkle(full drunk): i won yeee….
Ishika(same here): yeeeee let’s celebrate…..
Twinkle: yupzzz…. let’s go to d dance floor….
Ishika: wait… enjoy but not lyk dat…. ummm m feeling lyk kissing some1…
Twinkle: kiss…?? Vo kya hota h…
Ishika: u don’t knw kiss… wait… i will show u….
She calls a boy passing by…
Boy: yes…
Ishika: i want to give u a kiss….
Twinkle: i also want too but first ishika….
Boy sees der drunken state
Boy(tharki): sure…
Ishika first give a kiss to his cheeks dn a peck to lips….
Ishika(to twinkle): see kiss is doing lyk dat… now u show me….
Twinkle: yes i will show u….
she stands up from d chair nd goes near him…. boy hold her waist nd waits for kiss…
Twinkle(to ishika): no ishika…. i will kiss on his lips not cheeks… is it ok…
Ishika: dam okay…. after dat i will show u how to make a kiss deep….
Twinkle: okay… it sounds interesting….
Boy: i will help u to make a kiss deep…. i will teach u….
Twinkle: really… okay….
She move towards his lips whn chinki comes nd slap a boy….
Chinki: u will teach her how to kiss deeply… u badass…. just go frm here….
Boy leaves from der as guards come….
Ishika: hawww…. 3 – 3 chinki… but where is tanya nd soniya….
Chinki: dy went just now as soniya’s mumma call her nd both came by one car….
Twinkle(crying): i also want to kiss him…. i didn’t even kiss any1….
Chinki: stopit… last tym u dance lyk an insan… nd now diz kiss… u love kunj right…. y r u kissing sm1 else…
Jst dn she sees ishika is fainting…. she holds her… says” how can i handle diz two drunken…. twinkle i m going to take d car u…. “she turns nd sees twinkle is nowhere….
Chinki: now where d hell she gone….
She comes out from pub wd ishika no unconscious ishika but she is balbarring something something in dat state also guards help her… nd she sees twinkle is going by car….
She calls twinkle on her cell
Twinkle: hlo…
Chinki: where r u going twinkle….
Twinkle: chinki…. i m coming to take u…. but first i want to kiss kunj…. i m going to kiss kunj….
Chinki: what…. oy pagl…. come here right now…
Twinkle: no no i m going bye… she cuts d call…
Chinki: it’s better i will handle ishika only… kunj jiju better knw how to handle twinkle… he will handle her… i will inform him….
Chinki calls kunj
Kunj: ys chinki….
Chinki: jiju twinkle is coming to ki(she stops dn say) to u… she is coming to u…. she is not in good state… plz handle her….
Kunj: what… what happen to her…. is she ok…. y she coming to me… she want to meet me…. but y….
Chinki: she is drunk…. as twinkle and ishika is doing compition who drinks more….. she leaves by saying dat she want to meet u…. plz take care of her as Leela aunty thinks she is wd me so don’t tell any1 plz…
Kunj sees twinkle’s call on waiting…
Kunj: okay chinki… i will handle her… bye… he cuts her call nd receives twinkle’s call…. but before he could say anything… twinkle says….
Twinkle: mmuhhhaaa…. (kissing)
Kunj again sees d number….
Twinkle(cutely): kunj….
Kunj places d cell on his chest… nd thinks “shit i love her…. vese iski condition kuch zyada hi khrab lgri h”
Twinkle: ur heart is beating vry fast….
Kunj again places phn on his ears….
Kunj: where r u….
Twinkle(innocently): i tried 3 tyms to climb d pipe of ur balcony…. but i fall everytym…. nd diz tym my knee got hurt….
Kunj runs towards balcony…. “wait… m opening d door come frm der…” she nodes… nd he leaves but sees usha is in d kitchen…. so he comes back…. nd goes to d balcony again…. sees twinkle dancing nd singing…. zara saa jhum lu me…. zara saa ghum lu me….
Still on call
Kunj: twinkle…. (she doesn’t listen) oh god twinkle…. stop dancing….
She then hears kunj’s voice on cell nd realize dat call is on….
Twinkle: kunj…. tumhari awaz aa rhi h…. pr tum dikhai nhi de rhe….. (kunj…. ur voice r coming but i m not able to see u)looking at her phone deeeeeply
Kunj: abee…. upr dekh meri maaaaa….. (look up my mother)
Twinkle(loudly): hieee kunjjjj….. (normal tone) pr tum itnaaaa dur ho or tumhari aawaz itni pass se kyu aa rhi h (u r vry far but ur voice is coming from near…. why)
Kunj thinks-
Tym ke sath iska screw bhi dhila ho rha h…. iske phle k gir jaye…. kunj do something….. (with d tym her screw is also loosing…. before it falls i have to do something)
He is thinking nd sees twinkle coming up with d ladder….
Kunj: oy jhasi ki rani…. it’s heavy… leave it….
But she doesn’t listen nd with much difficultly places a ladder on d way to kunj’s balcony…..
Twinkle(relief): huhhh….
Twinkle see kunj…. nd starts to climb d ladder…. singing…. jra saaa jhum lu me… jra saa ghum lu me….
She comes up…. kunj holds her hand….
Twinkle: aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Kunj doesn’t response nd helps her to come in by holding her waist nd she places her hands around his neck…. she comes…. nd smiles at kunj… still der hands in dat position… kunj removes his hands… but she doesn’t…. kunj holds her shoulder to remove her hand…. nd removes….
Twinkle: aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Kunj holds her hand…. nd comes in d room…..
Twinkle: aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Both stop in d room…
Twinkle: aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Kunj(rolling his eyes): iski gadi to yhi atak gyii yrrr….
Twinkle: aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Kunj(strictly): stop singing….
She makes innocent face…
Twinkle(vry slowly): aaa tujhe chum lu me….
Diz tym kunj smiles.. nd dn laughs..
Kunj: tu pagl h….
Twinkle sees him smiling nd smiles…. she goes near him…. nd move towards his lips…. kunj steps back nd stands understanding her condition… she sees him nd steps forward…. now kunj starts moving backward as twinkle is following him…. he stops by d wall…. as he stop twinkle immediately moves towards his lips by holding his neck from her hands…. kunj with no option immediately closed his eyes…
But after 10 sec. by feeling no response he opens his eyes…. nd see twinkle is close vry close to him…. her face is vry close to his face…. her eyes r closed nd a smile on lips… as if she is enjoying his breath…. a vibration runs in his body which gives him goosebumps…. he is not in a condition to say anything bcoz both r vry close der lips r vry close…. twinkle holds his hands with closed eyes nd places it on her waist…. kunj holds her waist tightly…. while twinkle clutches his shirt…. both is breathing heavily…. twinkle parts her lips to kiss him… but he places his hand on her mouth….
Twinkle(removes his hand): kunjjjj…. I wanna kiss….
Kunj: noooo twinkle….
twinkle again moves to his lips…. he moves from der….
Kunj: twinkle… u r not in ur sense… don’t do anything dat u will feel guilty tomorrow….
Twinkle(starts crying): i want to kiss u kunj…. i nvr kiss any1 in my lyf…
Kunj: oh u nvr kiss any1… not even ur mom nd dad….
Twinkle: not dat typ of kiss… other typ of kiss….
Kunj: other typ…. y will i do dat other typ of kiss with U….
Twinkle: u r so mean…. i want to knw how to kiss…. nd deep kiss…. ishika told me abt kiss…. dat boy also told me dat he will teach me…. how to make deep a kiss….
Kunj(wide eyes): who….who told u…
Twinkle: vooo…(she starts thinking) i don’t knw bt…. he is soo nyc… he is about to kiss me nd i m waiting for kiss…. but….
Kunj(angrily): but…. bol na….
Twinkle: chinki slapped him…. dn i came here to kiss u…. nd if u don’t kiss me naa…. dn i will again go to dat pub… (thinking)poor guy… he must be waiting for me….
Kunj(anger,jealousy,possessiveness): u r hellllll drunk twinkle…. better u sleep now…..
Twinkle(crying lyk baby): m not drunk… see i m standing on my legs….(pointing towards her legs) see i m walking straight…. (showing him)
While walking she looses her balance nd kunj holds her… dn he holds her in his arms and places gently on bed…. when twinkle pulls him nd turns….. kunj is on d bed nd twinkle is above him…..
Twinkle: it’s my wish kunj…. u have to fulfill it…. u r my would be husband naaaa…. kunjjjjj…… i also want to feel how it feels while kissing….
Her words attacked on his heart but he tries to control d situation….
Kunj: u r fat twinkle…. i will die…. leave me….
##episode ends##
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26 Comments
Shona, it was amazing dear..loved it.. I was laughing throughout..
ow that was owsome mindblowing.
now kunj is dead as he called twinkle taneeja fat
ohhhh realy feel pity for kunj but she can even give a kissssssssssss to him plz
give a wild long great liploch plz plz plz
epi was superb
your writting skills are realy good i must sat
about the epi
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it
Amazing …was funny!!!
Post soon plz
Awesome epi
Fabulous epi shonaa…….the childish behavior of twinkle made me laugh all the way down till I completed reading it
Shona Mona…….
Mona Shona…
Ye episode tha bahut soran …( take this in Punjabi sense ..beautiful ..as mujhe spelling nai arhi hai ..lollz)..
Romance aur cuteness dono ka overdose tha atti Sona…
Aise hi humesha likhti rehna .
( OMG …I’m such a bad shayar …but kya Karun itna accha laga episode ke main rok nai payi apne aap ko ) …
Ssoooooooo goooooddd…..Kunj’s dialouge ….twinkle’s cute behavior….twinj scenes ..ur dp …everything was the best ….
This is the best scene I ever read… love it ….love u ….
Amazing awesome mind blowing….funny epi….mst tha epi…..
Nice and funny
Shona shona shona…
Amazing epi dear loved it,…
Twinkis kiss omggggggggggggggggg???❤❤❤
Jus do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz…
it’s toooo funny?????
i can imagine kunj’s condition
amazing job????????????
update soon
Oh My God Shonaa…Fantastic episode…especially twinkle’s behaviour…it was shooooo shweet…Love u ????
amazing awsome fabulous writer u r
Loved the episode and Drunk Twinkle is so cute year How will Kunj handle her ? God knows but Please post the next episode fast please can’t wait for it
awesome. ..it was just cute n romantic. ..n ishika… hahaha…
its amazing
loved this cuteness overloaded part
update the next part soon
I really wanna know what will happen next
m so excited to know what Twinkle will do when she will come back to her senses so please update soon
Shona it was damn gud.
Cuteness, fun, masti, romance overloaded .
I was smiling like maniac whole time.. ?
Loved it. .Muah… Ctd soon
Shona likhti reh tu sona
Lol..hilarious epi…
wow…. what a cute episode..
the way u penned it down …really hatsoff
Shona…
U know all the time I was smiling reading ur epi…
God!!!..it was Amazing
Loved it❤❤❤
Shona….episode was fab…loved it….
WAh what a epi yrrr. Maza as Gaya. M still laughing.. Tw is very cute n kunj is very loyal. I jus luv both of them n u too writer who makes them like that.. Love uh.. Keep updating superb epi
Maza aa gaya dear…ese episode likhte rena….
Its funny but awesome loved today’s episode alot
it was funny as well as romantic
osm epi…..I never read such a comedy+ romance mix epi….it was mind blowing….loved it to d core
wow osm shonnaa wow amazing
n yah u srsly made me laugh wn u n jasmin ws saying aa tujhe chum lun me reapeating it n sid said iski suin yhin atk gyi i ws srsly laughing lyk hell n infct still m laughuing amazing hahaha sry fr spellings dont mind bt yr u r mind blowinj amazing yr shonaa