Hlooo…. guys….!!!
Thanku sooooooooo much for ur wishes wd lovely comments…. late ho gyi naa aaj sorry…. nooo cute saa sorry…. was busy so didn’t get d tym to write…. even i read ur comments today…. nd m glad dat u all lyk it….
Zaku: thanks for ur wish…. i will surely give d treat…. not possible to post 2 episodes today…. so tomorrow pkka….
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Sidmin, Shreya, ria, rashi, arundhati, fan, tamanna, sameera, lama, kruti, shatakshi, purnima, khushi….. all thanku soo much…. as i always say ur comments means a lot…. here is nxt update…. hope u lyk diz….
Episode starts
Twinkle: now we should take leave…. nyc meeting u all….
They take der jewelleries nd leaves but as they went to d door some1 enters….(same man whom twinkle fought)
Kunj says “twinkle” nd looks at her but she is not beside him….
Kunj(whispers): ab ye kha gyi…. (now where she gone)
Twinkle(whispers): tumhare piche…. (behind u)
Man: u….
Girl: dad u came…. (she narrates all d incidence)
Man(to kunj): but where is dat girl….
Kunj holds her hand from behind nd make her face him….
Man: don’t worry…. instead i m thankful to you dat u came here wd our jewelleries….
Kunj: thanku as well…. but i think we have to leave now….
Man: its 11 pm…. plz stay here tonight if it’s not urgent….
Kunj: nooo… sorry it’s really urgent…. our mom is calling us continusly…. we have to leave….
They leaves…. (just imagine…. at night…. long drive nd twinj)
At car….
Twinkle: mai tenu smjhava ki na tere bina lgda ji tu ki jane pyar mera me kru intzaar tera tu dil tu hi jaan meri…. me tenu smjhava ki na tere bina lgda ji…. ur turn…
Kunj: from J…. ummm…. yaaa…. janam janam janam sath chlna uhi kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yhi ek jaan he bhle do bdn ho juda msri hoke hmesha hi rhna kbhi na khna alvida….. ur turn….
Twinkle: ummm…d… dehleez pe mere dil ki jo rkhe h tune kadam tere naam pe meri zindagi likh di mere humdum haa sikha mene jeena jeena kese jeena haa sikha mene jeena mere humdum naa sikha kbhi jeena jeena kese jeena na sikha jeena tere bina humdum….
Kunj: mood aashiqanaa h subh ghr jaana h tune kesa jaadu h kiya…. lmha ye suhana h tym nhi gvana h jeena ka mza le sathiyaa….
Twinkle: to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo piyaaaaaaa ×4
(she starts dancing in a sitting position)
Twinkle: befikar dil h aaj…. he tera mujhpe raaj…. jo khe khne de bavara ye smaaj….
(She stands up nd enjoy d cool breeze from d sunroof of d car nd start dancing)
Kunj: bhaage yha vha ye zindagi fraari h….. vesi hi zindagi h jis trh gujari h….. mood aashiqanaa h subh ghr jana h tune ksa jaadu h kiya…. lmha ye suhana h tym nhi gvana h jeene ka mza le saathiyaa….
Twinkle: to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo piyaaaaaaa ×4
Twinkle: khwaabon kaa town h…. raat bhi brown h…. kya hua kuch nhi do hi drink down h….
Kunj: nshe me hm nhi h ye sma nasheela h paani bhi pite h to lgta h tgila…. mood aashiqanaa h subh ghr jana h tune kese jaadu h kiya…. lmha ye suhana h tym nhi gvana h jeene ka mza le saathiyaa….
Twinkle: to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo to kheech meri photo piyaaaaaaaa ×4
(She comes in nd sits)
Kunj: tujhe pta h…. zyada frk nhi tere drink krne nhi krne me…. tu natural piykkad(drunken) h….
Twinkle(disgusting): u was also singing wd me….
Kunj: yaa but u was dancing also….
Twinkle: agr ye steering nhi hota na tumhare hath me to tum bhi dance krte…. (if diz steering was not in ur hand dn u was also dance wd me)
Kunj: nhi krta… (no i won’t)
Twinkle: krte… me tumhe bohut achee se jaanti hu…. (u will i inw u very well)
Kunj: achaaa tu mujhe mujhse bhi zyada achee se jaanti h…. (really u knw me more dn me)
Twinkle: haa…. (yes)
Kunj: okay… so tell me…. nooo…. suppose…. suppose dat i love sm1…. she doesn’t knw dat i love her…. soo how will i propose her…. tell me….
Twinkle: ummmm…. ummm…. umm… um…. mmmm…. mmm….
Kunj: bol bol….
Twinkle: tum usko ek romantic date pe leke jaoge…. or uske wine k glass me ring daloge…. or jb use vo ring milegi u’ll propose her….
Kunj: nd if…. the girl is stupid lyk u dn…. if wd d wine…. she drank ring also dn…. me usko hospital leke jau…. it proves…. u don’t knw me…. i won’t do lyk anything….
Twinkle: okay…. dn tell me…. how will u propose her….
Kunj thinks smthng…. he stops d car…. nd says moving his hands in order to scare her….
Kunj: i’ll take her to d graveyard at 12 am…. and in d middle of graveyard i’ll propose her…. so adventures naa….
Twinkle gets scared her heart starts beating faster….
Twinkle: my god…. kaika adventure…. vhi mr jayegi vo….
He starts laughing hard….
Kunj: look at ur face…. u r scared only with d name of graveyard….
Twinkle: m not scared…. it just….
Kunj: haa…. haa…. it just…. wht….
She gives disgusting look nd kunj again starts d car…. but but it is not starting….
Twinkle: itna drama mt kro kunj…. mujhe dr nhi lg rha…. plz car start kro…. (m not scared kunj….. don’t do drama…. start d car)
Kunj: itni importance mt de khud ko…. car actual me start nhi ho rhi…. (don’t give too much importance to u…. it is actually not starting)
Twinkle: wht…. me try krti hu (i’ll try)
Kunj: haa tere hath me jaadu jo h car start ho jayegi na…. (yes u have magic on ur hand so car get start naa)
She gives whtevr look…. nd both comes out of d car…. around 1 am in an empty road…. with d cool breeze…. she feels cold kunj takes out his jacket nd make her wear (filmy scene but) she points towards his t-shirt….
Kunj: wht….
Twinkle: make me wear dat t-shirt also….
His mouth got open bcoz of shock…. she laughs nd give him his jacket….
Twinkle: how sweet kunj…. me bs drama kr rhi thi… take diz…. (i was just pretending…. take diz…. )
Kunj(shying bt not showing): ab pehn le…. it suits u…. (no plz wear it suits u)
Twinkle smiles nd wears it again…. she looks here nd der nd finds smthng….
Twinkle: let’s go der kunj…. wait… a board is der….. (she reads) umm…. church…yard…. churchyard….
She looks kunj who is scared but not showing but twinkle feels diz….
Twinkle(confidently): let’s go der….
Kunj(tries to be confident): noo…. u will be scared….
He goes nd checks d car…. while twinkle says….
Twinkle: why will i be scared…. yaa…. if u r scared dn let it be….
Without responding her…. Kunj sit in car nd try again to start a car…. nd it starts….
Kunj: u r coming…. or i will go….
Twinkle(acts to be angry): i told u one thing only…. i want to go der…. nd u r not fulfilling my wish…. if u r scared dn tell me naa….
He also comes out of d car nd goes to her….
Kunj(angrily): ohh is it…. i m not fulfilling ur wish…. u knw ystrdy also u did diz…. (mimics) it’s my wish kunj plz fulfill it kiss me plz…. hd ho gyii…. u want to go der…. come let’s go….
He holds her hand nd drags her to d churchyard…. twinkle is shocked by his behavior….
Twinkle: noo…. kunj…. i don’t want to go…. kunj plz leave my hand…. plz kunj….
Kunj leaves her hand whn they went outside churchyard….
Kunj: u want diz only naa…. let’s go in….
Both enters in d graveyard…. she sees many graves der soo she stops near d gate…. he drags her but she holds d gate…. (imagine twinkle’s condition at midnight dat too in graveyard)
Twinkle(scared+teary eyes): i don’t want to go i told u naa…. i m sorry….
Kunj leaves her hand nd move towards her angrily…. dn a curve appear on his lips nd he starts laughing….
Kunj: oh god m soo sorry…. i don’t knw u got scared diz much…. u want to come here bcoz u think i m scared of diz churchyard…. yaa at first i was but der is nothing to be scared…. nd i was acting to be angry…. i m really so….. (Chaaaaaataaaaaak)
Yes twinkle slapped him…. she starts crying…. he tries to hug her but….
Twinkle(crying): don’t touch me…. i hate u…. u r very bad….
Kunj(holding his ears): m sooo sorry…. (cups her face)
Twinkle(jerks his hand): stay away…. (crying)
She goes from der but unknowingly instead of going outside she goes in d graveyard…. whn she sees d graves around her she immediately runs nd hugs kunj who is still on d gate of churchyard…. she hugs him tightly nd with hugging hitting him hard with her hands
Twinkle(crying nd hitting him): u r very very very bad…. i hate u kunj sarna…. i hate u….
Kunj: aaahhh…. twinkleeeee…. stop hitting me it is hurting….
Twinkle breaks d hug…. both r still very close…. kunj touches his head with hers….
Kunj(whispers as they r very close): sorry…. i promise i won’t do diz again….
Saying diz he looks at her lips nd moves towards her lips…. their nose touches nd lips r few mm away…. twinkle moves away…. nd starts to leave kunj follows her…. without saying anything she sat on d car…. kunj also nd they leaves…. she cried lyk a lil baby soo kunj smiles seeing diz but she gives him an angry look…. they reaches amritsar at early morning…. kunj parks d car in sarna mension…. she doesn’t say anything nd starts to move from der buttt kunj holds her hand nd pins her to d car….
Kunj: Tashan na dikha…. sorry bola na mene…. (don’t show attitude…. i said sorry naa)
She makes faces nd bites his hand…. he leaves her nd she starts to go….
Kunj: jungliee billi…. (wild cat)
She turns nd says….
Twinkle: jungliee kuttaa…. (wild dog)
She immediately runs from der….
Kunj(open mouth wd shock): kuttaa…. how dare she…. (he smiles)
##episode ends##
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17 Comments
Shona.. Bahut mast. . Ab what can i say…
It was too gud.
A treat to read
Cutie cute epi ….loved it dear
Shona….episode was awesome as u are… Amazing… Superb…
Awesome epi..waiting 4 the nxt part..
Shona shona bahut hi zyada shona epi tha…
Loved it so much…????
Do cont asap…..
Haha it was funny,,…. Nice epi
Post sooooon and yeah two epi as u promised ….
aswm
Loved the episode and graveyard scene was just awesome waiting for the next episode plz post asap
Ya soon superbb epi ??? kutta ??
Muuuuuuah! Loved it to the core
It was amazing Shona!?
awesome epi…bhot funny tha……maze aaa gye….eagerly waiting for next part….
Hhaaahhaa…kitna funny tha…loved it ….so good episode Shona Mona..
Aaj maaf krde chote comment ke liye kya karun eid ki preparation mein busy hon…badi mushkil se padne ka time mila hai ….
Love u
Amazing episode…soooo good…loved this track
I have never commented on this ff before I am really liking it . I love your style of writing.
hey shonnaa amazing actually my mouth ws also lft opn wn she said junglie kutta haha n yr amazing episode dear pls posst nxt asap cant w8 shonna lud it yr hahaha
It was awesome very nice
You write so well
You made my day …..thankewww for giving such a ff ….where u live n in which class u study???? …..plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz tell me ….I was a silent reader but u forced me to comment by giving such a ff …..plzzzzz reply plzzzzz reply …..plzzz answer dear ??????????????