Hi guys! This is mars with new story on most adorable, cutest and evergreen couple who else SWASAN hehe.
As my one story affection is about to end so I thought to give new one.Hope so u will like it.
UNCONTROLLABLE FEELINGS
(Swasan ff)
Charactersketch:
Sanskar Maheshwari:26 years old. Young handsome man.he is orphan as he lost his parents when he was just three years old. He is serious and sincere person.He is commerce graduated currently doing job in a bank.
He loves one person the most and he is Rajesh gododia bcoz he is the one who bought him from orphan and give him education. He is engaged with kavita as rajesh wants.Now takes care of rajesh and maintain all things in house.
Swara gododia: 24 years old gorgeous and cute girl.she is living in USA currently. She is open minded,fun loving and modern girl.She loves her freedom. She has completed her degree so coming back to India.only daughter of shomi and shekar.And she loves her grandfather rajesh gododia a lot.
Kavita mathur: 25 years old.she is not much educated. Simple village girl.she likes Sanskar as she is engaged with him.She is sincere,innocent.Always listen to elders in short very sanskari.
Rajesh gododia: he is old man lives in uttrakand in his ancestors house whereas his son and daughter lives in Kolkata.they insisted him to come with them but he loves his house and wish to live in rural area.loves Sanskar a lot who is his care taker cum companion in uttrakhand.loves his granddaughter swara alot and misses her as she went to USA 5 years back for her studies.
Shekar and shomi gododia: parents of swara and son and dil of rajesh .they live in Kolkata bcoz of shekar’s business.They are rich enough.
Ram and sujata mathur: kavita’s parents.typical village people. Ram is school teacher and sujata is housewife.
Loves their only daughter but had put many restrictions on her as they live in rural area.
Plot
The story will commence in rural area when swara will go to uttrakhand to meet his grandfather. She had never visited there as she was small and shekar was not having enough time to take her .only rajesh used to go to kolkata sometimes.swara used to enjoy with him and he is her best friend. Then she went to USA but still was in contact with rajesh.
Now let’s see how swasan will meet and their story will proceed.
Guys if u want me to continue the story then plz tell me.
Kindly leave your comments.
Thank you
Bye.
Take care
62 Comments
Loved it..continue soon
Thank you dear and will post soon
Nice
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Interesting dear. Plz continue. But don’t make kavitha character as negative. Don’t take me wrong, its just I want to see her in innocent role. Sorry dear if I hurt u. Plz update naughty billo ff!
Thank you dear and don’t be sorry as till now I also had thought of kavita’s character positive.
Naughty billo tomorrow I will post.
Awesome dr
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This is gonna be good… I can feel it..
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Nice..plz continue..would love to read further..tc..
Thank you dear and I will post soon
nyc dear
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wow mars another ff continue intresting plot sanskar engaged with kavita.. update soon.. how ur managing this many ff’s at a time..
Thank you dear and I will post soon.
And i m free now as my classes are little late.so I write ffs.
Nice dear…
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Awesome dear it’s interesting
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wow u started one more story…wohooo
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Awsm Dr…
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HI, Nice plot
I have been reading all your stories for sometime now and they are great.
Do you have a list of all the stories you have written soo far,,I want to read them all
Awesome work
Thank you dear and I m glad that u like my work.Actually I had recently started writing and my stories which I m writing are:
My betterhalf(swasan ff)
Naughty billo(swasan ff)
Sufferings (swasan ten shots)
Affection(swasan five shots)
Distraction(swasan os)
Be careful!she…..is uff(swasan os).
These are my stories till have written.
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nice
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Lovely part
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Super.. Continue mars??
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Awesome superb fantastic mars i loved this concept it really sounds interesting…
Ps: i especially loved the cover pic u used and the lines written on it which specifies that sanskaar is only n only swara’s and how much ever they try to rob our pics swasan was, is and will always remember the best pair ever…..
Thank you dear
Even I love this pic.Whatever anyone can do the reality won’t change that is Sanskar belongs only and only to Swara.
Awesome dr…..
Next one soon…
Thank you dear and i will podt soon.
Wow.. Another story from you. Great. Bring it on dear.
And i’m waiting for your ‘naughty billo’. ?
Thank you dear and naughty billo also I will post soon.
Interesting dear.. Let Kavita be positive only?
Thank you dear and yes hopefully kavita will be positive only.
marssss mar dale GI kya so many ffs at a time girl
ffs k dukaan kholni hey kyaa wese aapas k baat hey khol de buhut profit hoga tere ffs bare kamal k hain saare k saare double daamon me
chal faltu baatein bad me
I loved the concept yaar its amazing fantastic and fantabulous
stress mt Lena take care han
apne time per post kerna
with lots of love
Thank you dear and dukaan kholne ka idea acha diya hai. Chal sath mai kholte hai partnership mai.
Half half profit…he he
BTW thanks for your concern.
Are wah phir deal confirm Mars continue soon waiting
Haha sure sure.
wow..another new ff?loved it..continue soon
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Nice…
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Nyc cncpt..
Continue soon
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Nice dear
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Nice..continue soon.
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