UNEXPECTED SURPRISE IN OUR LOVE

Hai I am Esai I used to read many stories here but its my first attempt to write something on my favorite couple devdaan(vardaan&devanshi)
I am crazy fan of hellyshah after seeing devanshi now i am mudit fan too love both of them.

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The story starts in MUMBAI, one fine morning its peak time vehicles are moving here and there, people there are busy in going to office, college, school etc. Its rainy season the cold air giving chillness to skin, clouds are showering few drops, a bus entering into this busy city (let us see what’s in the bus)

A hand is shown from a window playing with rain drops, her fingers are beautifully waving up and down, nails are coloured perfectly, and her bangles are making sweet rhythm along with rain drops.

(Don’t you wants to see whose hand is this let us see)

Bus stops and the door opened ?? woww a beautiful girl getting down with breathtaking smile her hair floating in air and cold breeze touching her face making her to close her eyes to feel the chillness?

Scene shifted to XYZ unvisersity,Mumbai huge gate students are entering by walk/bike/car both sides of the path large garden with big trees we can see big building its entrance has beautiful foundation. Its 1st day of college some were enjoying with friends some were ragging fresher’s.

A group of boys and girls sitting near to the gate arguing on something(let us see what’s going on)

Rahul : guys please at least this time we can rag fresher’s now we are 3rd year seniors yaar see there how final year guys are enjoying.

Girls(Nikita,Kavitha,Suji) shouted at him no means no.

Vivek (pleaded them): we will not do much just we can call them and ask their intro that’s it not much please.
But girls didn’t  convinced.

Boys(Rahul,Vivek,Pradeep) they know who can convince them turned towards their left side see a boy who is leaning on the wall and enjoying his friends fighting. He is wearing skyblue shirt with dark blue overcoat blue jeans, some of his hairs are dancing on his forehead. Inshort he is looking hot and handsome.

(Wow??? please don’t eye on him you have to face lot of enemies)

His friends looking at him in puppy face that he can’t resist them and recommend the girls that they won’t cross the limits.Due to his saying finally girls agreed and boys jumped on him saying thank u.

Vivek (kissed his cheeks tightly) : Vardaaan you are our saviour yaar if you not there what will we do with these devils(pointing girls and wipes his fake tears).

Vardaan: Arey dramakings stop your drama and do what u want but be careful we will be watching if u guys cross limit  then(show them his hand like he will punch them).Boys being afraid nodded their head.

Vivek (sat with girls by looking towards gate): OK enough let’s us select anyone.

A girl in blue jeans yellow offshoulder top with pink blue combination overcoat  entered inside the gate her long bag was hanging crossly on her shoulder she is taking small small steps by twisting her fingers shows how much nervous she is.

Rahul(shouted): arey see there guys(pointing towards a girl)

Vardaan who sits next to him turns his eyes towards where he showing??? he gets mesmerized by the beauty infront of him world stop moving he can’t able to blink his eyes he is watching her every actions like how she biting her lips how she cutely blinking her eyes looking here and there which brings smile in his lips he comes back to sense when she turns towards them as rahul called her. She came to them nervously rubbing her hands and stands in front of them.

Pradeep move towards her that girl got tensed and tightly closed her eyes which makes everyone to smile at her cuteness. But he pulled her cheeks which makes her to open her eyes widely.

Pradeep: You know what you are looking so cute what’s your name.

She(nervously): Ohh Dev..devanshi.

Pradeep: Wow so sweet name you looking so tensed are you new to mumbai.

Devanshi(bitting her nails) : Yes.

Pradeep: Are you staying in hostel.

Devanshi: No I am staying with my uncle aunty.

Nikita: Enough don’t u think she is getting afraid of u just move ahead dear no need to afraid we are like your sister you can ask any help anytime.

Devanshi smiled and thanked them.

This whole time vardaan just starring at her. Suji introduce everyone to her she simply smiled at them atlast its vardaan’s turn she introduce him as their gang leader devanshi lifted her head to see him as soon as their eyes meet there was cute eyelock which was broken as college bell rang.

Rahul(lying on vardaan’s shoulder) : Oh no class going to start don’t want to go yaar.

Nikita: Don’t start your drama first day itself we have to go(turned toward devanshi said) you go to your class and don’t forgot if any problem you can tell us ok .

Devanshi nodded and started to go but stopped after few steps turn back to see vardaan who already looking at her she cutely blinked her eyes smiled at him and run away. Vardaan got confused at her reaction but smiled remembering her and went to his class with friends.

Days passes like this devanshi got new friends in her class (Abi,Soumee,Vandy,Shikhar).Both gangs mingled well they used to meet in free times daily.Till now vardaan devanshi didn’t talk to each other sometimes they share eyelocks which was noticed by their friends but they used to keep quite and happy for them. Devanshi ‘parents died when she was very small she was with her dadi in village and completed her school now staying with her uncle aunty who treat her like daughter.She also has one sister(uncle aunty’s daughter)Sakshi both share bond like real sister they used to share everything .Both gangs knows about Devanshi and felt bad. Devanshi won’t talk much shy type sometimes her smile will be the answer for questions. Abi,Soumee,Vandy and Shikhar love her a lot even vardaan gang treat her as sister.

One month passed one morning Vivek came to vardaan home to pick him He came inside and saw vardaan’ father (Ishwar,a businessman gives both father mother love to his son as his wife died giving birth to him) who sitting in hall reading newspaper.

Vivek: Dad(his friends used to call him dad) when did you come from US vardaan didn’t tell anything (took blessing from him).

Ishwar: Came today morning only beta (they talk about random thing).

Soon vardaan came and three took breakfast together.

Ishwar: Vardaan I need to talk to you something important I thought to tell you before going to US but in hurry totally forgot about it

Vardaan(up his head from plate) : yes papa tell.

Ishwar: My friend’s daughter has joined your college in 1st year I only talked to college authorities and made her admission I forgot to tell you before itself if she needs any help plz look for it.

Vardaan (finished eating): but papa college been started before one month if at all she wants any help she would come to me na leave it I will see later.

Vivek (slapped his own forhead): dad unless our gang girls he won’t even see others you telling him to take care of a girl hahha so funny (naughtily )you tell me her details I will handle this matter.

Ishwar (twisted his ear and said in warn tone ): don’t you dare to flirt with her.

Vivek(shouting): Dad its paining why can’t I flirt with her is she that much special to you (pleaded him to leave after he left vivek run and stand near vardaan).

Ishwar: Yes very special and(seeing towards vardaan) how can you flirt your wouldbe bhabhi vivek.

Vardaan looked shocked somehow guessed what’s going on in his papa’s mind but silently praying god that it dont wants to be like that.

Vivek(confused): How she be my bhabhi I have no bhai also then how.

Ishwar (slap his head slightly): arey buddhu if she became my bahu then she  is your bhabhi only na.

Vardaan and vivek shouted  whhhhaaaatttt such that whole house shaken by their shout.

Vardaan: Papa what are you telling (his voice was low as he was in the verge of crying).

Vivek felt bad seeing his condition.

Ishwar: Beta sorry that I took this decision without asking you but I know her from her childhood she is very nice girl I want to see her as your wife once you see her then tell me about your decision I have told them to come home this Sunday.

Vardaan can’t resist his papa and told OK with heavy hearts.

Days passes vardaan was totally sad not talking to friends not attentive to class also. Vivek told everything to all they felt sad for him and think to find some solution for this. Other side vardaan he himself don’t know why he is sad after his papa told about that first thing come to his mind is Devanshi why he is thinking about her he even didn’t see her after that did he missing her if yes then why he is totally in confused state. After lot of struggle between heart and mind he finally concluded that he loves devanshi but he can’t enjoy this moment. In canteen except vardaan all his gang there discussing about solution finally after lot of discussion they decided to be with vardaan on Sunday and tell to dad everything. They also decided to talk to vardaan before that and make him confess his love.

In ground vardaan was sitting and blankly looking the empty space his friends came and sit beside him but he still sitting like same. Suji place her hand on his shoulder shake him lightly he jerks back to sense and look at them. They are shocked to see tears in his eyes.

Rahul: vardaan what happen to u yaar from the day dad told about that girl u are looking so upset plz share with us na.

Vardaan: what can I tell u when I myself don’t know what’s happening in my life.

Rahul(with naughty smile): but we know what happen to u(wink at him).

Vardaan (heads up only to see his friends teasing smile on their face): stop irritating  me and leave me alone please.

Kavitha(kneel down in front of him): how can we leave u like this vardaan by seeing u like this how can we sit quite(cup his face) just once share what is in ur heart we all are there with you will together solve the problem.

Vardaan: Ohhh I was not happy with papa’s decision at the same time I can’t disappoint him too he sacrifice everything only for my happiness I didn’t feel like missing my mom only by his love then how can I reject him.

Suji: arey this is simple problem solution is there in ur question itself (vardaan look confused)OK just answer my few questions U don’t want to make dad sad na(he nodded) we all knows one thing that dad’s only happiness is to see u happy na(again nodded) then how can u think he will feel sad if u reject he will be guilty if he knows by someone else that u are not happy its better u itself tell him about our decision. Tomorrow they are coming just for formality see her then tell dad that u don’t like her.

Pradeep: she is 100% right but why u not like this offer I mean you didn’t even see that girl then why are u rejecting without any reason u can try na who knows if you may like her.

Vardaan: just stop your nonsense I won’t like her and I don’t have place for her in my heart.

Kavitha: it means your heart already have someone(all shouted at him) hey na.

Vardaan knows that he can’t hided anything from his pagal friend finally accepted that he is in love with devanshi.

Kavi&Niki who standing in his both sides twist his ears and shouted that we already know.

Vardaan(shouting in pain&struggling to get out): what u all know but how.

Vivek (came infront of him): by your activities only we notice you from when we meet sis(devanshi short form of sister) you were always smiling&blushing whenever we talk about her (he even imitate how vardaan blush???).then when we all are talking u&sis will do private talking by eyes that how can we miss to notice.

Vardaan brush his hair by his hands with shy smile as he was caught by them. They started to tease him and after few minutes they discuss about Sunday plan& decided to talk to dad about this first then after that problem solved they thought to deal devanshi whether she too love him or not.

Sunday mrg in vardaan’s room all his friends are there vardaan was roaming here and there in tension but they are playing video game. Vardaan got irritated come infront of them with angry gaze.

Vivek( to cool him): arey yaar why are you tensed when we are here we will make her run away from the house just chill.

In hall everyone was there Ishwar was sitting in single sofa vardaan standing behind him with his friends opposite to them one men&one lady of 40’s sitting.Ishwar introduced them to vardaan and he took blessing from them. Ishwar enquired about the girl and replied she went to temple with her friends will come directly her in 5mins.They talking about random things and vardaan’s friends are making fun & teasing vardaan to make him relax.

After few mins a sweet sound of anklet is coming indicating her entry a girl was standing in entrance seeing her vardaan and his friends making facing like they would kill her anytime.Ishwar shouted my beti has came.

Pradeep(murmured audible only to his friends): we are planning to make her out of vardaan’s life but dad calling her beti.

Vardaan’s pov

Arey vardaan what’s happening to you yaar I don’t even know this girl who standing in the entrance then why I am so happy I am feeling like if someone special is nearby why this strange feeling my eyes are fixed to entrance as like it is waiting for someone to see eagerly. Then saw that girl left aside I was confused my eyes widen in shock there she is answer for my strange feeling my heart already knows her presence but I am stupid to realize it. She is  looking so beautiful in pink& orange lehanga her hair left open ,the sound of her long jhumki, hand full of bangles&anklet making me go crazy. But why she is here maybe she is her friend oh god what kind of situation is this. There comes another shock all her friends are standing behind her what they are doing here OMG lots of confusion. But papa told that girl is studying in our college maybe did she is who papa talked about???. Vardaan don’t fly high this confusion will clear soon.

Pov ends

Ishwar: arey why all are standing outside come in na.

They came inside Devdaan(vardaan&devanshi) still starring each other they came to sense by their friends shouting. Both gangs are standing opposite to each other and shocked to see.

Friends: you

Ishwar: did you all know each other.

Suji: ha dad we know infact they are our juniors also we wants to introduce someone special to u(move toward someone&placed her hands around her shoulder) she is that special person Devanshi you know dad we meet her only few days back but she took special place in our heart.

Ishwar(started laughing which makes them confuse&moves toward devanshi place his hand above her head): even she took place in my heart too.

Vardaan&his friends confused. vardaan’s heart beating fast every sec by sec now his hope getting increase.

Pradeep: how u know devanshi dad.

Ishwar(smiles): how can I don’t know her. Let me introduce her first she is my friend’s only daughter she is the girl whom I choose for vardaan(his friends look at vardaan only to see him smiling like idiot). Ram&Janaki(devanshi’ parents)died in an accident when she was so small at that time I want to take her responsibility but ram’s mom refused by saying that she,Omi&Sarala(devanshi’ uncle aunty) took care of her but few months back her dadi too passed away last month I saw omi and he told everything. Ram always dream about Devdaan’s marriage in their childhood itself so I thought its time to fulfill his dream. I explained everything to omi and told him to bring devanshi here and I made her admission in ur college. I just what my beti to get all happiness in her life.

He gets tears while saying this devanshi hugs him and cry silently. He kissed top of her head while everyone having tears. Vardaan promised to himself that he will give her lots of love he won’t bring single tears in her eyes he will take care of her like her parents he will always stand by her support her whatever situation maybe he will protect her always.

Soon all back to normal and elders decided to keep their marriage after their studies Ishwar asked vardaan about his decision and he without thinking shouted yes making elders to shock friends to laugh at him.

Vardaan and his friends get to know that devanshi already know vardaan as ishwar show his photo this made vardaan little angry on her. Both gangs along with sakshi except devdaan went aside to plan something. As per their plan they make excuse from elders and take devdaan to vardaan’s room. All entered inside and make seated devdaan didn’t see each other as she was shy & he was angry. Vardaan gang surrounded devanshi & devanshi gang along with Sakshi rounded vardaan to start their enquiry. They were in opposite sides of the room.

On devanshi side

Pradeep: sis u are too bad u already know about this but didn’t said anything why u do like this.

Devanshi(don’t know what to say): oo… Oh…sorry(cutely hold her ears)

Niki: oh my cute sis oops now u r our bhabi na.

Devanshi(cutely smiled) :no I am always ur cute sis.

Vivek: OK OK leave all that now tell me did u like vardaan. (as soon as he asked this question their full concentration on her face.
Devanshi first widen her eyes saw everyone then lower her eyes her cheeks turn red which indicates them she is blushing).

Rahul:  oye oye someone is blushing (cup her face) we are very happy for both (all have a group hug with smiling face).

On vardaan’s side

As soon as they take vardaan aside abi, soumee, vandy, Sakshi group hugged him telling jiju he too happily respond them Shikhar don’t know what to do scratching his head standing behind them finally he too join them.

Soumee: jiju did u know how much happy we are now we going to rock the college.

Vardaan (twist her ear): stop ur drama you all too hide this for me na. Do you know how much worried I was.

Abi: sorry jiju Deva only told not to tell u but we too came to know two days before only from Sakshi.

Vandy(naughtily put her hand on his shoulder) :but jiju why are you worried OK at that time u not willing for marriage now why you are happy when you comes to know that girl is devanshi.
(everyone comes to point and compel him to tell. Finally he opens about his love to them also told them about he don’t know about devanshi’s feeling for him).

Sakshi: you don’t need to worry about that jiju because even she likes you. (hearing this he feels really happy but he wants to hear it for her).

Soon all get together started teasing and playing later as per their plan one by one all excused and went out to make devdaan alone. Last kavitha went out saying she has work in kitchen while going she closed the door. Now they are alone devanshi feeling so shy went towards window standing like her back was facing vardaan. He can’t wait more he want answer from her why she hides this big thing from him. He stand move towards her. For his every step her breath getting fast making her more nervous. He holds her arm forcefully turn her towards him and pins her to the wall. It happen fraction of seconds she tightly closed her eyes due to sudden force. After few secs she opened her eyes only to see his angry face she was confused why he was angry did he not happy with this marriage did he not like me this thought itself bring tears in her eyes.

Devanshi’s pov

After a long time I was so happy feeling like I am getting whatever lost. Ishwar papa loves me like her own daughter I got my papa in him. When papa told about marriage I was really afraid as I am just going to join college he show me his photo and told that he too studying in same college I felt different seeing his photo my eyes started admiring him day by day I am impatient to see him infront of me. And the day came first day of my college I was nervous also excited not as its my 1st day but to see him. As I was looking here and there some senior called me I got afraid went near them my eyes are fixed on ground. I thought they called me to rag but they are so sweet. They introduced everyone to me last comes their leader I was shocked to see him suddenly but my heart danced atlast it happen. When I am going I cant stop myself to see him turned to see him but he already starring me this made me shy I just ran away to hide it. We meet in freetimes with my friends I love his gang as I got brothers& sisters in the form of them. We didn’t talk each other also I know that he don’t know about marriage. I thought it would be surprise if he know later. I came to know many things about him during these days which made me to fall for him more. Finally now he knows everything but why he is angry??

Pov ends.

Vardaan(holding her arms tightly) : why you did this to me did you how much I felt why papa told about marriage do you know how I felt when think about going away from you do you know how much I missed you. This one week is like hell to me when you know that u was that girl then why didn’t u tell me.

Devanshi(surprised & sad to know he was worried this much) : sorry I don’t know you…(cant able to complete aa she crying like a kid)

Vardaan(his heart too crying seeing her but she want to realize how much he loving her) :you don’t know how simply you said do you why I was sad.

Devanshi(cutely wipe her tears with back of her hand) :nooo..

Vardaan:because(cup her face makes her to see him both now starring): I cant think any other girl in your place Only you, you’re the only thing I wants to see forever In my eyes, in my words, and in everything I do. you are my life, without you I am nothing, I wants to be the reason for your smile, I want to give you all love and happiness , I want to walk with you all my life, my days wants to start &end with you, I want to die in your arm(devanshi closed his mouth her tears are flowing never-ending he slowly remove her hand look deep into her eyes) I LOVE YOU?????
Devanshi’s lips slowly cured into smile her tears are flowing but its because of happiness today she got everything because of him. The man standing infront of her is none other than her man her soulmate. Maybe my parents already now my destiny that’s why they dreamed us a couple. She badly wants to confess her feelings but was too shy. Don’t have strength to face his eyes hugged him tightly and confessed I LOVE YOU TOO ??
He broke the  hug and told her to repeat.

Devanshi(her cheeks turn red) :I I I lov..love… you(again hugged him) ? ??

His happiness has no bound and respond her hug tightly even air can’t pass between them.

Devanshi’s pov

Life became so beautiful after that we used to enjoy a lot in college. Our friends teasing has no limit also we will spent private time in college as well as in home yes sometimes he will come here or I will go there. We both know about each other well our love increased as time goes. His naughtiness also increased by his romance infront of family,his late night coming home through window, importantly he never missed to surprise me. Like this two years passed he completed his studies he got admission for MBA In abroad. The thought of didn’t see him for two years make me weak but I wants to be brave. If he see me like this he will cancel his trip. With heavy heart I bid bye he went to abroad first few days its really difficult for us we misses each other specially in college every place there reminds me of him. We used to talk in phone,video chat share everything. Years passed like decades we finished our studies successfully he came back to home and decided to joined papa in his business soon. That day was really special he didn’t leave me even for a second. Soon elders started to talk about marriage and its fixed after one month . I must saw more than us our friends are excited and they took each work as their responsibility. Otherside we enjoyed our time together as they don’t allow us to do any work. 

Onebyone engagement, mehandi, sangeet, haldi all gets over with great masti,fun,dance, competition between our gangs and too little romance. The most awaited moment for us today is our wedding I sitting in bed fully dressed in heavy lehanga and ornaments I am feeling shy to see myself in mirror. My top to bottom everything was chosen by him . He told me that he want everything  best for me in this special day I feel so blessed to have him.

Suji di, kavi di, niki di, sakshi, abi, soumee, vandy came to take me down. Now I am standing top of stairs with them I can see him sitting in mandap looking more handsome behind him pradeep bhai, vivek bhai, rahul bhai shikhar standing and talking maybe they are teasing him.

They turn to see me smiled at me and whispered something to him. Soon our eyes meet there was a cute lock it breaks when they hold my hands to move down. They made me sit beside him and stand on my back. My hands are shivering in nervous but he know well about me hold my hand in his to assure me everything ok. Our friends along with sakshi did our gathbandhan& uncle aunty came forward to do my Kanyadaan my eyes gets wet as I remember my parents I know they will be more happy and will bless us. We stand up to take  pheras around holy fire we promised each other by taking vows. After finishing it sit down to do further rituals soon he decorated by neck&hairline with mangulsutra&sindoor of his name. We looked each other and smiled panditji announced that marriage gets completed now we are husband and wife. We took blessing from elders and hugged friends.

Pov ends

Vardaan pov

Now we are tied in this pure relationship husband and wife she is my wife Vardaan’s devanshi it sounds great. Oh vardaan you are blushing man. Now I moving to my room where she was waiting yes its our suhagraat. But do u think its easy there standing world’s best devils infront of my room.

Soumee: jiju don’t you think you wants to complete one important ritual before u enter inside.

Vardaan: oh my Sali how can I forgot I don’t want my wife to wait for me long (took bundle of money and give them) here take this share equally now move aside(moves to go inside).

Vandy: jiju what equal share never they are your friends but we are your Sali if you want to see our sister we want more.

Pradeep, vivek, rahul, kavi, suji, niki: when we told that we are his friends even devanshi is our sis.

Vardaan’s jaw touched the ground seeing his friends changing the side.

With no other choice he gave his credit card to girls for shopping and his branded sports bike key to boys. Now are you happy please let me go in yaar.

Abi: ok ok you are looking so innocent u can go in now.

All move aside and shouted have a sleepless night jiju/vardaan and run from there fraction of second.

Vardaan smile and went inside close it behind. His room was beautiful with flowers and candles floors was designed with rose petals &candles.

I must say my lovely devils did this job wonderfully.Room has lovely aroma which is increasing my feeling my eyes land on bed where she is sitting her veil covered her face.

I slowly move towards her sit beside her I can see her nervousness as she hold her lehanga tightly in her fist. I moved my hands to remove her veil her eyes are looking down I cup her face to make her look at me she slightly shivered when our skin contact. I told her to open her eyes but she nod no with shy smile. I smiled and lean towards her kiss her forhead lovely then both eyes tip of her nose then cheeks I lean further towards her lips she was breathing heavily even me too our breath gets mingled there only an inch gap but she get out of my grip fall on bed showing her back to me. I held her shoulder make her turn around she opened her eyes and had a cute eyelock which was full of love. Unknowingly I move forward without breaking our eyelock I captured her lips it was soft & sweet later turns to be passionate her hands move around my neck hold my hairs in her fist I felt happy to see her response my one hand went around her waist other on her back. They went to other world forgot everything in their first kiss. Vardaan move his hand on side table and off the switch lights went off(hahha guys give them privacy yaar).

The end…. ..

Hope u like it thanks to Abirsha to encourage me to write thank u dear?? i dedicate this os to u, soumee, vandy and too devdaan fans.

Thank u.