Shot-2
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I opened my eyes to find myself on a bed…i was shocked finding myself to an unknown place..
It was a beutiful room with a combination of blue n white…neat curtains drawn carefully…n wait..!!
Der was my pictures on one whole wall…no not only me…
“We” me n kunj…
We…!!!
Oh yes..!
I remember now…
Trying to recollect …i made out…
Wen i rang d bell of d house which i was finding becoz of a call(in previous shot..i mentioned)
Wen d door open…
I saw…
I…i..i saw…kkkkuu.kunj..
Yah..! I found kunj…
I was shocked cum surprise cum happy cum excited with alll d mixed feeling…
Suddenly i felt my head heavy n erything turn into black …n i got unconcious…
So yah..! I landed here coz of dis…
Dis must b kunj house…
But why he is living here…..??
Many question were popping in my mind…..
But none answer i got as i didnt found HIM…
I stand up to find him…
But he was nowhere in d rooom…just den my eyes caught a paper n a glaas of juice with it….
It reads..
“Here is a juice drink it…
N rest for some tym….u will feel better..
-K”
It is kunj only..k means kunj…
N ofcourse it would b him.only…who can b der in dis house…his house…
I just hate orange juice n dat was it here….
I leave it..n start to leave d room to find him…
N i found him..standing on d dooow ..his hand were folded on his chest n was standing with d support of door…he was having a cheesy smile on his face…omg…i was dying for dis from.so long ….his smile made me smile unknowingly…
His dark hazel eyes were straight looking into mine brownies..he dint spoke n so does me…
V just looked at eo ..with d same love v did before…
His smile..his jaws..n he was soo s*xy…
No words were spoken but d eyes said it alll
…soon i found myself walking towards him…i dont want to but……
V were like a magnet…he north pole n me south pole..
I was getting pulled towards him….
Sooon i was standing in front of him..few Inches away….till our eyes were set on eo….
Suddenly kunj came into sense..he broke it n looked evrywhere but ME…..
I was again heartbroken…
I felt like i had drowning in d sea…wen i was going to get out of it..again i got in..
Now i couldnt control my tears felling down my eyes…
Dey just go with d flow…..
Wen he notice dat i was crying…he just cupped my face
“Pls dont cry twinkle…its precious…u cant waste i like dis”he said having tears in his eyes..
“Oh..! So now u remember dis tears r precious..but lemme tell u mr.sarna dis precious tears welled up evry day..evry night…as i miss my kunj..n cant live widout him…”i said not breaking d eyelock which was again created…n hug him tightly
He hugged me back…
It was sooo passionate..n calmed me down..dis was it..i was waiting for dis years…..
I…oops WE remained like dis for almost 10 minutes n den i pulled …..
We were very close..my hands were wrapped on his neck..n his on my waist…
He looked at my lips..
Showing his hunger for dis much span of tym…i,without wasting a second…capture his lips into mine….n pressed it with my whole force..n den slowly started chewing it wildly…dat was not passionate one..but a wild one…n i was d wild in dat..
Ofcourse i would ..he had leave me ..how can he just thought ..
Oh wait..twinkle..
U r kissing him na..!
So concentrate..!
Just concentrate….n be more wild…(????)…
He was just still …means his lips were still…just responding my wild avtaar too…because he know dat he was d reason of it…
He was so calm….n now i can feel his lips had start to bleed…..i pulled myself….
But was still very close to his lips…few inches away..
I gazed at it lips which was bleeding from d corner….
My eyes filled with tears..i looked at him…to find him smilling at me….”sorry..!?” I said with tears….
N without letting him reply i again kissed….him
Now it was showing my love towards him…
It was a passionate one…n smooth…
He was Smiling i coukd see…he respond me back…n den after filling my stomach which was hungry of dis lips…i pulled away…
N caught d glance of his dark hazel eyes…
His grip tihhten on my waist….n his lips sooon touhed my neck….making me shiver…i held him tight n dig my nails on his neck as he leave a sweet love bite on my collar bone….den he leave continuously om my neck putting some wet kisses…which i was wating…i was just feeling n enjoying this moment….
I was moaning continously his name…
N he was going wild…
He tuck my hair strand behimg my year..n kissed my ear lobes..n den bite it sudden…i shout as it pained…
He suddenly leave me..n composed himself..
“Soorrrry…i dint do it intentionally just got with d flow..”he said cupping my face…..
“U cared me dis much for me..?? Dat u even cant hear my shout…?” I said looking straight..
“Yes i do…how can i see my life in pain..?!!!!”he said lovely dat i adore him
But soon i recover…”den y did u leave Me..? If u cant c me in pain..dan y did u himself gave me…?”i said boldly
His face dropped….
“Wat was dat kunj…i know u cant live without me like me..? Dan wat was d thing dat take u away from me..?…”i again said hoping he would reply
But now dis akdu sarna can hear like dis…i need to give him more lecture…u know na..! Emotional blacmailing(???)
But dis was not dat…i need to know…n i hav dat right..?
“Kunj just spoke up……pls ”
“Pls..”i again said making puppy face…
Yay..! Dis work his facial expression changed a bit…
But….ugggghhhhh..! Again it was emotionless…
Now dat was it…!!!.
I took his hand n put it on my head…
“Say truth…if u will not…dan i will kill myslf on d spot..”i said with a poker face…
Den i took a knife which was on d table n put it on my neck..
Dis was affecting….
Yay..!_ dis was…
Wait..?
Yaa ofcourse i m acting..y would i took my life infront of my life…indirctly i would b taking his…n i cant afford dat anymore…
He Suddenly spoke up
“Giv me dis knife i’ll tell u evrything…!”.
Yay..! Mission accomplished…
I strted to dance
MENTALLY OFCOURSE..!
i took d sit on d bed n he sat beside me..he took his hand into mine….
N started..
“U remember maya ….??”
I nodded..
“Ya..dat bl**dy bit*h naa..! Who liked u…!”i said anger boiling in my nerves n body
“No..! She dint liked me…she had an obsession on me..she wanted to get me at any chance..!!….she hated u…”he was speeaking further but i cut
“Dat bl**dy b**ch..i will kill.her…how cam she do dat…dis is only my right..!”i said totally lost my temper
“Wait…man…! Comcentrate on dis..” He said
N i nodded he again started
“She said me to cm to her..n live my life with her..,(bl**dy girl???)i rejected her evry deal…dan atkast she warn me dat if i’ll not den she will kill ur family…but i dint trust…but when…”he said n paused…trying to recollect smthng….
“Cntinue..!”i commsnded…which he gave his famous eyebrow loook(maar daala
???)
“U remember ome day after our mehndi uv got a accident(uv is tw brother)”.
” yaa…he was soo serious..! Dat dr. Put him under observation for 1 day…But wat about dat”i said not getting d point…
“Dat was it…it was planned by MAYA…she said dat nextfurn is ur parents n dn urs…i cant afford dat…n yaa i cant afford to live with her…so i got disappeared…n she thought m dead…?..”he said with a poker look…
” how she thought dat u r death…coz we dint like dat..n no proofs were der..dat ur dead(it was not needed…but u all would ask so..)”i said with angry face…
Ofcourse m angry on maya..she take my kunj away…
“I….”he started with his genius eyebrow look n den into a cheesy smile..
Awww…i love dat…..
Wait tw..dis tym is not for dis…!
“I msgd her to not do like dis..n said i’ll not b my tw’s den its okay..but i will not b urs too…n i said i will die..i wen i disappear she thought m dead”he said sadly
“But mr.budhdhu…she married karan last year After u left…n leftto london..now she us blessed by god with a baby girl…bloo** ba**ard..abhi mere bachche hote agar usne abhi kuch nahi kiya hota…”i said unknowingly…ofcourse…
N den i realized wat i said…
I bit my toungue
“Ohh…to b mrs.sarna..now u know d truth na..! Lets prepare for baby..”kunj said naughtily bringing close to himself through waist
I blush hard….
He was about to kiss
I put my finger
“Wait…y dint u came back after she left…she would not come…coz she dint love u…she had obsession on u..”i said faking anger
His face again dropped
“I thought u will b angry..n kick me out of ur life..”he said
“N dat phone calls..?”i again questioned smartly…
“Dat waa for my family..i did dis calls evry month to check deyvr okay..”he said with a smile n lookimg down.
“N dint call me a single tym..?”i said faking anger
“I was knowing dat my sherni would recognise..n see today here v r..!”he said taking me in a side hug..?
I questioned sm.more n den v left to our Place…dey were soo happy dat i cant describe…
V married in 2 months…
After 2 years..i was blessed with a twin by girl n a boy..?
N lived happily after..i got my kunj d way i had never EXPECTED…IT WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED
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So dis was it..!.
How was it..?..
D romance..?.i wrote it after much tym…so how was it..
I know it bored u..
But itna tym waste kar liya to thoda or kark cmnt kijiye..
N yaaa i know u alll r angry..i posted it whole one week later soo…
Sorry mera mood hi ni ban raha tha….
Cmnt guys..
N yaaa i had replied to evry cmnt..
SWASTI do read ur reply…
N yaa i will b back with a ff in 2-3 days.. So stay tuned …hope u liked dis one…
Bohot mehnat se likha..so do cmnt…
I was seriously overwhelmed with ur response guys…u all literraaly made me blush like hellll..
Thank u for dat…
Love u guys..
I had replied to alll..ALL..
So if u had not read d reply dan read….pls..
N yaa pls i had wrote it wid much difficulty..it toook me 3-4 hours…adeebu se hu puchlo…mood nahi tha fir bhi likha..so pls cmnt…
I tried to wrote a romantic one…hope i did so..dis will not b amazing as i m writing after a lomg tymm…
But pls co-operate…
N guys u know dis is my first tym ..i wrote SERIOUSLY 2014 WORDS….?????..for d first tymmm…pls cmnt…
Here is d link to previous
https://www.tellyupdates.com/unexpected-twinj-two-shots-shot-1/
43 Comments
Hey Ammu
Ur really a comic writer
Hahaha though it was emotional but twinkles pov was funny
Congratulations for writing 2014 words
Do continue
Bye
Thanx sohi….
N i added tw’s pov just to make it normal..as i was knowing it would b boring n emotional one…so..
Glad u enjoyed it…
N yaa m shocked dat i wrote seriously 2014 words..
Thanx again…
N will soon cntinue wid another one
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Amazing awesome fabulous
Thanx purnima…?β
Wow…..Amazingly awesome….????
Thanx rashi?β
Oyeee Aamu…. that was totally amazing… just too good.. loved it..
Why it ended.. it was not boring yarr.. nd i was waiting for it so desperately.. finally u posted.. ab come back soon with ff…
Love u aamu jaan??β€
Thanx judwa behna…??
Gkad u liked it..
Or yeh to two shots tha end to hona hi tha….
Jldi se post karungi..mood ho ga tab.
Thanx again
Love u toooo no three…no infiniteβΊ?????β
Hayeeee my jaan…. π
Aamiiee jaan delh now I hv cmntd ohk……srrieee yr I was late…..bt abhi nhi hun mein late hope soo…. π
M soooo happy to know dat u r going to cum wid a ff…..yyyyiiiippppiiiieeeeeee…..wooohooohhhhhhooooo…… π
Kyaa kahun….speechless or romance tu uski chinta naa kar….bhot jyada hi romantic tha bechaare kunj ke lips hi chaba gyi twinkle….hahahahahahaa…bt den voh intensity…..hey bhagwaan…. π
Srsly luvd d hottness….n sizzles of love….ufff…..beautiful n adorable cute n emotional…..hahaha kunj bhi naaa bhai nahi marti twinkle tumhare bum pe laat hahahhaaaaa……ek baar try toh krte……
Bt srsly d end was soooo cute……..
Sooooooo amazing Sooooooo lovely Sooooooo marvellous Sooooooo speechless Sooooooo ab mein Sooooooo Sooooooo krke thak gayi bt srsly it was tooooo good….just muuaahhhh….osm m in love wid it…. π
Love u Sooooooo mch jaan…. π :* π
I cant wait for ur ff……ab vaisee mene punishment mein likha hai haan ff ke baare mein ki mujhe jaldi jaldi updates chaiyein….bt ummmm….tu bhi mujhe de skti hai punishment late cmnt krne ke liye…..srrieee for dat…..
Still love u n post soon…. π
Kitne time baad mein apni jaan se yeh baat khe pa rhi hun….kitne time baad mein usse aami bula paa rhi hun….m Sooooooo happy yaar…. π
Chal ab chalti hun nahi toh pura page bhar jana hai hahahaaa……hath ruk ni rahe dil maan nhi raha par kashish bhi toh aisee hai kii rukna padega hi….hehe bad try….chal biiee love u… π
Do reply to me ohk…both my cmnts hehe…. π
Love u……
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Thamx dammmu yaar…
Itna baddda essay..?
I loved dis essay…
Seriously…!.thanx for it..
Glad u liked it ..!oops loved it..
N punishment padhlo prevjous epi k cmnt m
Cmnt me di hai..
Jrur padhlo n cmplt karna pls..
Ek os..b chalega…okay..?
Easy kar diya ab to ….
N its ok haath ni ruke to…mere shot se baddi aapki cmnt ho jaati?.love u toooo dher saara..n dekho reply kiya mene??
Hawwww…meko hi punishment de dia hey bhagwaanji…. a ki krdita aamu…merI jaan….
Oyii maine tujhe insta mein DM kiya ki mujhe ninni arahi h..but yrrr abhi main blanket ke ander hun..heheh..acha madam ne finally post kr diya..yrr..kinna wait karaya h tune mujhe..chun..chun..ke badla lungi main tujhse samjhi????? anyways tu toh romance ki queen h..toh tera romance amazing rehta h..aur yeh shot amazing tha yrrr twinkle ke hilarious povs hehe..pagal h twinkle emotional scenes mein hasa rhi thi????…aur tu jaldi aana ff ke saath aur romantic ff ke saath samjhi..aur apna devakshi wala ff jaldi post kario main wait karungi aur jab post hojaye mujhe insta mein DM kr dena..Okkkk bieeee..all my luv to u aqsa ufr aamu ufr romance queen..
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Ab maaf karde wait karane k liye..
N thanx for d cmnt..
Or tw pov to daalna hi tha warna sab bore ho jaate so..
Glad emotional me b hase…
Thamx again
Love u sweeetie
Hey aamu baby…
Live it…
Awesome..
Loved twinkles pov..
It was ??
Love u…
Than presha..
Glad u liked it..
N widout tw’s pov..it would hav been boring n emotional…so i add iy?
Thanx again
Love utooo???
Nice and do continue
Thanx…sidmin23
Aamu awesome amazing loved it
Lovely
Love u keep smiling
Thanx ramya
Superrrrrbbb????? twinkle ka POV funny bhi that???jabardast and masttt????post something next soon…??
Thanx cp..
N wikl soon start a ff tooo
Heyy Aamu…
Thank u soo much for posting….it was just awesome…loved it all…
It was emotional but usse b zyada funny tha?????…..
Post soon….love uβ€β€β€β€β€….
And ha congratulations forwriting 2014 words??????????….
Thanx fatima..
Hehe….glad u liked it..
Love u,?
Awesome amazing .. I just loved it ….
Love you and I would be waiting for your comeback π
Love you π
Thanx shruti..
N i will soon start a ff
Hi aamu!
Yaad hun mai?
Sorry yaar pehle part pe comment nahi kiya actually maine abhi pada mai kuch dino se tu visit nahi kar rahin thi!
Waise I missed you so much!
Aur yeh 2s is amazingly awesome! It’s so beautifully written! I just loved it! I love you so much!
With love,
Urs Tammu
Thanx tamannnnuuu..
N ofcourse yaaaad hai meri jaaaan
N its k..
Ospar cmnt kiya isliye me tumhaati bohot bohot aabhaari hu(??)
Well gkad u liked it..
Love u toooooooo tamannnu
Awesome
Hlo amena I m adeeba’s friend
I luv ur ff junoon wala ishq nd this os is cute
Adeeba said u r unhappy with the number of comments
So we r commenting
Thanx mahira..
Dat so sweet of u…
Glad u liked it…
M noww sooooo much happpy dat u doonnno
Thanx for cmntng?
Hii ammu
Fantastic os
Thanx zeba
Awwww
Lovely os
Thanx ankita…
Heya amena
I luv u ff
Nd amazing os
Thanx tayyaba…
M glad u liked it?
Marvelous os
Thanx zoya
Vaise mujhe tumhari writings bht achi lagti hai
Aur ajj meri laddoo (adeeba) ne kaha tumhare os pe comment krne ko bcoz Tim sad ho
Bht acha os h yeh..
Thanx suman..
Gald u liked it..
Thanx for giving urgym for cmntng…
Emotional yet funny
Thanx garima