Hello everyone,i m going to write a ff.This is my first ff.This is for both Kaanchi and Sanveer fans both.Plz comment down.Critics and suggestions are most welcomed.plz forgive me for grammatical mistakes.So,let’s start.
A boy is standing near a window and continuously watching the moon.Air is blowing and touching his hair as they wants to say something.His face is not clearly visible due to the intense darkness in the room.He has tears in his eyes.
Boy talking to a photo
B:Today is ur birthday.I’ll pray to god for ur well being.I love u soo much.No one take ur place in my life Saa…
Before he could complete his sentence,a servant knocked on the door.
S:Baba,sir is calling u.
B:ok.U may leave now.
Servant exits from the room.
In hall,
That boy is seen coming downstairs.Now,his face is clearly visible.He has wear a white colour kuta-pajama.His eyes r soo magnetic that any girl can fall for him.
B:why u called me?
M(loud voice):Yesterday i sent u with a girl and u threw water on her face.Do u know she is the daughter of Mr.Surya Thakur,the ricchest businessman of India.It’s ridiculous.
B:I did this bcoz she badmouthed about amy love and u know i can’t hear a word against her.
M:Shut up!she was a bertrayer a characterless and a characterless girl…
B(interrupted): dhokha dena uski fidrat nahi,
Dhokha kismat de jati hai ,
Kyonki woh aise khel khilati hai ,
Ki hasti khelti zindagi bhi rone lag jaati
hai.
And secondly,don’t dare u to speak a single single word against her.No one needs a character certificate from u.If a person like u can marry his own secretary just after his wife death,gives character certificate to other then people will say that one thief is giving advice to another thief of leaving wrong path .
M:shut up Veer!Have u forget ur manners to tslk with ur father.
B:If u elder,then plz behave like elders.
After saying this ,Veer move back to his room.
Screen freezes on Veer’s face.
“u all, as human beings ,crave only for happiness,but a little setback pours a stream of sorrow into ur life.I can understand ur pain Veer that one feels when time takes an ugly turn,I can understand anyone,but no one can understand me,bcoz i m the love.”
I know guys,I made our cutiepie Veer as Devdas.
But soon u will get naughty Veer back.???
Thank u for reading guys.
If u feel bored,then plz tell me i’ll stop writing.????
73 Comments
Very nice
Thank u Didi.Keep reading.
Nice story nice thinking and no words for this lovely story
Thank u bhaiya for commenting.Keep reading.
No word and really I like it and my dear friend u write so well Gbu…my best wishes for uh
Thank u Deepa.It really means a lot to get such appreciation from a multitalented person like u.
Keep reading dear.
Keep writing….
Its vry interesting… n not even a single word bored me…gud job….Now, i’ m keen to read ur more stories..
Thank u soo much Monika for being soo supportive. Love u loads. Keep reading dear.
It is one of the best ff i had ever read in my life. Keep writing deat.