everyone in the oberoi mansion get ready for indian business awards.all have the confidence that shivaay would win the award for sure.dadi asks everyone to assemble in the hall.first shakthi and pinky get down and they are elated to see their son grabbing the award.on the other hand tej feels angry over omkara for not following his path.but jhanvi is happy.the beautiful daughter of oberoi mansion priyanka get down with a smile on her face.
dadi:where are the brothers?
pinky:shivaay has gone to the office to check the stocks
dadi:what aboutom and rudra?
jhanvi:they will be there on time.
dadi:ok lets move.
at the award function the oberois meet the talwars.(tej and shakthi has a sister named roop.she was married to amit talwar who is the heir of that family.amit has a sister,poonam talwar married to a lawyer,rajeev khanna and a brother,kesav married to nimmi.tej and amit are really very good friends).both the families were very happy in each other’s presence.dadi hugs roop.she asks about her daughters.finally,roop and amit have three daughters anika,gauri and bhavya.anika takes care of her family business.gauri is a lawyer and bhavya is an indian intelligence office.
dadi:where is anika,gauri and bhavya?
roop:they will be here within few minutes
dadi:i am eagerly waiting for their arrival.i have seen them when they are 6.shivaay and anika used to fight a lot,right.dadi laughs.
roop:yes maa.
(in this story we have six rich families “the ranas,the khurannas,the chaddas,the talwars,the oberois,the choudarys’’.poonam and rajeev don’t children bu considers anika as their daughter.kesav and nimmi have a son,sahil).
the function is about to start.om and gauri come face to face at the parking.they don’t know each other but they feel the connection.they share a eyelock but avoid each other .at the entrance there is some sort of confusion and the announcer announces them as couple seeing them staring at each other.they scold each other for not informing the truth to the announcer.they part their ways and reach their respective families.
rudra is on hurry to meet his family but steps on a girls dupatta and tears it unknowingly.the girl turns out to be bhavya.she turns and scols him for doing so
rudra:i am sorry.i was in a hurry.really sorry miss beautiful
bhavya pours her nail polish on his shoes and asks sorry.rudra and bhavya stare at each oter.they think of not meeting again and part their ways.the function starts.
the function is nearing its end.and the anchor comes up on the stage.
anchor:hi everyone,finally our wait is over.let me call the chief guest to present the businessman of the year award to the winner.
the chief guest steps on the floor.and reads the winner name
chief guest: hmmm,its interesting its a tie.
everyone becomes tensed to know the winners.
chief guest:as the analysis,one winner is mr.shivaay singh oberoi.the oberois are not ready to give up their position.but other winner is really fantabulous.for the first time in the history a woman grabs the businessman award.its none other than ms.annika talwar.the face of the talwar group of industries.i call upon them on the stage.
both anika and shivaay climb the stairs by seeing each other.(o jaana plays..)
to be continued…………………………………..
guys this is my first episode.so let me know my mistakes i would like to avoid them in the future.let me know your opinions ,your views and your thoughts in the comment box below.
and here is the question of this episode. what do you think that is going to happen on the stage?? will anika and shivaay greet each other or going to show off their attitudes???
stay tuned
18 Comments
wow so amazing yar super duper and fabulous and i like it specially di and one more request pls would u change bavya chrt plss bcoz so much of them and i also especially like rumya so pls plssss if u like pls change……
Interesting… Are shivaay n Anika cousins?
I really liked this pls do more gaurika scene equally to shivika and ruvya……
I really like this…..
Nice update
Awesome
It is nice one dear
Awesome..loved the intro…. Excited for the next one… it s very interesting… Waiting for the next one
Just loved the first episode….
Waiting for the next episode…
Nice…one
Hi dear, intro seems nice but u have made a BIG BLUNDER
“tej and shakthi has a sister named roop.she was married to amit talwar”
” roop and amit have three daughters anika,gauri and bhavya ”
SINCE ROOP IS BUA OF SHIVOMRU, so they are COUSINS. you need to fix that dear
NO …IF I SHOW THEM AS SIBLINGS OF SHAKTHI OR ANY OTHER MALE CHARACTER OF THE OBEROI FAMILY,THEY BECOME BROS AND SIS.BUT THIS RELATION IS ACCEPTED.
ALSO I DONT KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN YOU… HAVE U SEEN BEINTEHAA,IN THAT ZAIN AND AALIYA ARE RELATED THE SAME WAY..
Hi i read ur ff and the comments, i agree with shivika4eva. The relationship u r talking about is acceptable in muslims. Oberois are Punjabi, so they are COUSINS and its not ethical. In Punjabi community children of bua, mama, mausi etc are all COUSINS(siblings) so you cannot have a romantic relationship between them
Veronika Kya aap bhavya ko change karke soumya ko add kar sakthe hai.agar aap bhavya ko change karke soumya ko add karongi tho main aapki ye FF aage read karungi.
Please change bhavya as soumya.and add RuMya story.
WILL TRY.THANK YOU
Awesome….. Luv it…
Ohh..great…waiting for ittt