Unravelled mind Part 8
Ruchika took Kabir and Maya to the Luthra house and pointed her fingers at all her family members.
Ruchika:One of them has killed MJ.
Kabir and Maya were shocked.
Ruchika looked at them emotionally.
Ruchika:Sorry,I can’t hide anything from Kabir anymore.
They were silent.
Rishab:You did a good thing by revealing the truth now Ruchika.
Kabir:Why are you all angry with MJ?
Karan:Because he destroyed our happiness.Because of him we lost our sister Krithika.
Maya and Kabir were shocked.
Flash back….
Krithika:Finally I got my dream job.I want to be a crime reporter.
All became dull.
Rakhi:No,you are not going to do this job.
Mahesh:It’s very dangerous.
Krithika:Which field does not have danger.I have been dreaming to become a crime reporter and finally when my dream is going to fulfilled please don’t object it.
Rishab and Karan looked at each other in confusion.
Mahesh told Krithika’s husband Pawan:Pawan,you make her understand.
Pawan:Papaji,before marrying Krithika,I had promised her that I will not stand against her dreams.So I can’t break my promise.
Preeta:I think papaji and Mummiji are right.It’s very dangerous.
Pawan:Bhabhi,which filed does not have danger?You are a doctor.Doctors too take risks.Krithika is taking such a risk.
Preeta:But this is not like that Pawan.
Pawan:Don’t worry Preeta bhabhi.
Krithika is very courageous.She will manage any situation.
I have complete faith in Krithika.
Krithika:Thank you so much for supporting me Pawan.
They embraced each other.
Rishab:If Krithika really wants to do it,let her do it.
Karan:Yes.As brothers we will protect her.
Mahesh and Rakhi were still in a dilemma while others smiled.
Krithika:Thank you so much bhaiyyas.
She hugged them.
Krithika started working as a crime reporter.
Once when she returned to her hometown by train at midnight,she witnessed a criminal named Prithvi murdering a man.She covered it with her camera.
Prithvi:Mrityunjay Roy Sir…Prithvi Kapoor here.As you told me,I have killed that person.Please give my money now.
Krithika was shocked.
Krithika’s phone rang.It was silent.She picked up the phone.
It was Rishab.
Rishab:Krithika,did you reach the railway station?
Krithika:Yes Rishab bhaiyya.But here there is a big problem.
Krithika told him everything.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:Oh no,I did’nt know that a well known person like MJ is such a big criminal.You be careful Krithika.You hide somewhere.We will come to the railway station now.
Suddenly Prithvi who saw this pulled the phone from her and destroyed it.
Krithika:What are you doing?
Prithvi:I have not done anything yet.But I am going to do what I have to do.
Krithika got scared.
Prithvi kidnapped Krithika and took her to Mrityunjay.Mrityunjay was sitting there in a royal manner.
MJ:That man was a traitor.He pretended to be my loyal servant,but he betrayed me from my back.That’s why I killed him.So you just forget what you saw.
Krithika:Krithika Malhotra can never ignore crimes.I am a crime reporter.
MJ:I don’t want to harm you.So just leave me girl.
Krithika:No,never.
Suddenly Mrityunjay snatched her camera and destroyed it.Krithika was shocked and upset.
Mrityunjay smirked:How will you expose me now?
Krithika:I will expose you in some other way.
MJ:For that you have to be alive dear.Prithvi..kill her.
Prithvi moved the knife towards Krithika.She was scared and worried.
Prithvi stabbed her.Krithika cried loudly.
MJ:Prithvi,put her where you found her.
Prithvi:Yes Sir.
Prithvi placed her body at the railway station.Rishab,Pawan and Karan who came there cried seeing her bleeding body.
Present….
Rishab:But by God’s grace,Krithika had not died.But she slipped to coma.Since Krithika had told me about Prithvi Kapoor,we enquired about the wanted criminals and finally we found Prithvi.Through Prithvi,we came to know what happened to Krithika.
Flash back…
Pawan tried to shoot MJ.But Prithvi held him.
Prithvi:Mrityunjay Roy Sir.You escape.
MJ smiled:Mrithyunjay Roy does not run way frightened of anyone.
Prithvi looked at Pawan with a smirk.
Pawan was attacked by Prithvi and MJ.
MJ:Finish him Prithvi.
Prithvi hit his head as per MJ’s order.
He also slipped into coma after the brutal attack.
Present….
Rishab:Both Krithika and Pawan are like a living dead now because of MJ.So we decided to take revenge on MJ.Thus I joined MJ’s company.My aim was to kill him.During business trips,I tried to shoot him secretly.
But somebody came my way and my attempts were flopped.
Maya:MJ did not realize that you were Krithika’s brother?
Rishab:No.Because Krithika’s surname was Krithika Pawan Malhotra.
Karan:After Maya and Kabir exposed MJ only we realized that even Kabir and Maya’s target was MJ.When MJ escaped we knew that he will target Kabir and Maya.Rishab and I traced MJ and reached the destination.We both hid behind you all with the gun.
We saw Maya trying to shoot MJ.But we being revengeful decided to kill him.So I shot him.
Yes,I only shot him.If you want to arrest me,arrest me.
Rishab:Arrest me also as I supported Karan to shoot MJ and made many attempts to kill him in various circumstances.
Kabir became sad.Ruchika was in tears.
Ruchika:Please Kabir,don’t arrest them.
Kabir:Don’t worry.I will not arrest Karan and Rishab.Because they were not wrong in killing MJ.Everyone thinks that I killed MJ.Let everyone think like that as I had the license to kill MJ.So even I won’t be arrested.
They all smiled with relief.
Maya:Prithvi?
Kabir:The wanted criminal Prithvi Kapoor was arrested by our department.But being MJ’s puppet,he had not revealed anything about MJ.
Maya was happy that Prithvi was arrested.
Ruchika looked at Kabir.
Ruchika:Now all tensions are over.Why don’t we celebrate it by going for a date?
Kabir cupped her face and said:Anything for you cutie pie.You know how to get romantic in every tensed moment.
Ruchika showed a cute expression on her face.
Everyone giggled.
Maya hugged Manvi emotionally.
Maya:We won Maa.We destroyed MJ.
Kabir smiled.
Manvi:All these years MJ was a burning coal in my mind.Now that is removed from my mind and my mind has become peaceful.
Maya smiled.
Manvi:Can I ask you something Maya?Don’t you love Rishab?
Maya was silent.
Kabir was stunned.
Kabir:Maya,you love Rishab?I did’nt know that you and Rishab love each other though I was always around you both.But Rishab is the best for you.He is a gem.
Maya was silent.
Manvi:Maya,I know that because of your goal,you suppressed your feelings for Rishab.But now that’s not needed.I lost my true love Rudra.Atleast you should get your true love.Only then I will be happy.
Maya smiled.
Manvi:Go and tell Rishab that you too love him.
Maya and Kabir smiled.
Preeta was sitting on the bed with a gloomy face.Karan sat near her.
Karan:What happened baby doll?Now everything is fine.Then why are you looking so disturbed?
Preeta:What you told Kabir and Maya were half baked truth,not the full truth.
Karan:You know why we hid the truth.
Preeta:Yes.But do you think that we can keep Kabir and Maya in darkness for so long?They are too intelligent to be fooled.They will find the truth.
Karan became dull.
Karan:I will not allow it.
Preeta:But…
Karan:I told you that I will not let it happen.I am the Karan Luthra.If I decide something,I will do it.
Preeta was tensed.
Kabir and Ruchika drank juice sharing passionate glances with each other.
Tere hathon ki taraf
Mere hathon ka safar
Rozana, rozana..
Teri aankhon se kahe
Kuch toh meri nazar
Rozana, rozana..
Rozana main sochun yehi
Kahan aaj kal main hoon lapata
Tujhe dekh toh hansne lage
Mere dard bhi kyun khamakhan
Hawaon ki tarah
Mujhe chhu ke tu guzar
Rozana, rozana..
Tere hathon ki taraf
Mere hathon ka safar
Rozana, rozana..
Kabir-Ruchika did a romantic salsa dance with each other.
Inn aankhon se ye bata
Kitna main dekhu tujhe
Reh jaati hai kuch kami
Jitna bhi dekhu tujhe
Rozana main sochun yehi
Ke jee lungi main, saans bhi
Aise tu mujhe milta rahe agar
Rozana, rozana..
Tere hathon ki taraf
Mere hathon ka safar
Rozana, rozana..
Kabir touched Ruchika’s nose cutely.Kabir:You are so cute Ruchika.
She was smiling cutely.
He pecked her nose making her blush.He smiled at her romantically.
Yun aa mila tu mujhe
Jaise tu mera hi hai
Aaram dil ko jo de
Woh zikr tera hi hai
Ruchika climbed onto his back and Kabir walked carrying Ruchika on his back.
Tere hathon ki taraf
Mere hathon ka safar
Rozana, rozana..
Rozana, rozana…(Naam Shabana).
Rishab and Maya looked at each other emotionally.
Rishab:You rejected me,because your aim was to kill MJ.Right?
Maya nodded emotionally.
Rishab:We did not know that our common enemy was MJ.
Maya:If we had told this to each other openly,we could have joined hands together to kill him.
MJ:Yes.But anyways MJ is dead.Our enemy is destroyed.
Maya smiled:Yes.
Rishab:Now will you consider my proposal?Will you marry me Maya?
Maya smiled:Yes….but you have to propose me with a ring.
Rishab smiled:Sure.
(Thanks to my dear friend Rehana Siraj for this edit).
They embraced each other.
Kabir rushed to meet Maya.She was sipping tea.
Kabir:Maya,I got an important information regarding MJ.
Maya:Now what is left?
5 Comments
I’m very curious for knowing the complete truth…. I’m still confused who kill mj?… What preeta and karan hiding…. Kabir and ruchika moments are very romantic….. Krithika and pawan past was very sad….. Waiting for next….. ❤
Thanks a lot.in the last part you asked me for rishab maya scenes.in this episode I showed their scene.How was it?
Rishabh maya’s scenes was amazing and lovely…. 😍
Very superb Episode. Shocked to know that whole Luthra family knows mj and one of them killed mj. Shocked to know the past that Kritika and Pawan are in coma because of mj. Luthra family worrying for kritika’s dream was right. Mj blackmailing kritika was so bad.. prithvi is MJ’s puppet..very bad. Poor pawan too went coma. Kabir Ruchika scenes were cute. Manvi making maya understand love was nice. Maya and Rishab accepting their love was beautiful. Shocked to know that karan and preeta are hiding something..eager to know what’s it. Eager to know what’s other information of mj too..very awesome 💖☺️
Thanks a lot.