Unravelled mind Part 9
Kabir rushed to meet Maya.She was sipping tea.
Kabir:Maya,I got an important information regarding MJ.
Maya:Now what is left?
Kabir:Rishab and Karan told us that Pawan slipped into coma after getting attacked by MJ and Prithvi.But a few months back he had recovered from coma.
Maya was surprised.
Maya:That’s a good news.
Kabir:Yes.But why did Luthras hide it from us?
Maya got confused.
Maya:Maybe they did’nt think about that.
Kabir:No Maya.There is something fishy.
Maya was in confusion.
Kabir and Maya met Luthras.They had casual chat.
Suddenly Kabir asked them casually:Where is Pawan now?
Rishab:We told you that he is in coma.
Karan:There is improvement in him.
Kabir and Maya were shocked at their lie.
Kabir:We know that Pawan had recovered from coma.Then why are you lying to us?
The Luthras were sweating.
Rishab:There is no use of lying anymore.It’s true that Pawan had recovered from coma.The truth is that he only shot MJ.
Kabir and Maya were shocked.
Karan:We hid it because we were scared whether Pawan will be arrested by the police.
Rishab:The poor guy is looking after our Krithika day and night.The doctor also says that the loved one’s love can bring back Krithika to life.Krithika needs Pawan in this condition also.She should not lose her Pawan.
Karan:That’s why we took the blame.Pawan himself is a depressed person who is taking antidepressant tablets on a psychiatrist’s advise.In this condition,he does’nt deserve to be in the jail for killing his wife’s culprit.
Kabir:I already told you that I am not going to reveal the real culprit’s name and I am taking the responsibilty of killing MJ.So don’t worry.Pawan is safe.
The Luthras smiled emotionally.
Luthras:Thank you so much Kabir.
Kabir and Maya smiled.
Maya:I want to see Krithika and Pawan.I can relate to them.They are also victims of MJ like me and my family.
Rishab:I will take you there Maya.
Maya:Thank you Rishab.
Rishab held her closer and they smiled.
(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Rehana Siraj)
Rishab took Maya to the hospital to see Krithika and Pawan.
Seeing them,Pawan stood up.
Pawan:Maya?
Maya nodded her head.
Pawan:Rishab bhai had told me about you.
Maya:I felt nice hearing about your love for Krithika.Without expecting anything you are taking care of her.
Pawan replied emotionally:Krithika is my breath.If she stops breathing,I will also stop breathing.I will look after her till eternity.
Pawan stood near the unconscious Krithika and caressed her head.
Maya became emotional.
Rishab noticed it.He embraced her from behind with a smile.
Rishab:Maya…Keep smiling.When we see true love like Pawan and Krithika’s we should smile.
Rishab looked at her face and wiped her wet eyes.Maya embraced him emotionally.
In the garden….
Rishab stood infront of Maya with a ring.
Rishab:This is not a simple ring.This ring comes out of my heart.Will you marry me Maya?
Maya smiled.
Maya:Without wasting time,put the ring on my finger.
He smiled and put the ring on her finger.
She smiled.
Maya:I will marry you Rishab.
He smiled happily and pecked her palm.
The Rose day came.
Rose day theme party was conducted in the Luthra house.
Ruchika and Kabir exchanged red roses.
Kabir gazed at the red dress she is wearing.
Kabir:You look like red rose in the red gown.
She blushed.
He held her closer and posed for a photograph.
Karan gave a red rose to Preeta.
Karan:Happy Rose day Preeta.
Preeta:So today you remembered that other than fans,you have a wife at home to give red rose.
Karan:I always remember that.I don’t have amnesia.It’s you forgot that you have a handsome Celebrity husband at home.That’s why you are not my fan.
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Preeta:Oh…stop self boasting.I hate cricket.So I can’t be a fan of cricket stars.
Karan:So mean…you insulted The Karan Luthra.
Preeta giggled.
Preeta:I said that I am not a fan of Cricket stars.But…
Preeta caressed Karan’s face with the rose flower and said romantically:I did not say that I don’t love my cute husband who has dimpled smile.
Karan’s face blossomed.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Karan:By the way do you remember the last Rose day?
Preeta:Yes.
Flash back…
Karan and Preeta were in the car.In between Karan stopped the car and went out.Preeta did not understand why he left.
Preeta:Where did Karan go?
Karan came back soon.
Preeta:Karan…where did you go?
Suddenly Karan surprised Preeta with red hearts,red roses and a cute teddy bear.
Karan:Happy Rose day and advance Valentine’s day wishes Preeta.
Preeta smiled happily:Same to you Karan.
They joined their foreheads romantically.
Karan-Preeta went to a restaurant for dinner.
They were sipping juice after dinner.Suddenly Preeta gave him a red rose.
Preeta:Happy Rose day Karan.
Karan:Thank you baby doll.Guess you have become my fan.That’s why like other female fans,you gifted me a red rose specially.
Preeta:You insulted me by calling me your fan?
Karan:What is there as insult?It’s a credit for you if someone is calling you the fan of The Karan Luthra.
Preeta:You are ridiculous.
Karan:The Karan Luthra is not ridiculous,but a Prince Charming.
Preeta started laughing.Slowly Karan also started laughing.
Present….
Karan-Preeta laughed remembering their last Rose day.
Maya attached a red rose to Rishab’s pocket.
Maya:Happy rose day Rishab.
Rishab:Happy rose day Maya.
Rishab gave a red rose to Maya.
Maya kissed it.
Rishab smiled.
Rishab:I wish I could be this red rose.So that I would get kissed by your pretty red lips.
Maya blushed:Rishab!
Maya:You don’t have to be a rose to get kissed by me.You just have to be Rishab himself for that.
Rishab:Oh really?Then look at my face clearly.I am Rishab…your Rishab.
Maya blushed and pecked his cheek.He blushed.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Rishab and Maya exchanged rings in the engagement ceremony.
Karan:Now let the newly engaged couple dance.
Preeta:Exactly.Play the song please.
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Ruchika played a song.
Rishab and Maya blushed.
They held their hands together and danced romantically.
(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Rehana Siraj)
Itni Mohabbat Karo Na
Main Doob Na Jaaun Kahin
Wapas Kinare Pe Aana
Main Bhool Na Jaun Kahin
Dekha Jabse Chehra Tera
Main To Hafton Se Soya Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Mujhe Neend Aati Nahi Hai Akele
Khawbon Mein Aaya Karo
Nahi Chal Sakunga Tumhare Bina Main
Mera Tum Sahaara Bano
Ik Tumhein Chahne Ke Alawa
Aur Kuch Humse Hoga Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Humari Kami Tumko Mehsoos Hogi
Bheega Dengi Jab Baarishein
Main Bhar Kar Ke Laya Hu
Aankhon Mein Apni
Adhoori Si Kuch Khowahishein
Rooh Se Chaahne Wale Aashiq
Baatein Jismon Ki Karte Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Bol Do Na Zara
Dil Mein Jo Hai Chhipa
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi
Main Kisi Se Kahunga Nahi(Azhar).
Rishab-Maya and Kabir-Ruchika got married.
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(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Rehana Siraj)
Manvi blessed Rishab and Maya.
Manvi:I can’t tell you how happy I am to see the union of true love.Now I can live happily.God bless you both.
Rishab-Maya smiled.
Kabir Ruchika shared an emotional eye lock.
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They filled their bedroom with romance.
Aa iss raat ke lamhe,
Sang mere kaat le,
Neend ko chhed ke tu,
Sang mere jaag le,
In labon ko tu bhi apne,
Labon pe jagah de,
Pyar de mujhe tu pyar de,
Zara nazdeek tu aane de,
Pyaar de mujhe tu pyaar de,
Tujhe khud ke kareeb laane de,
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Rishab was mesmerized by Maya’s beauty in her saree.He embraced her from behind romantically making her blush.
Dheemi si aanch pe,
Tere tann ki,
Thoda thoda jalun yun main,
Jo bhi hai ye haya mein,
Tere mann ki,
Aaja sonpu tujhe hi main,
(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Rehana Siraj)
Maya pushed him ran away shyly.
Maya came out wearing a hot night dress.Rishab was also in his night wear.He pulled her closer and they melted in romance.
In labon ko tu bhi apne,
Labon pe jagah de,
Pyar de mujhe tu pyar de,
Zara nazdeek tu aane de,
Pyaar de mujhe tu pyaar de,
Tujhe khud ke kareeb laane de,
Meri saanson ke sang,
Meelon chal tu,
Apni saansein zara leke,
(The credit for the edit goes to my friend Rehana Siraj)
Kar le mera safar,
Phir rukna tu,
Aake meri hadon pe,
Pyar de mujhe tu pyar de,
Zara nazdeek tu aane de,
Pyaar de mujhe tu pyaar de,
Tujhe khud ke kareeb laane de(Beiimaan Love).
The end
Thank u each one of u 4 supporting me in this journey.I am ending this SS now.Plz mention ur favourite scene,favourite couple,favourite character n y u liked that character.
5 Comments
Amazing story…. Maya was my favorite character….. I can’t tell an exact scene which I like…. I like all scenes and all characters….kabir and ruchika are so cute….i like maya and kabir’s bonding….. This was the most romantic part…. Sad it ends…. Waiting for many more stories from you….. ❤
Thank you very much.
Why did you like maya the most?which jodi did you like the most?
I like ruchika and kabir’s pair the most….. I like maya’s passion and revenge…. That’s why I like maya’s character the most….. ❤
So awesome Episode. Ohh..so luthras hided the matter thinking police will arrest pawan but Kabir is so good that he told that he will not make arrested. Pawan’s condition is so painful.. maya and Rishabh getting emotional seeing kritika was sad. The Rose day was so so awesome. Karan and preeta’s Rose day was so funny..i really laughed my heart out😂😂. Even the flashback was cute. Kabir and Ruchika’s roseday was amazing and lovely.rishab’s dialogue for kiss was nice and they were cute. Marriages was awesome. Couples romance was romantic and nice. Super ending..
My fav scene was karan and preeta’s rose day fun because i liked that fun so much.
My fav couples was rishabh and maya.
My fav character was Kabir as he was so good and genuine in his way.
Thanks a lot.