ANNIKA POV
I was there in my bed all crouching , not willing to get up and that stupid alarm clock was continuesly ringing doing nothing but making me mad and then what was left …it met its destiny and that was to die . “aagghhh” I finally got up from one of my favourite places after killing another fellow clock stretching my arms towards the roof of my room . while tieing my hairs in a messy bun my gaze fell on sticky notes .I really love these small square boxes of different colours ..they are my reminders and for today ..it was our college re-union . I have to attend it though I’m an alumni who got graduated 5 years back but how sweet!! my professors invited me may be because I was their favourite rather I am…
the next second my eyes fell on the other wall of my room filled with pictures . An unknown smile was their on my face ..it’s always there..an automatic movement .
With an amazing mood i went to freshen up to live another day of my not so interesting life .
I fitted myself in light peach coloured platzo’s with a cut-sleave kinda blouze of similar colour till a bit above my navel and tied a shiffon dupatta with a pin . A simple pendant suited it with ear-rings
It was simple but I feel I looked presentable after all who cares . it’s just a re-union .
With my another love ,my guitar…uff how much I like this musical instrument..(but wait a minute what do i meant by “another” ..ohhki stop annika..you’re blushing)
and the car keys I passed the main door of THE MALHOTRA MANSION and made my way towards “THE TERESA”
after a drive of 90 minutes I reached my destination and entered the main hall .
“woooaaahhh!!” is what I said on seeing the decor of hall . the Teresa’s really have worked well this time ..i was impressed . With a huge khidkitod smile I greeted everyone over there ..my freinds and the lovely professors and…
not again…the same request by everyone and that is to sing a song for them .’It’s really embarrassing to expose your talent in public to entertain others ‘..for me …but keeping my etiquettes in my mind I asked the song which they wanted me to play …
“An old one..what about UNSE MILI NAZAR” shouted seema, my collegemate and the others nodded cheerfully .so the song was decided . It took me a bit time to register the song and its lyrics in my mind and this song “UNSE MILI NAZAR” ..awwee.. it perfectly suits me
“uurrghhh” it’s every lyrics overlaps my situation
With my hand on the guitar and mouth towards the mike I started
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Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
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aarrghhhh…this song reminded me of HIM . my godd he’s my love but God knows he loves me or not .. I’m happy with my one sided love. his eyes , a full mixture green blue and grey . I’m yet confused to figure out a single colour . The time i saw him. I gave my heart to him. He’s sooooo cute Mann. I was never attracted to anyone especially boys but after seeing him my life turned upside down . I can say that “mere hosh ud gaye” he and his name as well was so attractive “SHIVAAY”
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Jab wo mile mujhe pahali baar
Unse ho gai aankhe chaar
Jab wo mile mujhe pahali baar
Unse ho gai aankhe chaar
Paas naa baithe pal bhar wo
Phir bhi ho gayaa unse pyaar
Phir bhi ho gayaa unse pyaar
Itni thi bas khabar
Itni thi bas khabar
Itni thi bas khabar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
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I first met shivaay in the coffee shop near my home . It was when I was entering the shop with priya and he probably was making his exit and fortunately for me our destiny planned a collision for us. As a result the books in my hand fell and I was there in his arms . “ohhh” that’s one of my favourite moments throughout my life but I had a sprain and being a gentle men he placed me on the comfortable seat present there. picked up the fallen books and handed them to me But he didn’t even thought the need to SIT BESIDE ME FOR A WHILE. JUST MUTTERED A SMALL SORRY AND “BE CAREFEL” and went out of our meeting point with a Ferrari speed . “MYY GODD HE TOUCHED ME ..PINCH ME PLEAAASE” were my inner thoughts at that time . I was trying to look down as much as possible to hide my face full of Scarlett shade.
I was blushing
never mind ..i continued the song
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Unki taraf dil khichane lagaa
Badh ke kadam phir rukane lagaa
Unaki taraf dil khichane lagaa
Badh ke kadam phir rukane lagaa
Kaanp gai mai jaane kyun
Apne aap dam ghutane lagaa
Apne aap dam ghutane lagaa
Chhaaye wo is kadar
Chhaaye wo is kadar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
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The days that followed were so “……”
I’m not getting appropriate word arghhh . he’s always in my dreams infact every moment he’s there in front of my eyes . My heart always goes in his direction but never has the courage to tell him how much I love despite being the ANNIKA MALHOTRA *I sighed* . My breathing stinks. his thoughts always are surrounding me . I’m so mad for him ,The walls of my Room are filled with the pictures of shivaay Singh oberoi and on seeing i can’t resist the khidkitod smile all over my face .
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Ghar mere aayaa wo mehmaan
Dil me jagaaye sau tufaan
Ghar mere aayaa wo mehmaan
Dil me jagaaye sau tufaan
Dekh ke unki surat ko
Haay rah gai mai hairaan
Haay rah gai mai hairaan
Tadapun idhar udhar
Tadapun idhar udhar
Tadapun idhar udhar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unase mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unase mili nazar ke mere
Hosh ud gaye.
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donn even want to remember my state when he visited my house to meet dad, ofcource for a business meet afterall what more could be there in the mind of a business obsessed man . I was sleeping and suddenly heard his and dad’s voices so saw them from my room window and GODDD ..he was looking so hand some . I was kinda checking him out with my mouth wide open and orbs lost in his. seriously that ‘s such an amazing experience when your love make a visit to your place .
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it now was the time to sing the last paragraph of the song . I was kinda bored while continously sitting and singing and so decided sing Along roaming. it would give it a filmy touch. A heroine in full mood singing and dancing . shut up annika now start …
I was singing the last few lines which go by…
Unase mili nazar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar
Aisaa huaa asar ke mere hosh ud gaye
Unase mili nazar ke mere
Hosh ud gaye.
and………
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“arghhh…urghhh…urffff…aaaahhh”
my head it’s paining like hell . What happened to me . last evening I was in THE TERESA’S college reunion. I was singing and…
and I saw HIM . he too was there. my godd I didn’t knew that he was in the same college but was an year elder than me that’s why may be i didn’t knew . I was in full swing singing the song and again when he entered i collapsed with him ..our destiny has made us for each other. what more was left I fainted and drowned in his deep blue-green orbs . t..hhaat..that means….”he was the one who brought me here . I was again in his arms. what more heavenly thing happen to me. ” AWWWEEE he’s just a true gentleman and my love increased to another level today like each passing day . with a lovely mood I decided to on the radio . It was some usha’s request to listen the song which again matches me …this song has so much of significance in my one sided love story..and the song started
……”UNSE MILI NAZAR KE MERE HOSH UD GAYE……”
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heyya amazing and lovely fellas . Old songs are true bliss and I got really attracted to this song and so wanted to write something and hence finally wrote it . I know it might be very bad as I haven’t written it quite a very well . and as expected things doesn’t come out in the way I think. it happened here as well .. if it’s worth a read then do comment . it won’t take more then a second . otherwise it’s okay… and I hope you guys are enjoying the new telly updates page design
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till then take care of yourself and enjoy your lovely life unlike me “EXAMS” ?? and that too when my birthday is on Monday ??
With love,
SAIRISH
46 Comments
Omg! Sairish…juz plain fab. No words to appreciate this. You have clearly depicted those emotions which are in the mind when there is one – sided love. Proper thoughts of Anika….Beautiful piece of writing.
Me also pareshaan wid exams…started juz today. All d best for urs…Luv u :”) ??
hey di…
thank you sooo much for itna SAARA appreciation ???. I’m glad you liked her emotions but that was in the flow of writing as I myself donn know the meaning of one sided love . abhi to Mai 13 cum 14 saal ki bachi hu
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With love,
SAIRISH
Wow! This was soo amazing and cute!!!! Btw, you are also very good at writing in a character’s POV…. I could clearly feel Anika and her emotions…. And my god! Your description was really really awesome! This was an excellent piece of writing!!!!! You actually made me go online and listen to the song, “UNSE MILI NAZAR”!
PS: I noticed that you also get inspired to write from songs just like me….. 🙂 🙂 🙂
heyyy anamika di..?
thank you so much for commenting and liking it . I’m glad you found my writing skills worth a praise.
so..how’s the song. ???
yepp…you got me right . I’m inspired by songs to write something
With love,
SAIRISH
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Heya sairish my cutie younger sis❤
I’ll be starting from down to up?
So HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAIRISH???? *IN ADVANCE* who knows I’ll be there to wish you tomorrow or not☺
Well i must say you think muxh negatively ? it’s the cutest! Lovelies and sweetest OS I’ve ever read ❤ it’s just amazing??? song tou na perfext ha❤❤❤ you wrote it very welly? amazing annika the one side lover❤ keep going and do comeback with something like this again and soon!????
Take care sairish ????
And yeah best of luck sweetie for the exams????
You rocked!
Love❤
☆Annie☆
heyyy Annie di
firstly thanks a lot for such a sweet comment .
thanks for the birthday wish IN ADVANCE ??. anyways i know that you’ll be there to support me ..haina!!??
“until and unless we criticise ourself the best within doesn’t come in the way we want”(woaaghh ..do I wrote such a bhari bharkam line??) and that’s what i do.
hopefully I’ll be posting another OS on shivika 2moro on my b’day
thanks once again
YOUR cutie sisso
SAIRISH
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Hi Sairish!!!!
Just one word its fabulous
You have really expressed the feelings of Anika who is in one sided love
You have impressed me withyour writing style
Well written
Loved it
Advance Happy Birthday Wishes from me
Best of luck for your exams too
I am sure you are gonna rock it
Loads of love
heyyy chanya di..
I’m so happy that you commented and hell glad that you liked something from my side ??…
thanks for the b’day wishes as well?..
Exams….hoping for the best!
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With love,
SAIRISH
Hey Sairish ❣
Lovely one !!… Felt like a shimmering fairy tale . The way you portrayed one sided love was fab . And the song…uffff.. added more beauty to this beautiful piece of work. Keep coming with such treats .
Love ya ❤
ohh my goddd
am I dreaming.
anagha di ..you commented on my work ????..
I’m thankful to you for liking and appreciating it
keep supporting
With love,
SAIRISH
Awesome
thanks bhaiyyu! ??❤
well…I’m thinking something for ISHKARA,seems you really love them a lot
Aww really , love IshKara a lot IshKara is emotion for me.,will wait if you write then.
Awesome….lovely os dear.fabulous
thank youuu so much niri di??
Good one dear, plz continue it, a few more parts
hey di..
thanks for the appreciation …
well…i have thought just this much for this concept. if something will pop in my chhotu sa brain. I’ll definitely give it a try
keep supporting di,
With love,
SAIRISH
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Awesome Sairish
It’s just amazingly amazing…… I loved Anika and her one sided love story….. It’s really adorable and I liked it a lot….. I am going to listen to this song definitely
Happy birthday in advance
heyy prajkta di..
my first Freind ?❤
thank uuh sooo much ..
“amazingly amazing” hehe i liked it
keep supporting
With love,
SAIRISH
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB WONDERFUL???????????????
l Like New Design In TU Page?But Recent Post Is Not See In New TU Page.Baaki Sab Okay Hai???
All The Best For Your Exam?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
awwww….thanks UF (I don’t know your my di or bhaiyya???)
YOUR comment is really awesome. I’ve seen you as a great reader ..
thanks for the wishes ??
keep supporting,
With love,
SAIRISH
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Dear Sairish
Main Ladki Hu?I Always Support Brilliant Authors Like You So Keep Writing???
Take Care And Stay Safe?
It is awesome dear… All the best for your exam dear and.. Happy wala birthday…..
heyyyo Nikki di..
thanks a lot for liking it .
thanks for the exam wishes . well…my b’day is on 11 september ie. 2moro not 2day anyways thanks a lot ?????
loads of love
SAIRISH
Awesomeee. It’s fabulous. I must say you are good writer. Luv it to the coreeee. Update soon.
heyyy my latest freind didu
thanks a lot for your keen support
With love,
sairu
Aww,that’s so sweet of u. Luv u too sairu.
It is really really awesome dear.. U expressed all the feelings very beautifully.. Loved it a lot.. And all the best for ur exams and Happy birthday… Stay blessed..
thanks a lot for the appreciation
it do really mean a lot to me ??
thank you for the exam wishes well.. .my b’day is on 11 september ie 2moro not 2day but anyway thanks
Fabulous
thank a lot di???
Can HAYEEEE be the word to express that I fell for the OS?
One-sided Love are so dangerous?Isn’t it? Cause aap doosre banday ko bataye baghair us ky peechay pagal hotay jatay hain (Ik u will have problem in understanding this crazy philosophy?)
Khair. Do I need to tell you that how wonderfully & beautifully u had written this❤ (aik sequel tou banta hai?) {Didn’t I become so demanding}
Gana was so pinpoint?
Apnay exams par poora poora dhayan dena?
Birthday hai kal tumhari *thinks something*?
Loads of Love❤
hiiiii aapi ???
well..surely HAYEEE can be the word ????.
aww…I’m glad that you liked it ITNA
no.. there’s no need to tell me how well I have written this . your HAYEE have told everything ????
it definitely would take me time to understand your philosophy of one sided love??coz I’m just a 13 oops would be 14 fella
sequel..?????..I’ll try already do sequels pending hai????
but you can be demanding.. you’re my elder sisso na???
aha.. this song ?
trying to concentrate on Xams
yoo.. .b’day 2moro ..give some ideas??
but as a celebration i would be posting another OS on shivika 2moro hopefully
tons of love
saish ???
it was so wonderful , so real , so creative loved it , really fabulously portrayed , I really enjoyed reading it ….nice job sairish hoping to read more of your writings soon and about the new design I will take time to get use to it but the old one was more cozy…..and hey happy birthday sairish wish that this year would to memorable for you…………
heyyyo aashi di..
thank you tons for such a sweet comment.
really happy after reading this.
well..
if you want to read more of my works here’s the link
https://www.tellyupdates.com/user/12871/?profiletab=posts
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I’m having my b’day 2moro not 2day but anyways thanks a lot
keep supporting
With love,
SAIRISH
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thanks a lot for giving the link I’m definetly going to read ur writing just read ur another os it was also awesome but I love this one more….and ya sorry I forgot to add advance happy birthday…silly me….but I’m of ur age I’m also 13 cum 14 my birthday falls on this 26th ……..
heyyy aashi that’s great then .
finally got someone of my age. we’ll definitely have a great time ???????
I feel you’re talking about SOMETHING YET TO BE CONFESSED!!.but.I’m glad you liked this one much more . thnx for b’day wish and 26?..I’ll remember
With love
SAIRISH
Sairish dear u r such a cutie….u write very very beautifully….just loved this… amazing…nd fantastic…
Best wishes for ur exams dear…
Nd Advance Happy Birthday to u…
Love u dear …
awww zaveesha aapi..
you are much cuter ??
thanks for the lovely comment ..and b’day wishes ..
luv you tooo
SAIRISH
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Lovely OS ❤
Beautifully Written. U described Anika’s emotions so beautifully!
Please do write a second part for this *puppy eyes*
Happy Birthday in advance ?
All the best for exams too!
thank you so much shivka (what so ever your real name is di!) for the appreciation.
sequel ??…If anything will pop up in my chhotu sa brain I’ll definitely give it a try
thank for the luck and b’day wishes
keep supporting me
With love,
SAIRISH
Oh!
My real name is Rhea 🙂
U r really sweet ?
Lots of love ❤
Llovely os
thanks Alekhika di??
Hiiii awesome one I have been a silent reader in many works commented for one reason we share same birthday mine is also tomorrow happy birthday in advanceeeee n this was superbbb
Amazing… superb.. awesome… fantastic.. wonderful… mind blowing n what not… ?? loved it to the core…
Belated Happy Birthday Dear… ??
Take care…