Hi this is VHM…….With a short OS on Shivika……..Please ignore typos and grammatical mistakes……
This OS is an unspoken conversation between Shivaay and Anika .. while Anika walks away after being thrown out of OM and Shivaay locks himself in room……….Basically the conversation between shivaay and Anika in their thoughts……
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(SHIVAAY ‘’ = SHIVAAY POV, ANIKA ‘’ = ANIKA POV )
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Shivaay ”Why did you do this with me Anika?”
Anika ”I had to but I cannot explain you …don’t you know me Shivaay?”
Shivaay ”i know you …my heart doesn’t want to believe all this….but i cannot even deny what i heard and saw”
Anika ”Shivaay…sometimes you have to believe your heart rather than what you see”
Shivaay ”Anika i am not like everyone who believe everything so easily or poetically listen to heart”
Anika ”and i am not the one who can make a person like you understand”
Shivaay ”you should have tried Anika…you should have”
Anika ”Shivaay …you remember we spoke to each other that whatever is the situation we will trust each other..but why did you not trust me today”
Shivaay ”after listening to your words how do you expect me to trust anything else…I was trusting your words that you spoke infront of everyone…the whole world , our whole family…what was my fault”
Anika ”I don’t want to say anything over this …but all I want to do is ask you something …couldn’t you see the pain in my eyes Shivaay?”
Shivaay ”I did see…but I could’t understand anything…..what truth were you hiding Anika and why did you do this…still it’s not late…. atleast tell me now”
Anika ”i cannot come back Shivaay…i cannot come back to tell you any truth….”
Shivaay ”so will you let me live with this burden for ever”
Anika ”Understand Shivaay sometimes truth hurts more than pool of lies…only if you could understand”
Shivaay ”i don’t want to understand anything …i just want you to be the same whom i always wanted to be by my side”
Anika ”i am the same Shivaay…you couldn’t identify”
Shivaay ”ok fine …you will not accept…tell me onething …can you stay away from me?”
Anika ”living without you is an punishment….and i have made myself ready to take this punishment…and I have already started bearing it…….”
Shivaay ”why Anika ..why……i am still longing for you….come and say that all you did was drama…i will still accept you…”
Anika ”when you feel i did drama …accept that this is for you”
Shivaay ”Anika ….i am falling weak….i am really falling weak..”
Anika ”i am also giving up Shivaay…but we both need to be strong…..”
Shivaay ”all these days while you were with me my strength doubled and when you left my confidence grounded”
Anika ” all i can say is you need to take care of yourself…whether i am with you or not’’
Shivaay ‘’fine …you will not come back and I cannot bring you back…so what is the solution’’
Anika ‘’you have to find the solution as problem aroused at your end’’
Shivaay ‘’what if I lose my ability to find the solution’’
Anika ‘’ we will never become one again’’
Shivaay ‘’don’t say so Anika……’’
Anika ‘’only if I could’’
Shivaay ‘’before you leave….i wanted to say I LOVE YOU ANIKA’’
Anika ‘’all these days I was dying to hear this and when you said this I am far away from you….but still I want to say I LOVE YOU TOO SHIVAAY’’
Shivaay ‘’for the first time I felt we should have never met…and even if we met we shouldn’t have been in an unspoken yet strong relationship and all this shouldn’t have happened’’
Anika ‘’meeting and getting separated was in our destiny but remember we are always united by hearts….’’
Shivaay ‘’what if I see someone else after you leave’’
Anika ‘’it’s not possible for you Shivaay because after whatever happened you will not believe anyone else so easily’’
Shivaay ‘’so much confidence on me?’’
Anika ‘’more than I have on myself’’
Shivaay ‘’I will meet you soon Anika and this time only to hurt you for leaving me’’
Anika ‘’I will also wait for you Shivaay …only to answer you in my way’’
Shivaay ‘’may be it will be fun…Tadibaaz vs Jhansi ki Rani’’
Anika ‘’no it will not be fun as you will have to choose between nafrat or pyaar’’
Shivaay ‘’I will miss you Anika…I will miss you a lot’’
Anika ‘’I am already missing you Shivaay…..’’
Shivaay ‘’we will meet soon to have our tashan restarted’’
Anika ‘’yes we will’’
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So that was it…I donno what I have written but this thought just passed my mind and I thought of penning it down…please do post your opinions…all sort of comments are welcome whether it is good or bad……I will try to reply as soon as possible !!!
66 Comments
Beautiful portrayal of shivaay and anika’s state of mind !!!! Shivaay’s fight with himself on whether or not to believe anika ?. Have read all ur ffs os and ss, and they are just brilliant. Especially the past and present ff, tht was just superb. Waiting for u to come back with anthr khidkitod ff. Ur daughter is very beautiful masha allah ?
Thank you so much Maryam_ishq…thanks a lot….oMG past and present still you remember ? it’s almost 10 days i have ended the FF and still you remember the name …so sweet of you…thanks again and special thanks for the compliments to my daughter……will try to come back soon with an other write up…..
It’s one of the best ff’s i have read so can’t forget it ?. Most welcome?
Thank you soooooo muchh…what more can i say and how to thank you in other way…you just made me feel special….keep smiling and lots of good luck
Akka super ga undi one doubt Akka idi next part unda ….
hey Vishnu…thank you talli…deeni next part ledhu nanna …ikkadi tho end chesa but inko story develop chesa kani adi upload cheyanu endukante chala FF/OS TU lo separation track meeda nadusthunayiga anduke …malli nenu kuda aa track meeda enduku rayatam ani aa idea drop chesa
Hi i am Sakash.So u r South indian?I don’t know?any ways di superb update love u.Come back soon my dear sweet sister.
I never forgot ur last FF.It’s tremendous shot.
Endukantae akka ni updates lo meaning untundi anduku.
Hey Sakash…yes i am an Indian, South Indian and Telugite…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…glad you liked it and so sweet of you to write such beautiful words…awee past and present i didn’t know would be liked so much…it’s already been 10 days it ended and still getting so much love for that is really a special feeling…thanks a lot again…and yeah i will surely be back soon with something new….endukante nenu ekkuva rojulu TU ki mee andariki dooram ga undalenu…..loads of good luck dear…..
Beautiful…… Was eagerly waiting for ur update
Thank you so much Komal…awee so sweet of you for all the love for me…
Awesome. Plzzzz post the next part.
Thank you so much Debdutta…sorry dear, unfortunately this was an one shot OS and it ends here…will come up with something else very soon
Hi di…This was awesome update..The way you show their pov was fabulous..pls continue di.I miss you so much
Love you ????di
Take care ??
Thank you so much Niriha….thanks a lot…unfortunately this OS ends here ..actually i developed an other OS……… which would form the continuation of this One shot…… but dropped the idea because there are already many FF and OS’s running on the separation track…so i didn’t want to bother all of you with same story…..but i will come back with something new very soon….i miss you too dear…infact i missed all of you soooooooo much …love you loads and take care
VHM dear , i am soooooooooo happy that you come back. ..and this one is also very emotional.?. …..senti kardiya mujhe…
Hey Arpita…thank you so much…ohh God mera koi irada nahi tha senti karne ka par kya karoon aise ho gaya….waise maine aapko mere last FF ke last episode par bahut miss kiya…par fir mujhe laga aap bahut busy ho…koi baat nahi…aise yaha aaj milna ho gaya…thank you so much once again
Awesome portrayal of both characters. Thank You sooooooooooo much for this os akka. Missed you a lot. ???
Hey Ashwinee….thank you so much sissy……thanks a lot….i too missed you all a lot and i am glad i have met you back …..lots of love and loads of best wishes to you dear…..will come back very soon …….
Marvellous dear
Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot……
Hello Harika di.
So you are back with a bang and full on awesome os.
Loved it, so very much. The unspoken words are really worth reading.
I loved the last part when Shivaay said I will continue to hate you Anika, so passionate.
Well done !!!
Great job, will be waiting for more of your writing, the way it was penned down was too good. Love yaa?
Thank you so much author aka Jerry aka Vedika……i am glad you liked the OS and i loved your FF to infinity and back…..i will come back soon vedika …as i can’t stay away from all of you for a longer time ……love you loads dear …all the best …keep smiling and take very good care of yourself
Diiiiii……..
I luv uh.. . ….
glad u r back….
OS was so emotional but it was in Tadibaaz style…
Hey Ahaana….love you loads …love you so muchh……ummaaaahhhh….yeah i had to be back as i was terribly missing all of you ……thanks a lot dear…glad you liked it……..
Emotional superb os dear. Loved it
Thank you so much Fffan1234……thanks a lot…missed you a lot and had to come back …….
It is awesome dii….. Muaa….. Love you…
Thank you so much Nikita……ummaahhhh…love you loads dear and you know i will be back am i right?
This was an emotional tadibaazi os.
So nice di. Waiting for ur next ff?
Thank you so much shraddha…thanks a lot……i have also read till 18 episodes of your FF …whenever i am getting time i am reading your FF only ……i will post my comment very soon but before that i just want to say your are coloring the canvas with new colors and i am in love with all those colors……..i will come back soon dear…but before that i have to reach your speed…and i guess you understood what i meant? thanks a lot once again see you in your episode very soon
Wonderful os like all your other works di it is splendid and you have really portrayed all the conversation very beautifully.
It is awesome and I am at loss of words. Thanks for coming back di.
Awee thank you so much Priya…..thanks a lot…thanks for all those beautiful lines…i must thank you all for all your love …it is something special for me…thanks again
Back with a bangggg, awesomeness overloaded ?????????????? loved it to the coreeeeeeeeeee , waiting for your updates
hey Dhar…thank you so much dear…back with a bang…i don’t think so…the fact was i couldn’t stay away for so long from you all and was terribly missing all the love so had penned this down…thank you so much for the awesome slines for me and you always make me feel special…thanks again dear…and yes i will come back very soon
Dii…Asusuasl …loved it.
I loved it when Anika had full confidence on her shivay that no one can take her place.
I loved it when shivay expressed how his confidence level was detoriated by anikas exit from his life.
Really fabulous work.dii.
Hey Chotii….thank you so much dear…Anika’s confidence and Shivaay’s arrogance is what makes IB a beautiful story ……and i couldn’t leave both those points even in their sadness…thank you …thanks a lot chotii…love you loads…keep smiling take care and all the very best
Wow ur back…. I am happy for u…..
It was awesome mind blowing yaar….loved it and emotional too….
Thank you so much Sagithya and i am also happy because you are happy……..thanks a lot once again and love you soooooo much
First of all a big wala “SORRY” di for not commenting on last few episodes of past n present but you know I was seriously stuck up and couldn’t do so for a whole week.??
But lemme tell you I read them n they were tablatodh.??
This os what to say you blow up my mind by your writing di it’s that awesome.?
Every time you experiment with your writing skills n that’s what I like about you.
Really fabulous one.Love you?????
Hey Madhu…don’t say sorry dear…i expected you to be busy and i can understand the busy schedules we have…so no worries……….i am glad you liked the previous FF …..
TABLATODH — a new word and i am gonna use this in my next write up off course if you give me permission……….
THanks a lot for all the compliments dear…i am even more glad that you liked this OS …so sweet of you ……i cannot be monotonous as i myself will get bored of it……so i experiment and test on you all….lol…….
Thanks a lot again and love you tooo soooooo muchhhhhhhhhh…take care and keep smiling
Of course di you can it’s all yours.
Actually I keep using such words from the beginning n for this I’m called crazy by everyone?.
First I use to get hurt but now who cares? I’m the way I’m n I love this.
Sorry for this I went with the flow.
N tnq for forgiving me.?
Love you di????
Come back with another tablatodh one?
Byeee
Hey Madhu…again sorry ?…..first thing thank you for giving the permission…second thing you will never again say sorry to me no matter what…you are calling me dii na…so no sorry’s between us….third you are not at all crazy but you are creative..i mean how many can create and use such chirpy words ….so keep smiling and i will definitely be back with something new…….love you loads..take care
Iam so haapy you come beak with another FF.LAst FF ti was fab,awesome thi today bi awesome.pls next one
thank you so much Arfa…thanks a lot…OMG you still remember my previous FF…so sweet of you for the letting me know that you liked my previous FF and current OS….thank you once again…will come back soon with something new
So u are back with a bang….an awesome OS…loved it..very emotional and lovely..u very beautifully portrait all the emotions…
Nd I missed u soo much…
Thank you so much Tanzeela…thanks a lot…what to do couldn’t stay away for a long time so came back….i too missed you so much dear…will come back soon with something new
Beautiful os
Thank you so much Alekhika…how are you? i missed my strict teacher too and am glad you liked this OS
Perfect dear, I love it❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P …thanks a lot…i am glad you liked it …….
Wow!!!! After a lng time i saw ur an AMAZING update….. Just luv it…. Waiting 4 ur nxt work….
awee thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…..after 10 days i am meeting you all and that is giving me more happiness…..glad you liked the OS and i will definitely be back with something new very soon..
OMG! I m very late na di.
Emotional starting n Tadibaaz ending di!! U portrayed Shivika’s feelings very well di. Starting is sad but I must say ending makes smile in my face!
Hey Gayathri……no worries …you have posted your opinion and only that matters to me….sad endings are not my cup of tea …what say? and i know you would agree with me…….thank you so much dear…and i am so happy that the ending bought smile on your face and i would always want it to stay forever……..keep smiling…take care and you know where i will meet you ;p
hey VHM…
just finished reading ur previous updates…
and trust me.. I’m already ur fan….
the past & the present…. wow what a series… ur work always leave me spellbound… & at lack of words to appreciate u…
just loved ur way of writing… ur writing always touches my heart…
fabulous os… totally perfect…
hat’s off to U????
Hey Mrunal…….thank you so much…thanks a lot…..past & present gave me so many friends and sisters and i never expected such a huge response…….thanks a lot for giving me this special feeling……..and thank you so much for those awesome lines you posted….i will always cherish these…..
Am so happy to know you liked this OS too….thanks again……even i am at loss of words what else to say and how to thank you …….so thank you sooooooooo much……..keep smiling and take care
Hey, I was sad that ur last FF…I could read only few parts but yess…again you are back with a bang
Believe me….crafting mind POV is awesome idea..!
I will try to read ur other works too…
This was fantastic and awesome…..loved it to core. Do, come soon with another one.
Just a small request, I hope you don’t mind if you have time, I would be elated if your read my FF too.
Take care, love ya!
Ps- Your daughter is so cute….! Lovely, girl.❤️❤️?
Hey Neha…thank you so much for all the beautiful lines and appreciation…that’s okay dear …i can understand the busy schedules of individuals…will soon be back with something else …..
i will not mind anything absolutely…i will search for your work and read it…..sorry didn’t know that you wrote an FF…now i wouldn’t miss to read…
Thank you once again for the compliments about my daughter…Love you too..take care …keep smiling and all the best……
Amazing os..
Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot
Hey VHM…..
I read ur one more OS bt i m unable to rmmbr its name n ur ff past n present revelation(something like thus),,i know u r a great writer ,,i wanted to read this ff,,bt i’d left soooooo mny epis,,,n i m unable to read all due to exams n all,,,i thought i wont be able to read ur work…
Btbit wasnt like that,..finally i m reading ur OS…
Coming to OS,,it was just fabulous…heart touching…
Loved it.–..
Will surely read ur another work from starting…
Take care
Hey Kanfi ….thank you so much…didn’t knew you read my works..this is something for me to get elated…no worries whenever and if you have time you can read it as it will always be in portal….
Thanks a lot for the appreciation..i am so glad you liked it…..thank you once again…keep smiling and all the best…do take care
Hey di….aaj tog bahot kuch kehna hai, but first, this is awesome…..I just loved the whole thing…..asi ideas aati hi kahan se hai?? And this is so well written…..and even if we remove one person’s point of view, n read only one person’s, even then the story is in a continuous flow…..
Plus it was also so so emotional…..
And that last few dialogues……we’ll meet again and all those…..I don’t know how to explain, but they touched me so much…..
And about the author’s note, I have a bit more idea about what thoughts r coming in your mind…..I have come back today, n after opening TU, I immediately thought to check your account (the Posts section) to see if u have uploaded your SS. I used to check my mails every night after coming back to the hotel, awaiting your drafts…..when I had none, I thought u must have directly posted it on TU…..now don’t tell me u r dropping that…..in fact, post it as this OS’s sequel…..I know I have named it Tashan n this os also ends on Tashan n Tadibaaz Ishqbaazi….So it will well suit….N I assure u the plot is awesome…..
So waiting to here from u soon…..
Love,
Nita
Nita…welcome back..thank you so much for the awesome review…lots of hugs for you for the review and analysis…ideas pata nahi kab kaise aa jaate hain…mera koi control nahi unnpar…awee so sweet of you to let me know how emotional you felt…
unfortunately i actually dropped the idea dear…and you know the reason why…after uploading and reading my work i too felt that this will be the best epilogue for that SS….but i don’t know ..i am feeling weird to upload those ….you have so much confidence on me Nita…i am feeling so so happy about it……i actually wrote the next shot of that and then discontinued feeling anyways i am not going to upload it…….
i will send you the mail with rest details…..
Love you loads , take rest and take care
Worth reading ? took time after very long and busy month .. loved it because its greatly written by you .. just have a request please can you continue after this .. it will be really interesting… and once again thank you for the best Eid gift ?
HEY NIDA…I can’t believe am i really seeing your opinion…..i am sooooooooo happy…you gave me the EID gift dear…thank you sooooooo much…glad you are back….infact over top of the world to see you back in TU……
EID MUBARAK NIDA !!!
And open TU Page without fail tomorrow as something uneven is coming up for you and all the rest of readers !!!
Waiting to meet you tomorrow in TU !!!
Once again EID MUBARAK and THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHH