Hii…friends this is Mahi.. back with new story…..thanku… to all ones again for such great response…and for such an encouraging comments…and also thanku..too to my silent readers…lets begin with the story….with th hope that u will like this one too….and sorry for mistakes in advance….
Character:-
Raghav- varun kapoor/namish taneja(or of ur wish)
Sia-tejasswi prakash/helly shah (or of ur wish)
The pigion on the roof flew away,flattering its wings and diminished to a pin point in the sky…the grey sky has turned blue….and clouds have provided way to sun to peek…the rays of sun are reaching ground..,piercing clouds like needle is piercing cotton cloth…
I spread my hand out of the window and felt the sun rays kissing my hands…i smiled standing at window looking beauty of the nature….then went back to coffee table in my living room….and took my phone to check if there are any massages….i unlocked the phone..it was flashing “1 message”…on the screen…
I clicked the message icon…and text message opened…
Message–“hi Raghav….u asked me whether i could come for coffee or not….and it’s yes i can…” it was from sia…
I almost jumped….and punched the thin air few times in exitement….then i glanced at the clock…it showed 15 mins to 11…
“I have enough time i thought”….and sat back on my chair peacefully…the cool wind greeted me….entering from window….
I read the message again and again atleast 20 times to believe that its not dream it’s reality….”OH MY GOD…its real…its real….its not dream….its really happening….”i thought to convince my self its real…
I scrolled to top to read our conversation…i had done this so many times that i remember whole of it now…..
So i started to narrate…. myself the story….i closed my eyes…and laid back to chair..and felt like sinking in my happiness…
“So this is how it started….”i told myself..
“A cute boy met a cute girl….actually they tumbled on each other…
The girl was in hurry…and the boy wanted to apologize…
He followed her but…she went there….where he wasn’t allowed(laughing in my head)…He too went away….
The boy was clever…he had read her name on the book…that had fell down on the ground…
He searched her… and eventually apologized…”i don’t mind” was her reply…
He was left smilling….and even made her smile….telling how he found her….
The first conversation went long….so did the other ones…
They got to knew each other well….there views matched….
He preferred cricket…so did she….,she loved cooking…. and he was an excellent chef….
Slowly and gradually the debates went funny….trust was born…secrets were shared….happiness was gifted in the form or the other….
Now they had decided to meet…she was reluctant…but he too was a magician….and a specialized in getting things done….
He melted her with his warm praises and flavoured it with his sweet talks….”
I once again glanced at the clock….oh god…i was late….i got up hurriedly….after getting ready…i was on the street hiring a cab…
……………….—————-i was in cab when my phone buzzed twice…. i knew it was her…she had reached on time and i was late…
But i didn’t blame myself….the culprit was the conversation bcoz of which i was late….(i laughed in my mind)..but there was a little smirk on my face…..
-–—————––————————I paid the fare letting the driver to keep the change….this showed my exitement and urge to meet her…
The sun was burning at it was too hot…so i quickly made way in cafe….i opened door of Cafe….the cool air of AC welcomed me….i stood at the entrance….searching for her….and saw a hand waiving for me…it was her…
I slowly made my way traveling through to the corner most table…where she was sitting…. dressed beatifully in pink and white floral printed long skirt of georgette material….simple white top….white scarf around her neck….one hand full of silver mettalic bangles….and on the other a simple wrist watch….
Her hair was not braided this time….but were left open….and brown streax of her just touching her shoulder…a thing was missing….her specs….which i realised later… was replaced by contact lenses…
I reached the table…dragged the chair opposite to her which she was sitting in….
She turned away her face….showing anger as i was late…
I took out my pen and diary….and scribbled a big “SORRY…”
I tore the page and slipped it infront of her….i saw her giving a faint smile….
She again turned her face to that angry one…and read the paper…
She flipped the paper….and wrote something….and turned her face and folded her arms….
I reached out for the paper…it said…”SORRY IS ACCEPTED BUT SORRY FEE IS STILL DUE….”
I smiled..looked up…and caught her staring at me…she immediately turned…i sighed and smiled…..
I stood up and slowly stepped towards her….and gently planted a kiss on her cheek and pecked her lips….
She smiled….and raised her eyebrow….
I scribbled “your “SORRY FEE” the best way i could pay it…..i guess the interest on the fee is still left….” she smiled on reading the note….and gently hit me on my shoulder…
And by the time…our coffee arrived…i sipped coffee and left thinking….
“How beautiful is life….for instance…’two “mute” people enjoying in the cafe…and have their own way to communicate….a DIARY and a PEN…”
My thought were disturbed by a fruity smell…she returned…holding the platter of heart shaped cookies….i smiled and thought…”I WILL THIS HEART SHAPED COOKIES BUT, WILL NEVER BREAK….HERE HEART…ITS A PROMISE TO MY LOVE….MY LIFE… MY SIA…”
A/N:- sorry for the mistakes and hoping that its not boring…..and thanks alot those who read my OS earlier….thanks for such alovely and encouraging me for writing more…last but not the least thanks alot for giving ur precious time and reading my story….all the best….bye….
This is the link to my previous OS “This is my story”- http://www.tellyupdates.com/story-os-swaragini/
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