hey guys i m sorry my last ff i will always love u sukor i left it incomplete due to my boards but this time it wont be so cause i m free right now all those people who were and who r dissapointed by me I m sorry guysss…….but I hope ul will understand my problem and support me in this ff too…
I m not quite sure whether I should right this ff or not because its quite different so I will be waiting for ur replies and suggestions …..hope ul like it….enjoy reading…
There was a camp……all the students lit the bornfire and sat in groups…..they were saying some horror story…a boy named karan started it…
karan: guys now no more fake stories…. Time for a real one now….
naina: oh plz karan stop with ur nuisance..
karan: arey I m serious…..its a real story which remained untold
kunal: ohhh if its tat so then start with ur story plz….
karan: sure dude
Now lets just concentrate on karan’s story
FLASHBACK…
A BOY COMES OUT OF HIS ROOM….ITS ABOUT 12…there was complete dark and suddenly the lights switched on…..he was shocked to see such an amazing arrangement….he is none other than our dear Vivan….a girl comes and hug her she is imli….
Imli: happy bday my vivu……
Vivan: thanks imlu…
Another boy comes and he is our one and only suraj
Suraj: that’s not done yrr even I did the arrangements and all thanks to imli…
Imli: ooooo someone seems to be quite jealous ha…
Vivan hugs him…
Suraj: happy bday dude…
Vivan: thanks yrr
Meanwhile ragini too comes and hugs him…
Ragini: happy bday bhaiya…
Vivan: thanku my chotu…
Aditya: guys don’t u think its quite boring…I mean its our besties bday and we r celebrating it here..i think we should go somewhere…
Imli: great idea but the question arises where will we go???
aditya: I will search it on net….just a sec
And he leaves….
Vivan: by the way suraj….where is she???
Suraj: god knows….just now she was here but now even I don’t know….
A girl comes from behind and blindfolds Vivan…
Vivan: o0h common chakor I know its u….
She removes her hand and hugs Vivan….
Chakor: a very very veryyyyyyyy happy bday to my best friend…
Vivan: thanku chakor…
Suraj: u know u r the last one….
Chakor: has anyone asked u…
Suraj: ha so even I m telling this to imli…
Ragini: oh god ul both….
Imli: now on which topic ul fighted…
Chakor: ask him……he only fights first
Suraj: oh really…..
Chakor: yes really……mr akdu
Suraj: u na just stop calling me akdu….
Chakor: I will not…akdu akdu akdu..
Suraj: u..
Vivan: guys stop it yaar ul r best friends but still fighting like tom and jerry…
aditya: guys quickly come here….
All go there…
aditya: see this found a new place…..pratapnagar…
Ragini: O M G….
SURAJ: WOOHO it looks so amazing…
aditya: yup lets go here…
Vivan: yup but dude where will we stay….
aditya: theres a palace here I will call dad and tell him to send someone here for doing all the arrangements…..
Suraj: so decided tomorrow morning we r leaving from here…
Chakor: no we r not…
Imli: but why chakor???
Chakor: arjun u didn’t read it nicely…see read this this place and this palace both r haunted and no one stays here….
Suraj: oh common chakor don’t say this u believe in all this stupid nuisance…
Ragini: yup exactly suraj is right…no one has seen the ghost yaar…
Chakor: yup u r right no one has seen the ghost but don’t u remember that no one has seen god too but yet we believe in god and suraj no matter I believe in this or not but people do…
Vivan: chakor…
Chakor: I m not going here if ul want then ul can…
Suraj: chakor….
And she leaves…
Karan was telling further but teacher comes….
Teacher: common students time to go for ur bed…
Karan: ok fine guys goodnight I will continue tomorrow…
Precap: suraj: don’t worry I will make it sure that chakor joins us…….chakor comes to the kitchen and sees someone there she calls for help but no one comes…the person whispers: I m waiting for u
And comes close to chakor and…..
So that was it hope ul like it but don’t know as its very strange story I know…so I will continue only after ur suggestions….and yup it’s a combo of udaan and swabhimaan as I love both the serials so it will have little udaan characters and little swabhiman ones too…..
Today its very short as its just an intro but tomorrow if ul tell me to continue I will try making it longer once again sorry guys and hope ul like it….sorry if it bored u…thanks for reading
20 Comments
I was amazing. I loved it. I was sad that you had stopped your previous ff but now I am happy that you have started a new one. Great! Keep up the good work!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part and please try to be regular.
Thanks allot Tania and I will really try my level best to post it regularly….
Awesome keep writing
Thanks allot dear glad that u want me to continue
Amazing!!! Please update soon. Can’t wait. It is very interesting and different.
Thanks allot…Glad that u liked it…
my hands up for your ff… keep writing….
Thanks allot…Glad that u liked it…
It was amazing. Do continue. I was wandering Wht happen to u cz u suddenly stop ur ff. really miss ur ff. glad u started a new n. Waiting fr next part
Thanks alot dear really happy that u want me to continue…
Interesting
Thanks
Keep writing interesting post soon
Thanks…
awesome start dear plz do continue it n if possible try to continue that ff also
Thanks alot dear and yup I will try if I can write that one sorryyyy and thanks for liking this one…
O hi….. interesting story….will love to read it…… continue dear….
Thanks glad that ul love to read this….
Awesome..really its the first mashup of swabjiman and that too with udaan which is awesome show.will love to read it.can’t wait..
Lived it
thanks alot dear….