guys i am sorry for not posting these days i was busy so from today i will surely mantain regularity
i know many of u may had forgot intro because there are many ff here so i am giving u link please go through this >>>>>::?>:::::::::
GUYS REMEMBER PAIRS ARE SWASAN AND RAGLAK BECAUSE THERE MAY BE SOME WHO MAY BE READING FIRST TIME SO AGAIN I AM SAYING PAIRS ARE SWASAN AND RAGLAK
one more thing guys i am thinking to give nice plot of raglak also in this story as per the request so may be i can give 50% swasan and 50% raglak or sometime it can go 60% swasan and 40% rglak so please let me know how many raglak fans are reading this story so that i can take plot for them
guys i had updated intro of this story so please read also
link of intro of this story www.tellyupdates.com/unwanted-relation-husband-freind-intro/
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one more time i am giving character sketch of character
SWARA MAHESHWARI- HAVE VERY BITTER PAST, WIFE OF LAKSH MAHESHWARI, VERY POLITE HUMBLE AND STRCCT NATURE IN BUSINESS, BECOMES EMOTIONAL VERY SOON, CRAVE FOR HUSBAND LOVE, DOES NOT HAVE PARENTS
LAKSH MAHESHWARI- HUSBAND OF SWARA MAHESHWARI NEVER LOVES HIS WIFE, HE IS VERY GOOD WITH OTHERS BUT HE IS ARROGATE ALSO BUT NOT WITH HIS WIFE AND NUMBER 1 BUSINESS MEN OF MUMBAI, HIS MARRIAGE WITH
SWARA IS JUST BUSINESS DEAL HE DONT CARE FOR HER
SANSKAR KAPOOR- VERY TALENTED, CUNNING AND SHARP MINDED MEN AND FUN LOVING WHO IS ESTABLISHING HIS BUSINESS AND HE IS JUST TRYING HIS LUCK TO ESTABLISH HIS BUSINESS
AND USES MANY TRICKS TO GET BUSINESS DEAL BECAUSE HE WANTS TO BECOME FAMOUS, HE IS VERY HOT HUNK AND BEAUTIFULL WOMEN DIES FOR HIM, HE KNOWS EVERY BUSINESSMEN AND BUSINESS WOMEN
WEAK POINT, HE CLAVERLY USES THERE WEAK POINT TO GET DEAL OF CRORES
RAGINI GADODIA- WELL KNOWN AND FAMOUS MODEL WHO USUALY DANCES IN BIG BUSINESS PARTY, AND EMBASSADER OF LAKSH MAHESHWARI BUSINESS COMPANY, AND HIS GIRL FREIND
GIRL POV
story starts with a girl seating in her room in bridal dress she was nervous as well as happy because this is first night with her husband but happy because she thinks that he is right person who will make her life full of love which she crave in her whole life because from childhood her mother was died, father was too much busy in his business that he never gave good attention to her, but she was happy that still her father was there but 1 month before god took everything from her and her father died the most rich person of mumbai died in accident, that day was hilarous for me, i forgot to live but LAKSH was there who supported me and today i somehow came from that trauma, but my father realy wanted me to get married in front of him but he could not see it but i married to same person who is selected by my father, yes me and lucky got enganged infront of my father only my and lucky relation was just like a deal of merging to big companies of mumbai into one,
i was not ready for this forced marrriage but lucky agreed even after knowing my black past(revealed later), because i know no one can except me after knowing my past but lucky did, he stood with me when my father died so i am very happy that i got correct life partner of my life, i think today may be my first day after that incidense i will sleep peacefully because protection of husband arm is very different as i read in many books which makes us feel like heaven, in husband arms we forget our sorrows, we just sleep like a small baby kid sleeping with his mother with no worrries no tention, just hapiness, today i realy wanted to thanks god that after my bitter past life, a new shadow of light came in my life which will make my whole life happy, today all thought chain is running in my mind because from today new era of my life is going to start….
just than she hears door sound her heart beat starts raising she was nervous as well as excited for first night with her husband, she was thinking will he do s*x with me first night or not ohh bhgwan please i dont want him to be typical husband who do that with her wife on first night (guys i dont think couples do s*x in first night of there marriage) because i wants some days for this type of think, i just want we both understand each other feelings likeness and become good freind, i am not thinking about love and all stuff, it is just imaginary concept, if he will love me it will be like heaven but its okk i will also like it if he manages to be in society marriage with me in which he undrerstand his husbandary rights and care about me, standing with me in every position it will be well and good because if these goodness is there in our husband, no need for thinking about love because love will happen automatically, if that person is caring about us this much it is sign of love only my all thought of trance came out by lucky’s voice “swara are u comfertable”(i know all guessed 100% correct)
SWARA feels shy today infront of him but dont know why, because she mate him many times in business parties and in deals but never felt strange, but ya it is just because today i am seeing him as my husband place which i never saw him before, ya how much feeling change about a person when he became our husband, one day before i did not care about him what he talks what he do, but today when he beacame my husband his every word have different feeling in my body, it bacomes like ideal, ya today i realy felt that statement correct that HUSBAND IS LIKE GOD FOR INDIAN WIFE which i am feeling today because after entering this room i was just thinking about his goodness only i know i dint love him but a husband is husband it has very different feeling in our life, again my thought process were stopped when he again ask are u comfertable swara i think i am just fool is just thinking like mad about her husband he is standing infront of me and i am busy in his thought, i am still in shyness, i just nodded in agreement i think lucky is also nervous may be boys also feels aucquard but again i felt very nervousness and unconfertable when lucky seats near me by placing his palms on mine i was feeling the hand of my husband today it was realy very differnt feeling which i am getting when he touched me, in my whole life i never felt like this feling before ohh god how different is husband than other normal man, he places his hand on my chin and make my face confertable to look at him, now we had eye contact with each other i got very nervous i felt now i could not seat properly due to his gaze on me, i cant look at his eyes today swara maheshwari who always talks to client by her proud head is feeling shy yes today swara first time feeling shy that is ALso infront of his hubby, this is reason i think why husband is very important person in girls life\
but my one think suddenly striked in my mind does he thinking to romance with me, ohh no today please god i did not prepared well for this thing, i realy wanted some days to do that with my husband, in these days i will be able to feel comfertable with him so that i can open up for doing romance but my surprise he asked me to change clothes and sleep comfertably, ohh god what non-sense i was thinking, today i will surely become mad, i slowly made place went to washroom and wore some confertable clothes as i enter to my room i saw he was seating on bed but was thinking sometthing important, again my useless mind starts thinking i think i should ask something about chai coffee to him may be he had habit of drinking but who cares if he will need he will ask to worker it is his house, but swara he is ur hubby it is ur duty to take care of him, i came towards him and asked do u need coffee or milk something else now lucky smiles at me raplies its ok u sleep servant will bring tea i told her but my wifery mind again thinks no no swara u should bring tea for him he is ur husband u shoud care about his feeling his likeness and all, i think if i will care for him he will surely care about me so i went out of room and brought tea for him in 10 minutes
lucky- ohh swara why did u take tention u sleep here
swara- its okk it is my work to care
lucky places tea on other side and make me seat on bed and says u are same swara which i see in office
again my evil wifery mind started thinking am i same swara who never care about anyone but in one day i just changed fully like ideal houswife, ohh god afte marriage this type of changes occur automatically but i just smiled at him
he also smiles and says no need to be formal to me swara we will live same as we both lived before as good freind again my evil wifery mind comes wov he is such a wonderfull hubby how much he cares about me, ya if this word every hisband tells to wife on first night of there marriage all girls live happily in there life, again i said shut up to my wifery mind i just nodded and went to otherside of bed and lays down
lucky also sees me and made all lights off, he also dozes near me
but i was feeling restless because today i was not in my house it is other house and i am not confertable with it, my mind was full of one stuff what should i do to make my hubby happy, what to make tomorrow in rasoi, i know we are rich but i want my hubby should eat food by my hand only, i will make our relation strong, it is near about 2 hour lucky slept and i was just mad in his thought only, now i heard some movement in my back i found that lucky slept near me in his sleep his one hand falls on my chest, and he pressed it when he was adjusting to sleep properly ohh again my evil wifery mind, my hormones had increased because till now nobody touched me there but today by mistake he touches it, ohh god it was just different feeling which i am feeling, i never got this type of sensation in my body before, now i have to remove his hand before something more happens to me now i slowly removed his hand from my body, now i was feeling relexed my hormones also decreases, shivering sensation in my body also decreased but till now the effect which he had done on me was there and i also slept with this new feeling of my life with my hubby thinking for better future……………………
precap- story will start from 3 year leap, swara heart broken, lucky
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guys i think this type of feeling may have in girl mind when she gets married, AND u will get to know later and if anyone is married here please let me know that what i showed is correct or not
guys i am not girl but i think it would be thinking of girl in her first day night so if u get hurt for that i am sorry
one more thing as i thought to give good plot of raglak and i dont like this name of story so i am giving u option which was given by reader of other story please select
good name or if u want same name i will take that name only
1) swaragini was it my sin
2) black world of rich people
3) swaragini broken glasses of relation
4) things that make relation strong
5) current name is good
guys if u feel to comment u can comment i am not preessuring u to comment
guys one more thing u all may be thinking how can swara feels very differnt even if she dont love him but guys please note that feeling of husband is totally different
in real life even if we dont love him
guys did u like swara’s wifery mind
AGAIN I AM SAYING PAIRS ARE SWASAN AND RAGLAK
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GOOD BYE TAKE CARE
87 Comments
2) is better i think.. i am not new to t u.. but in swaragini this is the frist ff i rd & loved.itz superb bro.heart touching.though i am single yet i also felt the feelings of wife accro to ur explaining.very creative yaar.difrnt plot.. i like swasan than raglak.anyway waiting for this ff. keep rocking…this ff is going to be a hit.. congratz!!
Thanks for ur wonderful and heart touching wishes towards my ff and I am happy that you are reading my story keep reading my story I will surely give good plot for both the pairs I don’t know whether it will hit or not but I am happy that u are reading my story
Just awsm….Main sochi thi ki comment nhi bhejungi but prologue aisa hai ki I can’t stop myself 2 comment….
Oh my sisu u commented but I will give such update you have to comment and how ur studies are going on
Hi….when saw ur tittle..I was in confusion.. Read or not…just bz of u I read this…the tittle it self reveal the extra marital affairs.. I don’t like such type of story…after reading the prologue.. I was just impressed seriously yaar…your Ff swaragini love in slum…is one of my fav..fiction….u r my fav writer…. And the best thing is u r a boy….
I didn’t see any boy….that too a fan fiction writer.. Haha..here everyone is girl…readers and writers…
For this chapter… Amazing…I have no enough words to praise u…haha…actually I really don’t know..how a girl feel in her first night…am not married yet.??…
I think these r the true feelings may happen to her…hormones works…?
You beautifully narrated her emotions and small small things….frankly speaking.. I also dreamed..the safety in his arms..sleeping in his warmth like a kid..stupid me na(day dreamer).. Haha….not me every girls…dream
was like this….
I think this is a long comment sorry….
May be I can’t able to comment regularly… Bzy hey yaar…
But boss keep writing.. Stay blessed…
Forget one thing tittle….
Swaragini Broken glasses of relationship…
Thanks for ur beautiful and this much big comment and yes it is extra marital affair but you will really love this story and one more thing as you know I write story only based on creating awareness among you guys about black world of society
Ya you are correct sleeping in husband arm is very different feeling you will get to know after marriage
For me it is needed u read my story if u can’t comment regularly than also it’s OK and stay blessed
Hey bro I haven’t comment anywhere yet but your story forced me to comment….. firstly amazing FF bro….. the way you show Swara’s POV is awesome…… though I’m not married yet I’m just 14 but whenever I think about my marriage I think the same as for arrange marriage ppl it’s really hard to to move forward in one nyt itself….. I must say you are a really understanding person bro and your to-be-wife would be really lucky to get you as a life partner who understand other’s feeling this much so hats off to you bro….. You know I was thinking about the same concept and here you are came with same one….. first of all thank you soooooo much for thinking on this concept as there are some ppl or kids here who are totally unknown about the bitter truth of society and can never expect such thing ever happened in the society….. they should know the new shade of world or I should say ppl….. and learn something from it…… and plssssssss can you give boy’s POV as we all know what a girl but we can never understand what a boy feel at this stage of his life…… I must say you are a really amazing writer come soon waiting for you badly bro
And I forgot to say about title for me 1,2,3 are fine but my favorite is 2nd one as this story is about dark side rich ppl
Thanks for ur beautiful comment tooba and I am happy that my ff forced u to comment and I know I was thinking to show boy pov but I can’t show of lucky in that way that u will get to know later but I will surely show when swasan gets married and keep commenting and liking my story and thanks for giving suggestion
Thanks for liking moral of this story