Chapter 11
Hey my lovelies ??? came back with the next part ???. I’m so happy when I saw the response I got for the last Parr of this ff!!! True the number of comments got less and less ??? but I know many of you have exams these days and you’re studying. I understand that completely! What got me happy is that 63 readers have read the last part!! Means 62 likes ??? and 1 dislike ??? (don’t know the reason for disliking). But still!! Thank you sooo sooo much ???. Your love and encouragement is what still keep me writing ???.
Now about today’s part, I’m gonna warn you guys!! I gonna do something really drastic and something no one would try to do even in dreams. So don’t be angry with me.
WARNING!!! Try to be calm after reading it ???
Previously on “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”,
“No sir I’m alright.Don’t worry!!! You saved me from getting hurt na? So thank you so much! ???.” She smiled at him.
He looked hurt. He got the hidden meaning in her words. It meant that he shouldn’t be that much worried about her. It meant that if the chandelier fell on her, it won’t be as painful as the pain she’s going through now. It meant that he has no right to panic so he should stay away from her as much as possible.
Sanchi saw Riya looking depressed. She went to him. “Tumhe kya hua?” She asked her.
“Look na Sanchi, I wanted everything to be perfect but something or other goes wrong.” said Riya.
“Yeh chandelier, fell and broke in to pieces!! This is very inauspicious!!!” Gayatri said with a worried look.
“No aunty! Nothing is inauspicious!! This chandelier might’ve gotten loose when they were doing the decorations. That’s all. Nothing serious!!” Saying that Sanchi turned to the crowd. “All of you might be tired right? Since there’s still some time for the wedding to take place, all of you can take some rest!!”
The guests agreed to her idea and went to their rooms in Malhotra Mansion.
Sanchi, Isha, Pragya, Riya, Kabir, Veer, Kusum Gayatri & Anand are left.
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Sanchi turned to her besties. “No you two…… we have to make sure this whole place is cleaned and nicely decorated. So you two are gonna help me for that, whether you like it or not!!!” She ordered them.
“Jaise appki marzi, maharaani!!……… (as your wish my queen!!) They both gave her a salute.
“I’ll help you too beta” said Kusum.
“No way aunty! You should get rest too. Too much tiredness isn’t good for you!!” Sanchi said in her ‘I’m the doctor so listen to me’ tone. Then turned to Riya again.
“Ab hamari hone wali dulhan aur dulhe raja, app bhi, jao aur aaram karo! ??? Hum yeh sab manage karloongi!………. (now our bride to be and groom to be, should go and rest! We’ll manage all this!!)……… Veer, would you help us too?”
“Yeah I’ll come. But first I have some work to finish” – Veer
“Let it be Veer. You and your work! Excuses and excuses! We girls can do this. We don’t need your help. Hmph!!” Sanchi said annoyed ???.
Kabir couldn’t take it anymore. It hurts him too much when he see her act as if shes happy. He went away. Veer looked at him. Then Riya too left. Then Veer too.
Veer was pacing in the garden aimlessly, thinking about everything happened in the past few days and today. Today after the mehendi, he was passing by the room that was our trio girls were. He heard about their convo about stopping the wedding and how Sanchi disagree to it.
(Let’s face it guys!! If the love of your life choose someone else over you, then you’ll be hurt and angry. True you’d say that you want them to happy but inside you still wish that he or she would come back to you. In this story Sanchi’s helping the wedding coz Kabir said he wanted to marry Riya. And Veer is hurt coz Sanchi doesn’t love him)
He didn’t want Kabir and Sanchi to be together. But he didn’t want them to be in pain too. So he decided! He decided to do something. He went to Riya’s room.
“Riya, can I talk to you about something?” – Veer
“Veer, can’t we talk some other time? I should start getting ready now.” – Riya
“No! This is important!” – Veer
“Ok what’s it?” – Riya
“Do you love Dr. Kabir?” – Veer
“Of course Veer!! What kind of question is that?” – Riya
“Does he loves you too?” – Veer
“Of course!!” – Riya
“Are you sure?” – Veer
“Yes I’m sure. Why else would he marry me?” – Riya
“So you don’t think he loves Sanchi?” – Veer
Riya looked horrified at this. But she quickly composed herself and replied, “how does it matter? We’re getting married anyway!!”
“Riya do you have any idea how this marriage will affect all our lives?” – Veer
“Look Veer, I know you love Sanchi, and you can be with her. There won’t be any problem!! So stop wasting my time and get out!! I have to get ready for my wedding!” Riya said stubbornly.
“This is wrong Riya, you’ll regret it one day!!” With that Veer went away.
Riya sat on her bed thinking. “What if what he said come true? What if I regret my decision? No no no no NO!! I can’t think like this now!! I can’t loose him!! I love him!! I’m sure after the marriage, he’ll learn to love me too. I just need to give him some time! Yes time will solve everything ???” she convinced herself.
After some time the bride and the groom were sitting on the mandap, doing the rituals. Sanchi was standing near the mandap with Isha and Pragya on Riya’s right hand side.
Pandit ji told the couple to take the seven sacred rounds.
“STOP!!” Sanchi said loudly. Everyone turned to her. Some guests started to whisper among themselves. Kabir and Riya had blank expressions while Pragya, Isha and Kusum were looking hopeful ???. Even Veer looked relieved.
She came near the couple and tied the knot of the ghatbandhan tightly.
As they were talking the rounds, the ghatbandhan started to untie. No one noticed it except Sanchi.
“This was about to untie, that’s why I asked you to stop. Now it won’t untie again!!! ???” she smiled at them. Kabir looked away in pain. Her friends and Kusum looked crestfallen too ???.
While Sanchi was tying the knot, Kusum and Gayatri noticed her hand which she accidentally got mehendi. Her mehendi looks so dark!! Gayatri was confused about how Sanchi’s mehendi got so dark and Riya’s mehendi is so light.
They took the remaining rounds and sat back. Kabir filled Riya’s hairline with sindoor and made her wear the mangalsutra. While doing that his eyes met with Sanchi’s eyes. She was smiling happily while he looked like an empty shell.
Pandit ji announced them as husband and wife. That’s when all the tears Sanchi had been holding for days started to fall down from her eyes nonstop. While everyone came to bless and wish the newlyweds, Sanchi sneaked out to get a good of herself. Then she too came to wish them.
“Thank you so much Sanchi! You helped me so much. If it wasn’t for you, it won’t be this perfect!!” Riya said greatfully.???
“What thank you? I expect something from you in return!! You have to work more than this in our weddings!! Be ready Riya! There will be 3 weddings!!” Sanchi laughed to make the situation light, hiding her feelings. ???
“Ok done!!” Riya agreed. ???
Then the bidai rasam and all went to their homes.
(I don’t know much about Indian wedding customs so if anything’s wrong don’t be mad)
……….next day @ SDCH……….
First day after Riya and Kabir’s marriage. Everyone welcomed the newly wedded couple ???. Kabir had ignored Riya since yesterday and she kinda expected that. She thought to give him time, so he would eventually love her.
Today’s the last day of the interns’ internship at SDCH. So all interns and doctors and nurses who doesn’t have any duties, gathered to a small hall like area.
Someone was looking for someone but he can’t see her anywhere. You guys know who I’m talking about ???.
Anand Malhotra, the owner of SDCH, (In other words the reality show host in SDCH) came to the front and started to talk.
“Welcome everyone!! As you all know, today’s the last day of your internship in Savitri Devi College & Hospital. All of you came through a long journey…………. (blah blah and blah blah blah then some more blah ???)
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It is sad that our best intern of this year, Dr. Sanchi Mishra isn’t here with us today. As you know, she got an offer from a well known hospital in America, and she went yesterday night”
Kabir didn’t hear another word he said. He felt like the time has stopped. His mind working crazy. **Dr. Malhotra had told me Sanchi got an offer long ago. So that’s what she meant that day when she came to me!! She said she’ll go away from my life!! This is how she’s gonna do it!! Then what about Veer? What would happen to him??…… she went without saying a word to me ??? at least one word……**
After all of it finished, Kabir went to his cabin. He was sitting on his chair, a hand on his head, thinking.
**She could’ve at least tell me she was going…… wait, what’s this?** He noticed a paper placed under a paperweight. It was addressed to him on clear, neat handwriting. He didn’t have to look twice to recognize who it was.
“Sanchi……” Her name slipped through his lips.
He started to read the letter.
Dear Kabir,
I guess by now you got to know that I’ve already left India. I’m sorry I didn’t inform you earlier. I wanted to say goodbye yesterday, but it was a special day for you. How could I spoil that?
I want to thank you for everything, Kabir. I’ve learnt many things from you. Not only you were such a great mentor, but also a good friend too. You supported me when I had no idea what’s going on. When I lost my memories. I can’t thank you enough for everything you’ve done for me!
I know I haven’t told you, but got my memories back. I remember everything now. It’s good news right? Funny how I got everything I lost, back and I lost what I wanted the most. (A dried teardrop mark here)
Well…… I hope I’d be able to adjust here quickly. I’ll miss SDCH a lot though. I have so many memories there. Tell Kusum aunty and Riya, I missed them.
One request Kabir, please forget all that happened in the past and start your new life. Riya is a very good girl. Yes it’s not easy to see but she is. She loves you so much. So please move on and give her the life she deserves. Ok?
One last thing, I know I shouldn’t say this after everything I said before. Specially when a new chapter of your life is starting. But what can I do? Me heart won’t listen to me!
I love you Kabir, always……
Goodbye!
Sanchi
Tears were silently rolling down from Kabir’s eyes now. He closed his eyes and whispered,
“I love you too, Sanchi…… always……”
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Tada!!! ??? that’s all you get for today ???. I know you’re angry and probably thinking of various different ways to kill me ??? and get away with it, but sorry guys! That’s for the storyd and literature’s sake ???.
By any chance you like this part press the like button and if you don’t like it press the dislike button and give me your reviews. Although I’m positive that I’ll get plentyof dislikes but at least I’d k ow you read it ???.
On next part…… I’m still thinking about what to write ??? so can’t tell anything specifically but there will be a leap. So tomorrow I’m posting my other fs “Soch Na Sake” 3rd shot and you guys can wait for that!!! Until then, ???
20 Comments
Seriously today’s episode makes me very dissapointed than real sdch show.? I ve expected so much bt… anyway u r great writer keep it up. I m sorry bt i m discontinue from here to read.
Ha ha ? if you’re gonna discontinue reading it, your choice dear I can’t force you to read. But if you keep reading, you’d see what’ll happen in their future. I know I’m so crazy for making Kabir marry Riya. But that was necessary. I’m sorry could meet your expectations but the story isn’t finished yet. If you’re stopping reading, then all I could say to you is thank you so much for the support you always gave me ??? love you ???
Omgggg?????what is this RU… I can’t imagine in my dreams u write that things ????.. i want to throw..????????hehe . I know u r kanchi fan ??so i m waitting for that.. itni jaldi mil gaye to story m twist kaisr aayega???..loved it ..?? nd ???bye tc.. gud ni8..an nxt Epi k liye wait karna padega..??but another one of ur Fs u r posting tomm. So ??..ok bye
What’s this Niyaaa? There is wedding and you’re throwing flowers at me? Throw at Kabir and Riya so you could give your blessings for their new life ?????? yeah let’s wait and see what’ll happen ???
Superb..Nice.. Bit still confused with Kabir and Rita. Post soon.
Thank you Aafiya ??? I know I made you pretty confused but wait a little more to know what’ll happen in the future ???
It was nice…. And waiting kfor kaanchi to reunite
Thank you Amnaa ??? don’t worry wait a little more patiently ???
Sorry dear i don’t like this episode yaar……….iss story ko par kar mae angry vi jogar or mera ankh se ashu vi agae……..sorry yaar mae kabir or riya ka marriage man nahi pa rahi hu………..isse better hota tum sanchi or kabir ko mar deta……….sorry ruchu for overreacting……..but really yaar i don’t like this episode ……….. sorry yaar if I hurt you …………I am really very very sorry dost muje maf kar dena……….love u ruchu…………….
No Anu it’s alright ??? thank you for sharing your honest opinion ??? so don’t be sorry for that!! Next part will be submitted soon, do read it and give me your views ???
You made me cry today I’m stopping reading sorry
Sorry for making you cry dear ??? if you wanna stop reading it then it’s your wish! I can’t stop you ???
I hate u. I hate u. U r Fab writer I have no doubt. But I thought ki it was the last episode and u will make kanchi pair in the end realising Riya too her mistake. I hate sanchi also she should told her earlier everything about her memory to kabir. Today u make me ? angry bird and ? crying baby. Luv birds go separate Karna galat baat hai. But it also true if pyar mein Judai na ho tho woh pyar hi kiya. Being kanchi fan for the first time in any ff I hit the dislike button. Sorry for that because it’s really painful for me also
Sorry Kajal for making you angry bird and cry baby ??? but in the future parts things would be different ???
i love you and i am thinking various ways how you unite them after leap
kitni bar heart break karogi dear
but no problem loved it
you tremendously show the emotions of kanchi
Thank you for your support to this chappie dear ??? it really means a lot, considering many readers hate me ??? yep Kanchi will find each other again after the leap. It’ll start from the next part and that would be posted soon coz its already submitted. And with the various thoughts your getting, how would I unite Kanchi, if you got any interesting ideas don’t forget to share with me too ??? love you dear ???
ruwani dear ummm…..saare kaanchians se comment padh ke main iss nateeje par ponchi hun…tera yeh updates toh boht painfull thi hum kaanchians ke liye….first meri sis read this…then she told me about your blaster….literlly i was very curious to read that how Ruwani wrote it……dear….i earlier told you your ff made me feel in love…..this is too……pyaar ka dard meetha meetha pyara pyara its too good…even i know…its our kaanchi ff…how can i angry with you….when i heard about kabiria’s marraige from my sis i told her Ru surely planned for leap…….luvvv uuuuu,,,,,,khoobbb saaarraaa pls post asap as you can…
Yep you’re definitely correct Anee ??? thank you so much for your support to this chappie , it really means a lot ??? I’m so elated to know that both you and your sister read my ff ??? next part will be posted soon dear!! Love you too ???
Ruwaniiiiiiiiiii…………ye tune kya kiya……….u just made me emotional dear………..kria ki mrg………omg…….ab tu kanchi ko kaise milaegi……..of course, no fear, when our Ru is here…….haha…….I know, u gonna make up some khichdi…..haha…..I mean twist & turns, in between & get back our kanchi together…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee……& sorry for late commenting………
Thank you for commenting dear ??? it doesn’t matter if it’s late or early coz your words are what matters to me the most ??? next part will be posted soon dear. Love you too ???