hi,tamanna here again to bore u all..thankyou so much for commenting on my previous os…i was so happy…i was smiling all day..when something sad would happen with me i remembered ur cmmnts n be happy..today i got to know the value of cmmnt…thank u so much…i have replaid to ur comment…
sonali05, rochika, dreamer…arundhati, sidmin-daamini, sayeeda, dolly, joonakansha, shikha, sameera, sidmin, cp, thanmy, purnima.agarwal30, ayu[shreya], aamu, shatakshi, zakiyah, jisha, adina, sanjanaagarwal, romaisah, monica, angita, sidvee, baby..thank u so much all of u..hope i have not missed anyone..if any thanks to u also..
..so this is few shots ff n it wil end soon…
characters–
kunj sarna {sidhant gupta}-he is a 24 years old…son of usha n general monoher sarna…mom passed away…just joined army after training…lives with twinkle…cute,handsome,hot,caring,fun loving, respects girls{aaj tak koi proper word hi nahi nahi mila sid ko define karne}…loves monoher…obeys RT like his own father…he can do anything for his loved one specially his love lady ????…
twinkle taneja {jasmine bhasin}-she is 22 years old..daughter of leela n rt..mom passed away..just completed her studies…lives with kunj in his house…cute,bubbly,beautiful,gorgeous,caring…loves rt..she madly trusts her loved ones especially her love of life ????……
yuvraj luthra{zain imam}-he is 25 years old…neighbour of twinj…lives alone…good friend of twinj…works as a teacher in college…he is a mystery which will reveal later…
munoher sarna-father of kunj..he is general officer in indian army..loves his son alot..best frnd of RT…can do anything from him….
RT/Raminder taneja-father of kunj…he is also a general officer in indian army…loves his daughter alot.. best frnd of monoher….he will be just in the prologue…
other characters [if any] they will be revealing later..
plot-
kunj n twinkle lives together in kunjs house…they r too much close frnds..together from 1years..yuvi is neighbour of twinj n good frnd with them…rt n monoher r best frnds…
so the prologue..
a place is shown…many soldiers are guarding it..a gun shot is heard..all gets into the gun fight…someone gets shot…its revealed to be RT…a man comes running to him..it is revealed to be monoher..he calls ambulance..the ambulance comes thier n rt is rushed in it…rt shows someones photograph n says to monoher who is sitting beside him…
RT-monuher this my daughter as u know..this photo is given by the attackers…i dont have more time..i m leaving my daughter on ur behafl…take care of her…plz save my daughter..agar ek camera wahan jah saktha hai so gun tho zaroor jaa saktha hai..[a camera can go then surely a gun can also go]
MS-rt dont say like that nothing will happen to u…n about ur daughter.. nothing will happen to her..i ll protect her..as she is also like my daughter…
RT-thank you so much monoher…i believe u..[ he takes his last breat there]
monoher cries…he calls someone..
a boy is shown…he is workng out…he looks so hot in his perfectly packed covered with sweat body..his phone rings…he pics it up..
boy-hello papa, whats up all fine na..
ms-hello beta[son],[whilecrying] rt is no more…i called u bcz of promise which i made to rt…i want u to fulfill it..
boy- what????rt uncle….[his eyes fills with tear]yes papa…say the work which i have to do..
ms-u have to protect his daughter..[he tells him the whole mattter]..n remember she should not get to know about ur reality….understand..nw im sending u the pic of the girl..
boy-papa whats her name,
ms-twinkle..
boy-TWINKLE TANEJA OKAY papa.i will surely protect her…as UR WISH,MY COMMAND…bye..
the boy recieves the pic of same girl..
hw is it????liked it??? boring???want me to continue….if yes than whch would u prefer-
1.happy ending….or…..2.sad ending ..if any confusion u can ask me…
i wanted to tell u that i cant post it daily..as u know projects,homework n all…
plz drop ur cmmnts….whether -ve or +ve..
love u all..
bye..
TAMANNA,
44 Comments
Loved it
I want a happy ending
Please post the next part soon 🙂
thank you so much sidmin…will try to post soon….love u
Interesting prologue..
Looking forward for the story..
About the ending obviously happy one
thankyou so much for cmmnting priya…love u..
awesome amazing…..want Happy ending…..
thankyou purnima…love u yaar.
Tamanna u again rock dear… U made me amazed by ur writings skills they r superb…..
Interesting plot… Amazing… I think Yuvi is one whom Twinkle loves… ??…..
I want a happy ending Please…
Post next one soon…
Love u ??
thankyou so much yaar sayeeda for telling such wonderful words…n about ur guess it ll reveal soon…love u…
Awesome!.do continue..n i need i happy ending..
thankyou so much..yaar love u..
Omg amazing tamanna
Do cont soon
Happy ending
??????
thankyou so much yaar…love u…
Nice I want happy ending
thankyou so much yaar…love u…
Awesome ???? and ofcourse a happy ending …… ??
thankyou so much yaar love u…
Very interesting…
Amazing….
Looking forward to it…
And ya happy ending
thankyou so much shreya …yaar love u …
Really interesting. Loved the plot! continue soon x so glad you wrote again. Love ya x
thankyou so much monica …its because of u all..I tried to write again…love u…keep encouraging me..
Awesome start
thankyou so much…love u..
It seems very interesting.. it’s awesome.. and I would like a happy ending.. and sid is just goals??.. do cont soon ?
thankyou so much yaar.. love u..
thankyou dea…love u…
Awesome yaar! Hatke storyline hai… Pls post soooon
thankyou so much yaar…love u…
thankyou so much…love u dea..
Awesome story line
I’m eager to keep reading ! 🙂
thankyou so much fr liking it…love u.
tamana amazing yr osm strt
pls cntinue n post asap
n yah i wuld prefer happy endings
so luv u n post asap dear
thankyou so much dear…love u .
Tamanna
Superb
Such an interesting amazing story
Plzz continue n give it a happy ending as I’m already disturb with current track of tei ??
Post asap
Loved it
U r writing an amazing story
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thankyou so much yaar..love u
Amazing plot…luved it…cont soon and happy ending…it kinda sound like main hoo naa…overall WOW epi..in karan johar’s word…
thankyou so much yaar…yah I got the idea from main hoon na…but it will be in my style…n will be lovestory…I was waiting who will guess it as I was going to tell it in my next epi..love u…
Fantastic
thankyou so much sanu…love u..
Awesome plot I just loved it
And its too interesting
I want a happy ending plss
And I just want to ask what is ur age sorry if I hurt u
aww..thankyou so much thanmy…n about my age…I didnt felt hurt infact I m so happy…I am 14 years old…I m in 9th std.. n love u..
Hi… Well i want a sad ending bcoz d above commenters r twinj lovers n happy endn equal to twinj n sad endn equal to twiraj…right. Nice start. Gud nt.
I m so happy yaar…I got a cmmnt from twiraj fan…I m so srry yaar.. thank you to read it…love u dea…
Awesome plot…I would love to see a happy ending… seems interesting
thank u so much jisha di…love u…