Hi…tamanna here…missss kiya… i guess nahi kiya…kon karega bhala is bakwas writer ko.. maine tho bohot kiya…so sorry fr posting it very late….I guess its more than a week..there are many reasons fr posting it so late ….hosake tho plz maaf kardo…
1.my cousins were present….
2.I had my exams till Wednesday..
3.busy with teachers day…
4.also I m suffering from fever from three days..
4.tab kana net pack khatham ho chuka hai…abhi mai mom ke mob pe likh kar post kar rahin hoon…
someone asked me to change the dp of my ff…i tried manytimes to change it but couldn’t…plz help me out…when I select the pic from the gallery it showes `the file over 255.00B.plz re select’..what should I do…
Thankyou for commenting…I had a big smile on my face…srry fr nt replaing to ur cmmnts….
Lets begin..
Kunj is walking away looking at mobile…he gets the network…the girl’s pic starts downloading….he gets happy..first her forehead than eyes,nose,cheeks,lips n finally her face is shown..he gets a shock..
Ku-what??? Yeh tho wahi hai…matlab..woh twinkle hai…yaar apne naam ki taraa kitni cute hai…matlab yehi meri Bachpan ki dosth tw hai…
……..flashback….
Two children are playing…one boy and one girl..two men comes there…they r revealed to be RT n monoher….the children sees them n rushes to hug them..RT says to the girl…
RT-aww..tw had fun na beta…(so the little cute girl is tw)..
Tw-yup papa…kunj is such a good boy(pulling his cheeks)..I love him (in childish way)..(so the boy is little cute kunj)..
RT n monoher (MS) Smiles…kunj smiles very brightly…
ku-I love u too tw..we will always stay together…(by saying this he caught her hand..)
Flashback ends..
(Note:kunj don’t remember about I love u part…(obvious hai yaar wo ek 5 saal ka baccha tha) he only remembers that they were best frnds…)
Ku-tw yaar I missed u so much…tu mere saamne thi aur mai pahchaan bhi nahi payaa …koi nai…jaldi hi hum milne waale hain…(by saying this he smiles)..
He catches a cab n moves from railway station….
Screen shifts to tw…
She is running n finally reaches her destination-park…she is waiting fr someone…she is getting angry…someone pats her back…she turns..
Tw-(in full angry mood)chinki…tune….mujhe ane ke liye kaha aur khud hi nahi aai…patha hai kitni door se bhaag kar ayin hun…
Chinki-relax tw relax…I m sorry na..ab chalien…
Tw nods…they move towards a bench…tw starts to cry n chinki consoles…
Tw-chinki papa mujhe chod ke chale gaye…main unke bina kaisa jeeungi.. (n starts to sob on chinki’s shoulder)
Ch-tw tu ro math…apne nahi tho uncle ke baare me soch…unhe kitna dukh ho raha hoga tujhe aise rothe dekh….tu plz rona band kar…aur tu tho bohot strong hai…Aur ab tu paise ke baare me soch hw r u gonna manage it.. …
Tw-(stop crying n wipes her tears) yes…mai strong hun…I won’t cry now…haan maine toh paise ka socha hi nahi…orphanage ke bacche kya khayenge…mai kaise manage karungi…chinki tere paas koi idea hai…job ke paise toh kaafi nahin honge…
Ch-haan idea toh hai…lekin kya tu manegi…I doubt…
Tw-haan…haan tu kehke tho dekh..mere liye mere orphanage Ke baccho se zyada aur kuch zaruri nahi hai…
Ch- tho sun…tuna job bhi karley aur kyuna apne ghar me PG(paying guest) rakhle…tu bore bi nahi hogi aur jo money tujhe milega wo orphanage ko de dena…
Tw-haan teek hai…koi mile tho keh dena..
Ch-okay…chal bye…ab jaana hai…(gets up n hugs tw.)
Tw-(smiles)bye…see u soon…
Tw leaves …chinki calls someone n says..
Chinki-plan A successfull..
Screen shifs to tw..
Tw comes inside n sees a photo album fallen on ground n it had opened the pic of little twinj with chocolate on thier faces…she gets into a flashback…
……….flashback…..
Little twinj was eating the chocolates..the chocolate fell from L(little).tw’s hand…she looked at kunj who was busy eating the chocolate… she went near him n kissed him on his cheek..he looked at her surprised bt later understood…tw looked at him with pleading eyes…
L.tw-plshhh kunj…mujhe bi chocky dona…plshh(again kissed him on his other cheek)
L.ku-achha okay…(nodding his head in childish way) ham dono na ishe share karenge…
L.tw-kunj ur chooo…shweet ….(she pulls his cheek)..
N they both share the chocolates…
…..flashback ends…
By seeing it she has a smile on her face…
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Additional character
Chinki-twinkle’s best frnd…loves tw like her own sister…can do anything fr her…
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I m so so sorry fr late submission…I m really guilty…as I said my tab’s net ended…im writing it my moms mobile…I m srry if any mistakes are there…plz ignore…sorry fr short update…my mom said that she wouldn’t put the net to my tab….I don’t know when I will post next epi…so sorry again…thankyou so much fr cmmnting n encouraging me…I feel blessed to have u all..no one knows that I write n read ffs except my two frnds haifa n Thahseen…….again srry fr late update…..
Drop ur cmmnts..whether be +ve or -ve…any confusion do ask me…m srry fr any mistake…I didnt read it again…
Bye…
Love u all…
TAMANNA,
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31 Comments
Tamanna…yaar Amazing…seriously …n is chinki involved in all this??? Really so many questions n loved little twinj ?
thankyou so much damini…I m happy that u liked it….love u..
Loved the episode so I think Twinkle’s PG will be Kunj (Smart huna meh …I Know)
Loved the episode and try posting soon 🙂
thankyou sidmin…abt ur guess it will be revealed…yah ur smart …hahaha…love u…
Superb epi.. aww lil twinj were so cute.. I guess kunj will b her pg.. try to cont soon ?
thankyou so much…love u..
awesome amazing fabulous cute epi
awesome amazing fabulous cute epi….
thankyou so much purnima…love u…
Fab epi yaar tamanna
Yeah me too think that pg was kunj
So cute lil twinj ???
Come soon yaar with next one
thankyou so much sameera….love u…
oh god amazing
i m lyk wowowwwwwwwwwwww…….
u r fabulous luvd it d small twinj awwwwwwwwwww…..shhoooooooooo cute d kissy wala part fr chocolates oh god i luvd it
n get well soon luving it
post nxt asap srsly shoooooooo cute………
thankyou so much baby…I m happy that u liked it…love u..
Nice
thanks yaar..love u..
Fab episode..cute n sweet.PG will be Kunj I think so…
thanks di…love u..
I loved the episode! i was just thinking about you and your ff yesterday and see you posted it today. Anyway, write soon x
u don’t know monica ur this cmmnt made me so happy…u know hw good it feels when someone keeps waiting fr ur ff ….thankyou so much…love u…keep liking it..
Awww that was sooo cute?? chotu twinj are sooo sweet! I loved it tamanna. N koi nahi package khatam ho gaya to kya hua? Ideas to hai na. Kahin par epi likh dena and jab time mile post kardena. ??
thankyou so much ayu….u know u encouraged me a lot by these words…thanks again..love u..
tammana…lil twinj were too cutee…
loved them…n guess tht pg will b kunj…post asap
thankyou so much sujina fr cmmnting….love u..
Superb … Twinj childhood moments were awesome…….
thankyou so much sana …love u …
Wow….tamansa so nice story….very hood concept…..sorry couldn’t comment on previous chapters….
its okay rashi…I m glad u liked the concept…love u..
Tanu…fab epi..ctd soon
arundhati I m nt tanu m tamanna…actually u misunderstood i guess…I read ur cmmnt on my previous epi n found there tannu but I thought its just a typing error…bt today also tanu so thought to explain u…hope u understand…srry if ur hurt…plz do keep reading…thanks a lot fr cmmnting..love u…
Hey tamanna
It was Awesome
N dont u dare to say that u r a worst writer…becoz u r the best
N arundhati has a habit of giving short names so she is calling u tanu instead of tamanna
N yes jaldi post karna
I m waiting
thankyou so much shatakshi…ohh…I m really a big dumb…actually there was another tamanna I guess of ‘poor or rich love knows nothing ff’ so I thought she thought abt that tamanna..thankyou fr clearing my doubt…anyways I was waiting fr ur cmmnt…I ll try to post soon…