Right from episode-1 i have got 50+ comments..thanku so much for the support..
love u all a lot..
so its really a long one..
hope u ll enjoy..!
FULLY DEDICATED TO SWSAN FANS..
FULL TO SWASN SECNES….
I KNOW MANAN FANS TO MAKE MANAN ONE THIS MARRIAGE WAS NECESSARYOKY..SO FROM TOMMO ONWARDS U CAN WATCH MANAN HATE STORY TURNED TO LOVE STORY TYPE ..
RAGLAK U TOO..
BUT ONLY LOVE SECNES …
SWSAN HATRED LOVE STORY TOO..
let me clear ur confusion first
guys manik & sanskar r vamp
ragini is dayan(actually i did few research n from few novels i got that in vamp’s world too they have something like sl*t..
n the resulting baby (just if )is said to be dayan..actually all this is an immaginary story..
but nvr worry i do resesrch and then only post )
————— SWASN MARRIAGE SPECIAL ———————
A girl is tied with rope on her hands and legs..
and bought to a lonely place her mouth is also wrapped up with cloth..
she is none other than swara..
Man1-ufff…shes so hot..kya mal hai hai na..
man2-just shut up..ur mouth..v rr not here by our own..v r said to dump this girl here and move..
just then a black audi car comes to that place..
driver horns..
both the men immediately comes near the car..
the man inside the car talks something to driver..
the driver comes out with two packets in his hands..
drvier-sir..said well work..he gave u this money now u dont know us n v dont know u..u can move..
the 2 men moves from their..
the guy gets down from the car..
and goes near the girl..
he is revealed to be our one and only Sanskar..
he comes to her..and eyes her and says i m sorry but i must hurt u..coz ur presence makes my sis hurt which i cant afford…
u know na how much nasty our shanky is..he agin read her diary..
but to his badluch only nandu mentiond swaras name..
Sanky slowly walks to swara..he bends to bite her(obvio as hes a vamp..he was about to suck her blood..
but the wind blew ..and swaras face which was covered by her hair..
was slightly visible now..
her rosy lips..her eyes…her pretty face made our shanky numb..
his inner soul came and said “what r u doing Mr SM…kill her she is reason for ur sisters sadness..”
another soul says “No i cant kill her..shes innocent wts her mistake to be loved..
han u have other options too..”
sanky slowly picks her and takes her in car..
he frees her hands and legs..
he sees the scars of rope..and feels as if some one stabbed him..
he himself dont know whts happening to him..
Secne-2
M-bhai..wr r u?i m trying since so much time..here swara is missing..
she has special powers..i cant afford my sister b in danger..
bhai plz pic the call..
shit man
(at lst laksh pics the call)
L-hello manik
M-hai bhai..swara is missing..
L-what?
M-yeah..actually i was feeling restless so i decided to go to her hostel..when i went their i got to know that she had went to walk..
but its been 3 hrs now..still she din turn up back..
L-just cool down..and search once agin..call up her frnds..
M-bhai..im not a kid..nor i m human that u think me fool..
i did all these..
in each and every direction i have searched bhai..but..
bhai plz do something and save her bahi plzz..
i cant stay with out her..
L-shes my sister also manik..i too care..
u go to twinkle first..
if its done by our rival then twinkles life is also at stake..
so rush their first..and take her to mansion coz only their those people cant reach..
got it..!
M-yes..bhai but swara
L-u dont worry i ll put out all source to find her..
i ll comes back tommo their..
fisrt u protect ur another sister..
M-s ..bhai
L-sunn..
M-hmm
L-after reaching make me talk to twinkle..
M-yeah!
Secne-3
in temple..
Sanskar is waiting impatiently…so that swara can wake up..
“she is a human..if i would have said her truththen official i would have married her in our fort..but shes a human and i cant afford letting my family in problem..”
just then he sees some moments in swara..
he gets mesmerized seeing her..
S-mein..yaha
who r u..
and y u bought me here..
Look plz lev me…i din do anything plzz..
S-suhhhh…!stay quite i wont do anything to u..not even touch u..but quite..
Swara-oky bhaiya…
San-what?(his jaws fell down listening to word bhaiya..just imagine hahahaha!)
(self talk :iss ladki ko mein appni biwi banana chahata hun aur yeah ladki muzee bhaiya banana chahati hai..urhhh)
San-first stop calling that..coz i ll b ur husband soon..
Swara-what..?
but no i wont marry u..i have big dreams i dont want to marry plz..lev me..
my bhai and sis may be waiting for me..
for my call they may be taking tension plzzz lev me..plzz..
San-marry me i ll lev u..and dont worry abut ur dreams..u can persiv them even aftr marrying me..
and once this marrige is over i myself vll take u to ur family..
Swra-r u insane Mr Ajnabhi..
i said na i dont want to marry..
cant u understand..
San-when i m talking to u in low tone u too must got it..
Swara-but..
san-chup!
Swara-no i wont i ll scream then police ll arrest u..then i ll complaint to manik and bhai..
kachha cabajayengee tumhe..
i m giving u opportunity lev me i wont say them anything..
San-u know wt u are making me crazy!(heheh u know na guys in my ff without taking my name i cant keep quite so here it is)now i ur first girl after my sister infact even she too dont raise her voice infront f me..
but u ..
the first one indeed to quarrel with Sanskar MAheshwari..
Swa-ooo so mr ajnabhi ur name is sanskr very good infact the best..
now i m going bye..
san-u wont say yes,for marriage na..
fine cm i ll lev u to ur hostel
Swa-what really?
wow…cm cm
u r not that bad as i taught..
San-i m very bad u still dont know me..
Swa-hu..cmming na
swsan come to a place…they r still in car..
he shows swra a person comming in bike..hes none other than manik..
San-so u lve him na
Sw-yeah..
San-want to c his death..
sw-what?
San-c their..a truck far away standing..
and c back another one..
both ready to trash him..
sw-what do u want..u want to marry me na fine i m ready plz dont hurt him..
San-hmm..good girl..u r intellignt.cm lets go to temlple now..
swar silently weeps…
they reach the temple..n marry
San(self talk)- i dont know how when what and wwhy i did this..i had cm to kill u..but u u have some attraction
i promise thou this marriage is of human but all vows i took here ll be fullfilled by me…i got a soul mate..
i know a human cant be soulmate but i have connected my heart with urs..
i ll fullfill ur all dreams..
swara..n i mean it..
swara was still weeping..
San-llok plzz dont cry
OKY…i know u dont know me but still u married me..to save manik..but any way now u cant change the truth
from now on ur Swara sanskar Maheshwari..
Sw-hmm..
can i ask u smething..
san-u dont have that right..
just listen as u wanted to meet ur family..
u call them n say ur fine..
n toomo u can meet themm.
but keep in mind few things..
(its muted…)
(guys i m showing innocence of swara here..i know no girl ll be such innocent as i m showing but there is some reason for it..)
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precap-depends on my beja…
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GUYS SORRY FOR DISAPPOINTING FEW FANS..
BUT TRUST IS ONLY WHAT U GUYS CAN DO..
IN LAST EPISODE I SHOWD TWINJ SECNES,SO NOW THIS ONE WAS A SPECIAL EPISODE DEDEICATED TO SWSAN..
PROMO IS HERE PLZ CHK THAT TOO-
As said in intro sanky and laksh are rivals..
so when laksh gets to abt sawan marrige he gets doutful to sanky..
manik being a vamp has a special power of reading minds..
so he reads swars mind and gets t know the truth..
he vows to take a revenge from SM(sanskar maheshwari)
and with his charm he ll crrok up nandini..
lets c if this hate revenge turns out to be love story..
(this s y i din write manan secnes til now..)
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Regards…
50 Comments
Nice, I laughed at the part when Swara calls Sanskar vaiya. It was really funny. I’ve a crush on Edward Cullen(twilight) nd also I like Manik. Now both of them can read mind. Great. Thnx for the update.
Well there r sum ppl who r saying bad things about ur ff nd i don’t understand y. All I would like to say is don’t take them seriously. Just avoid them. I know it won’t b that easy but try it. Sum ppl’ll always b there to do ill comments. Do u know WHY?? BCOZ THEY CAN’T DO AS GOOD AS U.THEY R JUST JEALOUS OF U. So don’t give importance to them. Just keep in mind that U R DOING A FABULOUS JOB. Keep ur hopes always high. I don’t want to say any ill words to them who r criticising ur great work I wanna say that WE R ALWAYS BESIDE U. We’ll always be with u. Think about them who r loving ur work nd showering unconditional love on u nd go on with ur amazing work. Keep smiling and lots of love .
Thanks a lot dear
It really means a lot for me love u !!
Please tell me who are human n who are whos?
Swara has power it means she is not human..kunj is also not human..please clear
yes crazy please clear
Which type of power swara has??? It’s awesome… Try to update soon…
Amazing …..awesome……..
Nice twists and turns .I mean in ur both ffs u have created gr8 suspense…
I will call u ‘crazy creative chik’…CCC…love u
Wt a bakwass ff plzz stop it as fast as u can
Yup I agree thank god there z atlst 1 who agree
Last time ki di huvi izzat kam nahi thi shayad tuze UR HATER
So only u r back to get sweet words by us again…
I m shouting my mouth only coz f crazy coz she don’t like fights
N she feels that if v fight the reason ll b she
So plzzz go get a life
Truth is bitter I know that
So u get a life so called saviour f crazy
U know what is bakwaas ur thoughts of the FF..UR HATER
We all r UR Hater and u became famous in the category of Haters and Insultors just leave her FF pleaseeeeeeeeeee…
If u think that this ff isn’t a good one then give SUGGESTIONS, ADVICE to crazy di so that she can improve but not ill comments or abuses. Just think once that u r putting lots of effort on 1 thing nd ppl r saying worst thing about that, won’t u feel hurt??? Think once its a request if u don’t like it then be silent.
Ek ff kam nahi tha kya UR HATER
That u came here also..
I think u like to insult ur self
Wow….again
That’s really great that u r back hater
N crazy please don’t be so sweet with such kind of ppl becoz they r not worthy of it
I think u r habitual of doing such creepy things n getting insulted
But never mind becoz some ppl can never improve
N yes I don’t want to spoil crazy’s ff nor her mood so I m using such soft words
Or else I know how to deal with such ppl
N crazy the episode was FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS..
Love u??
N yes have guts to reveal ur name…you coward ?
Excuse me mr.URHATER if u don’t like this its ur problem. Pls don’t be so insane.u r no one to judge anyone’s skills. If u think that this is crap then u write a ff urself and show us what is true writing okay…pls don’t visit di’s ff as u really don’t know what is good writing and stories.
cazy di is best writers I have seen.
di just don’t pay any heed to this type of people.
2days epu was fab
remember that v r ur very big fans and v luv u and u r writing.
Ctd asap crazy di and…
mr.URHATER its a warning pls stop this type of things.
ohhkk so my dear ur hater u r bavk wid a bang beta quu apni izzat lutwaane pe tuli hui h quuu smjh ni aati ek baar mein ki tu pure ka*ini haa actually uh said it crrect truth is bitter n the truth is ki u r jealous of crazy n we r nt her saviours fr ur kind information we r her fans more lyk a frnd okk so better uh keep ur weds to urself cz uh r a vry big b*t*h…
Reena if ur not interested in the story then don’t read it plus no one asked ur opinion about it ..u have no write to criticise others writing..so stay away..
this was nice but short… pls update a long one….
I cmpltly understand dear
But I write 2 ff n top on that my DCET exams r also approaching
I can’t neglect them so I m updating short
Sorry but for aylst a month cantvhelp hope u understand dear
Wow awesome chappy…
Please please please crazy van you tell me the names of all of ur previous ffs and os related to swaragini…l wanna read them please it’s a request…
ritika actually its the frst tym she is writing a ff on swaragini previously she was writing twinj ffs …… anways awwwsssuummm. yaaar crazyy loved it continue asap
Yar I have written 1 ff of swsan n raglak
Actually I wrote it abt one year back..
Its name is swragini a new ff
I have also written an os
S u r right how can I forget that one
It was hilliours I just saw a story n novel n just cmprd n wrote it..
Hehehe!
Bs but yeah my ff was stopped n btwn due to some persnl problem
N statdm z also mine only but lack f idea u c
Any way tq for loving my ff so much
If time permits do read twinj ff
U would enjoy more therewith unbelievable things…
ohh m so srry i actually didntknow about this m srry crazyy n ritika as well m srry
Its okay krystuu chillax sisooo
No i think she was the writer of stardom if m not wrong???
And also i have read an os of swsan credited to crazy…that was the best os l have ever read…crazy a humble request can u please tell me the name of the os…l wanna read it again…
And also other ffs of urs…at least tell me the names, l ll search and read them…
I know m nagging u but please it’s a request, l hope u understand?
Amazing epi loved it do cont asap
Awesome yar just waiting for ur next episode seriously mind blowing but missing manan scenes too much but I’m happy they will be there for next scenes….really enjoyed this one..
awesome……..
?????
Superb
Awesome ♥ ♥ ♥
I want to ask about twinkle is a human nd kunj is a god of vamp nd chudail nd all these. plz tell I am confused nd I have also sent you email plz reply.
Okay..dear just wait for next episode ur doubts ll b cleared
When u r going to update next episode and ..ragini is a dayan and kunj and swara has special powers said by manik what it means. ??? Plz explain me crazy…and abt laksh ..y he said that ragini is his girl…i am totally confused…
Crazy u also don’t know how much excellent ff writer u r……u know if a person is reaching to height of success nd fame many people r jealous of it and don’t leave any stone unturned for insulting them ..
We all know how strong our Crazy is ….she will surely ignore such talks nd move ahead nd prosper through her ff…
Ohhhhh now I understood y u didn’t give manan scenes! make manik love Nandu soon….. Thanku
I loved swasan scenes.. Waiting for more to come up with swasan romance scenes
It’s really great.bt if Twinkle is Manik’s sis how’s she a human
N wats our Nandu?
Y r SM n LakSh rivals
Hus the prince ?????
So many ques
Luving ur story ….. Keep up these suspense
Bt kuch solve v kar do
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Nnice
Superb
Crazy can u tell me the name of that os in which swara had cancer…I think u wrote that too…please tell the name of the os please….
And I ll certainly read twinj ffs of urs after exams but please reply to my request because m not getting that os…please
Okay give me some time
Hmm with n 2 days I ll search n say u..
Coz I too forgot the name hehehehe!
Awesome one ……. bt i m quite confused ……. tht who r humans among them ……. as frst kunj has some special powers now swara z also lyk tht so quite confusing ……… bt ur ff z jst awesome yaar ……. totally different and unique one ……. i jst loved it…….. eagerly wtng fr nxt epi …..
ur amazing. ..crazy….ufff….what to say about it….I don’t have words to explain hw much I liked it ….n don’t feel bad for the people who ill cmmnt on ur ff….we know hw much great ur FFs are……
OMG diii ur tooooo good awesome marvellous wonderful no words to describe
awwesomeeeeeeeee
Sorry for not commenting on last two parts
Awesome ep
Plz give emphasis on swasan and raglak
crazy…your just amazing…let them go to hell yaar…don’t care about them…I don’t know how to appreciate you babes….A tight hug for you…love you lots…epic was fab usuall…take care
Super epi yaar… i loved it… i have just read s ur epis.. its like wooowwww… very curious to read further.. when will u upload 7th epi…????