Hello everyone! I am ShonaLaado who is writing the (Swaragini FF) Love-Hate-Love. Well, I heard a song few days back. It is quite old but of one of my favourite Punjabi singers. The song is in my father’s favourite playlist too. So, I thought to potray our beloved heavenly couple, SwaSan in this beautiful song ‘Ve Mai Teri Je Na Hoyi Te Kisi Hor Di Vi Nai Hona’ by Jassi Gill. So let’s start with some modifications.
In xyz school,
A 10 year old boy is standing outside his class and is keenly listening to a same age girl who is talking with her friends. She says, “Army! I love Army! They are so good people. They help us and protects our whole country from evil eyes. I love them and when I will grow up, I will only marry an Army soldier.” She is speaking while moving her hands like explaining her friends that how much she is concern for it. She is too cute. The boy hears that and says in a low pitch, “Swara likes Army so much and when she will grow up, she will marry a soldier only. If she will marry than she will leave her house means Kolkata and her whole family means even me to go to her new family’s house. No, She is My bestie and I will not let her leave me!” He smiles widely and runs from there. So, the small and cute girl is Swara Gadodia and the innocent boy is Sanskaar Maheshwari. They both are in same standard and are besties of each other. Their family too shares a good bond and thus they both are from their birth together. Swara is from childhood fascinated to Army and wars.
After 12 years,
In MM,
All family members are busy in preparations. It seems like they are busy for someone’s arrival. Annu and Durga with Sujata and Ram are in hall with Shekhar and Sharmishtah. Soon two couple arrive, one is Adarsh and Pari and the other is Ragini and Laksh. Shomi asks, “Ragini, where is your sister?” Ragini smiles and says, “Maa, she is…” Laksh cuts her and says, “Busy in preparations for her warrior.” All laughs and the screen swipes to the entrance of the Maheshwari Mansion. A girl in a white tour skirt with a white sleeveless crop top and on that a Jean crop jacket. Her open silky hair are touching her milky skin. Her soft lips draws a curve (smile) when she completes her flower rangoli which she was making from past 30mins. Her smile becomes wide when she reads the name which she has written with rose petals under the ‘Welcome Back’. The name is Sanskaar. She gently touches the petals and lifts her face up when she hears a voice from her back. “Swara!”, says a 22 year old man who is dressed in Army uniform with a bag and suitcase in his hands.
The girl gets up quickly and tears falls down from her eyes. She runs to the boy and hugs him tightly. The family comes outside after listening the car’s noise. All smiles by seeing them like this. The man leaves his luggage and hugs her back softly. Laksh teases Swaragini and says, “Control Swara! Sanskaar has just arrived. Look Ragini, She is younger than you from two years but knows how to show her love.” Ragini beats him for his shameless talk and Swara leaves Sanskaar after listening him while her cheeks turns red. All laughs and Annu blesses both SwaSan and takes them in. Laksh hugs Sanskaar and says, “After a whole year! By the way, nice muscles! Huh! Joined Gym?” Sanskaar replies, “Really? Do you think that I would have time to join Gym? I can’t even sleep and you are asking for workout.” Adarsh says, “Then why you joined Army?” Sanskaar don’t reply and he simply looks towards Swara who is continuously staring him. Laksh replies, “Bhaiya! Is that a question? Obviously for Swara! Right Ma?” Swara makes a face and Ragini orders Laksh to not tease them. Annu agrees with Ragini and brings Swasan together and says, “Don’t worry! Now no one will tease you both as I have decided now.” Sanskaar asks, ” What Badi Maa?” She replies, “Now you have came for a whole month, so I have decided to get you both married now.” All are happy with her decision and Swasan are equally surprised.
After Sanskaar gets fresh, he comes down for dinner. However, in his way he sees Swara alone and with a naughty smile, he drags her behind the wall. Swara is shock to see him and that too so close to her. He holds her from waist and Swara says, “What are you doing Sanskaar?” Sanskaar tightens his grip and says, “What you think?” Swara widens her eyes while Sanskaar gives her a mischievous smile. He joins his forehead with hers and both closes their eyes. He sensitively asks her, ” You missed me, right?” A tear escapes from her eyes and she simply nods yes and hugs him tightly. She says, “I know Sanskaar that you joined Army for me but I can’t live without you. Please come back to me. Please!” Sanskaar consoles her and in a determined voice says, “No Swara! I can’t! Yes, I joined Army for you because I knew how much you love soldiers but now. Now, I have a responsibility and I can’t leave my duty.” Swara complains, “You have turned selfish!” Sanskaar laughs and says, “If you says then I accept this too Princess! For your words only, I am doing this. I can’t step back Swara and the reason is you also. You said na that you will marry a soldier only. So Look, your warrior is in front of you and soon this warrior will become your groom.” She smiles and both goes together for dinner. The next day their engagement takes place. And the marriage is fixed after 2 weeks. Swasan spends all their time together dreaming of spending thire whole life together but the destiny has some other plans.
Sanskaar gets a call from his workplace and he with a heavy heart tells everyone that he has to go back. All are sad and Swara is heartbroken. She asks him is it necessary. He replies yes and the next day he leaves from the MM. Swara cries and hugs him tightly. Sanskaar replies with a smile, “Your warrior is going to fight his first war. Wish him with your magical and motivational word not with tears.” Swara can’t bear it and runs inside the MM. Sanskaar feels bad and leaves after bidding good bye to all.
Swara is living in MM only and she is always sitting in front of the gate waiting for her Sanskaar to come back. Days passed and weeks too. It has been 2 months and there are no signs of Sanskaar’s arrival. Raglak feels bad to see Swara like this. She holds her engagement ring tightly and remembers her beautiful moments with Sanskaar from childhood. Shekhar and Maheshwaris tries their best to get some information about him but all in vain. It is now six months and someone calls in MM. Laksh picks the phone and is not able to believe on his ears. He is informed that some soldiers were lost during the war and now their bodies are at last founded by them. He calls them for reorganization of the body of Sanskaar. All are hell shock and broken while Swara stands like a lifeless body. Rag weeps thinking of Swara while Swara denies to accept that his Sanskaar will now never come. The next day, Laksh goes alone and comes home with a sad smile and tells all that Sanskaar was nowhere. Again the phone rings, all looks at him hopefully but now his smile vanishes. He tells everyone what he is informed. All bodies and soldiers are back now and they ended the research operation too. All cries but Swara goes to the entrance and sits there with the memories of Sanskaar.
After 50 years,
An old lady is seen sitting on the entrance of MM. A lady of her age comes to her and says, “Come on Swara! Eat something!” So the old lady is Swara. Swara hasn’t eaten or drink a single drop of water from morning. She says, “No Ragini! I am not hungry.” Just then a young couple comes there with an old couple and an old man. The old couple is Adarsh and Parineeta with the old man Laksh. The young couple is Ragini’s son and daughter-in-law who is ninth month preganent. They all tries to make her convince but she didn’t agree to eat anything. Then Ragini says looking at a family picture of Any, Dp, Ram,Sujata, Shekar and Sharmishtah with a flower garland on it, “All left us! After Sanskaar left the house, All the happiness vanished. You refused to marry anyone else and we all that time too drop our arms and we are suffering that even today.” Swara’s eyes becomes moist and she says, “Please Ragini! Don’t say that I am suffering due to Sanskaar. He suffered due to me. He joined Army for me!” She cries and asks all to leave her. She breaks the silence of 50 years between herself and her heart.
She says, “Sorry Sanskaar! You are angry from me na? That’s why you didn’t came to me! You don’t want to marry me right? You betrayed me! I was right you are selfish! You are selfish…” Swara is not able to u sweat and her emotions herself. She first takes the blame on her and then says Sanskaar selfish. If he has betrayed her then why she didn’t married to someone else? She cries and she to her weakness, She feels dizziness. However, She continued to blame Sanskaar and now she feels pain in her heart and the next moment she lies down with closed eyes. Lying like a lifeless body while all comes outside. Ragini’s son is carrying his wife who is screaming due to pain. They all are tensed and gets shock to see Swara like that. The couple is told to go hospital while Laksh checks Swara and looks at Ragini in disbelief. He signs that now there is no meaning to go hospital or call doctor. Adarsh, Pari and Ragini looks at him shockingly. She weeps hard and Swara’s 22 year old SOUL stands up and stares at her crying family.
She then hears a familiar voice which she heard 50 years ago. The same voice, She looks at the entrance and sees Sanskaar’s hurted soil with a bullet in his heart, SOUL. She with tears ran to him and hugs him in the same manner, She did 50 years before. She touches his heart and he tells he that her warrior fought his war bravely and she will not find any bullet on his back as he didn’t ran behind. He kisses her hand with that ring and says, “I am not selfish Princess. I was here only but you couldn’t see me. I wanted who take you with me but I thought that it’s your life. However, now I will be selfish and take you with me. Will you come with me to that world where no one can separate us?” Swara hugs him and simply nods in yes. Soon they both fades away looking at Raglak and Adarsh-Pari while blessing Raglak’s son’s new born baby.
The END.
Hope you all liked it. Please share your views on this. I just want to say that please respect those heroes who are unknown to us but then also sacrifices for us. I want to share that I am from an Army background and in schools, we may open our eyes and chat during the prayer but when the National Anthem is sung in our schools, we are like statues. It is strange for me but it shows that how much we respect our country and the biggest reason is that one of our loved ones has spent their whole life for this.
Jai Hind!!!
And those who disrespect Mother India and Indian Army are requested to just spend a day like they do. They are not allowed to sleep, eat, drink and meet their families properly. This job is actually for the line ‘khoon-pasine ki kamayi’.
28 Comments
Very beautiful story and i love this song amazing dear……being a punjabi I’m crazy for punjabi songs.. love jassi gill?
Thanks for sharing on swasan that’s magical???????
And the message is worthy we should respect our country and real heros?
Enjoyed it dear tc?
Oh My God!!! I read your stories and you red Mine!????? Thank You!!! Thank you Mars!!! Awww and yes Punjabi songs have some other flavour only and jassi gill is a heart.
Aflatoon OS. Just loved it.? Well written.
Sach! Tq so much. Fenil!!
Awesome dear..
Oh Thank you Deeksha! Feeling so good that you liked
me too herd this song ………. just loved ……….. beautiful , i have said this before as well feels to share ” sometimes sad endings are satisfied and far better than happy ending ” keep it up ……
Thank you so much. And yes I too feels that some stories are beautiful when their ending is little different. I will try my best and tq for reading.
speechless
Thank you fariha for reading and commenting.
mind blowing
Thanks once again Fariha. Keep smiling.
superb.
Again Thank you Fariha for your precious comments.
Very emotional os dear.
Thank you Sandhiyaswasanian for reading my both stories. Take care dear.
awesome
I saw you commenting before too and I don’t know that it was you only but you thanked me for informing hellys entry in JDJ. If you remember. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Beautiful dear
Thank you so much. Take care!
beautiful..loved it..tc..
Oh tq! Tq! Tq! Keep smiling and you too take care.
Though It’s sad, the story is superb and true also. because of their protection only, we are living our life in peace.
Thanks a lot and it means a lot. It is very true. And I hope that all including those who discourages them too understand this. Keep a smile always and take care
Nice
Thanks a lot Tani!!! Take care!
It’s so emotional . Really a nice piece of work. You have explained everything well. And grammar for me is perfect ? very well written . But I don’t know anything about Indian Army. just got to know from your os. Really wonderful one. Keep writing more Hemi. I normally like OSes because they usually end in one or two shots. This one is great. Good start! Love you ??
No thanks but serioudly ypur words touched my heart. And army is same for every country cuz they have same feeling of nationalism. Even me too like OS a lot. Easy for a reader like me.