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Thanks a lot for the amazing comments that you all showered on me……………..sachi………..the never ending smile on my lips……..can’t tell…….but let me now try to make you smile a bit……….so here goes the episode:
Shot 5:
She was shocked as well as confused , a tear drop fell down her eyes unknown to her own self……….she was staring towards Viplav….she walked out of the canteen like a statue as she continously stared at Viplav.
She turned her face in front as she got out of the canteen , Viplav suddenly turned back as he felt someone staring at him but the one who has lost her everything on him had already left.
“ Vipu……What happened???” Raisha asked as she saw him turning.
Viplav nodded in a “ No” and turned back smiling innocently.
Dhani came out of the canteen, as now she couldn’t control herself and so she started crying, she sat under a tree in the collage garden and remembered the time when she drew the sketch of Mishal ,continously crying.
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan
She gripped her legs and dug her face in her own lap as she remembered her madness for Mishal.
Dil ka musaafir baat na maane
Mud mud dekhe raste puraane
Zidd chhodta hi nahi (nahi..)
She remembers how she first time met Viplav the last day and how she had completely dreamt of spending a happy life with him , a life full of Love.
Dekh raha hai kaanch ke sapne
Ik na ik din hain jo tidakne
Ishq mein tooti cheeze jag mein
Koi jodta hi nahi, dil jaane na
Sau aasoon roye do akhiyan
Sau aasoon roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyaan
Wo ankhiyan..
“ I love you Mishal……..but however hard I try I can’t deny the fact that you don’t love me………….I realized it before but I didn’t accepted but now……………..” She Said to herself still crying , her love was going away from her ,forever.
O..
Jaane waala jaane nahi
Jaane se uske jaan gayi
Aate jaate phir wo dikhe
Palkon ne chhaane mod kayi
“ I wish you never came in my life Viplav……….I wish you never did………I was happily leaving in thoughts of My Mishal but you………you came and even didn’t allow me to live in my Mishal’s thoughts…..I hate you………I hate you Viplav…………I hate you the most…………..” She cried badly as she remembered the time they spent together.
Guzra huaa pal guzra nahi
Uska laga rang utra nahi
Hothon se chhuti nahi gaye saajan ki batiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan
Her vision was becoming blurred due to so many tears , not many children were in the garden because of the lectures and those who were didn’t saw her , but suddenly she saw Viplav and Raisha coming out of the canteen , she tried wiping her tears in a hurry and got up immediately , she walked to her classroom in a speed as Viplav could only see her back.
“ Dhani , what has happened to her..???” Viplav thought.
“ Vipu……What has happened why are you behaving so differently today.” Raisha ji again asked.
Viplav was about to reply wheh suddenly.
“ Hey Rohan , I was searching you from so much time……..where were you????” Raisha ran to a boy leaving Viplav.
Viplav moved towards them as Raisha hugged the boy , Viplav stared at it and changed his direction , he went towards the classroom sadly.
Wo.. o…
Kaise koi roke bhalaa
Haath laqeerein chhod gayin
Laakhon dil ke tukde kiye
Dhadkan ko bhi tod gayi
“ You are different Viplav……….” He remembers how everybody always tells him this thing , even Raisha.
He entered his classroom as Dhani who was hiding behind a wall stares at him, Viplav tries to smile so that he can behave “ normal” while Dhani sees his smile.
“ He is more happy than he is with me……” She thinks sadly.
Kabhi theharega dard kahin
Koi gunjaaish dikhti nahi
Chanda bin jiya na lage
Jal kaajal si ratiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhein neendon ne
Kabhi na soye woh akhiyan
“ I won’t meet you ever Viplav……..” Dhani thought as she moved to her class.
Drops of tears fell down both of them’s eyes.
Wo.. o…
Sau aansu roye
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye..
Maara hai jinhein neendon ne..
Kabhi na soye… woh akhiyaan..
“ By the way , you are able to handle “MS.” Viplav….” Rohan asked Raisha with a cruel smile.
“ Vipu……………………Off course , I am gonna bet the bet for sure, the bet was of 7 days………………2 days left……..I will handle him for two more days…….” Raisha laughed as she said this.
: You are able to handle that mumma’s boy…???”
“ Quite difficult………………..but I will do that , don’t worry……..” She said as she moved from there.
Precap: A leap of:
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2 days……………………….
Enjoy……………
4 Comments
Hey piyali! Well I am not new here but probably be the latest one?? I’ve commented on the first or second episode *guess so* and after that I didn’t posted any comment here.. Right! Chalo sorry for being late or u can say sorry for being lazy?
Have read all episodes together.. Phew!! It was amazing, girl?? a way different story like viplav is momma’s boy.. like seriously we can’t even imagine it but u made it possible?? his casual yet cute behavior was melting me throughout? but sad to know that dhani’s dream boy was having a girlfriend in spite of the fact that he is not compatible or comfortable with her aur dekho tou that churail is ditching him Yikes? how can a girl ditch such a handsome and most wanted munda? I can only pray for her?? Gid ussey thori akal dey?
Now coming to a bechari heroine *dhani* my God! Her Mishal is going away from her *well according to her POV* but koi nahe they will be together again, after all Viplav is incomplete without dhani and so as dhani? however was little hurt when she was crying and hiding herself from viplav plus when unknowingly our hero was having tears but all these dynamics are pointing towards a new beginning❤❤
Arey I forgot to add one thing “I just loved their scenes beside Ganga lake their cute tit bits were just beautiful?” Enjoyed a lot!
I’ve spoken too much.. Right! Sab episodes ke kasar poore kar le? Lol!
Keep rocking and post the next shot soon?
And here I’m back?? actually forgot to add one thing.. Precap!! Uff u just increased my excitement when I read *LEAP* I was like- Oh God, not leap as it will bring sadness.. while thinking all this my eyes fall on last two lines and seriously my face expressions changed in to a happy yet weird one?? Chalo now all is done! Bbye?
Hey Piyali. Got late but better late then never, so here I finished reading the emotional part! ?
Pehley tou two minutes silence for Viplav-Raisha relationship. ? Ye kya hoga.. ? Bohat buraa hai wesey bit still I smiled when approached the dark truth behind the cupid. ?
Very well written Dhaani’s POV’s and emotional *heartbreak* state. ?Unknown to the song, still read the lyrics, cause of accurate depiction of the events. ?
7 day challenge, I’m sure gonna end up shaking Viplav’s & Dhaani’s life. ? And the 2 day leap well, anxious to read the post leap tornado! ?
Well same here Piyali, same here! ☺ The smile you guys bring to me with your incredibly brilliant stories is unforgettable and unmatched! Wish you good and more power!
Hey Piyali!
First of all sorry for the SUPER DUPER LATE comment. I have actually read it earlier but lazy me, didn’t use my computer to read so couldn’t comment ? And even now I am using my mobile to comment because it seems to work again. Yes, I had a problem using TU on mobile so that’s why I don’t comment easily. ?
Second, I dob’t know how I make it. But I start commenting without any ideas, and it ends as a novel. ? I am not even a talkative person. I just write a lot, like writing in a flaw. But happy thay you are glad of it. ?
Third, LETS COME TO THE EPISODE. It was MARVELLOUUUUUS! ? I mean it was very sad, and that’s what made it look perfect. Dhaani’s pain in losing not only Viplav, but also losing hope in her love for Mishal. And that’s true. If Viplav didn’t enter in her life, she would have been happy romancing with her Mishal. ? Poor girl! But… What’s surprisin is that even Viplav feels strange. Like even he was thoughtful… He is not even certain he is in love I think. He just has someone with him who he calls his “girlfriend”, and that’s only a word for them. Because… The real colours of that snake came out. She is just doing it for a bet? ? Like SERIOUSLY? But well, I have already felt it strange. The way she keeps calling him “Baby… Baby” all the time, and then holds his arm and all. I mean, such a girl would never get interest on a guy like viplav, though he is handsome. She’s so cheap ?
Anyways… You scared with that “a leap..” I felt like “is she going to bring us in the future and then make it in pieces of flashback?” But then reading “tzo days” I literally laughed. ? So… Cant waot for that leap girl. Post it soon. ?