VIDHANI: UNBOUNDED BOND OF LOVE [Part2,]
Hello, IKRS Family, I hope u all remember me…..And now I think I should stop this one…..Because except one comment , I didn’t get any comments in previous episode……What’s ur take on this article ……May be am not much fond of the pair and I think u are feeling it as not worthy ?? Won’t u ?? Feel free 2 express whether it’s gud or bad….Based on ur response I will think about continuing it……
Links 4 previous episode….
http://www.tellyupdates.com/vidhani-unbounded-bond-love-part-1/
Flash back Scene – 1 {continuation from last part}
Viplav : Am really sorry……I didn’t knew that….
Dhaani : [interrupts] It’s ok……Shall we go…….pls??
Viplav : Yeah……{viplav pretends a fake smile and drives the car 2 aashram}
[After some time they reached aashram and dhaani gets down from the car]
Dhaani : Thanks….{she is about 2 leave..]
Viplav : Dhaani…..
Dhaani : Yes…..
Viplav : Mmm….filament…..of bulb…..
Dhaani gives a pretty smile and viplav lost himself in that smile and he stares her for a while……
Dhaani : Bye…viplav….
Viplav : Bye…..{viplav leaves….dhaani smiles and gets into the aashram}
Scene shifts 2 aashram….{@ dhaani’s room}
Dulari : Buchiya…….u are 2 late……what happened ?
Dhaani :Maa…actually today I didn’t get the bus and viplav dropped me…..
Dhulari : Viplav ?? Who is he ??
Dhaani : Maa…he is a nice guy…..actually I was scared and was really tensed because that was the last bus 2 village…..But that guy helped me and give me lift…..
Dhulari : Beta….how can u say that he is a nice person ?? May be he dropped u and behaved with u in a gentle way only…..But that doesn’t mean that he is a gud person….He may have planned 2 kidnap u…..or he may have
Suvarna : {interrupts] Maa….why are u scaring dhaani ?? She told u that guy is nice ….which means he is a nice person…that’s all…..
Dhulari :Whatever…..But dhaani…..I think u should not have come with a stranger….
Suvarna : Maa…pls…dhaani looks tired…..she needs rest…..
Dhulari : U are right….I will bring rotis……for her….
Suvarna : Maa…u stay with us dhaani…..I will bring it….{suvarna goes inside}
Dhaani : Am sorry….maa….{dhaani starts crying}
Dhulari : Naa…beta…..don;t cry…..am ur maa…..I felt tensed…..that’s why I said it…..only…..
Mean while suvarna enters with a plate of rotis 4 dhaani….
Suvarna : Oh!!! Maa- beti……pls don’t be so senty……Tmrw is holi ….we have 2 go mandir
Dhulari : Ha…..thank god….u reminded it…..dhaani eat soon and sleep well …..We have 2 meet mahapanditji tmrw early mrng itself……{dhulari leaves with a sweet smile}
Dhaani sits and starts eating rotis…..Suvarna sits beside her and stares her….
Dhaani : Suvarna…..why are u looking me ??
Suvarna : Nothing……I was just thinking……
Dhaani : What ???
Suvarna :Dhaani….how was he ??
Dhaani : Who ??
Suvarna : Arrey,…the guy who dropped u…….
Dhaani : U mean viplav……
Suvarna : Viplav……so u know his name…..well did he give his phone number?? How is he ?
I mean tall, handsome……
Dhaani : I don’t know……
Suvarna : Oh! Come on dhaani…u know his name and u are telling that u don’t know him…
Dhaani : Just because he introduced himself I came 2 know that his name is viplav….that’s all….he dropped me and left…..nothing else……{dhaani stares suvarna with a sharp sight}
Suvarna : Ok….my sweet sister…….I was just kidding only….sorry……{she smiles…dhaani stares her smile…..}
Dhaani : Filament of bulb!!!! [smiles]
Suvarna : What ???
Dhaani : Mmm….Nothing…..suvarna….I was telling this bulb…{she points out her finger up 2 the bulb ] I mean it’s filament is glowing….
Suvarna : Are u gone crazy ? For the past 3 years this bulb is here…..and u noticed it’s filament today only…….
Dhaani : May be…..if filament will become dim then how can a bulb will glow??
{Dhaani recollects the way viplav spoke 2 her….about tears and smile….A pretty smile comes on her face….Suvarna feels strange…..}
Suvarna : Baap re !!! This girl has lose her brain’s screw……dhaani…dhaani……{dhaani was not reacting…suvarna waved her hand before her …But dhaani was lost in viplav’s thoughts only……suvarna nods her head with confusion and leaves}
Scene shifts 2 ayodhaya nivas….
Viplav parks his car and while getting down from the car his eyes went on a diary which was left by none other than dhaani…He takes it and decides 2 open it……
Viplav : Viplav tripathi…..what are u doing?? This is a girl’s diary…..And how can u open a girl’s personal diary ??
Mean while shalu enters there .and observes the diary…..She slowly came closer near viplav ….But before she could take the diary, viplav hold her hand and stops her
Shalini : Why bhaiya ?? Ur sister has no right 2 see ur diary …..
Viplav : If its’ mine definitely I would have given…But it is a girl’s diary…..
Shalini : Girl……U mean girlfriend…..
Viplav : Shalu……she is not my girl friend……I just gave her lift and dropped her 2 home and she had forgotten 2 take this……
Shalu : Then why don’t u return her diary ??
Viplav : I saw it jut now only…..shalu……it’s late night and I think this is not the right time 2 go and give her diary back 2 her…….
Shalu : Yeah…..by the way……shall we open it and read ???
Viplav : No…..it’s her personal diary and it’s a bad habit 2 open personal diary…….
Shalu : Oh !!! Really….then I really like this bad habit….bhaiya….[shalu takes the diary and runs…..]
Viplav : Shalu…..stop there……{viplav runs behind her …..finally shalu stopped as she find some fresh apples on the table…..she keeps the diary at a corner and starts taking apple….viplav slowly manages 2 get back the diary and rushed 2 his room]
Scene shifts 2 viplav’s room
Viplav lie down on his bed and holds the diary before his eyes….He recollects dhaani’s sweet smile and starts smiling….He stares the diary and places it on his bed…..
Viplav : What 2 do ?? Don’t know why I am just feeling 2 open it …..But viplav ……yeh toh galat hai….Ok…let me do one thing…….I will shut my eyes and I will open it……But that doesn’t make any change……am getting confused….{viplav takes a coin and decides 2 do toss before opening the diary……} If head will come that means I have 2 read it and if tail will come then I will not read it……{he takes the coin and @ the end of toss he got head only..Viplav gets astonished 2 see head…..} That means I can read it…….{viplav takes it and again recollects dhaani’s face….} Am sorry dhaani……am really sorry dhaani….
Viplav turns the page and @ first page he finds a white feather…..He takes it and starts reading…..” When I saw the rain bow in sky I wonder why it is filled with lot of colors ? When I saw the night I thought, why it is too dark ? “ viplav folds the diary and takes a deep breath ….. He recollected dhaani’s words….”this is my home, my identity and bitter truth of my life…..” Viplav takes the white feather again in his hand and started thinking about dhaani’s truth and the words which she wrote in her diary…..He felt dhaani has undergone so many pain within a short span of life…..Slowly by waving that feather through fingers viplav falls asleep…..He lost himself in dhaani’s dreams…….Viplav finds that dhaani dressed up in white salwar has arrived near him……..She places her hands on his face and takes the white feather with her with a cute smile…..She turns behind and is about 2 leave…..Viplav hold her hand and stares him…Both of them smile @ each other……..
Bgm…..“Jitni haseen ye mulakatein hai
Unse bhi pyari teri baatein hai
Baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hai
Aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
Baahon mein hai teri zindagi haaye
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar”……{film- badrinath ki dulhaniya] plays…..
Dhaani and viplav sat together @ bed…..Viplav places one of his hand on dhaani’s eyes 2 shut her eyes and wears red bangles on her hands…..when it was finished viplav takes his hand from her eyes and dhaani slowly open her eyes…She is shocked 2 see red bangles in her hands….Her eyes conveyed some sort of fear and sorrow which came as tears ……She collide her hands with each other and starts breaking them….Viplav feels confused……He tried 2 stop her, but she continued 2 do the same and runs away…..
Viplav : Dhaani!!!!! {viplav wakes up and feels tensed….His heart was beating fast ……After a while he realized that it was his dream only….}
PRECAP…….HOPE U WILL GUESS IT…..
Guys…..if u really felt it as a work 2 read then pls comment on it….Other wise u can point out mistakes and can tell me 2 stop it…….also……I will expect ur comments…..
10 Comments
Wow d episode was nice dream sequence was fabullllllllllllllous
Thanks eisha……
very very nice episode…
plz dont stop writing plzplzplz…
i really love that song from bkd…
i have a doubt..in that diary only tjat much matter only written?? or he didnt read completely?? or what???
bye
take care…
Thanks lalitha…..and i will update it tmrw….ok…….
And about ur doubt….well he has gone through the first page only……that means still he has 2 read so many things from that diary…….which u will find in upcoming episodes….
Hey Renima! Sorry for not coming on the first episode actually was trapped in personal issue ? but now I’m all free?
Okay so thank you for bringing this story precisely a proper fiction ?? Enjoying the plot very much. The filmanent part was kind of unique ??
And yes I’ve a request for you, though I’m enjoying the way you’re writing but it’s just my opinion to li’l bit slow down the story. I mean there must be some friendship part or mutual understanding before they enter in the love zone, that’s what Ishq ka rang safed was all about. Please don’t take me wrong it’s just my suggestion ☺☺ baaqi you’re doing great so keep going with the same spirit and we’ll support you always.
Maybe others are somewhat busy but they’ll be back soon plus you too read our fictions and drop your opinions we’ll feel good?
Take care ❤
It’s ok mahaijaaz……And i can understand dear…..The thing is am still feeling confused 2 write on these couple or not…..As i know my limitations regarding vidhani as i doesn’t know them much ….i thought is it be fair 2 write on them or not…But in my previous one i got some comments and it motivated me 2 write ff on vidhani only….Else i would have never posted on them……and another thing…..am glad to see ur comment and ur suggestion also……Well it’s a dream sequence and abt love …..now both of them had got impressed 2 each other with the way they met and viplav is attracted towards her …after reading those lines from her diary……And their expressing of love and understanding…..i will not make them easily fall for each other, but all i can say ……u will find their meeting in next episode and then……u will get it….And thanks 4 pointing out ur suggestions which means a lot and i will try 2 show justice 2 them….Pls wait 4 my next episode until tmrw ….as i will submit it tmrw only…..And people are busy or engaged in activities….which i can understand….yaar…..All i felt that whether my writing is right or not in this page and when i will find no comments…it will certainly discourage me from writing for vidhani,…..That’s all……
First of all you can call me Maha only ? secondly you’re going very nicely so don’t think about all these things thirdly I’m glad that you felt good after reading my suggestion.
And yes I’ll wait for the next one and don’t worry about comments we’re always here?
Reni…sorry for late comment dear….actually from tomorrow my assessment exams are starting so got late…have read the episodes the same day you posted…. actually really sorry….
now moving on to the episode…. episode was amazing…filament of bulb ki jay ho… HAIL FILAMENT OF BULB….
ViDhaani….awesome pair with your awesome tadka in the story… don’t say that you have less comments toh no one is interested…sometimes I also get discouraged….but you keep going okay… Thank you for this lovely story…
and yes the last part can be imagined with scared faces…. anticipating to know further….keep rocking reni 🙂
Thanks a lot sujie…..And be focused on ur exams…….and do read and comment when u get time…..And i will update next part by tmrw….and precap…..with scary faces…..well wait 4 it…… that;s all