VIDHANI ……WE UNITED THEM…… FIVE SHOTS……[SWEET GIFT 2 IKRS FAMILY] Part-2
Hi ikrs friends, how are u guys ?? Okay am not completely cured, but feeling bit better now and probably by second week of july stitches will be removed and from last week of july, I will try my level best 2 give updates……Till then , miss vidha and me also if u can……Thanks 2 all for ur support and prayers…..Really that made me 2 write again here ……If u missed previous part, then u can have a look on that by clicking here….
@ Brooks Shopping mall [continuation from last one]
Vidhani stare each other’s eyes for a while and lost themselves in that eyelock…..Viplav gently touched dhaani’s palm and stared her…..
Viplav : Are u okay ?
Dhaani : Yeah……[smiles with wet eyes]
Eisha : Didi, have some water….U will feel better…..[eisha handovers bottle of water 2 dhaani]
Viplav was still looking @ dhaani’s pale face only……While drinking water, dhaani’s sight also went on viplav only….They couldn’t continue 2 stare long, as some one interrupted their eyelocks and it was none other than sujiee…..
Sujiee : Viplav…Thank God, u are here……[sujiee rushes and hugs viplav….Dhaani stares ‘Vijiee’ and finds viplav consoling sujiee by patting on sujiee’s cheek……]
Dhaani’s view……. “ Yeh sujiee, Kaise chipak rahi hein viplav ke baahon mein, shaadi abhi huyi nahi, aur yeh viplav bhi kuch kam nahi hein…..Badaa hero ban raha hai apni fiancee ke saamne…..” [she stares vijiee and turns her against them]
Eisha notes it and finds that dhaani still feels for viplav…..
Eisha : I think, kuch jal raha hein…..[eisha touches dhaani’s shoulder]
Dhaani : Me jealous !!!!! No ways……
Eisha : Then why are u staring them so sharply didi ?
Dhaani : Eisha, leave these things…..We came here for choosing salwar-suit…..Just focus on that…..
Viplav : Sujiee….relax……I am fine….Wooh dhaani….she fainted and I just came here 2 help her….[viplav release sujie from hug and holds her hand]
Sujiee : I see, Dhaani….Are u okay ?? [sujiee turns her eyes 2wards dhaani with a smiling face]
Dhaani : Yeah….I am fine…..
Sujiee : But what happened actually ?
Eisha : I will tell it….Wooh di is not taking fud from last day ….
Sujiee : Why ??
Eisha : Actually, kal dhaani di ko dekhne ladke waale aa rahe hein……She is really tensed…
Sujiee : That’s really a gud news…..I am so happy for u, dhaani…Don’t worry….evrytng will be fine…..[sujiee hugs dhaani, dhaani gives a fake smile]
[Viplav gets shocked and looks dhaani…..Dhaani also stares viplav’s eyes….]
Eisha : All happened so soon and we didn’t get much time 2 make arrangements……And maa is not feeling well…… Regarding decorations, dhaani di’s friends mahaa di and lalitha di are there…..And our cousin sister suvarna is also coming…..
Sujiee :That’s nice…..By the way dhaani, we have arranged a party in respect with marriage @ club….. I know u are busy, but I will feel happy if u and eisha join there…..It’s tmrw……
Dhaani : We will try 2 come….
Viplav : I will wait ….I mean me and sujiee will wait for you…….Eisha pls take care of ur sister….
Eisha : Ji bhaiya…..
Viplav : Let’s leave…sujiee….
Sujiee : Yeah…bye dhaani…bye eisha….
Scene shifts 2 a shop where sujiee is selecting dress for viplav…..Viplav takes a casual t-shirt and shows it 2 sujiee…..
Sujiee : No…viplav……It’s a grand party….U can’t wear these kind of t-shirts……
Viplav ; Will u make it fast….I have work…..
Sujiee : Better, u urself select it….I am going…..[sujiee stares viplav sharply and walks away]
Viplav : Sujiee…pls….just listen 2 me…sujiee…..
Sujiee waves her hand for taxi…..rickshaws….But no one stops vehicle……Mean while viplav comes in his car and parks it before sujiee…..Sujiee stands like an adamant kid without looking @ viplav……Viplav comes out from his car and holds sujiee’s hand…
Sujiee : Viplav…what are u doing?? Behave urself….It’s a public place….
Viplav : Exactly…It’s better u come and sit on the car…Else……
Sujiee : Else, what ??
Viplav lie down on the road and the vehicles which were parked behind viplav’s car started pressing their vehicles horns with much anger……
Sujiee : Viplav…..U are mad….Get up…..Because of u the road is blocked……
Viplav : This block will be cleared if u will come with viplav tripathi….miss sujiee mehra….
Sujiee : Kya karun ?? This guy has lost his senses….I can’t argue with him…..Viplav…..lets go…. I am coming…
Viplav : That’s my girl….[viplav gets up and pinches sujiee’s cheeks….]
Sujiee : Aaah!!! [sujiee screams]
Viplav : Sorry, I pinched bit hard…..[viplav gently pressed his 2 ears and stares sujiee] I am sorry, yaar……
[Sujiee was simply staring viplav’s cute eyes only…..Viplav waved his hand and bowed his face in front of sujiee …..Sujiee smiles and gets into the car….Viplav also gets into car…..They wear seat-belts and viplav started driving car……Sujiee was still looking @ viplav’s dashing eyes only…..She simply keep rolling her engagement ring which was glittering on her mid-finger…..
@ a point Viplav stopped the car….He looked @ her eyes and smiled……
Viplav : I am sorry….
Sujiee : It’s Okay…Viplav…..Why are u telling sorry again ?
Viplav : Sujiee….i am apologizing because I know that somehow am not fullfiling ur expectations….
Sujiee ; Expectations !!!!!
Viplav : Sujiee….When two individuals gets engaged, they need 2 understand each other, they have 2 spend some time together and moreover they should try 2 know what they feel for each other…..But the fact is I used 2 ignore u, or I used 2 be lost in myself and u might have felt that am behaving so strange…..
Sujiee : Viplav…..What u feel for me ???
Viplav : Sujiee!!!
Sujiee : Pls viplav….I think it’s better we should clarify all things before marriage itself……I don’t want to impose myself on u, viplav…..[sujiee stares viplav with teary eyes]
Viplav : Sujiee……Pls….don;t misunderstand me……U know dhaani is my college mate…..Apart from that we were ….I mean…..
Sujiee : I got it, viplav…..So u are not able 2 forget her….
Viplav : Pls…sujiee…..Now we are not like that….After break up, I moved on and she also stopped contacting me……It’s true that I am not able 2 forget her, but the thing is she doesn’t loves me now….I still remember that day when she told me……”U are a looser…..U can’t take any stand for me……I can’t trust you any more…..Let’s break up….” [viplav was unable 2 continue his words because his eyes were filled in tears…..Sujiee felt extremely sad for him…. She touched his shoulder …..vijiee share an eyelock….]
Sujiee : Viplav…..U still love dhaani…..
Viplav : I don’t know…..Sujiee…..She simply hates me now as I have hurt her……And for her, our relation doesn’t matter any more….. And I have accepted this truth…But my heart some times troubles me and I couldn’t stop myself from loving her…..Sujiee, It might be shocking 2 hear that the person who is going 2 marry u has lost his heart on another girl….Won;t u ?? [viplav stares sujiee, sujiee simply stares him and didn’t reacts..] I will try 2 recover myself from this state of mind….All I need is some time….I hope u will understand my view……
Sujiee nods her head with wet eyes and smiles……
Viplav : Thanks……[smiles]
Sujiee : Viplav….I don’t want 2 lose u, because for me u are my first love…… I want u as the charming, rocking care free guy which I saw before an year…….Not like these viplav who use 2 weep like kids…..I don’t like this viplav……Take ur own time, I don’t have prblm….But until that I think we can stay as friends?? Just like u use 2 hug me whenever I comes from Chandigarh and spend vacations with shaalu, u used 2 pinch my cheeks and pulls my hair, will u not do it for ur friend ??
Vijiee stare each other’s eyes for a while….viplav extends his hands and smiles…..Sujiee smiles and hugs him…..Viplav and sujiee shares a hi-fi….
Sujiee : Viplav…..I am starving…..
Viplav : Oye, patakhagudi…..chalo paanipuri khaaate hein…..
Sujiee : Thank god, u remember my nickname…..patakhagudi…..
Viplav : How can I forget that name ?? It’s given by my sweet sister shaalu naa….
Sujiee : I miss her yaar…..Yaad hein pehali baar shaalu ne kaise mujhe introduce kiya thaa tumhare saamne ??
Vijiee started laughing recollecting some sweet memories….
BGM…..Jeene laga hoon …..plays……
PRECAP : IN PRETTY ROSES, U CAN FIND THRONES ALSO….BUT WILL THAT MAKE ANY ONE 2 STOP LOVING ROSE ??
8 Comments
Ohhhh reniii fabulous episode dear…
Dhaanis jealousy towards viplav made me laugh…she is too cute…
And I am bit confused…in that scene when viplav stops the car in front of angry young girl sujjiee…u have written that like hero and heroine ka conversation..haha but sujjiee will feel very happy when she read this episode….
So u have given nickname to sujjiee…it’s too funny…but what is the meaning of patakhagudi?
Plz take care reniii…u should take rest ok…
I am feeling happy to listen that u r feeling bit better now…I wish all this pain should heal soon..
Bye reni…
Keep smiling dear
Dear lalitha…. pathaka means cracker and gudi has 2 meanings girl and kite….A girl who is like a pathaka i mean who really makes people 2 love her for her rocking behavior and keeps her mind and herself as free like kite which loves 2 move in sky and pathakagudi means girl who is like a blast and like a kite, which is capable 2 fly , but not as free like a bird…I put it in this situation because viplav likes sujiee, but not able 2 love sujiee and for guddi [girl] sujiee, viplav is everything, but she knows that she can’t live in his heart…so she can’t fly like a bird….
Abt ur doubt….actually i can;t type much now…..because my eyes were paining, so i didn;t explained that part well….The thing is while viplav didn’t show much interest and sujiee felt viplav is ignoring her and that’s why she felt anger on him…I hope now it’s clear 4 u….. Will give longer episode once i will be fine……By this month end i will come here and will post episodes @ weekends…..U have 2 wait 4 that……Thanks for ur lovely comment dear..
Oh I see so that is the meaning of pathakagudi…it’s ok reni I can understand and I will wait for ur coming shots surely…
Bye..
Take care dear?
Okay…okay…okay….I must admit I was blushing and then weeping at the end ?????And before that let me tell you Reni dear …thank you for coming here…I just checked in and could not stop myself from reading as I was excited…hope you are feeling bit better now and Wish you a speedy recovery…….
As Lalitha said…I am extremely happy ???really and the name ViJie?????????????superb Reni…. I am blushing ..and I mean it ….. It is always me in place of Dhaani in my personal imagination sometimes…but you brought that as fan fiction…and I am happy for that…silly me???????
And loved that name Pathakagudi ?? Viplav wanted Sujie to smile toh road pe he lied????????mixed emotions of course…the entire moment I felt I am the heroine ??then I remembered Dhaani’s inner voice… aur toot gaya sapna…. but ViJie conversation in car was awesome….ab Viplav ko if Sujie has to leave…certainly she will..but without any regrets…for Viplav??I will happily do that….
I cried at this part… ?☺️☺️actually…glad that you came up with this yaar…
and yes..i wanna say something to Lalitha….I had promised her to continue the story left by me…but I ..being lazybum did not post it….sorry Lalitha for that…I don’t know if I will give time to that or not….but as you always wanted me to write one shots or few …I will try to come up with thise until I find good way to proceed Soulmates and A tale to remember…I stopped it for now at a point …you can say interval….I am giving my laziness a name but sorry????Love you Reni and Lalitha… you are here still when everyone has gone away from the page with no sign if returning back to the page….. ???and forgive me okay…. but today I will be in hangover of this episode…..ViJie moments of course ???????? love you
take care
Okok sujjie thanks for remembering my wish…now u can write and post whenever u want ok?I will read definetly…. ??
Thank you Lalitha☺️☺️☺️?? love you tons???????
Haa haa..glad that u are feeling like a heroine now……Aww…pathakaguddi…..seriously didn’t find any better name than this one yaar…Vijiee pariing is simply written for u only dear, because the way u use 2 portray viplav some times makes 2 feel that u are obsessed with viplav…..just kidding …only…… And yeah u will be the cupid in uniting them dear…And pls don’t cry……Am glad that u have decided 2 continue ur works on this page….which means a lot dear…. U know i wrote it for u guys because when i started writing i felt whether i will be able 2 write on this pair as i don’t know much abt vidha…..But u guys motiavted me and this is my small attempt 2 bring u all guys through an ff….Thanks a lot and luv u 2….
Reni dear…thank you for giving me that special meaning…and it will remain special for me …. 😀 😀
Not actually obsessed but loved him… Viplav and Mishal too obviously…because Viplav is Mishal and Mishal is Viplav….so I would say I love him so much…. you can call it attraction..affection…infatuation or anything… but the feeling is of love and respect to his off screen persona and to his on screen portrayal of the character till now… Viplav made me believe in love… not bragging anything… Really…As Viplav is a part of Mishal…. there was no second thought at all in loving Mishal…so thank you Reni…for giving the ViJie moments…. I know you were having a bit of fun…and really really thank you that you included me in the fun 🙂 🙂
Thank you for coming up with the story of Viplav and Dhaani in your own style… you nailed it.. and I am glad that you thought about writing something on ViDhaani…and you can see the result… keep going like this… we are here to support you for sure…. and yes..take care……
lots of love…. KEEP SMILING