First time I’m writing like this. If u have any problem with bold content so ignore it. I have no idea how u would react…
The Gadodia’s were ready to welcome Maheshwari’s. Shekhar Gadodia the head of house, his beautiful wife Sharmistha Gadodia and their beautiful daughter Swara. Cute bubbly girl. But today she was nervous.
“Kavita, I’m feeling nervous.”
“Look who is feeling nervous. The great Swara. Don’t worry my jaan u r looking stunning. He will surely die after seeing u.”
“Be serious yrr…”
Both the family were happy as 20 years old friendship now going to change in a relation.
“Ramu (Ram Parsad Maheshwari), kaisa h tu? (How’s u Ramu?)”
“I’m fine. How my future daughter in law.”
“She is good.” Shekhar looked towards Sharmistha. “Namestey Bhabhi sa.”
“Namestey?.”
They headed towards the drawing room. Ram and Shekhar were reputed person. Ram was sarpanch of Rajpur and Shekhar was a small farmer of Dhuliya gaon( village.) It was great honour for him as Ram asked his daughter hand for his son.
Ragini, Sanskar’s bhabi… The weird character in herself. And her husband Lakshaya, great lubber.
“Devar sa,( to Sanskar.) Lagta h thare se intezar na ho raha. ( it’s seems u can’t wait.)
“Na, bhabhi sa, it’s nothing like that…”
Finally the Swara came. She was looking too pretty, innocent. Ragini noticed the way Sanskar is admiring her beauty. In 3 year of marriage lucky never looked her with love, she was just a matter to keep him happy and satisfied. That’s the reason she never liked any couple happiness.
“What’s ur name beta?” Ram asked politely.
“Ji… Swara…” Simple village girl feeling too shy to look in his eyes… She wanted to see the face of her life partner but her ethics didn’t allowed her. But Sanskar wanted to see her face completely since the time she came she was just looking at the floor.
“Shona, beta serve the tea.” She nodded her head.
Finally she came towards Sanskar. “Ji, tea.”
She was undoubtedly beautiful, not less than an Angel. She waited him to take the cup of tea. But he didn’t. So finally she herself gave him. She looked into his eyes. Beautiful eyelock.
“Ahem, ahem.” Ragini broke their moment.
Swara came back to her seat. In her heart she was happy, he was good-looking. She was afraid if her dad would choose any random guy. A week ago her friend married to a guy who was 20 year older than her. But lucky she saved.
“What’s ur age?” Swara came out of her thoughts.
“Ji,”
“Age?” Ragini said this time a bit loud.
“18.”
“Actually, we want young girl for my devar. U know my devar is a pearl…”
They kept talking.
“So Sanskar beta what’s ur answer?”
“Ji.” He smiled… “Jo bhi apko theik lage papa (as u say dad.)”
Ragini kept her hand on his hand. “Devar sa, don’t take decision in hurry. We can’t judge anyone’s character in one meeting.”
“Bhabhi, u have seen more world than me. I’m ready to accept my elders decision.”
“I need to talk Swara.” Ragini said.
“Bahu Rani, u can ask anything.” Shekhar said.
“I think u didn’t understood I wanted to talk her alone.”
Ragini went inside the room with Swara.
“Look Swara, I admit u r beautiful. But u know this coming generation. Boyfriend girlfriend r common.”
“Ji, I don’t have any boyfriend.”
“Who knows? I’m directly coming to the point. R U VIRGIN?”
Swara was shocked to listen this. How she could ask this to her. Who gave her this right.
Ragini continued. “See if u r touched by someone then, I’m sorry. I don’t want second hand thing for my Devar.”
Thing really was she only a thing for her. She was a girl who have her own existence. And she couldn’t allowed anyone to raise finger on her character.
“Say something. Or ur silence gave me answer.”
“Bahu Rani…” Shomi came. “All r waiting…”
“Tell ur daughter to give answer ti my question.”
“Shona, beta say what she wants.”
“Ma, she asked…” Her words chocked in her throat. “I’m…”
“Y r u creating so much drama. It’s just simple r u virgin or not.”
“Y r u creating so much drama. It’s just simple r u virgin or not.”
There was complete silence for I minute. Shomi broke it.
“Ya, she is…”
“Don’t know is it truth or not. Anyways from our side it’s yes.” She went outside.
“Ma, Y u? How could she?”
“Shona, if u r right then Y r u afraid?”
“Swara, it’s OK…”
“No ma, it’s not.”
“Shona, see they r very rich. And unlike kavya’s husband. Sanskar is young. U r lucky to have him.”
“But ma Ragini bhabhi.”
“See beta Sanskar is ur husband. U have to worry for him only. I know u will win her heart also.”
They came outside. So finally her alliance fixed with Sanskar. Swasan exchanged ring. And took blessings from elders.
“Devar sa, now u r happy.”
He started blushing. “Bhabhi, I have some urgent work. He went outside.” Swara smiled seeing this.
“Don’t be so happy. Don’t u think I’m blind.”
“Ji, bhabhi what do you mean?”
“See Swara if u r right. The most welcome in our family, else I have lots of way to find truth.”
Y Ragini was saying this cruel words to her. Might be she didn’t want her to be happy more than her. As per Ragini’s POV if she was suffering then Y not others…
Finally Swara got married. Two stranger were tied in a knot. Ragini took her inside the room.
“This is ur room Devrani sa. I know it’s too big then ur small room.”
“Ji, it’s beautiful.”
“Today everything will be clear Devrani ji. It’s ur first night. I don’t want any complaint from my devar side.”
“Bhabhi I want to change this lehnga it’s too heavy.”
“Don’t even try to open it. U need not to do anything my devar will do everything.”
She went outside before closing the door she turned back. “Woh kya kehte h, All the best.”
She left.
Outside Lucky was giving especially training to Sanskar.
“See bro, these girls r nothing without us. If u try to hold their hand they will start dancing on ur head. So their true place is here.” He pointed towards his leg. “Be a man let’s have a glass.”
“Bhai, u r too much drunk. U sleep I’m also going.”
“Wait, don’t leave ur wife, all the best bro.” Lucky whispered something in Sanskar’s ear. “Now u understand.”
“Yes bhai.” He left.
Swara was all alone. Sitting at the middle of bed, which was fully decorated with flowers.
“God, I’m so nervous. Y this day came in our life? I married to a stranger to whom I met only at once. How could I gave myself to him? Does the meaning of marriage is s*x only?”
Suddenly the door opened and She clutched bed sheet tightly.
Don’t know what I wrote… If u like only then I’ll continue… Tell me if u like it or not. Ur friend nilu?.
95 Comments
Nice one.
Hey! Its nice but ragini is very cruel and selfish.and I really liked your last question as it is very important to be answered.Even I like the Village background of story.continue soon dear
its nyc concept i would like to see how swra is going to deal with all these
Nice
After watching r u virgin a short film on YouTube i alwys wanted to write on this topic …..and i guess your ff is somewhat like that movie only…..maybe you saw it and wanted to convey the same message to others……but anyway kudos for ur work…it’s a bold topic and is considered a taboo in our society …..but still u r writing
Big thumbs up …..being a girl somewhere we all face this probem….sorry for a big comment
But i poured my heart out on this issue
Again best of luck…i am with u
Awesome…
Nice one and interesting. Continue soon
Awesome….. ??
Good Start………
Continue soon……..
Nice one continue, I want to slap ragini and laksh.
Yah it is nice..carry on
awsome next part soon and I hate this nagin (ragini)
i thought it’s ragini ff looking at her picture. plz from next time put only swasan image as it’s swasan ff. ragini may have charecter here, but… as ragini fan i can’t see her negative in ffs. so.. I’m not here for hurting u.. but just suggesting u. plz.. next time don’t keep ragini or laksh image. it’s a good concept story. u r rocking. hope u understand me.
Hi your concept is nice and intresting! But it is really necessary to show ragini cunning in your story.if you dont like y you people include her role in your stories plz just leave her and concentrate on your favourities.
Most of swasan writers do this one only they dont like her its ok(as every one as there own choice) but is it necessary to include ragini in your stories and protray her to negative/cunning/egoistic/obbessed for some one this is going on from starting of sr to till now.
Iam not all swasan fans are like that only who are doing that this comment belong not to all.
Iam not saying not any raglak or ragsan or swalak writters dont do that they also do that but they less writters who do that and as a silent reader i observed some fans oppose to make swara as negative in ragini based ff but in swara based ff it is shown very rarely bcoz most of swara lovers hate ragini in serial and it continue here also.
There you are forced to watch ragini in serial since the story is not your hand.but in ff you can aviod the character so plz avoid or not include in your ff swara or ragini if you hate or dont like her its a request from swaragini lover to all the writers of swaragini of all four pairs.
Lavanya! Same goes to RagLak or RagSan ff’s. Swara also gets a side role ND is shown bad. Anyways! I’m both SwaSan and RagLak fan so I’ll support both. Here Ragini isn’t obsessive..!
Nilu all the best dear. Continue! I hope it’s as amazing as ur previous ff?
Excuse me miss lavany if you are not a Swasan fan why the he’ll you comment here…
It’s writers story her choice whom ever she show negative…and why the he’ll you are interfairing…you people also show Swara negative on your ffs and even show her mudere and what not we never poke nose in your matter then why the he’ll you are coming here to irritate us…you people always blame us for starting fight but the real reason is you are the one who is creating seen here…I mean you all really want your Ragini good in every field…
And what you were saying obsessed…in negative then yes we are…like you people are obsessed then yes we are also obsessed with your seat Ragini negative character…and next time think before speeak….first check your writers who always creat drama not us
..and then speak…
Calm down rosey dear….they also no that fighting with rag__san authers is vaste….so came to compromise with swasan’s….. They no we can forgive evryone like swara…… U only see did they went to comment or defend about ff or cover pic in rag__san ff no na but they came here…. My side story in that ff she did not mention about pair n also put cover pic as swaragini……but no raglak fans dared to coment or object…..
Hello miss who said iam not an swasan fan first read my comment throughly then reply iam an swaragini fan i read swara based and ragini based stories but mostly as an silent reader but now i thought to comment today bcoz most of swasan writers using ragini as negative in there stories during sr and after sr; coming to ragini based stories there less no of stories in which swara is used as an negative and in some stories they turned her positive also but in most of stories she played positive but in swara based seen is mostly reverse if iam wrong just remember yourself or keep your hand near your heart you will get answer by your self miss rosey.
Before barking cross check is ragini is not negative in most of swara based stories.
And if you read my comment fully means i hope your eyes caught the request to both the writers of swara and ragini based stories not to involve them or ignore them if you dont like them.
But first of you dont read ragini based stories know then how come you know they used swara in negative it means you are reading her based stories secretly wow!
As i mentioned iam an silent reader i read both based stories so i know how much ragini shown negative and how much swara shown negative so iam here to keep my point as a reader.
And she(author) not mentioned in title this story belong to particular pair so i have full right to go through the story to say pov to author as an swasan,raglak,swaragini lover.
why the hell they include Swara in their Rag______san stories knowing fully well that it will hurt Swasan fans. They should also stop using Swara. I would say they should stop using Swasan as we don’t use Lakshya as Swara’s pair. But they will not do that then why are you expecting us to do the same.
There are only two pairs Swasan and Raglak If you think otherwise then it’s your problem, not ours.
intresting continue
interesting…but y ragini is behaving like that..?continue soon…
Awesome!!
loved it!!
Pls dont make Ragini negative
instead make it kavita!!
Its your choice
Amazing concept and beautiful implementation.
Interesting…. Continue soon
Wow yaar it’s a great concept..but one thing don’t make ragini negative.recently there was an ff in that the author made ragini negative and said that she is degraded like ragini fans to make her negative..in every ragini ff swara is mad negative.. I will make ragini positive soon…..but the truth is swara is negative only in few ff..but in every Swasan ff ragini is negative…if don’t like her why to include…and …also long back in one article …Swasan fans argued for making swara negative then what is this…that time someone said..if only the ff r continuation of the show..then only we make her negative but no.. all Swasan ff have negating negative and that too with bad character.. u guys were fighting for morphing of pics…I know it’s wrong it hurts ur feelings..but what about them..u portray ragini so bad..even their feelings will be hurt.it’s simple no.u don’t care about their feelings why would they care about ur feelings..if u r a Swasan fan…concentrate on Swasan only why drag ragini into this..I am really sorry I said irrelevant things..but it’s truth.ragsan fans r wrong.but u r no saint either..
we at least don’t hijack someone else’s pair to make our story. Like other people.
hey miss deepali i guess you would be having a problem telling me directly thats why you are taunting me indirectly and thats my right to choose whether i should make ragini positive or negative and i asked the viewers opinion to make her negative and positive and they told me their views not like you who speak on people’s back and not in front of them and how many swasan ffs of mine have you read to comment on my story like this i started my story continuing from the point in the serial where she was negative and its requirement of my story to make her negative.. and in every rag———————————————-san story swara is obsessed with sanskaar or is evil only so you should tell them also not in every swasan ff ragini is negative and not in every rag—————————————————-san ff swara is positive you better notice it i can give you examples also so please first you learn to respect others especially writer’s feelings then teach others…………………
miss deepali before advising something to others please learn the same thing yourself if you have problem of me making ragini negative in my story then you could have told me directly or commented in my story itself then saying in someone others and how many swasan ffs of mine have you read that you can say it… in every swasan ff ragini is not negative and ya if she is then it is from the continuation of the real show and in many ragini ffs swara is shown negative in the worst role possible why don’t you tell these things there………….
so please first learn how to respect writers then tell us all these there have been worst cases where we swasan fans were hurt but you don’t speak all these to them and when we tell something then you people tell that we are bashing writers and we know how good everyone is and we respect all others feelings hope you will understand us atleast to some extent……….
sorry it got posted 2 times………..
Neptune sort to hurt u..but it happened in ur ff only..u said we r not degraded people like ragini fans to portray her negative but they always do this in those every ff.swara is negative in shrilatha’ s one ff out of two..in other two she is good…and in crazy girls sp ff..which she didn’t start and in that ff also…it was Sindhu who and two more ragini fans said..don’t make swara negative..and in ff also they said…but I am talking about one girl who commented in ur ff that we don’t do this…u which more FFS put swara as negative…but u guys…roses every ff has ragini so negative…also she calls her nagin…this makes u saints rights…there is kakali ff about dream…in that also. And in Mars ff also..and that day u were talking about being Mahan.we r not degraded and all that.wow..now u r talking about pairs cast and writer rights but when u people bash others u don’t find these things…Mickey wrote story on ragsan u people called her u r not a true Swasan fan and u people can decide their …who gives u those rights to u….u bashed Shrilatha in u r ff but he didn’t say anything but …u people r still great….rosey..talks any nonsense to lavanya.who was polite but still she is good for u…u people looker ur selves first…some one says..that teja will be responsible for varun and dhanya’ s divorce and mica said take it lightly…u people r great still..and dhanya said it was torture to work with helly..u bashed her…so different rules for u and us..u know…Selena one of the Swasan fan.banned ff of ragini writer just because she answered her in one of the articles..but u people r great…..wow same message for u..look at what u do and then open u r mouths…
Hi Deepali! I respect your pov dear!
You said Ragini is negative in ev SwaSan ff! ARE YOU SURE ABOUT THIS?
You said about long time dear, TIME HAS CHANGED WITH PEOPLE! Soo neither Swara fans nor SwaSan fans care whether RagLak or bahi behen lover make Swara negative!
As I said Time has changed.
Bdw dear, can you tell me why writer makes Ragini negative? According to you, they hate Ragini. Right?
Well forgot about them, can you please tell me why CVs turned Ragini in SR?
Did they also hate Ragini? I would love if you try to understand my pov!
About Morphing pic! IT’S NOT AT ALL A BIG DEAL DEAR!
Ragini lovers love to COPY PASTE HER FROM THIS PLACE TO ANOTHER. Time, situation, person, relation doesn’t matter. Haina?
And yes, it hurt us when they do so,
Now it hurts you and other fans! Correct? But do think by whom the FIRE WAS IGNITED?
I wholeheartedly agree no one is SAINT here! And no1 should be! You even you! EVER!
Sorry if I used irrelevant things!
Thnk u.. ;-*
kakali i said rosey every ff..in ur ff I mentioned the name ..its not long time dear things have started in neptunes ff…why cvs made ragini is not our concern..they might be biased or not we dont know that but the writers making ragini negative yep I am sure they do it because they hate her..no one should be saint and no one is but in neptune ff most of them claimed themselves as saints..just do read it if u havent..and thanks for understanding me..I actually admire u..dear and I am ragini fan…neither ragsan nor raglak
Hiloo Shri! I got to know that you wasn’t well, how are you now? Hope you are fine!
Bdw is Deepali you? Nice name!
Yh I haven’t read Neptune’s ff that why may be m unaware of that matter! I will read but I want to say Ev1 isn’t same over here! Some1 loves Ragini some doesn’t. This is apply with Swara also. Many people don’t like her and many people do!
You can take Neptune, she doesn’t like to degrade as she said. Many readers supported them bcz they mean it.! But also it doesn’t mean ev1(who doesn’t like Ragini) will say YES to her. Ev1 is having opinion so does Neptune and Rosey!
I don’t know What Neptune did, but most of the SwaSan lovers(who is arguing with you now) was also not there. NOT AS A SAINT. All those saints aren’t here!
You know what it means “EV1 ISN’T SAME!”.
Yhh About CVs,it’s really not our concern whether they were BAISED or not! It’s non of our business! Haina?
You are a Ragini fan, as I said I do admire that! But I’m a SwaSan fan(Swara&Sanskar) fan!
Thnxx for understanding me also. But I didn’t understand why you took my SS name A DREAM. Just bcz Ragini is negative there! Is that the reason?
TC dear!
hey kakali thanks for the concern but I am not shri..shri is taken to the hospital again..today she fainted again..she is sufferring from long time illness..its related to her head from childhood..she is fine now..but doctors said they need to keep her under observation…aand I am actually supposed to use her id to reply to her readers but I am using it for this..thanks for asking about her..she will back after one week now..well u right about cv as I said they were biased..lets not discuss that now..here the matter is everyone has their right to put their choice infront of writer and writer will chose what to do.. am I wrong.no..it was rosey who said..ill things about that girl even u agreed that is the reason I admire u..is it wrong to put our choice to make ragini positive..u answer me..I understand when u make her negative in continuation ffs but that doenst make things rights is it..no..I just wanted to put this point..well people have their own choice and liking..let them be..someone saying that its swasan and ragsan is not right..nice to meet u because inspite of being ragini fan I do read ur ff and comments..but I dont comment as I dont have an id..also I had my exams these days/…
Hi Deepali! Oh, is that soo? TC of her dear! For a second I thought you as Shri as your writing style resembles Shri perfectly so I got confused! She will get well soon! God bless her!
Anyway you are again right we shouldn’t discuss CVs was BAISED or not! Its totally not our concern!
And about stating your pov over here isn’t wrong! As a reader you are having the solid right to discuss about your pov! YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME.
About my FF, things doesn’t make good right?
Can you tell me what you mean by this?
I shouldn’t explain but I CAN’T IGNORE THE FACT THAT RAGINI WAS NEGATIVE ONCE!
That’s an another matter that SwaSan were always destined to be together from the 1st day itself, but still I can’t IGNORE THE FACT, JUST BCZ OF RAGINI’S BLIND LOVE FOR LAKSH LEAD TO MY EVER HEAVENLY SWASAN! Do you agree? You might have read my A DREAM and I always have been wishing Ragini for that! I’m here also saying “GOD BLESS RAGINI AND HER LOVE FOR LAKSH”.
Sooo from that point I had to set up story in that way! Ragini had to be negative there! HAD TO BE! NEITHER YOU NOR I CAN CHANGE THAT! Haina?
SwaSan is SWASAN, they are real, Bhai Behen is BHAI Behen! As i said many love them many not! As simple as that! Many people know what right and what wrong is! Even I guess u also know! 😀
Well NP about not commenting. I’m glad meeting you here! Thnxx for the honour. How was ur exam?
And yeah! TC of Shri!
<3<3
see its not my write to decide in whose ff ragini willbe negative and in which not and neither that right is yours kakali is right even the cvs make ragini negative so does not mean that they hate ragini its a fiction and in every serial someone will be negative and very less ragini fans read swasan ffs even we do not read ragini ffs any one can write on anything they want so please if you don’t like a story or any thing then don’t read i don’t want to waste my time further giving you explanations i don’t know why don’t you say the same thing in ragini ffs instead of interfering here and i know that NO ONE IS SAINT HERE THAT MEANS NO ONE, and regarding dhanya and helly’s issue i don’t know anything about it but how can you say that it was some swasan fan it can be anyone random too because i don’t see that person’s comment on any swasan ff so stop bothering us for no reasons……………
Deepali I’m soo gald meeting a silent reader of my ff! Good to see you here!
Well Let me answer something,
you said in Kakaliz ff which is fortunately me,I made Ragini negative.
Oki, you have read that SS right? You know from which point I started the story, if not then I’m sorry to say “There was a show names SwaRagini where a sister Ragini turned negative after few episodes and did some disgustingly disgusting things which we normal people can’t even think of doing in our dreams!” Haina?
Did you watch that?
NO! then also I don’t have any problem. Grrrrr I shouldn’t explain this as it’s of no use and I do understand this! CVs gave us chance to make Ragini negative that why we do soo!!
Waaaaa you have so much info about SwaSan ffs. I appreciate it!
–Mickey wrote a BHAI BEHEN ff and we called her not a real SwaSan fan. YOU KNOW WHY? No you don’t know bcz it is not cup of ev1’s coffee to understand this!
No SwaSan fan stand BHAI BEHEN as couple! You soo easily accept them, inspite of knowing Laksh is her better half. but hulffffffffff! Let’s just not start again here!
–Rosey said wrong and I don’t appreciate her way of talking.
–Someone or your friend FLISS started that WAR bullying SwaSan fans, pointing out at my heavenly SwaSan! uttering SHITS against my SwaSan.. Did you remember?
You said one of fan said Teja will be responsible for VK and Dhanya’s divorce, you notice that but didn’t see how SwaSan fans reacted over that topic. Did you see us appreciating that matter! She(Whoever she was) WRONG and we all do know that!
But didn’t you see why she said that? Youu Friend FLISS started nor we ! M I RIGHT? If she/he didn’t have said all those carps,that girl wouldn’t have said about Teja!
Tell me who was wrong. Be frank with me! MISTAKE WAS FROM BOTH SIDE.
–Mica! Well Mica was the one who warned That girl not to say all those things.! Remember? NO! Let it be..
— You know some of bahi behen lovers are there(Well, no need of taking there name as I guess you know them more than me right) who loves to drag HELLY, VARUN & TEJA in ev matter of SwaSan and Bhai behen. Do you think it’s good to drag real actors here?
DOES IT MAKE ANY SENSE?
You are right, no1 SAINT here! Once a SwaSan fan said that but still Ragini lover do this, I mean dragging Helly and bashing her!
WOHOO IS SHE/HE ALSO SAINT WHO DOES THIS?NOO.
Bdw what happened to Selena? I haven’t seen her from may days!
Yoo, we shouldnt open our mouth everywhere! Haina?
miss deepali…,i think u didn’t read swasan ffs…!in some ffs ragini is negative!not all..!and in serial cvs showed ragini as negative…so on that basis..ppl are making ragini negative….like u said swara is negative in very few ffs…same goes to ragini..!if u didn’t read ragini positive in swasan ffs..,that’s ur fault…not ours..!and neptune pointed ragini fans.. as they are editing/morphing swasan edits..!!!she got frustrated bcs of these issues..we requested them ‘n’ number of times..that don’t make morphed edits of swasan for bhai behen..!and someone’s rip logic made me rofl that…that they are using varun’s pic not sanskar…i think they got eye infection or may be probably their eyes are gone..!u guys are making swasan morphed pics..!not varun..,and first know the difference b/w offscreen and onscreen…,and make raglak edits as rag___________san…as u guys are ok with raglak or anyone with ragini…!it gives peace to everyone..and ppl also will decrease ragini negative..!so give ur gyans to them?as we always agree that we are not at all saint and we never act as victim cards..like some fans of your favourite do..!
Well nilu I always love ur work and I love to read this as well plz continue
Awesome concept dear….i saw some comments about ragini’s negetivity,i also dont like her as negetiv,i liked her as a good sister….. But now evry rag____san ff having swara as negetive… N about front pic rag__san ff always put the pic of swaragini n dont mension that swasan or raglak or rag__san… They always in a way to hurt swasan fans… I dont have any problem with ragini or raglak ff… But when it comes to rag__san they intentionally hurting us with their comments….. Y they dont morph the images of raglak scen?? They can replace sanskr from laksh……but no they want only swasan scens…..
And author if u can please replace raglak as sahil n kavitha…. Thats better to avoide evry fights dear its my pov after that ur wish….we are not like them ryt to insult n hurt others….update next soon dear
Wow yaar amazing concept..and please you don’t worry about cheap people and there comment you must have heard dogs always bark at other like this only they are trying to show you low…but you don’t worry we all are with you….
And yes I just loved this ff please post next sooner…can’t wait to see more and this Ragini is ka toh main hasar nashar kar doon gi kamini coming between Swasan
Rosey mind your language no one is barking here every one is saying their pov of view so you don’t bark writer will give her answers and if u reply to my comment also I am not going reply to u as you not understanding what all are saying
I support you sindhura dii.
Dear Rosey dii, Please dont say like this!!
Ragini as kamini nooo pls dont!!
She is also good pls dont do that
I dont like Ragini negative and also swara negative
It really hurts yrr
I am also a SwaSan and RagLak fan and always use Kavya,Kavita or sahil negative!!
Pls its a request dont say like this!!
I hope you understand
Regards,
Ishita 🙂
You should have not come here knowing it’s not ragini story as we don’t come in your stories whatever you guys say.
rosey control ur tongue…r u born like this only..dont call ur self swara fan people will kick u..here no one was bashing her neither they were showing her low..they were just putting their point..as a reader they have rights to put their point and as a writer she has complete rights to accept or reject their request…u dont have any right to say anything..and u know what..u r the one barking here…no and do read she said that all the writers..ragini ko kamini bolne wali tu konsi sati savitri hai..u r words say what u r..
Rosey diii am really sorry but please don’t say like that..I am a swaragini fan and don’t like to see someone negative neither my cutie pie swara nor sweetie pie ragini..I saw comments here in recent comments soo just requesting you please don’t say like that.
And about the author sorry I didn’t read your story but after seeing ishu’s comment in recent comments I am commenting.
Rosey diii I really hope that you understood my point of view..
Thanks for reading my comment.?
Rosey, to be honest there is no need to utter all this words in comment box!
Try to main the difference between Other fans and SwaSan fans! Thnk u.. ;-*
Deepali…no dear in many swasan ff ragini is a good sister or good bhabi or good frnd….i can give many exampls…. N about morphd pic they intentionally doing i can bet in that…. They no we cant see those pic…. Y she is not morphin raglak intence scens as rag__san pic….. Becouse she dont want to lose some raglak fans.. We no we r over possessive about swasan and sorry we cant chang that we are very proud of our swasan…. And cant se their pair with anyone else….we dont have prblm with ur rag__san ff also but please make sure u r not hurtin others…. Sry nilu for this comment…i dont wanted to argu about this topic in their ff….becouse i no they wont undertand anything [they kept their brain in loker] so waste of time….
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hey nayar i am not ragsan fan..but actually no one is a saint here..see now lavanya just put her point and that rosey started barking..this is what I am saying..u guys r not mahan and fans of swara..u said u forgive or understand like swara ..but is swara like that rosey..what was the need of saying all that to lavanya..u tell if u r feeling it correct..and swara is positive in most of the ragini ffs even I can give examples and ragini being negative in ur ff..ur no less..here neither ragini fans r mahan nor swasan fans…
Deepali,I agree Rosey uttered some words which she wouldn’t have but dear, all aren’t same na! She doesn’t like Ragini but that doesn’t mean ev SwaSan lover don’t like Ragini! This isn’t fair na?
And about being Swara! NAAH! SWARA CAN’T BE LIKE SOME1. SHE IS UNIQUE, EXTRAORDINARY, most of the writers try to portray their fav as Swara! And it makes me soo proud! Grrrrrr About pic and tittle!! Hmmm you are right but the same(What you actually meant) doesn’t apply here! You know the reason well!! 😀
well about the coverpic and title even nilu didnt put that now same must apply to her as well..right…and thanks for explaining ur point of view..and thanks for listening to me..sorry If I hurt u
first get your id made then talk rubbish I don’t like those stupid people who don’t even dare to reveal their identity. Rag_______________san is the most rubbish thing i have heard in this TV world ever.
hey dear…would love to read on our beloved swasan?…don’t involve ragini??take some other character in place ragini…i’m fed up of this ragini…pls take some other character…and concept is good?and fights will also be avoided…better to everyone?
Hey nilu i liked d concept..
N m seeing many comments who r daying to make ragini postive or replace her… bt plz dun do dat… go acc to ur plot…
N d onez who saying dun include her… swasan fanz do dis alwyz… than let me tell u ragini or rag—san fanz dlbrtly not dsclsng d pairs in dere title coz dey want swasan fanz to read n hurt dem… dan morphing swasan pics n wen swasan fanz requstd tab toh bolte nai.. aa gye yaha sb…
No1 is less in creating fights… n on tu frn many dayz its done by rag—san fanz…
N nilu avoid dem… n dun chnge her into positive.. coz i want to see raginiz evilness here.. to which extent she can go… n do make her suffer in d end..
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The problem here is that they poke their nose in our couple they should not have used Sanskar as it was our pair they had their pair na they should have to be satisfied with what they got, but no they do it intentionally so break Swasan fandom as there are so many Sanskar fan who read Rag_san just for sanskar and they get more votes and comments.
And rahi baat ragini ki then she was a negative character in whole serial those who like her should know that they like negative character. There was no time in whole serial when she was totally positive.
Those who write Rag_______________san, do it to get cheap pubicity. If they are so loyal towards her character as Swasan fandom is they would have never ever used some other pairs half to make their own pair. And if they say that they do it because tevar are very good friend then they should have used name Varun not Sanskar. they are stupid people with sick mind.
Plz either don’t put ragini pic on cover page or replace her character don’t hurt fans feeling its just a request if you have any grudes about ragini plz take out in other way or ignore her character but it really disgusting the way you potray her role you can also pic parneeta or other character personally I do not find any lady the way you potray ragini role
see dear in many ragini ffs even swara is negative its the writer’s choice whom they give what role even we get hurt to see her character as bad as nothing in ragini ffs then why don’t you say the same thing there………..
I agree with you Ankita but let’s see what the author adopts! We can’t say anything now!
Bdw “I do not find any lady the way you potray ragini role” it’s not true! There are so many women who does this! May be we haven’t come across that kinda people but they do exist in this small world.!!
Why you want Parineeta in place of Ragini dear? Would love to knkw your answer! 😀
hey nilu dear i just loved the storyline and concept as it is something very different please do continue dear and please don’t change the story line on others saying take it ahead as you planned………….
nice dear continue soon