Vyavastha Vivah…Arranged marriage… Part 6
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Mohit-Rashmi flew to Austria for honeymoon.
In the hotel they stayed there is a swimming pool.Mohit took Rashmi there.
Mohit:Let us swim.
Rashmi got scared.
Rashmi:Swimming?I can’t…
Mohit:Don’t be scared Rashmi.I am there with you.
Her eyes became wet.
Rashmi:Please don’t force me Mohit.I am scared of swimming pools.
Mohit was stunned seeing a tear drop rolling down her cheek.
Mohit:For such a silly thing,you are crying?
He wiped her tears.
Mohit:I will not make you do anything which makes you uncomfortable.Don’t worry.
Rashmi:Thank you Mohit for understanding me.
Mohit:I am your husband.I have to understand you.
She smiled.
Mohit: Let us go out.
She smiled.
They enjoyed sight seeing.
While Rashmi was enjoying the scenic beauty,Mohit embraced her from back.She blushed.Suddenly he ticked her from back with a laughter..She giggled feeling ticklish.
They went to a garden.
Rashmi was so fascinated by the flowers that she tried to pluck a flower.
Mohit:Don’t pluck it.This is not our place to pluck flowers like that.The Police may even arrest you.
Rashmi became dull.
Rashmi:But I want to wear a red flower.
Mohit:I have a solution for that.
He took a red lipstick from her bag and drew a red flower on her cheek.
Mohit:Now you are wearing a red flower on your cheek.
She giggled:Mohit..you are too brilliant.
He smiled:Yes,I am.
They laughed.
They went to the amusement park.
They enjoyed a lot.
They reached the giant wheel.
Mohit:Come..we will get in.
Rashmi rested her head on his shoulder and said:No,I am scared.
He smiled.
Mohit:Come..I am there with you.
He pulled her to get inside.
When the giant wheel started moving Rashmi also started screaming.Mohit could not stop laughing.
In the hotel,they arranged a ball room dance party.
Mohit-Rashmi danced romantically.
Mohit cupped her face in his palms romantically.
Mohit:Don’t you find this place romantic?This place is giving me a romantic mood.
She became shy.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
They reached their hotel room.
Mohit pulled Rashmi closer and said:I am still in a romantic mood.
She blushed.
He rubbed his nose with hers passionately.
They closed the distance between them by drowning in passionate romance.After a passionate session,they slept off.
In the morning…
Rashmi took bath and came near the sleeping Mohit.
Rashmi:Mohit,wake up.
Suddenly he pulled her closer and she fell over him.
They shared an intense eye lock.
Mohit:Let us continue our romantic session.
She blushed.They continued their romance.
Mohit and Rashmi went for sight seeing.Shockingly a robber blocked their way with a gun.Mohit and Rashmi were scared.
Robber:Give me your accessories.
He threatened them.
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Awww blush ..blush…So much romantic chapter .Mohit telling Rashmi that he won’t force her to do anything which will make her uncomfortable was good . Tickling scene was so much romantic. Adding redlipstic as flower on Rashmi’s cheek was so beautiful to read. Their dance was so romantic , Mohit and Rashmi rubbing noses and doing passionate romance was lovely. Last scene was shocking, who is that robber ? What he want ?
Thank you very much.
Recently a Telugu serial Pedamathi Sandhya ragam is going so well. I watch it with whole family. The concept of serial is about two sisters. At a village in an orthodox family a middle aged man fixes marriage of his elder daughter to a family of another village family’s guy. These two families are friends. Both of them don’t promote intercaste marriage. If anyone does it before the whole panchayat they boycott those people from village and they are not allowed to enter there. At the fear of this ,The elder girl of the family didn’t reveals her love as she is loving an intercaste person she says about this to her little sister. At the day of marriage the elder sister escapes from the house with the help of her little sister. She goes and does register marriage and comes back. Meanwhile the father of the two sister gets anger and he behaves so harsh to her. Seeing all these little sister admits that she helped her sister to elope from there. Dad if those two girls feels anger and he compells her to marry the guy who came there for his elder daughter. At fear she does it and that was the last moment she sees her sister before her eyes. Her sister is been boycotted from village and the villagers ran to beat her and her husband. They managed to escape from there by catching a bus . After some years the little suster’s family is shown. Her husband dominates her and doesn’t allows her to keep any contact with her elder sister. She is the mother of a 19 years old girl now . The girl is very homely and she is been strictly bought up by her dad. One day unexpectedly the elder sister’s daughter is coming to this village for giving her mom’s message. Meanwhile a guy helps her when a man misbehaves with her. On the other hand at college younger sister’s daughter didn’t talk with boys in college as her dad hasn’t allowed it. Her classmate a boy feels he should make her some how to talk with him and make her as friend. Till now only this much is shown in serial. If you gets free time can you make a ss based on this story ?
https://youtu.be/fpxGjr1A0qQ
This is the promo, please watch it.
In the promo is the modern girl actually the daughter of the elder sister?
I will write on this concept.but I don’t know how to move forward the story.can you please give me the full story according to your imagination?then I will write.
Modern girl is the daughter of elder daughter only. Elder daughter, her husband and this girl have no touch with India and their village. The elder daughter and her husband went to US after eloping from village and their they got settled and started a new life. The elder daughter give birth to a girl baby. Years passed and now the elder daughter’s girl is about 21 years old. Her dad couldn’t survive long as he is suffering blood cancer. During the lbed ridden days he was able to realize how much his wife is missing her little sister and family as they have no touch. Initially the elder sister used to get letters from her little . But for the past two years she is not getting any letters, no phone calls and she is upset. Her husband expressed a wish that he wants to see the whole family of his and his wife’s from village. Hearing this the 21 years old girl tells that she will bring the whole families here from village. Elder daughter writes a letter and gives it to her. She tells her to give this to her sister and she leaves US. On the other hand at the village where little sister is married she has also given birth to two children , first one is a girl and second one is a boy. She is living in a family where not just her husband and kids but also her mother in law is also living who is a typical saas who always blames her bahu. To the worst her husband’s sister and husband with their son arrives there some times and they used to mock on her for helping to elope the elder sister. Due to all this reasons her husband behaves very rudely to her and also becomes very strict in the upbringing of his daughter . Because he says that his own wife was the reason for all problems. He was interested in elder sister , but she eloped and married with the help of second one . He was forced to marry this second sister as the parents of both families suggested him. He warns her that if she stands for the daughter in any case if his and her daughter falls in love he will kill both mother and daughter. The little sister’s daughter is so homely and she is so scared of her dad and her dadi . But her mom is her best friend. The little sister’s daughter don’t talks with boys in college as her dad has prohibhited her to talk with boys. What now they are showing is the elder sister’s daughter has arrived in village. A guy helped her to reach there as while travelling in train when a man was misbehaving this guy helped her and they both became friends. Surpisingly that guy ‘s native place is this village only. But as part of job he is staying in city . They share a cute friendship, At college when the little sister’s daughter arrives and she is not talking with any boys one of her classmate made a bet with his friends he will definitely make her to talk with him and he will also make her to fall in his love trap. He send some of his friends to tease her when she was coming inside the class room . The girl got scared and she cried . Suddenly in a heroic style this boy comes and questions them. The friends gang leaves and the girl feels happy. He extended his hand to her for making friendship.But she simply said thank you and left. These much things have been shown in serial now. I hope now you can write on it. You can select any actors . But please show the bonding of sisters too and the bonding of their daughters too as they are the important like the leads. I want to see the village girl becoming bold, falling in love, also the modern girl’s love track too.
Does the youngest sister’s husband love her?How is their son?Is he good?do u want his love story also?
The younger sister’s husband behaves rude to wife. He always makes control over his daughter . His son is some wards caring, but he is small in serial, studying in school. You can show the love track of two daughters of these two sisters . The first sister’s daughter is modern as she lived in US. Her mom, dad are caring and free towards her . Upto her dad’s and mom’s wish she comes to village for in search of the family, meeting the younger sister . The first sister’s husband’s parents are no more , so don’t need to show them. Same way second and first sister’s mom has been dead, but dad is alive. But dad is still adamant , he didn’t talks with his second daughter and he didn’t keeps any contact with his first daughter . In functions he only talks with his son in law , which means the second sister’s husband and always instructs him to keep his daughter under control so that she couldn’t fell in love and elope with some one. The one who helps modern girl [elder sister’s daughter] to find way in village is a nice guy , his parents are very forward . So you can show the bonding as very much sweet there. In second sister’s daughter’s case she is very much traditional, homely and a kind of fearing nature. Due to her dad’s fear she won’t talk with boys of her class. What happens is the one boy who was adamant to make her to talk and love him eventually started loving her whole heartedly and it will bring a new change to her . He surpises her and makes her comfortable. So that’s the plot. I hope now it’s clear to you.
Aww…. They’re so romantic…. Mohit is really a understand husband… He looks so cute… Nice pics…
Thanks a lot.
Aww such a romantic and cute chapter!! Why did Rashmi cry seeing a swimming pool? Is there some past to it? But it was really good to see Mohit understanding her fear and not forcing her. Mohit’s idea of putting lipstick on her cheek in the shape of a flower was so beautiful. Their romantic ball dance was reallly good to read. So Mr Romatic Mohit is finally out, their passionate romance was awesome! Loved the chapter! But the ending was so shocking, I hope the robber doesnt harm them…
Thanks a lot.There is no past.Rashmi does’nt know swimming well.So she is scared.