@SHOT 21
Om lands in Rajasthan and is welcomed in the palace with pomp and show. Om goes and touches dada ji’s feet.
Damodar: I am glad that you came.
Om: Thank you dada ji. Thanks for all the advice, I wish I can keep Aru happy and she agrees soon.
Adhiraj: That’s going to be tough dude as she is really annoyed with you.
Om: Why?
Diya: Because you didn’t pick her calls.
Mahi: And she herd yesterday’s conversation too. So all the very best jijs as you are going to face tough time now convincing her.
Om: Jijs???
Mahi: Jiju’s shortcut Jijs. Simple as that.
Om: Umm. I haven’t become your jiju, I mean jijs yet.
Mahi: So what you will soon become.
Om: And if your di didn’t agree then.
Diya: Next to impossible, di is like butter you just need to become a bread.
Mahi patting her head: At least for once don’t think about food, fatso.
Damodar: Okay stop it all of you.
All become silent at once and I chuckle seeing them, while they return a glare.
Damodar: Show him his room.
All nod.
Damodar: Om change and take some rest. Aru will be here for lunch, so be prepared son.
Om nods while Damodar leaves.
Diya: Why is this hitler always so rude with us? Hmm.
Mahi: Come on jijs I will show you your room.
@LUNCH
Everyone is seated on the table when Aru comes in running.
Aru: Sorry dada ji, just got a last minute patient.
Damodar: It’s okay, come sit.
Aru sits beside Om and as soon as she sees him she shouts.
Aru: TTUUMM?? (YYOOUU??)
What are you doing here?
Om innocently: Lunch.
Aru: Hahaha very funny, I mean what are you doing here in my house?
Om: I said lunch.
Aru: Urgh… Urgh…
Papa what is he doing here.
All together: LUNCH.
Damodar: And I think you should also do that.
Aru gives everyone a hopeless look and murmuring some curses she begins to eat.
Om whispers to Aru: It’s not good to say bad words while eating.
He winks at her and she gets shocked but then glaring at him begins to eat.
@ARU’S ROOM
Aru is sitting, when somebody knocks the door.
Aru: Come in.
Om enters and Aru gets angry on seeing him.
Aru: What the hell are you doing here.
Om: Aare why you bhadkofy always, just chillofy.
(Why are you getting angry, just chill.)
Aru: Oh really, why shan’t I get angry on you. From past fifteen no sorry sixteen day you aren’t picking my call, when ever I come on video chat either you ignore me or you walk away and yesterday you just crossed the limit firstly you said that you aren’t compatible for me, secondly you just can’t move on from your past, thirdly…
Om keeps his hand on her mouth shocking her, her eyes go wide.
Om: Why can’t you stop for a while Miss. Chatterbox. I have come here from Mumbai only and only for you but you are that rather welcoming me you are either getting shocked or angry. I am here to give you a surprise and you rather than coming and hugging me and thanking me, you are scolding me. (Aru makes her eyes even wider sue to shock.) And now look you are increasing the size of your pupil. Come on Aru it’s Om here your bestie and soon to be husband but you are urgh…
Aru: Ummm.
Om: What? After my such a long speech you are just saying Ummm. Really Aradhya you are too much.
Aru signals his hand that is on her face.
Om: Oh sorry.
Om removes his hand.
Aru: You should be. Firstly, I didn’t ask you to come here and secondly why shall I hug you who are you?
Om encircling his arm around her neck says
Om: Your to be husband.
Aru hitting him with her book: Very funny but I am not interested anymore.
Om placing his arms around his waist: Why?
Aru: Because you have hurt me alot.
Saying so she faces another side.
Om raising his eyebrows sheepishly: So you want me to pacify you, right.
Aru: I don’t care.
Om: Fine then Miss. Afat Express be ready, I will soon take you away from here.
Saying so he winks at her.
Aru to herself: Let’s see how you do that Mr. Rajdhani Express as it’s not that easy to convince me.
Om: And nobody can stay angry from me for long Miss. Afat Express.
Aru: We will see that.
Om: Challenge.
Aru: Accepted. 24 hours, you have 24 hours convince me if possible otherwise you can leave. And you better don’t talk to me.
Om smiling at her: Okay ma’am.
@ADHIRAJ’S ROOM
Diya throws a pillow at Om.
Diya: Have you lost it jijs do you even realise that what have you done.
Oberoi family from video call.
Rudra: Aare he is Omkara Singh Oberoi and Oberoi’s can convince anyone.
Diya: And she is Dr. Aradhya Rajput stubborn no. 1.
Rudra: She can’t be more stubborn then our Shivaay Bhaiya. No no.
Shivaay hits him on his head.
ShivKara: Shut up Rudra.
Om: Guys for gods sake can you guys for change stop your nonsense and think a good solution please.
Rudra: Okay. I don’t have any problem.
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Rudra: Idea?
All: What?
Rudra: Close them in a room and there the will talk to each other and sort out the matters.
Adhiraj: Rudra relations aren’t forced on anyone, they are made with love.
Rudra patting his head: Was one lecturer less that you too began.
ShivKara share “Iss ka kuch nahi ho sakta!” Look.
Ira: I have an idea.
Diya: Say you also say.
Ira: Why don’t you sing a song for her.
Adhiraj: Wooh! That’s perfect. You are seriously a darling Ira. (Ira raises her collar.)
Om you should do this only.
Om: But which song?
Mahi: That also we should tell. You too are useless jijs.
Ira: Satyavachan (True.)
Om: Very funny girls.
Diya: WOW what a filmi scene it would be. Jijs will be singing a song and then di will come and get emotional and then hug him and then….
Adhiraj closes her mouth.
Adhiraj: Kids are here.
Diya removing his hand: I mean they both will patch up. Stop using your brain more.
Adhiraj: Whatever.
Shivaay: Do you guys think that this is DDLJ going on in which Om is SRK and Aru is Kajol, he will sing song and play violin and she will come running in his arms. FYI she isn’t 90’s heroine she is present day’s girl, she won’t agree so easily.
Ira: Then how?
Shivaay: Om you cook food for her.
Diya: Better you do both the things.
Adhiraj: Like plan A & B.
Diya: Yes.
Om: Cool then.
Mahi patting Om: Do you know how to make food.
Rudra: He is…
Ira & Mahi together in irritated voice: OMKARA SINGH OBEROI &he can do anything. Right?
Rudra: Right.
Ira: So come in get on work to make Miss. Latalpatal agree.
Om murmurs: She isn’t Latalpatal she is an afat.
Ira: I heard that.
Om: Sorry.
Adhiraj: At 10 exact Aru goes to backyard garden everyday to listen music, you should do all the arrangements there.
Diya: And we will take care of the rest.
Ira: I will stop her on call till 10.
Rudra: Great. So are you all ready.
All together: READY.
Ira: Go then.
@BACKYARD
The entire backyard is decorated with net cloth and lights making the place look extremely beautiful.
Aru comes there and lights go off and a single spot light falls on Om, who is sitting near the piano playing it.
Om begins singing looking at Aru:
Kuch rishton ka namak hi doori hota hai
Na milna bhi bahut zaroori hota hai
Dum dum, dum dum tu mera
Dum dum, dum dum mera hal
Dum dum, dum dum tu mera
Dum dum, dum dum mera hal
Dum dum, dum dum..
Om goes to Aru and holding her hand gently in his rotates her and looking in her eyes while she avoids his eyes and Om continues to sing:
Tu baat kare ya na mujhse
Chahe aankhon ka pegaam na le
Par ye mat kehna are o pagle
Mujhe dekh na tu, mera naam na le
Tujhse mera deen dharam hai
Mujhse teri khudai
Tujhse mera deen dharam hai
Mujhse teri khudai
Leaving Aru’s hand he starts rounding around her, while she is smiling inwardly but manages to show that she isn’t affected while Om continues:
Tu bole toh ban jaaun
Main Bulleh Shah saudai
Main bhi naachun..
Main bhi naachun manau sohne yaar ko
Chalun main teri raah bulleya
Main bhi naachun rijhaun sohne yaar ko
Karun na parwah Bulleya
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu
Mera mehram tu, marham tu
Mera dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu
Om remembers Aru proposing him and he denied to her and now holding her hand he sings:
Maana apna ishq adhura
Dil na ispe sharminda hai
Poora hoke khatam hua sab
Jo hai aadha wo hi zinda hai
Ho bethi rehti hai umeedein
Tere ghar ki dehlizon pe
Jiski na parwaaz khatam ho
Dil ye mera wahi parinda hai…
Om holding his ears asks forgiveness from Aru:
Bakshe tu jo pyaar se mujhko
Toh ho meri rihaai
Bakshe tu jo pyaar se mujhko
Toh ho meri rihaai
Tu bole toh ban jaaun
Main Bulleh Shah saudai
Main bhi naachun..
Main bhi naachun manau sohne yaar ko
Chalun main teri raah Bulleya
Main bhi naachun rijhaun sohne yaar ko
Karun na parwah Bulleya
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu…
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Aru stops Om and says
Aru: Om just answer one thing.
Om nods.
Aru: Are you doing this as everyone asked you too.
Om nods.
Aru: Do you seriously love me.
Om: I don’t know Aru whenever I am near you my world seems to be complete. The love that I have always yearned for, I found it in you but I always think that I will never be able to keep you happy, I am… I am…
Aru leaves his hand.
Aru: Om all this is useless as you aren’t doing this with your entire wish, now I am feeling as a burden that’s being put on you forcefully.
She leaves from there, while Om sits on a chair with both his hands cupping his face.
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BG MUSIC:
Tu yaad kare ya na mujhko
Mere jeene mein andaaz tera
Sar aankhon par hai teri naaraazi
Meri haar mein hai koi raaz tera
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@NEXT DAY
@BREAKFAST TABLE
Aru comes there but doesn’t find Om, after a while he joins everyone.
Om: Dadu.
Damodar: Ji beta.
Om: Dadu I will leave after breakfast.
Diya: Oh so didi accepted so soon. WOW jijs.
Om: Diya I am leaving alone.
Everyone went silent.
@AFTER BREAKFAST
@ADHIRAJ’S ROOM
Adhiraj: What is your problem Aru?
Diya: Yes didu, why are you testing him so much.
Aru: What is your problem guys, why are you all forcing him into this relation,when he himself isn’t ready.
Adhiraj: Did he say that to you.
Aru: He said that on call that day.
Adhiraj: Why the heck aren’t you ready to understand one simple thing that what he said that day was his mindset and you are the one who has the responsibility to get him out of it.
Aru: But yesterday he also said.
Adhiraj: What?
Aru:
#FLASHBACK
Om: I don’t know Aru whenever I am near you my world seems to be complete. The love that I have always yearned for, I found it in you but I always think that I will never be able to keep you happy, I am… I am…
#END OF FLASHBACK
Adhiraj: You are such an idiot Aru at that time he wanted you to support him, he wanted you to tell him that you trust him. That’s why he is leaving now.
Aru: Really.
Adhiraj, Diya & Mahi: Obviously.
Aru: Shit, I got to stop him.
Diya: Run baby run.
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Shayad meri jaan ka sadka
Maange teri judaai
Shayad meri jaan ka sadka
Maange teri judaai
Tu bole toh ban jaaun
Main Bulleh Shah saudai
Main bhi naachun..
Main bhi naachun manau sohne yaar ko
Chalun main teri raah Bulleya
Main bhi naachun rijhaun sohne yaar ko
Karun na parwah Bulleya
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@CORRIDOR
Aru: Ramu kaka did you see Omkara.
Ramu kaka: Beta he went to your room.
Aru: Thank you Ramu kaka.
@ARU’S ROOM
By the time Aru reached her room Om had left from there but there was a piece of paper kept on her table. Even in so much of tension that paper attracted her, so she took it and read.
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Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu…
Mera mehram tu, marham tu
Mera dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu…
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LETTER
“Aru,
It has been ages since I had expressed my feelings to anyone but then you came in my dark world and you enlightened it with your light. You mixed every colour of happiness in my family’s and my life, everything changed, even I did. I don’t know whether you will understand this or not but that’s all what I want to say…
“PATHAAR KO MOOM BANAYA APNE,
FIR KUN USS SE MUH MODA AAPNE,
AB MOOM FIR PATHAAR NA BAN PAYA,
BAS CHALA HAI JAL KAR KHUD KA VAJOOD MITANE.”
Shabakhair,
Omkara.”
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Kuch rishton ka namak hi doori hota hai
Na milna bhi bohat zaroori hota hai
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Shabakhair,
Khuda Hafiz.
Keep smiling
Stay happy
&
For now signing off
SHIVIKA ?…
13 Comments
Super awesome
Awww!!! Run Aru Run …… before Om goes back to his darkness. Loved his comeback especially from where the story unfolded.
Awesome…
Loved the song n shayari as well.
It expressed all his emotions that he has been hiding for a long while.
Eagerly waiting for next.
Wah kya baat he maza a gaya padh ke… Thanks for posting it dear.. I really love ira a lot Yar.. she is amazing…..
I literally laughed out loud when I read that LUNCH part ?????. Seriously nailed it
Its fantastic dearrr
Loved ..the epispde pluss..all fab songss and shayari’s!
It is fabulous dear… Eagerly waiting for the Aru confession…
Amazing update dear.. loved it..
Superb update
well done bachha… but some stuffs are not clear yet… like the way family is making aaru understand… ant today the conversations are not clear… do work on that… some clarity is yet to be done… dunno why but you seem to be in panic or some busy mind… calm yourself and do read this chappy and it will be good for your improvement. .. all the best
Ya di you are right I was just in some mess and I think so I messed this up completely and I take your suggestion and I am super glad that you pointed me out and understood the thing well.
You know this is the best thing about you that you not only motivate me but also tell me my mistakes. I will keep this point in mind and will hopefully improve this in next. Sorry for disappointing you and thank you sooo much for your suggestion I will surely re read this one.
Hi sweety ??
If i was at aru’s place the moment the light fell on him I would have ran and hugged him…I think you would also do the same ?????omg eventhough rudy didn’t have scenes….that sentence..he is omkara singh oberoi and can do anything and also mahi telling that before he starts….I loved it????
LUNCH?????poor aru she would have hated that word….
And on that letter…that’s omkara he can’t express himself with songs when his words are so strong?????
You know I already lov omkara…on reading your ff now it’s tripled….
Lov you sweetheart ?????
omadhya part was awesome i the way om expressed himself was awesome and rudy part was hillariours waiting for next part