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Om- Shivay ur hand is bleeding. Gauri bring first aid box quickly
Shivay- holding Anika picture I’m fine om. I’m worried for Anika I don’t know where she’s
Om- Shivay Anika bhabi will be fine don’t worry
Shivay- see frame of Anika pic is broken and Dadi says na it’s not good sign
Pinky- OMM Shivay when u start trusting these facts that manhoos did black magic on my son. Shivay u r not any ordinary person u r Shivay Singh Oberoi
Shivay- just stay quite Pinky Singh Oberoi don’t say anything bad about Anika otherwise I’ll forget the relation u have with me
Pinky crying – see shakti g now for that drama queen he’s talking to me in this tone and calling me by my name. Shivay I’m ur maa how can u do this with me did u forgot what she did with u
Shakti- Pinky it’s enough now can’t u see Shivay condition he’s worried and u again started ur maa drama. Come with me.
Sorry maa g ( devi g) she’s mad i think I should take her back to Oberoi mansion she don’t deserve to be here.
Pack ur bag Pinky
Pinky- now u too started Shakti g. I’m going from here
Gauri- Bhavay contact Anika di
Bhavay- Gauri di, di is not receiving call
Devi g – see I’ve told u na it’s not good.
Shivay- don’t worry Dadi Anika is fine
Devi g- u r saying this when u r the reason behind Anika condition just go to ur room I don’t want to see ur face
Dadi- devi g relax Anika is tigeress now come let’s perpare “sargi” for ur Gauri and Bhavay
Jhanvi- yes maa both are worried and Anika too won’t like that because of her. Her sisters and Dadi are worried
Devi g- yes jhanvi beta u r right. My Anika won’t like this and she’s my tigeress. Go Gauri and Bhavay
Killer- ma’am I’m near her farm house and peeking eye on her tomoorow morning u will get the news
Ragini- not morning but in eveng when it’s going to be karwa chauth night in Rajput Mansion with special gift from me let Anika enjoy the last night of her life
Killer- as u say but don’t do any hanky-panky I want what I demanded
Ragini- O just shut up I’m give u more that ur month so just do ur work and get lost from there
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Sargi time
Bhavay- woke up and called everyone
Shivay- come Bhavay I’ve perpare sargi for all of us
Dadi- for all of us Billu. U r also fasting. Mera billu ishqbaaz ban gya hai hahaha
Shivay- Dadi when wife can keep fast for there husband then why can’t husband keep
Pinky- but ur single na so then from whom u r keeping it
Shivay- none of ur business mom
Tej- good morning every1
Rudy- dad how come u woke up
Tej- actually I’m also fasting for my jhanvi
Rudy- naughty Tej Singh Oberoi
Tej- frown Rudy
Rudy- sorry dad
Tej- hahaha Rudy I was joking
Jhanvi- there’s ur sargi Gauri and Bhavay caressing their face beta eat well after that u won’t be able to eat and accessories are in ur room and u have to wear them
Shivay thinking- Anika is fasting for me
Om- Shivay what r u thinking?
Shivay- Anika
Pinky- fuming in the corner
Dadi- Pinky don’t u want to do sargi come here
Pinky- g mummy g
After sargi
All left for their respective rooms except Shivay
Shivay- Anika I’m missing u alot every1 is having their respective soulmates with them but I’m alone Anika I need u I know u also need me. Please come back
Anika- wearing spectacles and pov I won’t ever get back to u never in this janam nor in any other
Shivay- looking moon and imagining Anika face in it.
Shivay smiling in himself and having flashback of how Anika slapped bundle of notes on his face and broke the windscreen of car. Tadibaaz bill ? I love u Anika
Anika- I hate him
Ramu kaka- beta sleep now u r working since long time rest beta see ur eyes are swell too
Anika- kaka why u woke up I’m fine and habitual of this
Ramu kaka- shall I bring something for u
Anika- nodded no
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Morning time
Ramu kaka- called devi g
Devi g- hello ramu kaka why u called me?
Ramu kaka- maata g Anika
Devi g- what Anika, Anika is there on farm house, she’s fine na give fone to her
All like ants gather near devi g while listening to Anika name ( is anika sugar hahah)
Bhavay- Anika di fone
Shivay- heart beat increases
Ramu kaka- maata g Anika beti came yesterday to farm house I called u because since last day she’s working, not eaten anything and didn’t sleep her eyes r swell i told her to rest but didn’t listen to me and she’s still working
Devi g- thanks God she’s fine and she’s their i was worried for her give fone to her
Shivay pov- now I’m hundred percent sure Anika has kept
Anika- Ramu kaka, ramu kaka bring my green tea
Shivay- what she’s not fasting ( eyes become watery)
Ramu kaka- ok maata g Anika beti is calling me she asked for green tea and I called u
Devi g- ok ramu kaka and thanks for telling me and now I’m relief she’s fine
Gauri- di is gone to farm house
Devi g- yes and now start the rest preparation I’m happy that she’s there
Om- Rudy have u heard Anika bhabi didn’t kept karwa chauth vart for Shivay
Rudy- Shivay bhaiya is hurt but not more than Anika di. Lets go O and pamper our ladies
Om- Gauri do u need any help
Gauri- no omkara g thanks u rest u r fasting na
Om- u r too fasting na
Gauri- Omkara g it’s ur first experience not mine and u know i always kept karwa chauth vart for u
Om- for me always what u mean
Gauri- folding her arms around omkara arms because I knew that shankar bhagwan g has send u for me I always dream about zulfi singh Oberoi it was just ur picture was not clear to me but see today u r infront of me and dreams come true
Om- wow I’m impressed chullbul
Gauri- don’t call me chullbul please
Om- then what should I call u hotty or babes
Gauri- Aww Omkara g ur really cheap
Rudy- giggled not only cheap but maha cheap challu cheez hai om
Om- tuh phir aa gaya
Gauri- ran away from there
Bhavay- I’ve challenged Rudy that I won’t eat anything but I’m hungry and these eggs are calling me
Rudy- so quietly have them i won’t tell any1
Bhavay- u r keeping an eye on me
Rudy- no i was just looking after u that r u fine that’s it and come to distract your attention lets plan something for tonight
Bhavay- nervously what for tonight?
Rudy- Bhavay don’t fire the bullet on mean i don’t have cheapde thoughts in my mind but I they are in ur mind u can share with me
Bhavay- hit on Rudy chest
Rudy- ouch Bhavay i was saying some dance practice. Let’s go and in this way day will pass soon
Shivay crying- in Dadi lap
Dadi- Shivay why u r crying
Shivay- Dadi Anika haven’t kept karwa chauth for me
Dadi- puttar this time u hurt her heart she’s angry with u and this vart is important i can understand but don’t bother about it u know u both are made for eachother and u relation is like “Flower and Thorn”
Shivay- what u mean?
Dadi- like flower are not without thorn and flowers look more beautiful when thrones are with it. These thrones are not attached to flowers to hurt them but they are there to protect them so that no one can pluck them.
Where flower is also not awear about this
Shivay- dadi phool murjha gaya hai aur khantaye khuch bhi nahe kar paa rahey
Dadi- got speechless
Pinky- Ragini is not doing anything I myself have to do something
Nurse- Shail come here have these medicines
Shail- no i won’t have them call Anika di
Pinky- mind click and pov Shail and she smrik
Shivay- Shail come here and give these medicines to me
Nurse- take this
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7:30 pm
Anika- was busy with some work
Ramu kaka- beta I’m coming in hour I’m near by to collect some grocery. Lock the door from inside or shall I lock it from outside
Anika- no I’ll lock it. Anika head was again roaming and things were getting blur
Lawyer- called Anika and told her that custody is on SSO name and it will take time to
Anika- got angry and ask how it can be it was not on his name. Do what were it’s take but I need the custody
Lawyer- let me talk to his lawyer
Anika- shouted Shivay Singh Oberoi and her head start aching
Killer- was keeping eye on Anika and he step in and turn off the lights
Anika- got scared and she had the flashback of how in dark Vikarm hugged him and Shivay start throwing his arrows on her
Anika- whose there? And she start stepping
Killer- to scare her more start knocking the table and start running after her
Anika- head was aching badly and things were getting blur so she fall down
Killer- attack stabbed on Anika leg
Anika- did feel it’s pain but she felt something stabbed in her leg. She tried to get up but due to weakness she was not able
Rajput Mansion
Rajput and Oberoi ladies wearing red and black sarees with matching jewelry
Oberoi men wearing black sharwani
There in RM was all lighted and guests start coming but whole mansion was missing Anika
Shivay- was waiting for Anika and was contionusly looking towards door
Rudy- to chill the environment start singing
Mmmhhmhmm
Yoon shabnami pehale nahi thi chandini
Chand woh bharma gaya, tujko dekha tho sharma gaya
Woh churane laga hai nazar
Yoon shabnami pehale nahi thi chandini
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Om too start singing
hooho Yoon shabnami pehale nahi thi chandini
Chand woh bharma gaya, tujko dekha tho sharma gaya
Woh churane laga hai nazar
Yoon shabnami
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Gauri and Bhavay stepping down and looking stunning
Omru start singing together while looking their lady love
Dehko chaand aaya, chaand nazar aaya
(Dehko chand aaya, chaand nazar aaya
Aaya aaya aaya chaand aaya sharmaya
Ha ji ha aaya aaya, aah aah ji aaya sharmaya)
And all completed there karwa chauth rituals
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(Shivay with watery eyes looking towards moon singing)
Tu bhi aaja, saawariya
(Anika- was breathing heavily and was running)
(aaya aaya aaya dehko chaand nazar woh aaya
dehko chaand nazar dehko dehko ji
chaand nazar woh aaya
sharmaya aaya aaya chaand aaya sharmaya)
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(Shivay imagining Anika and caressing her face sings )
Dheere dheere aake hawa gunguna ke
Har khabar de tumhari
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(Tej- singing )
Kaisa yeh nasha hai, nazar mein gula hai
Har ghadi hai khumari
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(Rudy- singing and swinging Bhavay in arms)
Nashe mein kadam mere udar kabhi idar
Gum sum nazar, jaye kidhar
Kho gaye tujh mein hum is kadar
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(Anika- faints , blood oozing from leg and wounds on her face and hands.)
Some1 beat the killer took Anika in arms drive off. Anika u r save my bacha I’m ur dad nothing will happen to u soon we will reach Rajput Mansion ( dev Singh Rajput)
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(All with their respective soulmates singing )
Yoon shabnami pehale nahi thi chandini
ohhoo Yoon shabnami pehale nahi thi chandini
Chand woh bharma gaya, tujko dekha tho sharma gaya
Woh churane laga hai nazar
Yoon shabnami
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(Shivay singing )
Saawariyaa….. Tu aajaaa
Saawariyaa….
Shivay felt Anika prencenes
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Dev- step in holding Anika in arms and shouted maa
All turned back and were shocked to see Anika in dev arms
Shivay- Anikaaaaaa
Dev- laid Anika on sofa an
Devi g- crying what happened to Anika dev. Tell me
Dev- pov the whole incident
Anika- coughing
Shivay- made Anika to drink water ( karwa chauth)
(Anika haven’t sipped green tea)
Gauri- Dadi blood is oozing from Anika di leg and see wounds on her
Dev- called the doctor
Shivay- crying Anika
Bhavay- Anika di. crying
Shivay- took Anika in arms and laid her in guest room
Dr- did the bandage and ask them to give proper rest to Anika
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All step out of room except Shivay
Shivay- kissing Anika wounds. Why Anika why u didn’t call me when u were in trouble. U used to call me whenever u were in trouble but why not today tell me who did this to u I’ll kill that person. Hug Anika tightly and crying see u got so weak and pale caressing Anika face.
Om and Gauri- join hands in front of all guests and requested them to leave
Devi g- who’s after my daughter life what’s her sins that she has to face this all everytime
Dev- don’t worry maa I won’t leave him who did this with daughter of Dev Singh Rajput
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Percape Shail is missing
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Do mention ur favourite moment guys
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Guys I’m literally hurt from such a low responses nobody comments nor like my fiction it took me whole day and night to think and write such a stuff that u guys would like but I’m hopeless now ??
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No dear, i really love ur ff .Plzz don’t discontinue that. Amazing one . Hope u know me . Something went wrong with my connection so i didn’t comment with my telly account .Post soon dear. one more question can we be friends.
feeling like killing pinky by kidnapping sahil anika will come there she will kill anika I think pinky will be thrown out
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It is nice…