Hii. This is DevSona and I’m here with an introduction of my first ever five-shot. This idea came to my mind after reading one quote somewhere in Google and then I immediately took a decision to write it down…As you know that I’ve too much of pending ff’s here and I couldn’t trouble myself by adding one more to the list. So, I came to a conclusion of not making it a ff, but a five shot. Hope you like the intro.
(In the way of) Life and Death: Introduction
Dear Stranger,
I am lost.
And it hurts.
I am addicted to the pain.
Suicide is all I seem to think about.
I don’t know who you are and you don’t know who am I. Trust me, you don’t even have to. I’m writing this because I’m bored. I’m bored with my life and now I want to end it. Sorry. I know how you would feel while reading this, but please don’t take it seriously. Nobody in real life takes me seriously. You should have been thinking how I got your address, right? Guess what? I came up with that all by myself. And I don’t even know if this is even a valid one or not? If it is, and if you are reading this, please don’t feel bad about me. I am a loser. And the proof of that is the letter in your hand. I don’t even have a courage to say all this to someone I know. I’ve lost all my hope. I want someone to need me. Is that so bad? I want someone to love me, but maybe I’m just too f***ing complicated for anyone to love. Oh God! I’m too bad in explaining things. I have been hiding what I was feeling, but now I’m tired of holding this inside my head. I spent all my life, saying to myself that all was fine, but now I’m realizing that it isn’t the truth. And I don’t think I can handle this anymore.
Here are the reasons why I want to suicide –
-My parents hate me.
-My boyfriend cheated on me last night.
-My best friend thinks that I’ve broken her trust.
-My sister believes that I am the one to destroy her life.
And here is the reason why I don’t want to suicide-
-I want to live.
Yours strangely,
S.
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How is it? Don’t worry if you can’t get the plot accurately, because it’s just a filler. You’ll understand it after the first chapter, right now you just have to comment and let me know if you want me to continue this FS or not. I’ll only continue it if I get a sufficient number of supporters, or else I’ll drop this idea right here. Thank you so much to all the readers/silent readers of Ishq F(o)re(ver) and Living A Lie for encouraging me through your great response to write it. I’m truly grateful to all of you for doing that.
-With Love,
DevSona.
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You can check my other known works here :
Ishq F(o)re(ver)- A DevAkshi/Shraman FF : https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=ishq+f%28o%29re%28ver%29
Living A Lie – A DevAkshi FF : https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Living+A+Lie
Competion @Janmashtami – A DevAkshi/Shraman OS : https://www.tellyupdates.com/competitionjanmashtami-os-kuch-rang-pyar-ke-aise-bhi-ek-duje-ke-vaaste/
28 Comments
Its seriously complicated..bt m eager to knw wat actually has happend…whse letter is it??dev or sona or its devsona’s….
Update soon..
thank you so much for your comment. And I know that it is confusing, but I wanted it to be like this 😉 BTW the letter is written by Sonakshi [I’ve given the hints for that, like boyfriend…and then the last S.] …I’ll not tell you anything more than that. 🙂 😀
Ya…last S….bt sona’s best friend ws d reason I wsnt sure abt hr…its compicated, mysterious n making me curious…n ya remaining thng I vl extract frm frst chapter wch I hope u post soon…
Yeah! and I’m too eager to post the first chap as soon as I complete it 🙂 🙂 Thanks again…
Interesting nd i would love to read it. So post soon Egarlyyy waitingggg. With loads of love Erina here
Thank u so much Erina. I’m glad that you liked it. 😀
seems interesting……..
post asap……….
Thanks Pooja 😀 I’m so happy that you liked it. I’ve never imagined you to comment, because I know that you’re more of a Swaragini fan 😀 😀 Thank u so much again for your support 🙂
aisa kuch bhi nhi h ……. 😉 😉
i also like devakshi yr…..
waise how u knoe a swaragini fan 😉 😉
Waaaaooow…look at it man! It’s so damn complicated and this thing is surely getting me goosebumps! Oh di! What have you put us into? You already had been on a roll with those two amazing ffs of yours and now this FS! Seems like you really do want to nail it in every genre!??
Who has written this letter? Is it our Dear Dev or Smart Sona or is it you??????
NOTE: EXCITEMENT OVERLOADED!!!!!
I am soooo damn eager to learn about this dude! You’re seriously killing it!
So now we all have the following on demand:
1) Isha F(o)re(ver)
2) Living a Lie
3) Life and Death
And I hope all of them are uploaded at the soonest?????? Hehehehe??
Your title gets me all freaked out! I hope neither of our two lovebirds die!
But no worries, we’ll all be waiting for you!☺️☺️☺️
Please do try to post suuuuuuppppeerrr duuuuuppppeeerrrr soon!
Love ya!?????
Anshu! Thank u so much for this sweetest comment 😀 I’m more than happy to know that you liked it…and the letter is written Sonakshi. I’ll not reveal more suspense than that 😉 wait for the first chap..&.please don’t praise me this much. You’re the one more talented than me. At the age of 11/12, I couldn’t even think of writing a single para and you are toh writing such a beautiful story…Way go girl…keep writing 🙂 😀
Your welcome di!
Now it comes to me that the letter has been written by Sonakshi. Oh no! Does that mean that’s it’s Sonakshi trying/wanting to commit suicide? I hope my assumptions are proved false in the coming chapters..
However, please don’t forget that you’re the one from whom I get inspired to write?? You and a few more dear writers out here inspire me and make me feel the urge to write☺️☺️??
Besides, since we are friends, we shouldn’t compare ourselves, should we? Nope, I think not??
And trust me, I badly love your writing and you sure do leave me speechless??
Love you!???
I can understand it, but not totally..N I don’t know if I’m right or wrong..d letter is from Sona right!? D first episode itself is intense..
Thank u so much Aarti for your comment. You got that one correct, the letter is surely written by Sonakshi…more you’ll find in next chap…And I’m glad u liked 😀
Plzzz continue its quite interesting???
Post soon?
And plzz post living a lie too?
Love Love?
Thank u so much 😀 😀 happy that you find it interesting 🙂 And yaa I’ll post L-A-L soon.
Yeh koi poochane ki baat hai………obviously start it dear……..?????????❤???????………it was superb and ful of suspense…….I’m desperately waiting for it………and ur ff’s also…..????????❤?????
thank u so much Maleeha for your support…par kya karun poochna toh padta hai. Plot thoda sa diff and complicated hai that’s why. But I’m happy that you liked it 😀 🙂
Pls continue. It seems to be very interesting. Looking forward to read it. Post soon. ??????
Thank u dolly 🙂 Glad you’re interested… 😀
Nice
Thanks Ali for commenting 😀 I’m glad that u liked…
Ausm….??… Intresting… Sucide ?… Continue this one… Post soon..?
Loved It! And Please … Update Soon! 😀
Wow will be waiting for the story soon and actually all three of them.. Post soon
Well i did not understand much …..but i would love to know what will happen next
update asap
Loved it. Post soon n yeah excited fr d first chapter.
Status- Yeah we start dying ,d second we come in this world. Life is just like a candle which burns, gives light and then ends. We say we are 10 years old, 20 years old….yes it feels our age is increasing bt in reality it is decreasing with every second.