Hi guys ,I am kaya
some of you may know….
I am a die hard fan of edkv……but the ongoing track is just boring me……so I thought to write a ff for edkv
hope you guys like it……………………here we go
part 1
IT WAS A DREADFUL NIGHT AND WAS RAINING HEAVILY. A MAN WAS DRIVING THROUGH A QUITE ROAD,JUST THEN HIS CAR HALTED..
HE TRIED TO RESTART HIS CAR BUT ALL IN VAIN…HE STEPPED OUT OF HIS CAR AND WENT FORWARD TO OPEN THE HOODS SO HE COULD TRY TO FIX THE PROBLEM…BUT HE WAS NOT ABLE TO FIX THE PROBLEM..HE KNEW THAT HIS CAR NEEDED A MECHANIC ……BUT WHERE WOULD HE FIND A MECHANIC IN SUCH A DREADFUL ,PLACE. HE WONDERERD WHETHER HE WOULD EVEN GET A LIFT. HE WENT BACK IN HIS CAR AND SAT AND TOOK HIS PHONE TO MESSAGE ONE OF HIS SECTERARY….BUT HIS PHONE SWITCHED OFF……….”OH..DAMMIT”HE SHOUTED..”WHAT THE HELL IS JUST HAPPENING”..
HE RESTED HIS HEAD ON THE HEAD REST OF HIS SEAT…..HE SPOKE HIMSELF “WHAT A WEIRD DAY ITS BEEN” AND OPENED THE WINDOWS OF HIS CAR AND CLOSED HIS EYES..
SUDDENLY WHEN HE HEARD A SCREAM COMING FROM THE SURROUNDINGS…HE STEPPED OUT OF THE CAR TO SEE FROM WHERE THIS VOICE WAS COMING ……HE SAW IN ALL THE DIRECTIONS AND SAW A GIRL RUNNING TOWARDS HIM . THE GIRL WAS WEARING A LOOSE BLUE TOP AND BLACK JEGGINGS….HER HAIR WERE WET AND LEFT LOOSE…SHE WAS NOT WEARING MAKEUP BUT SHE LOOKED EXTREMLY BEAUTIFUL IN HAT ATTIRE…HE WAS MESMERIZED BY HER BEAUTY……BUT HE NOTICED SOME GOONS FOLLOWING HER AND SHE LOOKED EXTREMLY TERRIFIED….SO MANY QUESTIONS AROSED IN HIS MIND….THE GIRL STOPPED SEEING HIM AND HID BEHIND HIM………….
And that’s for now…………I know it is really small and sorry for any typos……..please comment…..please
and tell do you guys like it ……..please I need comments.
34 Comments
Kaya tumne toh Puri Maya hi play di
Hey,Shramanangel
I am Kaya only …….no Maya …
I guess you have misunderstood……..
So let me clear… that I am Kaya and this is my ff…
I didn’t misunderstood you misunderstood I said that u changed the whole plot
Hey , sorry
Actually I misinterpreted you
my Hindi is really very week……
So just don’t mind and keep reading my ff……
And sorry once again….
🙁
Ohhooo..wat a starting…!
Loveddd it…soooo muchhh..
Post very very soon..
Will be waiting..
Happy janmashtami….
Love u..
???
Thanks a lot….. I post soon……
And happy janmasthmi….
kaya !!
loved it so much..
post soon
-nikita
Thanks….l will post soon..
Very nice
Thanks..a lot
Kaya it was too good
Interesting
It was cool
Post soon
Will be waiting
Take care
Love u
Thanks…..a lot…..
I will surely post soon
Love you too
Nice and interesting kaya and i love ur name kaya
Thanks….a lot……
Hey kaya………..!! Pehchana…?? Maria here…… 🙂
Yr this ff is awesome…….frst ep was great…loved it to d core….!! N i think its shr n of it sour sumo…..who ws running….excited to c shr in action…..i hope he wil beat the goons….!! 😀
Egrlyy waiting fr d nxt ep…….!!! Plz plz plz post asap asap asap !!
Love u kaya…..!!
Take care….!!
Thanks..a lot……….
Maria….pehchaan Liya…tumhe
Well I will surely try to post soon…..
Hey….
It’s so sweet…
Filmy…feeling dhilayi hai tumney..mujhey..
Wana read more..pls..continue???
Thanks..a lot..
I will post soon.
Hey kaya the epi is superb
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Post it asap
Thanks..a lot
I will surely post soon..
hello Kaya di
wat an amazing epi…
isn’t the girl Sumo….and the boy is Shravan..??????
nice strt romance frm the beginning
plsss pst soon
di do u know hindi..????? plss don’t feel bad I just asked cs u didn’t understand Riya (Shramasangel) dis cmnt so sry if u felt bad…
lots of love- Neeti
Thanks…a lot
Actually my hindi is really very week…..so I just misunderstood the comment………
Woho……Beautiful starting. Sounds sooo cool. Shravan having love at 1st sight. Awwwwww……Really excited for next part. Post soon.
Lots of love
Ariana
Thanks a lot I will post soon……..
Hi Kaya,
I like your ff.
Now I am your great fan.
Ohh……….so sweet….. thanks..
Love you
Nice start. Post soon ?
Thanks…….
I will surely post soon….
OMG !!!! What an ep yr .. just awesome .. ???
Nd sorry for being late .. ??
Take care..
Thanks a lot for your previous comment…..
Love you
NYC story kaya lyked it
Thanks a lot…….