Niharika : So , that’s it ?
Hiten : We know it better . Then what ?
Niharika ; Never thought this trip will be these much memorable for me….
Hiten : Niharika ….. This photo
Niharika : Through your eyes , I mean through your photographic frames I looks much beautiful , Hey naa ?
Hiten : I am sorry…
Niharika : At least now can you just take me there ? I want to wish her all the best . I mean your fiancee….
Hiten : You really want to come …
Niharika : Don’t worry I won’t tell anything to her…..Before parting ways to our destination just want to meet her. Please…Hiten..
Hiten : I don’t want to give more pain to you .
Niharika : But I would love to have that pain as it’s given by you whom I ….
Hiten : Niharika !!
She hugged him emotionally
Hiten : Niharika !!
Niharika ; I really want to meet her….Please…
Hiten agrees by nodding his head. They both sat in the train and recalled the moments they spend together.
Niharika : This Goa trip is so wonderful
Hiten ; Yeah Niharika. I feels to say your name much louder at this view point.
Niharika : Me too Hiten.
Both of them called each other’s names louder and enjoyed the moment.
Ho ankhon se hi dikhta hai Dil waala pyaar ve,
Duniya se darti na Karun izhaar ve,
Tere vi ta sar chadheya Main jaan di aa, pehchaan di aa.
Sun janiya, main jaan di aa.
Ud di phiran main lagge Kujh khoya-khoya ve Kade vi na mainu aidan mehsoos hoya ae,…
They both went for shopping together and enjoyed a lot.
He showed the photographs which he taken in his camera to her
Niharika ; Oh My God !! You clicked that one also ?
Hiten ; You know what photos should look always as natural . Because each frame has a lot to tell..
Niharika : Do the frames speak more or your eyes speak more ?
Hiten : Better you find it ..
They both looked each other intensely
Teriyan gallan de wich
Koyi gal adhoori ae
Das de tu mainu teri kedi majburi ae,… –
Khaamosh akhan ki ne kehndiyan,
Main jaan di aa, haye pehchan di aa….
Slowly both of them turned their lips towards each other’s lips passionately
But soon Hiten turned away from her .
Niharika ; Hiten do you also feel the same ?
Hiten ; Yes.
Niharika : Perhaps in mood we both ….
Hiten ; I need to go …
Niharika ; Hiten!!
Hiten shows his hand and Niharika sees the ring in his mid-finger.
Hiten ; I can’t run away from the reality.
Niharika interrupts ….It’s okay…..At least we didn’t confessed our feelings and there is no need of worrying with a broken heart right ?? Two passengers who met during a vaccation trip in Goa …They travelled together , spend time together and finally they are on their ways to their destinies…..
Hiten : Niharika ….
Niharika : Please….Leave me alone..
He looked her sadly and walks away
The Flash back ends.
Hiten ; We have reached at my hometown .
Niharika wiped her tears and managed to make a smile
Niharika ; Let’s meet her .
Hiten takes Niharika to home.
Why you are so late Virat ? I waited you for so long.
Niharika gets shocked to see a girl coming towards Hiten and calling him as Virat
Hiten ; Amrita ……My train was late….
She started crying bitterly and Hiten sat beside her.
Amrita : I don’t like that doctor. Those theray sessions…
Hiten : But Amrita that’s for the sake of your health…
Hiten ; Don’t cry Amrita. Everything will be alright.
He wiped her tears
Suddenly Amrita started feeling dizzy ….She was finding hard to breathe…
Hiten ; Amrita !! Amrita !! Niharika please take the medicines from that drawyer..Please…
Niharika brings the medicines.. Hiten make her to have her medicines . Slowly she felt asleep.
Hiten lifted her in his arms and made her to lie down at her bed
Niharika : Hiten !! Yeh…
Hiten ; Amrita ….My twin brother Virat’s fiancee ….Virat is no more …..And Amrita believes me as Virat ….This ring is not mine ….But now I don’t have any other option rather than wearing it ….Because I lost my brother and I can’t bear one more loss…..
To be continued..
18 Comments
I am surprised that you posted my dream arjit sanaya story now.i am surprised to see sriti also here.thank you very much.i can’t tell you how happy I am.
Hiten said this photo.was Hiten gifting that photo to niharika?niharika saying that she looks more beautiful through his photographic frames was nice.
Hiten niharika moments were so nice.loved Hiten saying that each frame has a lot to say and niharika asking whether his photo frames or his eyes speak more was nice.
Hiten niharika’s incomplete kiss was romantic.hiten showing her his ring hinting that he is committed was heart breaking.i am surprised that niharika expressed her wish to see his fiancee before she goes.surprising that amrita is hiten’s twin virat’s fiancee and after his death she considers hiten as virat and the ring also belonged to virat actually.why did amrita faint and what medicine is she taking?is she taking medicines for mental illness?perfect pics.
You have used arjit sanaya’s pics from the short film butterflies also.have you watched that short film?
Yes Hiten gifted the photo to Niharika. In song also there was a scene where Arjit gifts Sanaya a photo and afterwards that she hugs him emotionally. I didn’t made any change in that scene because I loved it. I haven’t watched butterflies film. Thanks a lot for commenting.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTG7a0msCnY
This is the short film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcVphENhUV4
can u plz write a 3 shots on this?I am curious to know its further story and ending.
For the second one you will get full story in Kukku FM. It’s an app and you need to install it for listening whole stories of pocket FM. So perhaps the whole story would have already telecasted there. Regarding first one are you sure only these much is here? It’s been in episodes so may be the continuation will be find in next episode.
This is only a trailer.Not any episode.
I dont have the patience to listen to the full story as it has got more than 100 or 200 episodes.That’s why i requested u to complete the story using ur imagination in the form of a short story.
You mean the first one.. Right? What about second one? Do you want me to write for both?
First one is a short film which was completed.
I want a short story on sharad tanya sharma one plz
I am confused. Because I hardly wrote on that zone where the hero is so much aggressive. So don’t know would I be able to write on that theme.
you can show how he changes.maybe only in the 1st part he will be aggressive.after that u can use ur imagination and continue the story.
That’s okay. But I haven’t tried these type of stories earlier. Anyways I will think about it.
thank u very much for deciding to break the comfort zone and write on this kuku fm plot.
https://youtu.be/IMNxWnQkxiU?si=b1S1yaoFXwhhLMH8
This is a song from Naalo Unna Prema. Plot is available in wikipedia and if possible please write on it after finishing your current stories.
Regarding comfort zone whenever you suggest me to write I always wonder why you are telling me to write on that which I felt as tough. But later somehow I manages to write on any of them even if all are not possibleha ha ha… Pavitram happened like that only.
https://youtu.be/wRsVg-NmVx8?si=wx7_49GoB02YcGZb
This is the climax portion. You can make changes according to your wish.
Pavitram was nice.now my requests are sharad tanya ff and summer in bethlehem(Akshay shrenu Leenesh).
I will write.do u have any options for the star cast or any pair is okay for u?
Any pairs are okay. Completely your choice. Summer in Bethlehem.. My preference is Junooninyat pairs. But if I find the plot won’t suits them then I will try the pairs you suggested. Sharad Tanya – FF I will try to start soon.
Just now I remembered that long ago I had already written a short story on this movie (my friend gave this plot)on vikram,adaa,jennifer,arjun bijlani.do u want me to post it here for you?
Yeah sure. Please post it.
Plz try to write summer in bethlehem on shrenu. Because somebody was writing it on rikara rudra.but it got deleted.thats why I requested you to write it on shrenu itself.since you wrote many rikara ffs I suggested akshay.