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Weekend Shots by Verna- Journey of Omkara’s life Part 19

Hello my darling readers.. I’m really feeling gud after reading ur lovely comments and u my naughty sissy Saku.. ur mischief has gone beyond limits and u too have to do it with me (read my last post’s comments).. this part is especially dedicated to Staicey, my new cute little sister.. I’m really grateful to ur love.. because u spent ur valuable time to register urself just to send me message for telling to continue writing my WS.. I really started this for u again dr.. also thank u Shraddha, Kiya, Alekhika, Saku, Sangeeth and all others who supported me and cheered me for writing this. This is dedicated for u guys.. and take sneak peak into part 18
http://www.tellyupdates.com/weekend-shots-verna-journey-omkaras-life-part-18/

Let’s move to Part 19..
Om presented her his specially made bouquet and Gauri liked it and thanked him. They both have an eye lock. Gauri and Om lost in each other in dusky evening’s golden glow. Om was mesmerized to see his love glowing like a white lilly where dusky sun rays fall on her and give golden outline to her. While Gauri get lost in his glowing black eyes that shines like a star because of facing sun opposite to him. They admire each other. Dusk falls and night occupies the sky, still they r not able to take their eyes off each other. Suddenly they r disturbed by a sound. They startled and then found it was Om’s mobile disturbed their moment. It was Rudra who called him and enquired about his journey. He disconnects the call by saying he is busy. Rudra makes face and go crying to Shivay to complain about Om.

Om and Gauri look at each other and smile. Om ask, How r u Gauri? I think u r very much ok and comfortable here. Gauri wanted to play with him and reply with full attitude she say, yes.. I’m really good here. There is always positivity around me here. She keep praising and Om just looking at her attitude and her innocent talk with smile in.his face. Om say, its enough Gauri.. u have praised this life a lot.. it seems like u r enjoying a lot here than being with us, he questioned her sarcastically and smirks seeing her caught face. Gauri was speechless and have no answer because she didn’t mean it. She just tries to manage situation. Gauri ask, how was ur journey? When did u reach Dubai? Om smile and say, it was good.. just now I landed and came to see u, he stopped suddenly and lost in her widened eyes. Gauri was amazed to here this. They have an eye lock. Sathiya plays.

Om say, so today is Thursday.. Friday and Saturday we have holidays.. what’s up for holiday? Gauri think and say, let’s decide it tomorrow.. now we can go home and u get freshen up.. come. She turns to go but Om stops her and say, Gauri.. I’ll stay alone.. We both can’t stay together.. right? Gauri understood what he mean and sarcastically say, If u wish that.. then u can do, she turn and smile. Om was stunned for her answer and attitude. Om wanted her to talk cheesy to make him go with her to her apartment but he didn’t expect this answer from her. He thinks, This much attitude.. even after all this much distance and missing days.. Gauri.. Omkara Singh Oberoi doesn’t give up so easily. He say, ok Gauri I’ll go and freshen up. Will come to pick u for dinner.. be ready. He said this in go and didn’t wait for her reply and to see his face, he moved from that place in his Chiron. Gauri was dumbstruck by his act and before she could realise this and turn to see him, he went missing with his car. She say, Omkara.. Don’t underestimate Gauri.. I’ll never give up so easily.. she walk from there.

Om reached Oberoi condo that is located near Burj Khalifa. The Oberoi condo (If anyone don’t know what is Condo.. pls Google “con**minium”) is Very big and one of the well-known important business places in Dubai where there r many well know world grade companies under one roof. After reaching condos he crossed his office area and and moved to another part of the building to their apartment. It is a lavish and luxurious apartment with all top class facilities and wonderfully decorated interiors located in 24th floor of 30 storey building. It has a beautiful view of The Burj Khalifa Park and The Dubai fountain (also Google these 2 mentioned places my dr readers). Om called Shivay and his mom to inform about his arrival and he freshen up to go for dinner. Om was very excited about dinner with his love. He took special effort in looking handsome and hot. He wore his usual black suit and tied his hair. He left for Gauri’s place to pick her up.

On the way, Om called Gauri and ask, R u ready Gauri? I’m on the way.. I’ll reach there in 5mins. Gauri replied, I’m ready.. just 5mins.. u come to 6th floor F4 flat ok.. Om smiles and say, Girls never keep their word when it comes to make-up.. I think we’ll go for breakfast there and laughs teasingly. Gauri say, Oh just stop it Om just come upstairs and ends call. Om reached her apartment and rings doorbell. Gauri call him from inside. Om go and sit in sofa and say, R u ready Gauri? She replied, yeah.. just 5mins.. I’ll be there. Om smile and say, u said same 5 mins before 15mins Gauri.. I finished reading 2 magazines and still u r not here.. I said we have go for DINNER.. TONIGHT (mentioned that specially). He keep teasing her and Gauri counters him. Om say, its high time Gauri.. if u r not coming out in five secs then I’ll come in next sixth second. He starts counting 1.. 2… 3…. 4….. F I V E.. 5… he opened her room door and stunned by the view he saw.
Gauri was standing in front of her long sized mirror in Black Fit and Flare dress with Gold coated Earrings and loose bun hairstyle. She was standing with her Cheery Red lipstick in her hand.. she continued after killing his soul by her smile.. he was mesmerized to see her beautiful almond shaped smoky eyes concentrating on her lips filling with cherry color and lost in that view. Till then Om, who was teasing her was awestruck by her beauty and standing like something who can’t even close his eyes for a second and don’t want to miss her beauty view even for that milli second. Now Gauri finished her lip color and look at him in through mirror passing her eyes on him. She tease him saying, what happened sir.. till now u were blabbering something.. now why did u stop it? Om mutter and said, U r looking so gorgeous Gauri.. I didn’t know u r such.. he gasp as could not say a word anymore, his eyes bugle when she turned to him.

Gauri walks to him and ask, What happened boss? R u alright? Om who is still in mentally allure state by Gauri’s beauty, unknowingly say, U r looking very beautiful and then he come to sense. Gauri is stunned to hear this from Omkara and slightly blushes. Then she look at his eyes and say, I know with attitude. Om did not expect this from Gauri, he had something in his mind (u guys know that) but this touched his ego and he too have to show attitude now. He say, Hmmm so much attitude.. Gauri raises her head in pride and Om say, but I didn’t know u’ll show so much Tadi for a joke. Gauri shocked and turn to him and glares at him while Om was laughing out loud. She chase him to kill and he runs around the room to save himself. Gauri about to fall by getting struck by mat but Om holds her. They both loose balance and end up falling on couch. Gauri on top starts hitting him while Om admiring her. Gauri who saw Om silently admiring her gets some feel and blush. They both feel embarrassed in such position and get up. They face either sides. Gauri say, y did u run? Its because of u.. Om say, why did u chase? I ran because u chased. They both argue for sometime and Gauri say, because of u this (fall on couch) happened. Om say, I know this will happen and smile/ blush. Gauri think and ask, What? What did u say? Om gets shocked about what he said. He stammers..

Precap: Om and Gauri on dinner date. Om and Gauri dance in party. Gauri is amazed to see artist Omkara.

Important note.. pls read this down:
And I think this was quite big part after long time. I’m sorry for making late drs.. because I wanted to search about Dubai and give informations for u.. so it took time to write. Also thank u all again for making me write this again. As I told u earlier.. I’m making time to think and write a story for you guys.. its all for u.. But it really feel bad and sometimes I feel hurt if I don’t get comments.. sometimes I take long time to think very good and present a neat and perfect FF.. but I won’t get enough comment or encouragement from u.. it really makes me feel bad.. without any hesitation I say this now, yes I write FFs just for ur comments and ur suggestion on FF.. if u guys just read and go, it will be worth for u.. but what about me? How do I know whether u liked it or not? What will I think if I don’t get comments.. Just tell ur opinion about that part.. u guys take 10-15mins to read a FF.. same way pls spend 2 more mins to say ur views.. it helps me to develop myself and help to give u much better story. And sorry for long author note.. hereafter I’m not going to write such long author note.. I’ll just see how much response I get and I’ll decide to keep writing or end my FF. Because I’m feeling like I’m begging for comments and blackmailing or forcing u guys to comment for my FF. If u think so, really I’m not doing that.. and I don’t want such forced things from u. And now I promise u guys, that I’ll never force u to write comments for my FF.. its up to u.. I’ll check the response and decide either to write or end. Thank u for listening to my bakwaas.. take care guys.. love u all 🙂 🙂

Verna

I'm fun loving and day dreamer.. lost in my own dream world.. do support and read my FF.. happy reading time drs..

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