Hello my drs.. Thanks a lot for making me feel good for last part.. all of u gave tremendous response for me.. And few of u told me not to worry about comments.. let me clear u.. I don’t worry for Number of comments my drs.. I want ur participation in FF.. I want ur suggestion on upcoming parts.. so that I’ll will give ur wanted story line.. u too will feel like got what u want.. that’s all.. pls don’t misunderstand this.. Thank u Aashi, Staicey, Rasika, Saku, Dhar, Pallavi, Fffan1234, Nishi, Samm, Sara, Sashi, Uf, Nikitajai, babblu for ur lovely comments and Thanks to all other silent readers. Take sneak peak into last part
Part 19
Part 19
Let’s move to Part 20..
Om was caught by Gauri. He turns and stammer, wo.. wo.. actually.. I mean to say that, u will blame me for everything. He did sigh of relief. Gauri also bit tensed and wanted to change topic and say, ok we r getting late.. Let’s move. Om and Gauri was very silent in their car and reached hotel. They sit in their allotted seats in restaurant. They order food and have a talk. Gauri ask, so how is Rudy Annika Babhi Saumya and Shivay Bhaiya? Om say, they r good. She say, Varun went to London and Meenu is very busy with project there.. we three can’t even communicate well.. I miss them a lot, she felt little sad by missing her friends.
Om want to cheer her and ask, So what about ur new friends here? Gauri say, yeah they r good.. but u know na.. I’m a bit hesitant to talk free with new ppl.. I’m like a.. Om interferes and say, don’t tell me u r an Introvert (Means who is shy, self-centred ppl) because u talk a lot when u r really comfortable with ppl. Gauri smile and say, I’ll never say that.. I’m not an extrovert (Outgoing, very expressive person) too.. In between.. I can say I’m an Ambivert.. Om nods. Gauri say, Ambivert like u.. Om turns to her with surprise. He say, so u have checked out me and noticed many things about me.. right? Gauri say, Yes, like u did.. with pride and attitude. They both enjoy their attitude wala romance.
Then they have dinner. While having dinner they both admire each other and many unknown feelingsfeeling haunt them. They both feel to talk and ask lot of questions to each other, but something make them to stay quiet. They just enjoy their environment and their presence and smile. Om can’t stay quiet anymore and wanted to ask why she left him even when Gaurav cancelled his trip. He is confused how to start conversation. Gauri too wanted to know y he didn’t stop her when she left India. They both confuse more and don’t know how to start conversation and seen restless.
That time they saw a couple fighting with each other. When they listened to their conversation it was similar to theirs.
Boy: listen to me Laura.. it was just a misunderstanding..
Girl: NO.. I don’t want any explanation.. u didn’t do what I expected u should have done.. u cheated me.
B: but Laura listen to me once.. plzzzz. (With very sad and worried face)
G: (Who was stubborn and angry till then, slowly calm down and turn to him) Ok tell me…what u wanna tell Sam?
B: (He moves close to her and hold her hands) Laura.. I did not want to lose u.. Because we were not aware of our feelings at that time.. then how can I take advantage over u?
G: (thinks) But I was longing for u to stop me before I left u there. If u said just a word or did any signs of NO for my departure then I would have cancelled my trip. And this day may not have come (explained with sad face).
B: (Face down) Yes.. its my mistake.. I should have known about ur feelings and faced u whatever the situation was.. I’m sorry Laura (Becomes more more sad)
G: (Startled by his apologies, she run and hug him) No Sam.. its not just ur mistake.. I should have expressed my interest in u.. I failed to do that.. It was my mistake.. she hug him tight.
B: If we have talked about this earlier in our life.. we would not have suffered this much Laura.. Girl too accepted same.
They both talk about their povs and blame themselves. Gauri and Om r watching them like a picture/ film resembling their situation. They felt like they have learnt a lesson. Then they both look at each other and smile. That couple left that place. Now Om casually started their conversation with Gauri.
O: nice couple na Gauri?
G: yeah.. they love themselves a lot but failed to express it in time.
O: so communication gap is problem in any relationship.. right? Gauri nods.
O: Waise Gauri.. How do u manage here? I mean u so alone here.. u said u don’t have lots of friends too.. how can u be like this?
G: Initially I didn’t feel lonely Omkara.. I was determined to live here.. but time changed ( she think how she left Om in India in anger and how she missed him after few days).
O: Yeah.. I wanted ask u.. Y did u not cancel ur trip when Gaurav cancelled his trip?
G: (Speechless) wo.. woo.. actually Omkara.. I.. I.. I want to.. Umm
O: its ok if u don’t want to say.
G: No not like that Om.. I actually wanted to go to the next level in my career.. so..
O: so u left ur frnds and me.. u came to Dubai.. right?
G: (sadly) Yeah.. I have no other option.. everyone r busy with their life and I have no one to care about me.. My career will help me at any situation.. so I chose my career.
O: (got furious when she said she she have no one) Y did u think like that Gauri? Do u think I’m dead? Am I a stranger to u?
Gauri was shocked to see Om like this.. Om too felt what he said and stunned.
O: I mean to say that, me, Varun and Meenu and r all there for u..
G: (calms and bit sad) U guys r friends of me.. u too have personal life and here I to take care of myself. I can’t take chance by believing in others.
Om.was hurt by this.. but he understood her pain and insecurity because of her bitter past because of her parents and ex boyfriend. He thought to cure her insecurity.
Precap: Om and Gauri dance in party. Gauri amazed to see artist Omkara.
And thank u guys sorry for short update.. today my day is very hectic.. I have to finish my regular FF, trio FF and also this.. also manage my work.. its really such a tiring day.. Hope u guys understand me.. Suggestions and views r welcomed.. take care my drs.. love u all 🙂 🙂 🙂
32 Comments
Verna yaar lets do some fun with this couple , can you write some funny update where gauri drinks alcoholic drink without knowing to om , and then starts her childish activities where cute om is full on shock to see her ,,, and remember once someone wanted gauri and om to dance on “saree k falsa ” sooo now there is chance where gauri can do her item dance ,,, hmmm full on entertainment yaar them om will pamper her by seeing the way om cares for her ,,, she will say to om I have never seen moms love in my life but I think if mom was with me she will love and care me like you only,, and she tells many of her life’s experience where she missed her parents etc ….by listening this om eyes are failed with tears ,,,by thinking how much has gauri suffered in her life . later you fill if you like this further idea …
Wow.. Thanks a lot sara.. sure I’ll try to add this in upcoming part dr and keep suggesting ur ideas
loved gauri’s ans. although om was right, i expect the show’s gauri to also make decisions like this and think about herself when om is being so dense about, well… everything! the part with the other couple is also very nice. better late than never, right? 😉 😀 post next soon 🙂
Thank u samm.. even I want Gauri like this.. but in show they r spoiling it.. let’s see this bold Gauri here at least 🙂 🙂 keep supporting dr
loved it Verna di
awesome
I lov this Om who strives & fights for his love
update soon
Thank u Aashi keep reading dr
Loved the Om-Gauri conversation ?
Superb update!
Thank u so much neha.. keep reading 🙂 🙂
SUPERB VERNA….
Thank u pallavi keep reading dr
Nice epi. Waiting for next epi
Thank u.so much Shashi.. keep reading dr
This was nice…ur responses ideas related to rikara r always awesome dear….
Thanks to u for updating in spite of ur busy schedule….. waiting for ur coming updates?
Thank.u so much Shraddha.. and thank u for understanding dr 🙂 🙂
Nice.
Thanks a lot Nishi.. keep reading dr
Hello diii….it was just amazing episode….loved it???….
Nd like sara I also want to see talli gauri….plz if possible give us such cute scenes.. ..
Sure Saku.. already I’m writing such scenes 🙂 🙂
Loved to see u back again, u nailed it completely, plzz do post the next update ASAP
Sure dr.. keep reading
AWESOME AMAZING EXCELENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB???
Thanknu Uf.. keep reading dr
Hi Di…
Awesome update…..
Keep writing….
Never give up ok?
Thank u Staicey.. Keep reading and supporting dr 🙂 🙂
Awesome di…can’t comment in your previous parts and in ff …..I read last two chapters in one go….They are teasing each other….so cute to imagine….and thank you for continuing this ff…
Thank u so much san.. its because of guys I’m continuing this FF.. pls do support like this ever
It’s awesome asusal Di.. About the story its lovely but Di I have a idea u can include a crazy childish dance of Rikara in rain.. It will be amazing..
Hey thanks for ur suggestions Kiya.. it really awesome one.. I’ll surely give this part I have taken ss
Awwww..such a cute couple fight… so cute to see Om nd Gauri’s attitude wala love..please bring them more closer with dis nok-jhok..awesome shot
Thanks a lot Bubblu.. they r coming closer day by day don’t worry dr
Super…. I had read previous episode also…. Keep going…. Sry for late comments….
It is awesome dear