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What’s My Fault (Episode 1)

RoseyBy 70 Comments7 Mins Read

Hi Guys its me Rosey well I was watching swaragini from start and I see where Swara woke up and find her self in hotel and that police darama and colony gossip so I get an idea so I’m writing that…
I hope you all will like it so here we go….

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IN GH

Swara came home with RagLak she was so much upset with the colony ladies who were taunting her on mms and drugs

Swara was found in hotel that news reached till MM and Sujhat a bring with Sanskaar filled Ap and Dp ears against Swara and as a result Maheswari broke the SwaLak marriage Laksh also didn’t believe in Swara and left her

It was night time and both RagSan were talking on phone celebrating there victory for breaking SwaLak but on the other hand Swara has locked herself in her room and said she needs time

It has been one week SwaLak marriage for broken but colony ladies were still taunting GF and indirectly and this thing was making Paravati Gagodia more angry on Swara as she already don’t like her

Swara was broken completely from such incident and most importantly she was broken because Laks h didn’t trust in her and thinks her as a characterless girl

Being fed up of all these things Swara took a decision….a decision which change many lives….a decision which makes some people guilty and make some happy…a decision which broke some relations and which also joined some relations….

The decision what is this….

Next Morning

It was around 8AM and Swara was still in her room while GF was sitting in lounge while Ragini and Shomi were setting BF on table and Paravati was still indirectly taunting Shomi

Just than door bell rangs and Ragini opens the door and becomes shocked to see Police there….

The inspector comes inside and behind him 4 people came lifting a dead body they place the Body in Lounge Mali,g everyone worried and confused…

Before inspector could say something MF also comes there….why…I will tell later

Shekar ; Inspector whose body is this…and why have you brought it here….

Inspector : look Mr Gagodia its you daughter’s dead body….

Before inspector could complete her sentence Shekar holds that inspectors coller and said angrily

Shekar(holding his coller) : Are you in you senses inspector…how can this body be my daughter…you want to know who my daughter is….let me show you….(holds Ragin’s arm and shows)she is she is my daughter(blo*dy man forgot about Swara) than how can you say that(points towards dead body) it’s my daughter

Inspector : I’m not talking about your this daughter in talking about your elder daughter Miss Swara Gagodia….

This time Shomi came forward and said

Shomi(shouting) : Are you in your senses inspector what are you saying….how can be it my Shona…my shona is sto sleeping in her room….you wait here..I’ll call her

She goes towards Swara room and opens it she finds it empty she search here and there but couldn’t find her at last she sees a letter she picks up the letter and started to read…

After reading that Letter Shomi shouts…and started to cry hugging that letter

Shomi(crying) : Shona……

Istening to her shout everyone indulging MF and police comes into the room and sees Shomi crying bitterly sitting on floor hugging a letter

Shekar and Ragini goes towards Shomi and asks her what happened and on hearing she just showed that Letter

Shekar started to read that Letter loudly making everyone cry

Letter

I know when you all will be reading this letter I will not be with you anymore
I’m sorry Mom Dad Ragini Dadi and Dada but now I can’t live like this anymore.
Everyone is taunting me for the seeds which I haven’t commit I know you all believe me and imso happy to get a family like you all but…but now I can’t live like this
I can bear anything for myself but I can’t see you all suffering
Due to me you all are paying I don’t know what have I done to someone so bad that he puts that characterless blame on me and tag me with that blame for my whole life Laksh My LOVE also didn’t believe me….
Dadi says right of I will live in this house than due to me Ragini will also suffer and you all are suffering too
That’s why I…I’m going to end this chapter for forever Mom please forgive for my this act but now I’m unable to bear all this
I’m going…I’m going for forever…!!!
Good bye Mom Dad Ragini Dadi and Dada stay blessed always bye…………
Your Daughter Swara…

Letter fell from Shekar’s hand and he was also in tears

All people present in room were crying and two people were almost drowned in guilt RagSan…

Sanskaar and Ragini’s eyes meet which were showing guilt…. guilt of someone’s death….

Inspector : it means it’s a sucide case well Mr Gagodia we are sorry for you loos but we have to complete our inquiry…

Then inspector explains then how they found Swara’s body near river( same spot from where some women saved her) and body’s face was damaged badly so they get her purse in which they found Swara’s is card and other things

MF who had came there to apologize from GF as they think Swara deserve a second chance and they also haven’t give her a chance to explain herself were also drowned into guilt and Laksh was shedding tears sitting near Swara’s dead body

Soon it was time for Swara’s last ritual everyone was sitting in lounge around dead body and Shomi was totally lifeless

Ragini was about to touch her body which was covered with white cloth stops listening to a shout….

It was dida who came out from coma and listen everything which inspector was saying….

She straightly goes towards Ragini and gave her right slap shocking everyone….

Dida(warns Ragini) : don’t you dare to touch my Shoru it’s because of you…that…(crying)that my Shoru is not here you are the killer of my Shoru

Dadi : Ayyy Bangalan are you home mad how can you blame my Ladoo like this…I know Swara is dead but this doesn’t mean you blame my Ladoo

Then dida explain all things which she heard but as usual no one believes her but still Ragini didn’t accept her deeds as she thinks now her path is clear and Shomi was was totally lifeless becomes shocked listening to Ragini’s acts
She straightly goes towards her and said

Shomi(emotionless) : what was my daughter’s fault Ragini that you…play such a cheap same with her….I always consider you my daughter and you killed my Shona….

Shekar support Ragini as always and as a result there relation breaks and Shomi forbid Shekar to touch Swara’s dead body and even she said same to Laksh

Soon all rituals of Asthi Visarjan was done and with this both Shekar and Shomi parts away….

IN MM

Sanskaar was sitting in his room and feeling guilty for Swara’s death he decides to leave from there…but Sujhata stops him by doing his emotional acting…..

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Next : what you all want….!!!

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Ok guys do here it is I seriously wanted to write a ff on this track but not like this but I couldn’t stop myself from writing and if you all are agree than please tell whthere I continue or not????
And guys please don’t bash me showing Swara’s character that much coward you will see further if you all want me to continue….!!!

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70 Comments

  1. Kakali on

    Yeiii yeiiiii yeiiiiii !!! Rosey,…*hug..
    Waaaa m sooo happy reading this..!! I know nothing has happened to our princess..she is perfectly fine … omg u have to continue n i want a love story.not like real sr one. i will tell my illegal wishes in next part..update soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

  8. nikky on

    I really do t comment on swara ff but write whatever u want to write about swara but don’t dare to write anything about raglak or don’t think make rag as a vamp u want to make swara bechari make it as swasan write whatever u want but as raglak don’t write anything wrong or disgraceful about raglak and mostly about ragini I think u understand so don’t bash me or raglak I don’t say anything about swasan I am just saying about my raglak

    • Rosey on

      Well I’m sorry dear but I’ll try to presidue ur request but I can’t promise as what she did she will get it’s punishment

    • nikky on

      even I don’t it just title seems interesting and before that lakshya break two times engage ment with rag and than he love swara bcoz swara saying lakshya is not good man for rag but its good for swara and sanskar make rag turn evil actually don’t want to say or read but leave my rag for ur bechari swara and write whatever u write

    • Arshaanya on

      Arey rosey its me only arshleen..
      I loved it…
      N nikky if swasan fans hve habit of bashing dan wat r u doing here in swasan ff…
      Wow did ragini kept u on dis work??
      Even raglak writrs use swasana s dey wish we toh nvr aaid dun do dis dun do dat… bt u keep it up as u r giving us entertainment so we dun mind ??…

    • Sonia on

      Swara was never bechari in swaragini dr. Its rosey’s ff lets her decide what she wants to write. If u dont like than dont read. I have never read a ragini ff or any ff where ragini is main lead. So what…. its writer choice u cant just order her.

    • Arshaanya on

      Thanku nikky for entertaining us wid ur comments…
      U nvr miss any chance na thnku… bt wat hpnd to ur copy paste comment???
      Y u chngd it dis tym??
      U shud say give raglak more swasan ff r more blah blah rest i nvr undrstnd ur cmnt na dats y dis blah blah…
      God bless u

    • nikky on

      same guys I don’t post bcoz of some reason actually I am a lawyer working on a case as a assistance so didn’t have time to read and comment and yaa I am intefier in swasan ff even their name in raglak ff but swasan ff write don’t take my rag name in ff in a disgraceful manner I just said to ur writer but what to do swasan fan have a habbit of bashing and ur writer said she will think not taking rag name but again fan like u started bashing without any reason

    • Kakali on

      Nikyyyyyyyyy darling..!! U know what? i missed u sooo much..! where have u been these days? you was a full time entertainer of me..that too without salary..but what happened now? *pout..!!
      Plzz be the before wala Nikky..?

    • Ishani on

      .Hello ji its 1st time I am giving a reply on a comment on someone else’s ff but what can I do I really couldn’t sto myself. U said u r an lawyer can u plz tell me by which low it is acceptable that u can drug someone put their respect on stak do fake kidnapping and blackmail to kiss someone then amke their mms n lick that. I think all these r punishible offence acording to IPC. We all agree whatever Laksh did with Ragini is wrong very very wrong but then she should punish Laksh ri8 what was Swara’s fault. Ok Sanskar manipulate her so u tell me if one someone ask u to herm ur sis by saying that if u do this u will get ur love then will u do that. Leave swara what was Sumi’s mistake that insteed of being step mom she loves Ragini like a real mom still Ragini didn’t feel ashamed to break shemish realtion she don’t even have any shame chiii… dr loving someone’s acting nn being tgeir fan doesn’t mean that u’ll accept n support even the wrong doing of the characters which they play. I’m sure even Tejaswi Praksh will also not accept such think that the reason she asked cvs to make her character possive again or else sje will leave SR…. grow up kiddo n if u r a lawyer then u should think more wisely…

    • Rosey on

      Wow bravo Ishani thanks so much yar I love you so much ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • rabia on

      Ishani for u a saluteeeee (sorry sign is not there 😉 ) and clappingggg ??? sometime ppl only deserve this type explaination onlyyy ???

  17. rabia on

    Roseeeeyyyyyyyy nowwww touuu i wanttttt vampsss in this storyy for sure or elseee u r not my frnd ???? hehehehehehe okayy nowwww itsss awesomeeeee ???

  20. Paridhi on

    Finally I broke my silence….seriously yaar..the story concept is awesome..I have read all your FFs rosey..and you are a fabulous writer.. Keep writing like this dear..plzz post the next part ASAP

    • Rosey on

      thank u so much Paridhi i am so happy that you commented and please now keep commenting

  26. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on

    Interesting concept dear.. Plz continue.. Hope swara is fine.. All the best for the further parts..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

  28. Ishani on

    I loved it and if u have shown that Rag_San r not guilty then plz make them suffer for their sin plz….