Hey guys, I am niharika (aka Sweta). I come back with a new story. I am really big fan of arshi and thahaan. So I decided to write an ff on them.
Let’s start with intro.
Main characters:
Arnav singh raizada – A rich businessman who is angry and rude for rest of the world but not for his sister. His sister is his world.
Thapki raizada – a sweet and shy girl who is life of arnav singh raizada. She love her brother a lot. Her real name is vaani but due to her stammering her name became thapki.
Bihaan pandey – a handsome boy Who can’t see injustice happen in front of him. He is big fan of Katrina.He loves his family a lot.
Khushi pandey – a charming girl who is crazy fan of jalebies and salman khan. She also loves her family. Her real parents died when she was a child. She leaves with his uncle and aunty who are bihaan’s parents.
Dhruv Sharma – a simple boy. He is best friend of bihaan. He like music, study and singing.
Shradhaa chaturvedi – she kind of tomboy. She is also best friend of bihaan. She is kind hearted but never let anyone know it.
Other characters will revealed during story.
Not to wait much, here we go episode 1.
One big mention named “Shanti Nivas” showed.
“Om Jay jagdish hare…….s..s…swami….jay jagdish hare….” A beautiful voice came from house temple.
A girl showed doing Pooja in house temple. She was wearing beautiful white Anarkali and her gorgeous hair were waving.
“Om Jay jag…..” she stammered but a lady in white saari came and gave her a loving pat. She turns towards the lady and smile.
“Good m….m…morning Nani…..” she takes lady’s blessings.
“Bhagvaan tumhe sada Khush rakhe….thapki bitiya” she hugs thapki.
Yes friends girl in Anarkali suit is our thapki raizada and this lady is non other than but thapki’s Nani devyani raizada.
“chotu…….come for breakfast” a voice came from hall.
“ha bhaiyu…..” thapki replied exisitedly and she was about to leave but she stopped and looked at Nani.
“Nani can I ask u a question?”
“Yes my child….” Nani cares her hair.
“Since my childhood I’ve seeing this but never asked. But I always wanted to know……why bhaiyu never come in temple? Why he never pry? Why??”
Naniji ‘s smile vanished after hearing thapki’s question. Tears appeared in corner of her eyes and she lost but one voice bring back her in present.
“Chotu……come fast.” again the same voice come from hall.
“Thapki bitiya you know your bhaiyu Na….he will not have a single bite without you. Please go and have breakfast.” Nani said smilingly and hides her tears.
“Jiiii….. Nani” thapki leaves but she is still thinking.
Thapki entered in hall. A man showed talking on phone, scolding someone.
“How could u do such serious mistake?” He yelled.
Thapki silently came to dining table and take food in plate. The man was still busy on phone. Thapki came behind him silently and pat him, as he turns she forcely feed him. His face revealed. He is our handsome and chocolaty boy arnav singh raizada. He surprised by thapki’s act. Thapki chuckled seeing his face. His anger vanished and he lost in her smile.
-Arnav’s POV (Point of view)
Her smile….. whenever she smiles she reminds me of a special person. Not just her smile but her way to talk, her expression even her stammering reminds me of a special person. Maa….. yes she looks alike of Maa. Her innocent face every time make me recall maa. That’s why I always protect her from dirty world. She is my life. I brought out from past when she waved at me and says, “kaha kho gaye bhaiyu??”
In reply I saw her fack anger, “how many times I have to tell you about breakfast?? U just can’t take care of yourself properly.”
She kept looking at me with her innocent expression like she doesn’t care about what I said. She forcely feed me again and said, “ a diabetic patient should not stay hungry for long time. How many times I have to remind u?” And again her fake anger expression reminds me of maa. I smiled at her and feed her. We share some lovely bro-sis moments.
(POV end)
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A house named “panday nivaas” showed. Scene shift to a boy’s room which was totally mess. His clothes were thrown all over the room. He was lied down on bed like a king. A cute smile was on his face while sleeping. He is our b for Bihaan Panday. Door get opened and a girl entered. Her face showed. Yes she is our beautiful and charming girl Khushi Panday. ( here She is in her old look before her marriage in serial.)
She get shocked seeing terrible condition of room.
“He…Devi maiya…. It’s not even 24 hours completed from I’ve cleaned his room and see…..it look like a tsunami went through here.” She started taking his clothes from floor.
“Katrina……” he smiled in sleep.
Khushi looked at him angrily. “Katrina k bacheee….. Abhi batati hu.” She took glass of water and pour it on him. Bihaan jumped out of bed screaming.
“Khushi diiii…..” he screamed furiously. “u broke my dream. I’ll not leave you today.”
Khushi got scared by his angry face and run. Bihaan run after her. Khushi tease him and run fast. Both came downstairs. Bauji and vasu were sitting on dining table. Bauji laugh seeing their cat-dog fight. Khushi hides herself behind bauji. “Bauji please save me.”
Bihaan came there and tries to catch khushi but bauji was in-between.
Bihaan: Bauji, move Na…..today she broke my dream. She’ll get punished for this.
Bauji: Don’t you dare to touch my khushi bitiya.
Bihaan: But bauji she broke my dream.
Bihaan: What kind of special dream you have?? About passing exam??? (khushi made funny faces to bihaan)
Bihaan: (mind)Dream was about date with Katrina….hehehe (smile cutely)
Bauji: why are u smiling?
Bihaan: wo…..wo….
Vasu: enough…… subah hote hi mere bachhe k piche pad jate hai. U don’t leave a chance to scold my son.
(Bihaan hug vasu from back.)
Bihaan: only you love me, maa.
Bauji: dramebaaz
Vasu: come bihaan, have breakfast.
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@shanti_nivaas
Thapki’s POV
I entered into bhai’s room. He was getting ready and talking on phone. I took out a beautiful tie from the cupboard and slipped it around his neck.
“I’m going to meet dii today.” i tried to say as normal as possible but in actual i want to scream “please come with me”. In reply, as always he ignored eye-contact and said, “okk.”
I know that answer will be same but still i gave my last try, “Will you come?” he turned back and contine his work as nothing happened. I cursed myself for making him sad.
“Okay i’m leaving.” i mumbled.
“Listen…..” i heared his choked voice. He clear his throat and continue, “dii like roses and mom’s favourite are lilies. Don’t forget to take it.”
“Hmm…” i leave with grief.
End
I had written another ff before on thahaan. You can read it down here.
Link: http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=thahaan+-+teri+meri+kahani
I hope you enjoyed first episode.
I really need your support. Please do comment. Without your comments I m unable to know whether you like the ff or not. Don’t forget to comment.
Have a great day. Take care.
20 Comments
arshi & thahaan are my favorite too loved it plz continue
Thanks Tara. Keep reading.
Its really nice …. i really lived arnav thapkis convo… and bro sis relation btwn them… superb.. looking forward to thjs stry….
I really appreciate that you like story line. Keep reading and keep supporting. 🙂
Nice story, so plz use English words…
Thanks for comment nisi. Don’t worry from next time I will use English words and if I use Hindi than I will write it’s translation too. Keep supporting dear.
wow yaar very interesting please continue yaar sweta 🙂 wow arshi and thahaan arshi one of my fav too 🙂 all the best 🙂 love u
Thanks dear. I m glad you like it. Love you too. 🙂 Your ff is awesome too.
Its really great starting…! Plz continue soon as i loved ur previous thahaan ff so this ff will be awesome 2 ! continue soon ! Eager to read
Thank you Jessie. Your comment mean a lot to me. Please keep supporting. 🙂
Great first episode
Thanks Sonia 🙂
Episode was good….my fav jodi arshi n thahaan…. i really love ur episode..
Thanks kumutha. Keep supporting dear. 🙂
Hey…..ur ff is really good !!
Plz continue…
Actually …I read only thahaan’s ff so I did not read it first…and but then I thought that I should read it….so finally I read it and found it really interesting !!
And now…I m going to read ur previous ff……..
Just wanted to ask that ur name is Shweta or niharika ???
Thanks manyasa29. I will continue. 🙂 My name is Sweta. Keep reading dear.
Hey Shweta…..oh my god !!!
I just finished reading ur previous ff TERI MERI KAHAANI …..??????
I m totally in love with ur storyline ,way of writing, ur imagination and u !!!
U just rocked it !!
Actually first I thought that u only cmmt and do not write ffs…Becoz I just joined this forum .. in June and don’t know many of u here. ?
Nice to know u sweta !!
Keep writing !?
Thank God I read this new ff…otherwise I would have remained unaware of ur previous one !!?
~Lots of luv – neha !?
Thank you so much neha. I got a new friend today. Your comment made my day. 🙂
I didn’t know it’s yours…I read it already!!! M a big fan of arshiii…ur t best 🙂 keep sparkling !!! Its was soo nycc !! Mere jaanu 🙂 🙂
Thanks jaanu. 🙂