At a music studio
Rocky : Hey Avi, where are you these days ?
Avinash : Just roaming here and there
Rocky :So what about the tune ?
Avinash : I am not getting a rhythm yaar
Rocky : Avi, why can’t you compose the tune based on something which inspired you a lot ?
Avinash : Aisa toh kuch yaad nahi aate yaar
Rocky : Nazar udawon, Just look through your eyes, may be some one’s eyes will tell you a story.
Avinash : Let’s see if I find any eyes like that
He opened the window , suddenly his eyes find a girl who was making bubbles and playing with some children.
His eyes became bright. He rushed near that girl .
Avinash : Hello
Girl : Hello
Avinash : I am Avinash , a guitarist and a music composer
Girl : Avinash !! You were the one who composed Tu kitna Mean hein ? Hey naa ?
Avinash : Wow you remember all my compositions so well.
Girl : I must say you should try in films also, it will give you new identity.
Avinash : Thanks , by the way what’s your good name ?
Girl : I am Vrushika
Avinash : Hi Vrushy let’s shook our hands and be friends
Vrushika : Okay
Vrushika and Avinash extended their hands, but Vrushy’s hands were not in the right position.
Avinash : Aapne Haath theek se diya nahi
Vrushika : Haath joda hein Avinash
Avinash : Aapko mera haath dikhayi nahi deta ?
Vrushika : Nahi, Mujhe toh kuch bhi dikhayi nahi deta.
Avinash ; I am sorry, I don’t know that you are
Vrushika ; It’s okay.
Vrushika smiles with teary eyes
Avinash :Can I hold your hand ?
Vrushika : Yeah
Avinash holds her hand. They both shook hands and smiles .
Avinash felt Vrushika’s eyes as magical. He thought how God can create these much beautiful eyes and he wondered also why she became blind ? Both of them slowly became close with each other.
One day Avinash took Vrushika to a restaurant .
Avinash : You know what Vrushy, after seeing you only I got a theme for my new composition.
Vrushika : Me, how ?
Avinash : Your eyes speaks a lot, Vrushika. I would like to see them again and again
Vrushika : What you find in these eye pupils when they are just a show -piece only ? It doesn’t have any sense by my birth itself Avinash .
Avinash : Your eyes are captive and it paved me the muse for my music.
Vrushika : Is it ? I want to hear it from you Avinash
Avinash takes his guitar and starts singing
Zameen pe hein uthar ke aayi
Khuda ke jaise woh khud aayi
Tu mere kyaa ho maine jaana
Yeh khush naeeb bhi maine paayi
Tu mere se ,tu mere se
Nazar se meri
Nazar mila ….mm…Nazar mila
Vrushika lost herself in that music. Avinash came very much close towards Vrushika. Both of them shook their heads and smiled
Avinash : You just smile and keep your eyes open like these Vrushy , I can make millions on songs on your magnetic eyes .
Vrushika : Avi, I never expected some one will get inspired from these vision impaired eyes also
Avinash : Don’t so say so Vrushy , Your sees everything from your heart’s eyes and I can feel it .
Vrushika ; Avi
Avinash : I want to be the light of your life, will you give that right to me ?
Vrushika : Don’t pain yourself by doing this Avinash. I am habitat of this darkness, but thing is I never felt it as dark. Infact for me everything is beautiful . But what you said may
Avinash : Why Vrushy ? You didn’t like me ?
Vrushika :Of course I like you, You give me best moments only Avinash. But what will others say if you made a blind girl as your life partner ?
Avinash : I will fill light in your eyes, trust me definitely you will be able to see everything with your eyes, through an eye transplantation surgery.
Vrushika :It’s really expensive, Why you should spend that much money for an Orphan girl ?
Avinash : Vrushika
Vrushika : Yes Avi, I am an Orphan . If I live with eye sight or not, who cares ?
Avinash : I cares you a lot. And I can’t see my Vrushika struggling in darkness. If you trust me then leave this walking stick and come with me. I will hold your hand .
Vrushika throws her walking stick and gets up from the seat, Avinash holds her , Vrushy keeps her hands on his back
Avinash : Thanks for trusting me
Vrushika : I trust you more than myself, because you are the light of my life, Avinash.
AFTER FEW MONTHS
Doctor : How are you feeling now ?
Vrushika : I am feeling better. I want to see Avinash who give me this new vision to my eyes.
Doctor :Aviansh come here
Vrushika slowly opened her eyes and sees Avinash’s face
Vrushika looked him again and again
Avinash : Why are you looking me like these Vrushy ?
Vrushika : I was looking those eyes keenly which find my dark eyes as beautiful earlier.
Avinash : Now your eye pupils are brightening like stars .
Vrushika : Is it ?
Avinash :Yeah Vrushika
Vrushika : By the who give me eyes ? I want to thank that person.
Avinash : She is a star , infact she was the one who give birth to me.
Vrushika : That means I am seeing with your Mom’s eyes
Avinash nodded his head
Vrushika : Avinash yeh tumne kya kiyaa ?
Avinash : Mom herself wished this Vrushy, before a month only my Mom passed away due to cancer. She was everything to me . She did my upbringing both as dad and mom . My mom was bedridden when I was telling about us to you. She only told me that her daughter in law should get her eyes . So that she can again care me both as Mom and Wife.
Avinash burst in tears. Vrushika kept her hand on his chest. Avinash looked her eyes
Vrushika : Your mom and your wife both are with you Avinash. Mom hasn’t went away. I will give light of happiness to you through these eyes, Avinash
Avinash : Vrushika
Both of them gets emotional and hold each others hands
Avinash : I am so lucky to have you in my life Vrushika . Keep showing your care towards me like these always
Vrushika : You are the one who poured the beauty of vision at my eyes, I am very fortunate to be with you Avinash.
AFTER AN YEAR
Avishika got married and they were very happy
Vrushika rendred flowers on Avi’s Mom’s pic
Vrushika : I will always be grateful to you for giving your son Avinash to me , Thank you Mom.
Avinash : I bought your bahu Mom, Now you can be happy.
They both rendered prayers and goes
AT NIGHT TIME
Avinash : I have decorated everything with lights and pics
Vrsuhika : This is entirely beautiful.
Avinash : Though we got married, we never rendered those feelings to each other.
Vrushika : Our eyes and heart knows it, do we need to tell it ?
Avinash : Still I would like to hear it from you, Vrushy
Vrushika : I also want to hear it from you
Avinash : Thanks for coming to my life, without you I would have lost my music, You gave me new rhythm , I want to hear you as my heart beat as I love you so much
Vrushika : Thanks for giving your mom’s beautiful and valuable eyes to me.You give me a new life and show me the beauty of light. I always want to be with you forever, I love you so much .
They both hugged each other passionately.
Nazar se meri…nazar mila plays
AN : I thank Jasmine Rahul who suggested me to write an OS on Nazar Mila. Thanks for reading guys
13 Comments
Wow … ytg ff once more. Liked it. Can you please write a ff on veerani from apna time bhi aayega and arylie from imlie .
I haven’t watched those shows Pari , so don’t know about them much. I am sorry dear. I knows Arylie a little bit, so I will write any short story for Arylie . Thanks a lot for liking it.
This os was really emotional and good. their first meet was awesome and avinash admiring her eyes was really sweet. Avinash care and love for her and vrushy’s positive attitude was great!! Avinash’s mother was a star! she’s a wonderful person who thought of and even gave her eyes to vrushy. avishka scenes were really good. Loved the scene where vrushy opened her eyes and stared at avinash. marraige and after mariage scene was really sweet..loved it!
Thanks a lot
I think the movie Nandanam suits Aryan Imlie.what do you think?
I am not sure about that. I haven’t watched the show Imlie. Just few glimpses of it only.
Thank you very much for this os.because of your os this couple got a happy ending.
Rocky telling avinash that some eyes can tell him stories n then he finding vrushika was lovely.vrushika’s eyes are really beautiful.avi knowing that she is blind was emotional. Handshake scene was lovely.vrushika comparing her eyes to show piece was striking.loved him saying that he can compose many songs on her eyes.loved avi singing for vrushika.avi proposing vrushika n she discouraging him as she is blind was emotional. Vrushika throwing the walking stick n avinash holding her..she saying that she trusts him more than herself was emotional.happy that vrushika got her eye sight back.shocking that his mom is rupal n she got her his mom’s eyes.vrushika telling avi that she will give him the light of happiness through her eyes was emotional. Glad that they got married.in the last scene their dialogues n hug were very romantic. Perfect pics.Beautiful os.
Sorry for commenting late.i had typed the comment yesterday night.But couldn’t post it bcz of network issue.
Thanks a lot, handshake scene was in original song also, I liked it very much and that’s why i added here too.
I have not watched imlie.But I have seen the promos.Imlie has a servant look and Aryan is a rich man just like Nandanam n neelathamara.
I haven’t watched Neelathamara movie , yeh I have watched nandanam. I haven’t decided about what I need to write for them, Once I gets time I will decide what to write.
Gopi always says kanhaji like balamani says guruvayoorappa.so I felt that gohem suits nandanam.since gauri is a beautiful village girl I used to imagine rikara also for nandanam.but seeing the dressing of imlie n aryan I felt that nandanam suits them.
Very emotional one.
nice read and pics r superb.
Thanks a lot