Hello frnz.. Its my 1st ff so plz 4give me 4 mistakes.. Its based on swara n sanskar
.. It’ll take few shots.. So let’s start the story..
Location: A big mall is shown.. Some goons are attacking a pregnant lady 4 their escape bt a girl comes in between n they shoot hr continuously 3 bullets.. That lady screams and the grl fell down with the pool of blood.. Security caught the goons n took the girl to the hospital..
Here the lady was sweating badly in the mean time his husband rushed to her n gave her sm water.. After seeing him she felt little relaxed bt then that girl’s face came to hr mind n she said to hr husband
Lady: Sanskar!!!! That girl…. Who saved me… Plz sanskar plz let us go to the hospital ( in a fumble voice and crying tone)
Sanskar: relax kavi.. Its not good 4 ur health.. I’ll go n check hr..
K: no sanskar.. Plz.. She is totally unknown 4 me bt she saved me n even I can’t go for hr well being..(cryingly)
S: OK… Let’s go..
14 Comments
Awesome ………please continue
awesome
Vishi, welcome to SwaSan family dear..!! ur ss seems interesting..!! Continue soon..!!Do write the chapters lil bit lengthy..!! Thnk u.. 🙂
waaa.. it’s lookalike my skirt, so tempting but too short 😀
Thanks kakali.. Sure I’ll update soon…..
Nyc
good concept vishi
Nice…welcome to swaragini family…be comfortable here..
Nice
Nice dear… But short….
Nice dear… Continue soon?
nyc
nice xx
nyc