Hey guys thanks a lot……its my 20th episode…….i never ever thought thai I will be writing till 20th episode…………I m glad that ul r liking my ff…….and really hope that ul always do support me…..hope today’s episode is also awesome………. and yup if anyone have a problem with my ff like ul want me to end this ff then ul r free to tell so…… enjoy reading……
Imli sees vivan smiling…
Imli: what happen vivan why r u smiling…
Vivan explains everything to imli…
Imli: that’s great yaar….it really means that we were right suraj loves di…
Vivan: but I m worried for something….
Imli: what….
Vivan: imli suraj love chakor but what about chakor…
Imli: don’t worry vivan….i know di really very well…first let us make suraj realize his love and then we will concentrate on di…
Vivan: ok…..dont worry for suraj I know how to make him realize his love………
Imli: how?????
Vivan explains imli everything…
Imli: that’s a great idea…….hope it does work..
Vivan: it will work..
Chakor: what will work…
Imli: nothing di…….just like that only…
Chakor: ya why will ul tell me……
Vivan: chakor that’s nothing like that..we were just discussing something….
Chakor: ok…..baba
Imli in mind: di I promise u that I will make ur life amazing as u made my life……since starting u did many things for me and now its my turn and I will do so……
Chakor: imli what r u thinking lets go in class….
Imli: yup….they go in class…
Vivan purposely sits behind arjun….imli sits besid vivan………suraj was already sitting there….chakor sees him and goes to sit beside him but………
Imli: di please sit in front of us na…..
Vivan: yup chakor…..
Suraj turns back and sees arjun sitting there…….
Chakor sees suraj………
Arjun: yup chakor even I wanted to talk to u…….so please…..
Chakor: ok…..
Chakor goes and sits with arjun…….suraj was very angry but didn’t pretended…….
Teacher came and started the explanation…….vivan and imli were talking to each other…and chakor and arjun were talking to one another……..but poor suraj…..he was just getting jealous…….imli sees him…
Imli: vivan u were right…….this plan is working.suraj is actually getting jealous…..
Vivan: I was knowing….
Bell rings…
Vivan: it’s the correct time of making him more jealous…….chakor was going to the canteen but vivan made her fall and arjun holded her and this made suraj more angry…….his anger could be seen perfectly…….dont know why but suraj was not in a mood of fighting with arjun…….so he quietly went from there…..suraj was feeling very sad as since morning after they came to college chakor didn’t talked with him……he was sitting in the canteen….and was thinking something….
Suraj: that arjun don’t know what he thinks of himself……….just a sec but why am I shouting him only because of the reason he was sitting with chatterbox …….am I getting jealous……..was vivan saying truth….do I actually love chatterbox………no no how can this be…..she saved my sister so I m just grateful to her nothing more than that……..its just ur infatuation sadu……what?????sadu……did I actually call myself by the name sadu……
He was thinking that when he saw vimli and arkor coming……..arjun and chakor were continuously looking at each other and were laughing….this made him more jealous….arjun had got hurt in his hands…he was trying to eat but couldn’t…
Vivan: chakor helping others is the best thing yaar.why don’t u feed him…..
Chakor started to feed him……And now it was too much for suraj to control…..he got up in anger…
Suraj: vivan I m not feeling well…..i m going home…
Imli: but suraj we r having lectures.
Suraj: I know but I m leaving………
Chakor: what happened to him….
Vivan: something that u wont understand…….
Vimli looks at each other and smiles…..
Suraj reaches home and hit the boxing bag remembering all arkors moment………
Suraj: don’t know what is wrong with vivan…why the hell he was behaving like this…..he was talking too much with arjun…….by knowing also that his brother hates arjun still..and chatterbox is she so dump that she cant understand that arjun is flirting with him…..
Ragini: bhaiya r u ok….
Suraj: princess just leave me alone.
Ragini: but bhaiya what actually happened…….
Suraj: u wont understand………please just leave…
Ragini goes and calls vivan..
Vivan: yup princess say…
Ragini: bhai whats wrong with suraj bhaiya.he is looking very angry and he came home also so early….
Vivan: I will come home and explain u everything…….
Ragini: ok bhai….
He ends the call…..
Imli:what happened.
Vivan: right time to do the final thing….i have to leave imli.
Imli: yup bye and ya all the best..
Vivan: yup…….
Vivan leaves……..
On the other hand suraj is on the terrace and is very sad……
Vivan comes home and explains everything to ragini…..
Ragini: u mean suraj bhaiya loves chakor……
Vivan: yup…….
Ragini: how lucky I m na……..i got both the bhabhi’s………and that too who will never fight…
Vivan: yup but for now we have to make suraj say that he loves chakor…….
Ragini: yup bhaiya……..
They go up.suraj sees vivan..
Suraj: vivan why r u here……..go with arjun.he is ur real brother…
Vivan: what do u wanna say…
Suraj: what do u think I don’t know u purposely made chatterbox fall…..but the thing is I m not getting why u did it….in the morning u told me that I love chakor and then u did all that……….
Vivan: relax yaar I did all those things for u…….
Suraj: for me…..
Vivan: yup listen………I was knowing that u love chakor but u were not ready to accept it.so I had to make u feel jealous and that’s what u r now.
Suraj: what nuisance I m not jealous…..
Vivan: oh so why did u come home early……..
Ragini: and why were u hitting the punching bag in an anger…..
Vivan: listen bro u love chakor and that’s the truth just think all those moment with chakor and then say don’t u wanna spend more moments with her….
Suraj: listen……
Ragini: bhaiya please atleast don’t lie ur self……..u do care for her really a lot…. And she is also a cute girl……common don’t say that the girl girl who saved ur sister u wont fall for her…….
Vivan: yup suraj………listen just think for once will u able tto see chakor with arjun…….no na……u got so angry today that u even missed ur lectures……
Suraj remembers all that moment that he spent with chakor and also how he got angry by seeing arjun amd chakor together….
Suraj: u know what ul guys are right…..i m in love….i really love my chatterbox…oh god I love her…….i cant belief this…..
Ragini and vivan smile…….he gives them a hug……..
He stands on the edge of the terrace and shouts…..
Chatterbox I love u.,…..dont know when and how but I really do…………I m in love guys……
Vivan: suraj ul fall….
Suraj: yup I have already fallen for chatterbox…….
Ragini: bhaiya..
He comes down……..
On the other side chakor was sad as she couldn’t talk with suraj today……..she was just thinking about him…
Imli: di u r thinking about suraj…..
Chakor: yup……..dont know how he will be now…..imli call vivan and ask na…
Imli: yup…
She was about to call vivan when she gets vivan’s call. She picks it up..
Vivan: congratulations my jaan..suraj finally told that he loves chakor..
Imli: ok…..
Vivan: what do mean by ok..arent u happy………
Imli: yes……
Vivan: ok…..i understood chakor is there……..
Imli: yup…….
Vivan: cool we will talk later bye for now and I love u……
Imli: me too…..
She ends the call…
Chakor: what happened what he told? Is suraj ok?
Imli: yup di suraj is fine don’t u worry..
Chakor takes a breath of relief…
On the other side suraj just keeps on repeating that I love chatter box and is very happy……….
Precap: vivan imli and suraj talks.vivan ask how will they make chakor realize about her feelings…..suraj thinks something and says just the way they made him realize his feelings………and he calls someone…and smiles…….
So that was it……guys just wanted to clear ur doubts arkor is arjun and chakor and yup arjun is our dear aditya in the serial………I now thought of this……and wanted to ask ul something since one or two weeks my response of comments r getting less……………is it so that my ff is not liked by ul or it is becoming boring compared than the previous ff…………..please do tell me that what is the thing that ul aren’t liking in my ff………thanks for reading…………hope ul enjoy it…….and do let me know how it was….
45 Comments
It’s really very interesting. Not boring…
I like this ff…..
thanks nisi…..
Yeah sis its really awesome ma… Just concentrate on ur writing skills and study well.. N one more thing is that ur ff is really fabulous so keep on writing develope ur creative skills too…
thanks di……..
Yaar they are so amazing.u know after coming back home I really get releif by reading ur ffs and I forgot all my stress.l really enjoy them and don’t even think of ending it.
I am a big fan of sukor and I just need a topic related to them as I watch only udaan.coming to comments I try to comment.
thanks priya…..i m happy that u want me to continue…..
I think so may be they don’t know how to express their feeling regarding to ur ff I assure you that all readers of ur ff will feel each and very word in each and very part so keep on writing don’t concentrate on ur comments… And I love u my jaan??? sis… ???
love u too diiiii……..thanks for ur support….and yup i wil write many more ff……….
And congrats ??????????for ur 20th part of ur ff??????
thanks di……..
nice
thanks……..
ur ff is fabulous …..i love it …keep writing…….
thanks alot….
Hi komal how are u and yar nice ff I really love it ….
i m fine dear..thanks alot i m glad that u loved it……
nice one..I am big fan of sukor. n by rdng ff. I fell real njy..
thanks alot dear…
Awesome….I loved ur ff very much.I have to say I’m addicted for ur ff.it’s very interesting….outstanding ff.waiting for next part
thanks niriha…….
Hi Komal,
H r u dear?
Ur ff is just amazing.
Thanks for this superb ff!
Keep writing!
hey mitha i m fine dear…….and thanks alot.i m glad that u r liking my ff……
Welcome dear!
Same here niriha I am also addicted to this ff.u know komal after reading the ff I feel why it completed so fastly as I started to read now only na inspite of being it lengthily written.then I feel lol..??? u became so much crazy for sukor
yup priya i m crazy for sukor……
Komal it is fab….OMG sooraj said I love u chakor….I wish I could have get to see it but nevertheless ur ff is awesome….
thanks alot sia………
omg suraj said i luv u 2 chakor…m i dreaming?
well ur ff is amazing nd i m also addicted of it so plz don’t end this ff i hav already said that i will cry if u do so
thanks megha……..and yup i wont end it…..
Ur ff is amazing and i just love all the episodes u write…
thanks neeta…
Ur ff is amazing…And i just got addicted to it.. .u are awesome…
i m very happy that ul all r addicted to my ff……….its a great to know that…..
I have a addiction to your ff dear…… It’s amazing and HEY ALL OF YOU….. Start commenting right now
thanks gungun……and yup its ok i dont want anymore comments i will be writing ff for ul guys….
Hey..it was awesome!!now let chakor realise her love soon…
thanks shriya….
It was amazing nt at all boring. Actually i ws a silent reader bt thought to compliment n this. The way u write really keep addicting to ur ff. Keep writing.
thanks alot dear.glad that u commented…..
Awesome dear❤️
thanks alot sam……
Wow…wonderful..really loved it..soooooo cuteee diii as like u..?❤?
oh shoo shweet of u…….amnu
Suraj loves chakor!!! U don’t know how happy I am now ?..
and i m happy too cause my sister is happy……..