Hey guys I m sorry for writing my previous ff very small………but I will be writing this ff very lengthy……..hope it doesn’t bore ul……….and yup really hope that ul like this one too…….enjoy reading……
Bell rings…..
Suraj still stares him….it was too much for chakor…….
Chakor: r u mad……why the hell r u staring me…….yesterday u went home in anger and now u r staring me…….what the hell is wrong with u yaar……I swear sadu if something is cooking in ur mind say it or else I will kill u……
Suraj still stares him….
Chakor: sadu stop it..its irritating me………atleast say something I m shouting at u and u r still staring me……say something……..
And she ends saying…she looks at suraj for getting an answer……
Suraj: why u stopped………say something more na………….i m loving it…….( in very romantic mood)
Chakor: sadu u……..
Suraj: yup say…..
Chakor: forget it..u r gone mad…….
And she leaves….
Suraj: yup I m mad………….but behind u…….. and very soon even u will be………
Vivan: oh ho.my brother is in a great mood ha……….
Imli: vivan what r u talking……. Suraj is not in a great mood he is in a romantic mood…….but cant romance…….
Suraj: shut up ul both……..
He leaves from there……..
Vivan: that’s so great…….
Imli: really….
Vivan: by the way…..u aren’t focusing on me ha……..
Imli: really……….i wasn’t knowing this…
Vivan: yup give me a kiss……
Imli: no…..
And she leaves….
Vivan: imli……..listen….
Chakor sits in canteen……
Chakor to herself: whats wrong with that sadu…….why is he behaving like that…….he isn’t irritating me…….but why is he not irritating me…………just a sec………I should be happy…….but why I m sad if he is not irritating me……..i m giving him too much importance……just shut up chakor…….
Suraj comes there……
Suraj: oh so u want me to irritate u ha…….
Chakor: nothing like that……..
Suraj: don’t lie me ha…I heard what u said…….and its ok yaar even I love u…..
Chakor gets shocked and stares him with her mouth open……..suraj also realizes what he told.
Suraj in mind: oh no what u said………….it will destroy ur plans suraj……..now what shall I say…………………….
Chakor: did I heard wrong………….what u told right now………………could u repeat it……………………please…….
Suraj: I mean to say……….i love…………u calling me sadu……….
Chakor: ok……
Suraj: why u thought I will say u I love u………
Chakor (dissapointly) : yup……..
And she leaves from there……..
Suraj: don’t worry chatterbox that day is not very far when I will say u that…………….iiiiiii loveeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuu…………
Vivan: bro when will she come…….
Suraj: tomorrow….
Imli: u mean di will start realizing her love from tomorrow……
Suraj: yup……
Vivan: but guys r ul sure that she loves u………
Imli: she do……
Suraj: yup vivan I have seen that love and care in her eyes too……….she loves me but don’t know about it….and now we have to make her realize it……
Imli: it would be very difficult for u to control ur emotions In front of her right…..
Suraj: yup it is..but I m leaving……………. As I want to irritate her…………so please excuse me guys…………………..
Vivan: u love her…………..
Suraj: yup I do so………..
Imli: so how can u irritate her now……….
Suraj: guys I do love her and she wants me to irritate her…………so I have to do it for her yaar………bye……
He leaves………
Vivan: thank god arjun is not here today……….
Imli: right or else suraj would have got dam insecured……..
They laugh………
On the other side…….
Suraj goes and sit near chakor……
Suraj: so my chatterbox………….what r u thinking………don’t tell me u r thinking to do suicide………………………
Chakor: why will I do that……..
Suraj: cause I didn’t told u I love u na………
Chakor: just shut up……….
Suraj: u wanna do it so soon………….
Chakor: u know what…………..i was thinking a way to kill u……….
Suraj: but u cant kill me…….
Chakor: why cant i……….
Suraj: because there is no one expect for me who can hear to ur nuisance…….
Chakor: oh please or else I will really kill u….
Suraj: don’t do that please…..
Chakor: why…………r u afraid………
Suraj: suraj rajvanshi…………and afraid……just forget it dear………….i m telling u cause I don’t want that after I die…….girls doing suicide………..as many girls r in madly love with me………
Chakor: there is a limit of lying sadu………..
Suraj: I m not lying………….. just a sec why r u getting jealous…….
Chakor: I m not at all getting jealous……..
Suraj: u r my chatterbox……….
Chakor: just forget it……..
And she leaves…………
Suraj: u r saying that u r not getting jealous….we will see it tomorrow my jaan…………
They go home………..
Imli: di u know a new girl is coming in college tomorrow……….
Chakor: so what shall I do……….
Imli: yup………….even that’s true…………u know I talked with vivan………he told me when they were in U.S…a girl used to die on suraj……..
Chakor was writing………..as soon as she hears it she leaves her pen………..
Chakor: and what about suraj……….
Imli: suraj used to like her………
Chakor remembers playing that truth and dare game when suraj told about that girl……..
Chakor: yup he also told me…
Imli: really how sweet it would be na if suraj also gets that girl back……..
Chakor: its night……just sleep……….
she leaves everything………..lie down on the bed and switches the light..
on the other hand…….
Suraj is unable to sleep……..
Vivan: what happened thinking about chakor………
Suraj: hmmm…..dont know what will happen tomorrow…………..i really hope the thing happens exactly as we thought……….
Vivan: it will….but one thing u have to ignore chakor…cause she must know how important u r in her life.if u will irritate her or talk to her..she will never ever know that she loves u………..i know its difficult as u love her a lot……….but u have to do it…..
Suraj: yup vivan I will do it……………don’t u worry………and ha thanks a lot yaar.that day ul told that ul got the best siblings but now I have to say that we got the best siblings………
Vivan: yup ul have got that….now just concentrate on doing what we want to……..and did u talked with her…….
Suraj: yup she is on the way……..
Vivan: that’s great. now just sleep……….and ha suraj u don’t have to show ur jealousy……..
Suraj: but u better see that arjun stays away from her…or else I will really kill arjun………
Vivan: suraj………
Suraj: goodnight…….
The next morning……….
All sat in the canteen………
Someone came and blindfolded suraj…….chakor got shocked……vivan and imli smiled looking chakors action..
Suraj: who is this…
The peron: ur old love……
Suraj: tina………
She removes her hand and hug him..
Suraj: I just cant belief this u r back……….
Tina: ofcourse if u r here I have to be back…….
Chakor gets jealous and her expression could be noticed by vimli……..they smile……..
Chakor: vivan.who is she……
Vivan: she is the same girl who used to love suraj like mad and still loves him……..but suraj left her due to some cause……….but now she is back………..and I really hope they again stay together……….
Chakor gets more jealous and goes from there…….suraj vivan and imli gets happy……
Suraj in mind: so my plan is working ha…….
Flashback shows……
Suraj calls tina….
Suraj:tina I need ur help…
Tina: yup suraj tell na.
Suraj: listen I love someone and she too loves me…but the thing is she doesn’t know so…….
Tina: so I have to make her jealous so that she realize that she loves u……..
Suraj:yup u r right…..
Tina: fine I will tell dad to take admission and will come tomorrow…..
Suraj: yup thanks a lot tina……
Tina: my pleasure suraj….
Flashback ends…
Suraj and tina looks one another and smiles………
Precap: vivan tells chakor that they r thinking to unite tina and suraj…………chakor gets angry and says no and goes from there..suraj gets happy seeing this..
So that was it guys.i wrote it long as I wont be able to post tomorrow.as I have my results today…so whole day I have to study so that my parents don’t stop me from writing ff…….hope ul will understand………and really hope this ff isn’t boring..thanks for reading it……….and do tell me how it was…….and ya pray for me that I get good marks and my parents don’t stop me from writing………..i will try to post tomorrow but god knows what will happen………..do let me know how it was…..
37 Comments
Really interesring ….And seriously it id not at all boring…Hope sukor will unite soon in the serial also…..
Can anybody tell me what happenned to the sukor ff u r mine???”
thanks aaru………glad u liked it.
and yup i guess liya must be busy………she will post soon aaru……….
Aha!!! Jealous chakor!!!
yup sasha……chakor jealous….
Now everyday i visit tellyupdates just for reading your ff:-D. I luv it….. It is very
good…. keep going. waiting 4 next epi.
thanks alot…………it means alot for me……………
and i m glad to know that u visit this site only for reading my ff……
I’ve not commented on ur previous ff this one is amazing.I think u should be the writer of the serial also. ….waiting for ur next ff
thanks ankur….
and ha writer of the serial…………well for that reason we have to go on the set of udaan……but anyways thanks alot…..
So i guessed it right..☺ nice 1
yup shriya u were right………….thanks alot..
Awesome….! I loved it…. I am eagerly waiting for next part…….. Very exciting….!
thanks alot nisi…glad u loved it…
Its becoming more interesting day by day poor chakor,she is feeling jealous… And surely I’ll pray for your gud results ……sry for late comment
thanks alot shabdi for ur compliment and for praying for me too……….and ha a request please dont say me sorry…..
Keep it up ur a very good writer
thanks alot gungun.very happy to get the title of very good writer…and all thanks to ul guys…………its only because of ur love and support…
dear first you tell me …..who idiot tell you your ff is boring. ………….humne use achchhe samjha dena HAi. ………..dear…..dear…..oh my sweet si dear…….ff bahut achcha h……nd aap bahut achchi writer ho ………ok……….lovely part …….keep it up
actually sonam that idiot is none other than me…dont know why but i feel it boring..i m sorry please do forgive me……….and yup thanks alot for ur sweet comment………..but today u dint gave a sweet jhappi……..anyways today i will do that……
It’s very nice dear…loved it. ..and all the best for u ??
thanks vinlor………….glad that u loved it……
sorry i mean vinlora….
Nice
thanks lucky…..
Wowwwww it seems to be intresting
thanks alot shweta…..
Its superb .i loved it .eagerly waiting fr nxt. Evn i hp u gt gd results n keep updating ur ff. Its n f the best ff i read
thanks..glad to know that u feel my ff is the best….and all credit goes to ul guys……..
Loves the full ep’!
Best of Lucy for tomorrow dear!
thanks mitha……
I love it dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
glad u loved it………
this is the best ff ever
thanks alot sonia…….glad that u feel my ff is the best……
Superb!!!!!! It’s very interesting ??