Hey guys thanks for ur love and prayers hope I get well soon and I guess I will as ur love is there with me…..anyways sorry for writing smaller ff..but I promise I will get well soon and will write lengthier ones…hope ul enjoy it………
Arjun is now upset as his plans r not working…..
On the other side…
Suraj gets shocked to see chakor……….chakor ws crying seeing suraj’s hand…
She rushes towards him and sees his hand…
Chakor: r u mad…..what u did………sadu is this the way to hurt urself…….
Suraj removes his hand……
Suraj: why do u care…….u go to arjun.
Chakor: just shutup ok…….
Chakor was not hearing anything.her mind stopped working by seeing blood from suraj’s hand…she quickly brings first aid box and bandages his hands……….it was clearly visible that suraj hurt himself but the pain was suffered by chakor……tears were rolling from her eyes….suraj saw this and he himself was crying by seeing chakor so close to him.he wanted to hug him and wanted to say her that he loves her a lot and cant leave without her……..
Suraj then remembers what happened just a few sec before……..suraj now got angry….he gets up and says….
Suraj: go to arjun.he will be waiting……
Chakor: just shut up.
Suraj: why…I don’t get this when u accepted arjun’s proposal..then why r u here………
Chakor: why dont u get this.i didn’t accepted arjun’s proposal……….i infact was not knowing it was arjun..i thought it was…….
Suraj: it was…..
Chakor: I thought it was u……..
Suraj was full confused..he wanted to laugh but was not understanding anything.
Suraj: me…
Chakor: yup u……….
Suraj then realized that chakor accepted his proposal not arjun’s…he now got a relief but wanted to hear I love u from chakor…..
Suraj: but why did u thought it was me…
Chakor: because i..
Suraj: I what….
Chakor: I love u sadu…and I will always love u……dont know when and how but I do love u a lot…….infact I love u more than my life….and everywhere I see u around me….and that’s what happened with arjun’s proposal.i thought it was u…….
Suraj was crying but this time the tears were of happiness……
He hugged chakor……
Suraj: u know what chatterbox……….i too love u…….u r just my world I m happy to get u back…….for a sec when I saw u with arjun I thought of killing myself as I thought I lost u forever.but glad that u r with me……..
Chakor gets happy but she thinks something.
Chakor breaks the hug.
Suraj: chatterbox don’t do this na….after so long I got u and then to u r breaking the hug.
Chskor: just a sec sadu…..if u love me…..why u were with tina and why were u ignoring me……
Suraj: to make u realize that u love me and u cant see me with anyone else.
Chakor: what the hell………….u r so mean sadu………………u know I was so sad……………..i really wont leave u……
She starts running behind suraj.they were running in the whole room both forgot about their hands…..and were enjoying their fun……..
Suraj: even I want that u never leave me but first catch me yaar……..
They were running up and down on the bed……and they made everything mess……
Chakor then got the pillow and started hitting him with that.
Chakor: u fool…I was so worried to see u with her…..u were making my fun ha….
She was saying this by hitting him continuously.
Suraj: no chatterbox..not with the pillow…….
Now suraj too gets a pillow to defend himself………
Suraj: ok fine even u made me worried so the mistakes r equal and if u r hitting me I too will hit u……………
they were fighting with pillow………
And whole room was messed up…..
whole room filled with cotton….
Finally they stopped their fights……
Suraj saw chakor and hugged her……
Suraj: sorry my chatterbox……I know I hurted u a lot but I wanted to be with u….and I promise u that I will make u haapy always.i just love u and will always love u only..
Chakor gets emotional hearing his talks………
Chakor: even I will love u only my sadu……..
Chakor: oh no see the room……..
Suraj: so what its ok…..we will clear everything……….
Chakor: its not a joke to clean it.
Suraj: ok baba then u clean it.
Chakor: sadu…. U na
Suraj: what na…..just give me hug ok…now I don’t want to get away from u..we will see later what to do of this room……
Chakor: I m angry from u…
Suraj: why………..
Chakor: sadu……..always boys say I love u to girl by kneeling but u didn’t even kneel nor u proposed me…
Suraj: ok so this is the case just wait I will do that….
He kneels.
Suraj: my chatterbox I always want to hear ur nuisance I love u and know even u love so give me a hug.
He gets up and hugs her.
Chakor: sadu this is not the way to propose yaar…..
Precap: Vimli sees sukor together and hugs them…suraj hugs tina and says him thanks……arjun gets unhappy….and thinks of a plan…….
Hey guys sorry I know it was too small but I cant write more………..sorry guys hope ul will understand no one allows me to write ff for a long time here in the hospiutal so…anyways hope ul liked my today’s episode and yup I wanted to get ur suggestions..as I made sukor and Vimli pairs now.i can write more but want to know that do ul want me to continue..if ul want I will write and if ul tell me to stop then this would be my last part.really want to know what ul want………thanks for reading……
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Superb dear, I love it❤️❤️❤️❤️
thanks for loving it……..
Thank you so much..lovely updates… Tum bohothi talented ho..and I think u should be continue…
thanks nupur.glad u wnt me to continue lets see what others want……
Please continue dear
yup sam…
thanks my sis.glad u want me too continue my sis amnu…
I too want u to continue this.. it’s fabulous..
Even though it is small, it is really awesome dearrrr. I loved it a lot. Why do you think to stop writing? Please continue it. May god bless that get well soon and write lengthier ff’s. If there are any mistakes please forgive me. I am poor in English.
U r English is totally correct..?
and yup vivi is right ur english is correct….
Thnq vivi and Januuu. And if there are any mistakes please tell me yaar.
no baba there is no mistake….
thanks dear..
Don’t worry.. everyone make mistakes..even I do..
u r right amnu we too make alot of mistakes….
Hey…it was awesome. The moment chakor said i love u i was soo happy…love u dear get well soon…and ha don’t think of ending it…this should not be ur last part…continue it pls…ur fans will love it and yes ur r writing amazing???
thanks shriya.glad that many of ul want me to continue it…..
It’s really fantastic.. u made my day today.. really really awesome….???.. how are u now?? What happened to you?? ?
thanks amnu and ya i m fine now…….nothing is so serious my sis so dont worry ok
But don’t tire urself too much,huh..Take medicines at time..☺
yup my sis.u dont worry
It was really superb .??.. U did the Best..☺ Thank u very much.?.. I really love it.. Pls continue don’t end this ff.. Pls.. Pls.. Pls.. ..??? Pls continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!… I’m really love this ???
thanks fatimi and yup i guess i will be continuing as all want this…….
Superb.. pls do continue it di.. hope u get well soon..
thanks zainu and yup i will…….
Get well soon my sisy and author… How do u feel now… Do u fine.. Take care of yourself.. ??????
yup i m fine now and will get well soon….
yaar kamaal ka tha,u know that every1 luvs u then why r u talking about ending get well soon,we can understand about ur problem so don’t worry nd continue writting nd 1 more thing…i think that sukor hater is the 1 who used fake names of gungun,shriya nd sasha
yup megha even i felt that but unable to know who it was as the comment is deleted…….did u read that comment could u tell me the persons name plz……and yup thanks for understanding my problem…..
that person said his/her name s deepika but i m not sure that its her actual name or not….
k no problem……i already forgot it.thanks alot meghu for letting me know about this….
Now he/she also commenting in another ff (sukor-my love). Now he is using Angel name. In that ff also he used vulgar words.
yup i saw that sukanya,,,,,,,,,,
awesome…? finally finally finally sukor proposed each other nd together ?what I wanted to see from a long time…? nd get well soon… ?nd plz don’t stop writing…. ???coz I am more interested now to see the sukor chemistry…???..so get well soon…. ?
thanks warisha…….
plz continue dear….
yup dear….
Wow… Its awesome awesome awesome prt ❤❤Fantastic.
Plzz continue dr
I loved it alottttt
thanks alot zainuu……..
Nyc one but dear plzzz don’t stop writing it….
ok sia i wont.
Finally they united.superb komal.????and ya get well soon.
THANKS ANKUR.
Im very happy with today’s epi…its gud that arjun’s plan got unsuccessful…and once again get well soon.we all luv u
thanks dear i love ul too………
Finally sukor confession loved it very much.
Komal get well soon and continue this by their marriage and if you want to continue u can bring their kids also ……
no problem ??
I love your ff’s and ur way of writing is impressive?
thanks dear……
I luved the way raju prosed chakku.
Jano ur creativity is mind blowing….
U r a good writer. Keep well……
thanks dear……
Wow dr thnx a lot fr this amazing update. Its great.plz do continue, dnt stop. I hp u get well soon . Tc
thanks dear….
It’s awesome dear. ..Finally my sukor are united ?? well here is my one suggestion personally I love sukor nok jokhs and tashan love story. ..so …since sukor are nw united give a happy ending to this FF and start a new FF…with new sukor story full of sukor tashan ,nok jokhs, hate ,care,love,intensity. ..it will be interesting I think. ..mazaa aayega. …??
And Get well soon and takecare dear ????
thanks vinlora……
I am soo happy! I was smiling all way reading ?????thankyou soo much for this wonderful epi dear?…
thanks liya…..
Wow lovely Confess between sukor and I loved it the way u conveyed it dear please continue ur ff update next asap soon
thanks lalli……..
Amazing update dear!
thanks alot….
Finally! Sukor expressed their love for one another!! I’m waiting for the day they tell each other how the feel in the serial but, I feel the writers will make us wait for a while before we see that day. Back to your fanfic though, it is incredible. Especially the scene where Chakor is attending to Suraj’s injuries. That scene was so beautiful and showed just how deeply they care for one another. The scene perfectly captured the essence and purity of their love.
yhanks alot dear….
such a lovely FF. Finally Sukor love confession, it was beautiful. plz don’t stop writing. we all love you. waiting for the next chapter…
thanks alot dear……..
Next part plzzz……..?????
I’m opening this page more than twenty times a day to check whether u have updated the ff plzzz
I want the next part
Yupp me too.. missing ur FF alot…
me too
Next update komal…..waiting
Komal I’m eagerly waiting for ur next update plz update it soon….its my request….
hlww where r u …why no new episode till now ………….plz write