hi guys iam khushi do u guys remember me ? well iam here to write a ff on kriyam i need ur support hope that u
guys will like it … it is based on friendship and love and also about family relations and at the moment i dont
even plan to add any villians to this ff …
characters
krishna mathur : rohan and soumya’s only and only son and is about to join a IT company
saiyyam : suhani and yuvraj’s son works in a IT company
yuvan: sharad and bhavna son and saiyyyam’s bestie and colleague
baby : saiyuv colleague and have a secret crush on yuvaan
about them
krishna : ms. chatter box chubby , pretty
saaiyyam: rough and tough but cool with his friends
actually in my ff suh yuv roh and sau domt have any connection or imp
episode one
roh: com mon yaaar she have to go and do her job
sau: par tum jante hoon na me uski bina nahi rah sakti hoon
roh : but try to understand pehle tum usse bath karo
sau: krishnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
a beautiful and a chubby girl is shown in the frame
kr: haa maaaaaa
sau : tum bathao ? tum mere bina rah sakthe ho ?
kr: aa aap jante hoon na me apse kitne pyaar karthe ho
roh: oh good yeh maa beti tum logh bus karo na or saumya tumharw bathein sunke legte hoon ki yeh kisi ke saath
bagkar jaa rahi hoon
sau: tum chup karo meri beti bahot achi hai woh aisa kuch bho nahi kar sakte hao hein na krishna ?
kr: kya pata maa agar muje waha koy handsome munda mil gaya toh?
saumya and rohan stares at her
kr: oh pls stop iam just kidding
krishna is getting ready to go for job and hostel
sau : krishna i know that u know everthing … but
kri: pls maa main janthi hoon ki aap kya kehne wali hain?
sau : u know right main aur tumhare papa tumpar kitne vishwas karthe ho usse kabhi todna math
kri: kabhi nahi maaa aap chinda math keejei aur vaha aise kon hoga joh krishna mathur ke dil chura sakta hai ?
a dashing young man is shown in this frame its sayyam
suh : vaha tume koi achchi ladki nahi mili kya ?
sayyam: ladkiyaam toh bahot hai par sayyam birla ke dil main aise koi ladki nahi hai
suh: agar kabhi aise koi mil gaya toh?
sayyam : bas aane doh usse , uske baath bathathuuungi….. just wait and see my sweet mom
screen shifts to krishna
sau : agar kisi se pyar hogaya tho ?
kri: crushes toh bohot hai par pyar ab thak nahi hua …… pyar toh zaroor karooga par sirf usse jisse meri mummy pappa ko achche lagte ho
krishna and saiyyam get out of thier house
krishna pov
mujhe aise kyun lagta hain ki meri zindgi main ek bahot bada wala dhamakka hone wala hain…. aur agar meri zindagu main meti pyar aagayi toh
krishna: WILL JUST KEEP FALLING IN LOVE …………….
so guys how was it liked it ? or should i stop writing this ??????? need ur comments and suggestions
9 Comments
So good. I have a request when u write hindi. Could u wriye thr translation in english next to it.
Plz continue
It’s very nice and interesting….. making m more and more curious for the next episode but I have a request…. if possible can u write their names like saumya: and then their line
Awesome start..N luving Krishna’s chubby n talkative nature
is Krishna a girl or a boy
Krishna is a girl…. she mistakenly wrote that
So sweet?
wlcm back khushi dear..
i m silent reader of ur all ff..
i read ur last ff on yuvani “FROM HEART “. in ur last episode u write in precap some more twist nd turn but u wont post ur next episode.
i just want to knw u finshed it or not in last episode.. sry dear if u feel bad.. but i just want to knw.
now about ur kriyam ff starting is good keep it up dear.. update soon
Keep writing khushi…nyc start…good epi..Update ASAP…