Hello guys i was writer of i will make u my old sanskar but i stop that ff bcoz of some reason but now i m going to start a new ff n this ff will be on that track when swara put gun on her forehead n dp stop her but but but guys there is a twist with now come with me :-
When dp stop swara 4 killing herself than she fall down
Swara(shout in pain)-aaahhhh….. Sanskar
Dp,ap n ragini r shocked to see swara pain n they was about to go near her but pairnita come n stop them
Parinita-mummy ji,papa ji n ragini plz stop don’t go near her she is doing acting like always they do
Ap(with concern)?-but i think she is not doing acting she is actuly will be in pain plz let help her
Hear swara shouting in pain
Pari(come b/w in ap n swara)-plz mummy ji i think u 4got that what they with us or (pari says something in ap) u 4get that what we can do let’s go inside plz mummy ji ragini plz u make her understand
Ragini remembered whatever happened with laksh n said
Ragini (with haters ?)-bhabhi is correct ma let’s go otherwise we once again bcome fool
They going inside
Swara (with so much difficulties?)-raaaginiiii….plz help me
But ragini ignored her n went swara shouting in pain all people saw her n old lady come near her n cheak her
Old lady-are what r u watching she is pregnant call the ambulance if we didn’t reach hospital on time she lost her baby
Swara bcome shocked n 2 other people r shocked to hear this 1st is ragini n second is pari
Ragini (with happiness?)-swara is pregnant i should help her no i won’t she did so much wrong with us (but she think sometime)whatever she did but there is no fault of that child i will help her n she calls ambulance
Pari (in anger)?-maheshwari’s hair never come in this world never
She calls some one
In hospital
Everyone reach hospital swara in icu everyone is tensed to see swara’s condition but they compose theirself 4 swara doctor come out 4rm icu
Sanskar-how is swara plz tell me doc
Doctor-mr. Maheshwari ur n ur child is very in critical condition
Every1 shock to hear child
Sanskar-child
Doc-ya ur wife is pregnant from last 1 month n this is her 2nd month n may she was in some tension thats y her condition is very difficult
Every1 shock hear docter statement
Doc-go n get some medicine plz
Sanskar goes n bring medicine but b4 he could give this medicine to doc
Doctor-i m sorry mr. Sanskar ur wife is save but u lost ur child
Precap- misunderstanding b/w swaragini,swara met with an accident 1 year leap n a blast
23 Comments
First chappy me hi itne saaare shocks
Interesting….
Nice continue soon
awesome update next part soon and plz be regular and update
Ohhh my god, very much shocks
U just nailed it
Wow. Awesome. Interesting track. Will be waiting for next part.post asap please
My God! In the first epi itself, you gave so many shocks??
But its inetresting! Loved it❤
shock pe shock… great Kris…… good job
Interesting ….more shocks …update next soon
Nice
Awesome please update soon
Nice
nice..and continue ur other story..tc..
Nice
Awesome
I liked it…..n ready for more shocks too??
nice…swasan’s child??
Shocking yet interesting..
nice
So much of shock!!! ?? btw the concept is awesome
Eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
Update soon
Nyc
nice