Hii dears…hw r u all…did u all miss me…i missed u all a lot…sry held up wit exams…nw iam a bit free as my last exam is oly aftr 1 week…i had an idea of tis os…so thought to post it…sry if its not nice…but pls do cmnt evryone..missing all ur cmnts…may be tis may be my last or second last os…aftr tis may be one more os i may post if i get time within tis leave…aftr clg starts i cant…so pls all cmnt in tis…ok nw to the stry…
Abhi's pov…
Ohh no…wat will i do nw…if i go home without buying tat…ten tats all today death day oly fr me…hw i frgt it damn it…ok its not too late…i ll buy it and cme…
He drove his car to a big shop…he rushed in and came back aftr a while smiling happily…he drove his car back home…
Abhi:thank god..iam escape today…lucky tat i got it…
He reachd home and got down and rushed in…he whistled…
Abhi:iam back…
As soon as he finished…a small boy ran in to his arms…he lifted him and kissed his face inch by inch…the boy hugged him and kissed him…
Abhi:so did u miss me baby…
Boy:papa..is tis a question..i missed u so much…
He widened his arms to show tat…abhi smiled and brushed his nose wit his nose…he giggled…
Lady:ohh u came beta…arey aneesh…jst nw he came…get down…he ll be tired na…
Abhi:its ok ma..bacchu hey na…
Aneesh:oye papa…iam not bacchu…iam 5 years old ok…
Abhi:ok officer…
He smiled proudly…abhi tickled him…he got down…
Lady:beta…i hve made food…i hve finished all wrks..iam leavng home…u eat and take rest…i ll cme tmrw…
Abhi:ok ma…wait i ll drop u…
Lady:no beta its ok…u take care of him and take rest…i ll go…no prblm…
Abhi:but maa its late…
Aneesh:haan and u r too old na dadi…
Lady:oye naughty iam.not too old…wen i can manage u itself…i can manage anythng…
He frowned at her…abhi smiled…
Lady:its ok abhi…i ll go…
Abhi:ok ma take care…call me once u reach…
Lady:arey iam not a child…
Abhi:but u r my maa na…
She caressed his face…she had tears…
Lady:no one in tis wrld can love a caretaker like a own mom…at times i feel bad tat i dnt hve a son like u…
Abhi:no ma..dbt feel like tat…iam thr na…ten think abt me…i hve a maa..but wats the use…i cant get love too frm her…and i dnt evn like to see her either…so dnt wry u r my maa and iam ur son ok..
Aneesh:and iam ur grandson…
They smiled and kissed him…she then left…
Abhi:so champ…feelng hungry…
Aneesh:no papa…sleepy…
Abhi:arey no no…aftr eatng oly sleep…no sleepng wit empty stomach…wait papa wil fresh up and cme..ten we ll eat ok…
Aneesh:ok…
Abhi went to fresh up…aftr sometime he came and fed fr aneesh…wen he was feeding they heard a huge sound…aneesh became scared…abhi hugged him…
Abhi:nthng beta..papa is thr na…
Aneesh:y tis is hpng daily papa…iam scared…
Abhi:nthng…see u sit here and watch tv…papa wil cme nw…
Aneesh:papa dnt leave me alone…
Abhi:arey u r such a strong boy na…and u r not alone..see ur fav chotta bheem…watch tis..be brave like him…papa wil cme nw…
Aneesh smiled weakly…abhi rushed upstairs…he took keys and opened the door of a room…it was fully dark…he switched on the lights…he went closer to the bed…beside the bed on the floor a girl is seen sitting…her hair is crampled…she is been tied wit a chain in hands and legs…she has a baby toy in her hand…she is talkng and playing wit it…abhi sat near her and caressed her head…she startled and moved…she lifted her head and saw abhi…its none othr than PRAGYA…his fuggy…
Pra:abhoo…u…y u scared me…see u scared baby also…see its crying…ohh dnt wry baby..its jst papa…
She was speaking to tat doll…she was speaking like a child…abhi controlled his tears…
Abhi:fuggy…are u ok…wat was tat sound…
Pra:arey vo…baby was sleeping…but tis tv got switched on suddenly and disturbed her sleep…so oly i broke it…
She complained like a kid…abhi caressed her head and kissed on her forehead…
Abhi:ok u take rest…i ll bring food fr u…
Pra:okiee…
She exclaimed like a kid…abhi smiled wit tears and left…he came down and saw aneesh slept on the sofa…he kissed him and took him to his room…he covered him wit blanket and moved…he heard aneesh speaking in sleep…
Aneesh:papa…papa…dnt leave me…iam scared…iam scared of mumma…pls dnt leave me…mumma..dnt scare me pls…
Abhi cried hearing tat…he left the room…he sat on the sofa and cried hard…
Abhi:wat a life is tis…y god..y…y r u makng tat small child life as hell…wat mistake he did other than being our son…its been 6 years…u r still testing my patience…iam fed up of tis god…iam not tired of takng care of my fuggy…iam tired of consoling my son…i cant see him like tis…wil tis happen anywhr in the wrld…a son is afraid of his mom…wat punishmnt is tis…
He broke down…ten he composed himself…he took food fr pragya and went up…she was sleeping hugging the toy…he woke her…
Abhi:fuggy…pragya get up…u hbe to eat…
She cuddled and moved aside…he woke her again…she pushed him…he got hurt…he again woke her..she got up and beat him badly and screamed…abhi got all beatings happily…
Abhi:over huhh..ok cme nw eat…
Pragya frowned and cried like child…he fed her forcibly…she spit on his face…he wiped it and again fed her…she ate crying…ten he made her to sleep…he kissed her forehead wit tears and left…he went back to aneesh and slept with difficulty…
Nxt morning…aneesh woke up abhi…
Aneesh:papa…uto na…hw much time u ll sleep…
Abhi lazily opened his eyes….
Lady:arey aneesh…he s sleeping well oly on sundays y r u waking him..
Aneesh:arey dadi..its boring fr me…
Abhi:its ok ma..ok tell me wat u want…
Aneesh:get up and get ready…we ll go out…
Abhi:ok wait…
He went to fresh up…as he was gettng ready…he got a call…
Abhi:hello…nikhil…hii man hw r u…wat u r in mumbai…wow tats so nice…of course u must cme to my home…wat u r cmng nw…supr cme iam free oly…ok see u soon..bye…
He turned and saw aneesh staring at him…he smiled sheepishly…he kneeled befre him…
Abhi:vo…iam sry bacchu…he is my clg frnd…we r meetng aftr a long time…hw can i tell no wen he says he is cmng…its not good manners na…
Aneesh stared and ten smiled and hugged him…
Aneesh:papa…hw much coward u r…u r afraid of me haha…its ok papa…by the way i was feelng bored at home…so oly i cald out…if ur frnd cms also we ll hve fun oly na…
Abhi smiled…
Abhi:of course…he is full of masti…he has a naughty son too…so u ll get a companion to play…
Aneesh:wow ten supr…
Abhi:haan…ok cme…we ll make arrangmnts fr them…
They left..aftr sometime door bell rang…he opened…nikhil was standing wit tanu and his son…abhi hugged him and calld them in…
Abhi:its been a long time man…hw r u…
Nik:fine yaar…hw r u…
Abhi:good…ten tanu madam…hw r u…
Ta:iam supr abhi…
Abhi:haan i can see…became fat…married ur clg love itself…so happy na…
Ta:abhi…
All laughed…
Ta:acha..ten wat abt u sir…u also married ur clg love oly…our bestiee…our chashmish…but whr s she nw..i dnt see her…
Abhi became dull…
Ta:abhi…tell me yaar…whr is pragya…its been a long time i met my darling…whr is she…
Abhi remained silent…
Ta:u wnt tell na…ok aneesh dear…tell me whr is ur mom…
Aneesh jerked hearing mom…he startled and ran away…takhil were shocked…
Ta:arey wat hpnd to him…abhi pls tell na..whr is pragya…
Abhi:cme wit me…
Takhil followed him confused…he took them to tat room…he opened and switched on light…they were shocked to see the sight in front…they looked at abhi who was in tears…tanu went near her…
Abhi:tanu no…dnt..
Tanu pushed his hand and went near her wit tears..she touched her…she pushed her and shouted…tanu tried hard to convince her…
Ta:pragya..its me tanu..dnt u remember ur darling…wats tis wat hpnd to u..
She dnt listen..she beat and pushed her..abhi consoled her and took them out..
Ta:wat the hell is hpng here abhi…wats all tis…wat hpnd to her…she is like tis and u dnt evn infrm anyone of us…open up atleast nw damn it…
Abhi broke down into tears…they convinced him…
Abhi:all coz of me oly…iam oly responsible fr her state…i must not hve married her…
He cried hard…they were confused and crying…
Ta:abhi pls tell man…wat hpnd…
Abhi:its all coz of my mom…
Nik:wat…
Abhi:haan…it was aftr 3 years of our marriage…my mom came to our home…
Fb starts…
Pra:maa..cme cme…hw r u…its been a long time…
Mom:iam fyn beta…hw r u both…whr is abhi…
Pra:we r fyn ma…wait i ll call him…suniye…cme down…maa has cme…
Abhi came down and hugged her…
Abhi:maa u came…nw oly u remember the way here huhh…
Mom:sry beta…lots of wrk..u knw na…ur maasi daughter wedding…tat too it wil be so grand in our village na…so oly…
Abhi:haan sry ma..we were not able to cme…i had office…
Pra:haan maa..i was so eager to see our village..but he dnt get leave…
Mom:its ok beta…its good tat u dnt cme…
They were confused…
Abhi:maa…wat do u mean…
Mom:abhi..u remember mansi..ur chachi daughter who was married one year aftr ur marriage…
Abhi:haan…so…
Mom:she is pregnant nw…
Abhi:wow supr ma…tat buddhu dnt tell me…
Mom:haan all are celebrating tat happiness thr…but if u both cme…
Abhi:maa i cant undrstand…wat r u tellng…
Mom:abhi…she was married aftr u…its been 3 years…still ur wife dnt get pregnant…
Pragya and abhi was shocked…
Abhi:maa…y r u comparing tat nw…evryone wil hve a time fr evruthng…its not tat if u marry frst u ll get child frst…
Mom:haan but its been 3 years…
Abhi:its jst 3 years maa..u r tellng as if its 10 or 20 years…
Mom:abhi…tis may be common fr u people in cities…but not in villages…all r askng thr y ur bahu is not gettng pregnant…does she hve any prblm…wat wil i answer them…
Abhi:maa…wat r u talkng…tell me who askd..i ll speak to them…
Mom:dnt show ur amger abhi…not one or two all askd…they r tellng me…
Abhi:tellng wat…
Mom:vo…they r tellng me…y dnt u do a second marriage fr ur son…
Abhigya were shocked…pragya had tears…
Abhi:maa…
Abhi screamed…mom was shocked…
Abhi:maa..u r also a woman oly na…hw can u speak like tis…wat if the prblm is wit me…
Mom:no abhi..in our family thr r no such prblms..i think she oly…
Pragya ran away upstairs wit tears…
Abhi:enough maa…stop ur nonsense…its my life…i knw wat to do…u jst leave…
Mom:abhi..iam ur maa…
Abhi:so oly iam patient maa…
Mom was shocked…she left angrily…
Mom:u ll regret later fr tis abhi…u ll knw soon abt tat idiotic girl who cant make u a father…
Abhi:maa..jst get lost…
She left…abhi went to pragya…she was sobbing hard…he touchd her…she hugged him and cried…
Abhi:fuggy..pls dnt take her seriously…she is mad…
Pra:abhishek…y dnt u agree wit her…
Abhi broke the hug and looked at her…
Abhi:agree wat…
Pra:to marry again…
He slapped her hard…she looked at him wit tears…
Abhi:i ll kill u if u say tis again…fr tat u can say me to die…hw can i think of anothr girl in ur place fuggy..are u mad…i dnt care even if we dnt hve child…u r enough fr me…
She hugged him and cried…
Pra:iam sry abhishek…
They broke the hug…
Pra:abhishek…pls dnt tell tis to any of our frnds or family..i dnt want them to feel bad…
Abhi:ok…
Pra:abhishek..pls…shall we go to doctor tmrw…
Abhi:fuggy…u too…
Pra:pls abhishek…i too need a child to call me mumma and u as papa..pls…
Abhi:ok…
Next day they went to hospital…
Pra:doc…is evrythng ok…
Doc:vo..mrs.pragya…
Abhi:wat hpnd doc…pls tell na…
Doc:vo..mr and mrs.mehra…iam sry…mrs.mehra..ur uterus is too weak..so oly u r gettng delayed in pregnancy…
Pragya had tears…
Pra:doc..ten i cant…
Doc:no no…u can get pregnant…but it may take some time…and also u may hve many complications in it…
Pra:its ok doc…iam ready to bear anythng…but we need a child…
Doc:ok i ll gve u some tablets…lets see…
Pra:thank u doc…
They left…tis continued fr one year…but she dbt get pregnant…she was gettng more worried…wenevr she sees any child she ll feel bad…her longing became more..moreover his mom and othr relatives was pestering her and hurting her more…abhi was not able to bear all tis…
Aftr one year…one day abhi came back frm office…
Pra:u go and fresh up..i ll bring coffee…
Abhi felt bad tat she is not talkng properly to him nowdays…he went behind her…as he came closer…she got dizzy and fell down…he held her…
Abhi:fuggy..fuggy..wat hond…uto na..
He took her to room…he calld doc..doc came and saw her…
Abhi:is evrythng ok doc…
Doc:nthng is ok…
He was shocked…
Abhi:doc…
Doc:haan..coz u r gng to becme papa…
Abhi realised aftr sometime oly…he had happy tears…he jumped in joy…
Abhi:thank u so much doc…
Doc:my pleasure abhi…but as i said earlier she is too weak…so take care of her…
Abhi:of course doc…
Doc left…he came in…pragya smiled at him…she had happy tears…both hugged in happiness…
Abhi:tats it fuggy…all our prbkms r gng to end…
Pra:iam so happy abhishek…angel is gng to come fr us…
Abhi:ohh u decided its girl huhh…
Pra:of course it wil be an angel oly fr our prblms..
Abhi:iam happy wit watevr it is…
They smiled…
Months passed…it was 7th month fr pragya…abhi was taking more care of her…even abhi mom askd sry and came to take care of her…one day suddenly she got pain and cried…abhi and his mom were panickd…
Abhi:fuggy..wat hpnd…
Pra:abhishek…its..its paining…
Mom:but beta its oly 7th month…hw can it…
Abhi:mom its not time fr tis nw…lets take her to hospital…
They took her to hospital…they were waiting tensed…aftr a long time doc came out…
Abhi:doc..wat hpnd is she fyn…
Mom:baby is fyn na…
Abhi was irked of her question…
Doc:iam sry mr.mehra…ur child is no more…
He was shocked…he lost balance and hit the wall…
Doc:as ur wife uterus was very weak…she was not able to bear tat child…it was a very pre mature baby…we tried to save it but…
Mom:wat..no..tis cant hpn..no ohh my god…
Doc:iam sry…but abhi..nw oly u must take more care of her…i think she is not oly physically weak but mentally too…
Abhi came back to senses…
Abhi:doc..may i knw wat child i had…
Doc:a girl…
Abhi felt bad fr pragya…he went in to see her…she was unconscious…he was worried hw to convince her wen she knws tis…aftr sometime she got up and saw her stomach…she was shocked…
Pra:abhishek…our baby..whr it is..its fyn na…
Abhi had tears…abhi mom came thr…
Mom:hw it wil be fyn…wen it has u as mom…
Abhi:maa pls keep quiet…
Mom:y shld i..i lost my grandchild…
Abhi:maa its our child frst remember tat…
Mom:so wat..she killed it na…
Pragya was shocked…abhi mom blurted out evrythng and thrashed her wit wrds…she was shocked…she dnt evn cry…abhi was worried…he touched her…
Abhi:fuggy…fuggy..pls cry out na…
She came to senses…
Pra:no..no…my child dnt die…no u all r lying…no my baby…my angel…no…
She shouted like mad and became unconscious…abhi cried…
Days passed…but she was same…she was always inside room…seeing the ceiling..talkng to a doll…she thought tat doll as her baby and fed it and slept wit it…at times she ll shout like mad…
Abhi consulted many doc…but thr was no use..
Fb ends…
Tanu and nikhil were shocked…abhi sobbed…
Ta:wats tis man..tis much hpnd u dnt tell us…but abhi…wat abt aneesh…
Abhi smiled sarcastically…
Abhi:tat was the wrst part of it…doc said tat she may became normal if she gets child again…so i did without her consent…in one year…she got pregnant…she was not evn in the state to undrstand it…evn aftr gvng birth to child she dnt knw tat..she was not ready to believe tat its our child…since it was boy she dnt believe as according to her our child was oly girl…so she dnt evn accept aneesh till nw…wrst part is aneesh is so scared of her…
Ta:wat..
Abhi:he keeps askng y mom is like tis..iam convincing tat she is not feelng well…she wnt allow anyone near her except me..the wrds of my mom and othrs are haunting her…so she is scared of all..so oly she beat u too…
Ta:enough of it man..i cant bear more than tis…we must do smthng to tis…u evn frgt abt our doc frnds na..no prblm…we ll talk to them…
Meanwhile they heard aneesh crying…abhi was shocked to hear his cry frm pragya room…he rushed thr…he was shocked to see aneesh lying down thr and crying…tanu son riyan was standing scared…abhi lifted him…
Abhi:aneesh bacchu wat hpnd..y u came here…
Aneesh:papa…riyan was tellng hw he ll play wit his mom…i too want to play wit mumma..i tried to talk to her…she was playing wit doll itself…so i threw it saying tats not ur baby iam ur baby maa…she pushed me down…
Abhi was shocked…he got angry on pragya fr frst time…he webt to her…he held her tightly…
Abhi:enough of it pragya..stop tis…i cant bear u hurting our child..pls undrstand the reality pragya…pls…dnt kill me…
She cried in pain…abhi came to senses…he left her…
Abhi:iam..iam sry fuggy..but y u did like tat…i lost my control sry…
Pragya cried and hugged him like a child…he hugged her wit tears…tanu and nikhil had tears seeing them…
They calld thr doc frnds…he suggested tat they can adopt a girl child of 7-8 years and tell her tat its thr child…
Abhi:ohh god y i dbt think tis befre..thank u so much tanu…
He started the procedures and in some days he adopted a girl child…wen pragya was sleeping he took away tat doll frm her…wen she woke up she shouted to find her baby missing…abhi came…
Abhi:fuggy..y r u shouting…
Pra:abhoo…abhoo..my baby…
Abhi:haan our daughter oly na…here oly she is…
He bought tat girl befre her…pragya was shocked…
Pra:she…who is she…
Abhi:arey strange fuggy…u got up frm sleep and frgt our daughter itself huhh…she is oly our daughter aaradhya..jst nw she came frm school…
Pra:wat..is she our aaradhya..hw i frgt it…anyway leave it…
She hugged tat girl wit tears…abhi smiled…
Ta:abhi wats tat name aaradhya…
Abhi:tat was the name she decided fr our daughter…
Ta:supr abhi..
Pra:arey tanu..nikhil…wen u came…
They were shocked…
Abhi:fuggy..u can recognise them…
Pra:are u teasing me…y i dnt knw my frnds huhh…tat too my darling…
They all had tears…abhi hugged her…she was confused..all hugged her…ten abhi took her to doc…he examined her and said tat she was perfectly fine and they can tell all truth…abhi told her evruthng wit fear…she was shocked…she cried…she ran and hugged him…
Pra:iam sry abhishek…i troubled u so much…iam so sry…
Abhi:buddhu…nthng like tat…iam not tellng all tis fr u to knw hw much i suffered..u must knw abt our son aneesh…
Pra:i knw abhishek…its wrst…i feel bad…whr is he nw…
Abhi:cme…
Abhi took him to his room…he was drawing smthng…they went near…they had tears seeing it…he was drawing a mother father and son picture…the son was holding father hand amd extending hand fr mom but she was far away…pragya undrstood his longing fr her…sje touched him…he was shocked to see her…he hid behind abhi in fear…pragya kneeled down…
Pra:bacchu..wnt u cme to ur mom..u dnt wabt to play wit me..
Aneesh:are u tellng me…u dbt like me na…
Pragya felt bad…
Pra:iam sry fr all tat baby..mumma was not feelng well tat time…sry..hereafyr i wbt leave u…
Aneesh:really…
Pra:promise..
Aneesh hugged her…she kissed his face inch by inch…both cried…abhi too hugged them…ten they saw aaradhya standing at door…pragya called her in…she came…she hugged her…
Pra:u r not oly like our in name..frm nw u r also our dayghter…u hve big responsibility of takng care of ur brothr..and aneesh tis is ur didi ok…
Aneesh:hey jolly…i got didi to play wit me…
All smiled and hugged each other…
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So tis is wat hpnd in the life of my bhai like frnd abhishek mehra…tis Dr.PURAB KHANNA whom u all knw is oly coz of him…without him iam nthng …i lost my family in childhood…he oly took care of me…he sacrificed his studies and gve me studies…he made me a doctor…but he frgt me during his prblm..if tanu dnt tell us we would not hve knwn and pragya would not hve been cured…yes we means me and my bulbul…we both are psychatrists…today iam standing here in tis "CHILD INFERTILITY AWARENESS CAMP"..i feel honoured to be here…here i need to tel smthng to u all…"Infertility is not a big sin…dnt hurt those women…iam askng all mothers and mothet in laws here..is it tat women's mistake of being weak or not able to get a child…ten y r u all killing her wit ur wrds…do u all think tar she dnt hve feelng fr tat…she herself will ne broken down wit her longing fr child…evn if u dnt support her dnt hurt her more…u can see in the case of my frbd itself..the main reason fr her prblm is the haunting and hurting wrds of her surrounding people…jst think if thr is ur daughter in the place of ur bahu wil u talk like tat…if ur daughter's mother in law talk her like tat wil u be happy…u ll oly try to solve her prbkm na…ten y cant u do it fr it bahu…she is also like ur daughter oly na…leave al tat..frst of all she is also a woman like u na..y cabt u think tat…huhh…"
The whoe place was flooded wit tears…thr was not a single eye without tears…purab wiped his tears too…all stood up and clapped fr him…a lady frm the crowd came up..purab was shocked to see her..it was abhi mom…
Pur:aap…here…
Mom:haan…look whr destiny has put me…to evryone here…iam tat cruel mom of abhishek…nw iam paying fr tat sins…
Abhigya who were sitting down were shocked…
Mom:haan u wre ryt purab..u askd na if its ur daughter wil u do so…nw iam in tat state oly…aliya is not able to bear child…evn i came here fr tat oly…god has punished me fr my sins..but my daughter is suffering in tat…
Aliya who was down cried…abhi went to her…abhigya hugged her and convinced her…
Mom:iam sry pragya beta fr watevr i did…
Pragya nodded no wit tears…
Mom:i beg all mom here dnt do my mistake anyone…pls…pls umdrstand the heart of tat girl…Motherhood is such a pure feelng…we r killing it wit all our dirty minds…so pls dnt do tis mistake anyone…
Pur:thank u maa..and all..yes..i accept its sad if u dnt hve child..but think tis…thr r so many children in tis wrld who r deprived of parents…think tat god has gvn u a chance fr gvng a life to them..its a still more big thing…aliya i think u too undrstabd it…
She nodded…all clapped and shouted thank you sir…he smiled and left…
Abhigya met mom…she askd sry..all hugged each other..aliya calld her husband and said ant adoption…he too accepted…all were happy…thus all ended happily in all thr lifes…
*********THE END**********
So hw was it…iam so sry tat its too big…i dnt knw hw it became so long…i jst wanted to show all emotions…tis prblm is not thr in many places nw…but still some village people do it still…i myself hve seen it..i feel pity fr those women…its not thr mistake but they r gettng punished…so i thought to tell tat through tis os…hope u all like it…pls cmnt…love u all..bye???? RESPECT MOTHERHOOD…RESPECT WOMEN..
46 Comments
Nice one Di.
It will be a good example who all are torching their daughter-in-law for infertility
Hats off diiiiiiiii
Tq so much dear love u?????
aweeeeeeeeeee u are soooo genius dear,I had tears while reading,its soooo emotional dear and wishing u all the best in ur upcoming exam
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love u so much dear…….
Tq darlu love u loads muuaahh miss u too????
Wow baby doll that was awesome one!! Ppl out there are suffering a lot because of some stupid ppl around them.. Loved this OS a lot
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Sachmuch ruka diya saru di…..
My eyes became wet…
It was fabulous… m not able to express d greatness of this os in words
Love u loads n loads
Ohh my pyaari darlu tats so sweet tq da love u loads miss u muuaahh???????
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Tq dear?????
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Tq so much dear love u?????
This is so amaaainnngggg !????????????????????! Staranya ,you inspired me today ? Love you for what you are .Loved this OS .?♥️ Sorry for being inactive here since ages .?
Ohh darling u r back i missed u so much da in my prev ff i dnt mention ur name in last epi coz i thought u wnt see since it was long time u came but i missed u really so much da tis staranya is a star fr all here oly coz of u dear ur name fr me ur frst encouragmnt to write 100 epi all r oly reason iam nthng without u love u loads da chlm muuaahh??????????
It’s ok. I loved it long. It was awesome. And it’s lessonot for everyone that infertility is not sin.
Tq so much dear love u??????
Akka that was splendid.. .loved it to the core. ..emotional & beautiful. .
Love you loads. .waiting for ur nxt is Akka..
Tq darling love u loads muahh???????
Ho my god… It’s really very touching yaar…. Mujhe tho rona aagai ye story padke…. It’s just awesome…. U r fabulous…
Tq so much darling love u?????
nice
Tq dear?????
Wow..very nice .its really touching..ammazing…i hav no words to xpress it..
Tq so much dear love u loads???????
omg saro no words to describe this os !
yes dr you brought up all the emotions here !
such an beautiful os that i ever read !
will miss all your writings to the death !
This one is fantabulous saro !
Tq darlu love u loads muuaahh????????
Excellent story…really nice story…but I already saw same story in some movie…but this is nice message to society…I really liked it…congrats for successfully completed this story…
Tq dear love u?????
Lost of words saranya….. Seriously,, i was crying by imaging abhigya state.??….. Ua really awesome…. Such an emotional OS…. Suprbbbbbbbbbbb saru…. It touched my heart…. It remains in it forever dear?????????????????????????….. Thanks fr writings it….. Loulve u loads dear….. Nd one more thing… Just now i mentioned abt ua writings in my last update dat am missing ua writings…. Then i saw ua OS….. Really felt very happy to read it aftr longgggg time….
Tq so much darling love u loads muuaahhh tq fr ur love and support da muuahh??????
Saranya di you are back I am soo happy that you came and this update was emotional even I cried in some places and after your ff wrong-path-right-journey-kkb-episode u said that you will come with one os and each and every os that I read it think it is yours but that may be not yours but after seeing that name of update I guessed that is you only so for conformation I scroll down to see the author name and I am soo happy to see your name there love you di and hope you remember me but I won’t forget you till I die and I am gonna say about u to my friends and relatives that I am having such a beautiful di and love you waiting for another update.
Ohh darlu hw can i frgt my baby never ever da chlm tq so much fr tis much love iam feelng overwhelmed so happy tat iam hvng anothr cute so loving sis love u loads stay blessed and happy forever love u loads muuaahh????????
Awesome di??loved it!
Love u❤️❤️
Tq dear love u loads?????
Loved it totally….. Hats off to u…
Tq so much dear love u??????
Hats off to ur thoughts
Tq so much dear love u?????
It’s superb I loved it.
Tq dear?????
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Tq darlng love u loads??????