Hello everyone….i m one of d greatest fan of zkm n even all of u……I m realy inspired from u all so finalyy I decided to write a OS …..i know itzz first time it will not be upto the mark………so plzzz give ur suggestions….
Lets introduce my characters…..
Shaurya Khanna(male lead): 4th year student of IIT, handsome ,friendly guy(best student of his college)
Mehak Sharma(female lead): also 4th year IIT student(not in shaurya’s college)(best student of her college) beautiful, cute,but shy and not so frank.
Vicky and mohit (shaurya’s best frnds)
Nehal and Sonal (mehak’s best frnds)
Scene 1
Cultural fest @ delhi…
Student from different IIT colleges are getting down of there respective busses…….
Nehal – hey where is this mehak….what d hell yar……..hamesha apne dunia me rahti h(always in her own world)…
Sonal- I think she has gone to d church near the institute..let’s go……
Other side…….
Vicky –yar where is this shaurya gone…..everyone is here where is he????
Mohit-let’s find him out…….
@ church….
A girl is seen praying….itzz none other than our mehak…….
Mehak(while praying in her mind): O god …..i wish we win the compition…..n u knw the other thing what I want ..i ask for it everyday…but yet u had not fulfill my that wish………but I have faith on u…….plzzzzz mere sonu se mujhe mia do(plzzzz meet my sonu with me)….plz plzz plzzzzzzzz…..
Just then a handsome boy enters inside the church……he also comes to praying area….he is none other than our rocking shocking shaurya………
Shaurya(while praying in his mind): o god u knw for wht I had came here………….just one thing….. one and only one thing………make me meet my dream girl with me…………dnt knw who would she be…………..but ek bar to mila do…. (made her meet me once)……..in return I will loose all d competition(actually he don’t wnna participate only but becoz of his talent he is forced by his college) ……
Then both shaurya and mehak move ahead to lit candles….they lit the candles together but did’nt noticed each other……while returning they bump into each other….
Shaurya: soryy soryyy….
Mehak: sorry my foot……..i knw u boys well .u intentionally bump in beauifull girls like us…..
Shaurya 😮 helooo miss universe……i said sorry na .can’t u listen..
They start arguing more n more…….
At last , shaurya(shouts):shut up!!!!……. I dnt have so much time to spend on u….chl hawa ane de(let me go…….)
Mehak (irked) …they both leave towards opposite sides……
Just then vicky n mohit comes to shaurya……and nehal and sonal comes to mehak………
Sonal: what happen mehak .why so angry???
Mehak :nothing let’s go….(with fully angry voice)
While leaving mehak n shaurya both looks back to each other with anger on their face……….
Scene 2
@ auditorium…
All students are sitted in their respective chairs….
Host: so u all guys are here to represent ur colleges…….the competition will start from tomorrow onwards….we wish best of luck 2 all of u… so good ni8…
Day by day competition is held……
One day @ evening…..shaurya and mehak finds their frnds missing……they start searching…finalyy they find them in canteen ……..but what they found was shocking……vicky-nehal and mohit-sonal were dating each other………they thought they should not disturb them so they leave…..
Till now its was almost dark……mehak went on a walk thinking not to disturb her frnds.. ..the road was lonely…..suddenly few men came and started staring at her…she understand what they are upto……..so she started running but it was vain…….they soon surrounded her.they started coming near her.she started cring badly…..and starts shouting …..suddenly a man came from behind and started beating the men………..it was our hero shaurya…..shaurya beats all of them badly……….
then comes near mehak……..and holds her hand and says: BHAGOOOOOOOOOOOO(RUNNNNNN)……
they run and goes inside a garage to their rescue…….mehak sees shaurya’s head bleading….
Mehak(crying): r u mad……..y u did this if anything happen 2 u…..(with concern)
Shaurya(flirtingly): if anything happen 2 me..so what……..hm hm hmmmmm tell……….ohoooo u started liking me.ri8
Mehak: wrong……I am concern just for the sake of humanity…..(saying this she starts cleaning his wound and bandage it with her duppata)
They share a eye lock……shaurya mesmerized in mehak..
(……dil bharta nhi… aankhe rachti nhi….
Chahe kitna bhi dekhte jau…waqt jaye me rok na pau…
Tu thori der oor thair ja…..soniya….tu thori der oor their jaaaaaa……)
Their eyelock breaks with a sound of locking d door……
They both shout: OOO noooooo……..they locked the door…..how we will go now……
Mehak(tensed): tomorrow is my dance compition……..now what I will do…..o noooo (mehak starts crying)
Shaurya(concerned): ohooo dnt cry baby……I m here so wht 2 worry for……
Mehak: that is only the point to worry…..
Shaurya: okey okey…..dnt worry ,I will make u reach their @ correct time….
Mehak: how could I trust u……
Shaurya: are yar I m not so bad……..i promise….
Mehak :paakka waka promise…….
Shaurya: yeah!!!!….
All ni8 they sleep in each others shoulder………
@ morning….
Shaurya wakes up and sees mehak’s cute face…… he caresses her face…..(dil q yeh mera shor kare……idhr nhi.udhr nhi……….teri oor chale..)
He was about to kiss her..just then mehak wakes up…..
Mehak(shocked):wht were u doing???
Shaurya: I …I ….i was just waking u up………u have to go na……ur dance compition…….
Mehak(againg tensed): yah…yah… wht to do knw…….u made fake promise….mujhe pata tha……..(I knew) u all boys r liers….
Shaurya: no babby…….let’s go…..i found it….(he points towards open window)
Mehak(happily);wow..let’s go….
They run and reach the institute……but it was 7:45 and competition was going to start @ 8 o’ clock…..
Mehak(sadly): now how would I get ready……..
Shaurya thinks something…..
Shaurya: one idea is there…… but u have 2 agree for tht…….
Mehak(with excitement): wht??? Tell fast…
Shaurya:I will help u.to get ready…….
Mehak:wht d hell……
Shaurya: ok as u wish .bye…….i had made u reach here now u do wht u want…bye……..
Shaurya starts leaving…….. Mehak: okkk wait shaurya …plzzzzz sory sory……..but…..
Shaurya: are wht but..i m not bad boy,…….u can trust me once again…….
Scene3
@mehak’s room
Mehak come out wearing lehanga….shaurya was mesmerized…….he kept seeing her………
Mehak: wht u r seeing… turn that side …when I will need ur help I will call u…..
Shaurya: as u wish…..miss universe…
They recall their first meeting and their silly fight…..both start laughing……
After some time…….mehak was ready……but was unable to ….hook her blouse…..she was continuously trying but all vain…..
Mehak: shaurya ……
Shaurya: wht??? Any help….(turning other side only)
Mehak: yes but not from u……….plzz cll sonal……I need her help…..
Shaurya:okey…..
He starts going…..but suddenly stops………thinks some thing…..then he slowly comes back to mehak……
Mehak(nervous):wht???? Why r u coming near me…….i knew u will take advantage……..
Shaurya: SHHHhhhh just shut up…….
Shaurya comes near her…an starts hooking up her blouse…..while closing his eyes……..mehak looks.him in mirror…..
(……. Chhuteya na chhute mose Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna……. Bolna mahi bolna)
After hooking shaurya turns way ,…. And says: I did this because …..if I would have gone outside..everyone would have known….u and me are inside…….and they would have spread this news…..so sorry ……
Scene 4
@ auditorium
Host:all the compition are over now…..itzzz the result time……..
One by one….prizes ar given.for all compition held for past 4 days….
Host: now is the time to declare best students of this year of culturak fest……..itzzzzz tie this time…….they are……..they are brilliant…….outstanding……MEHAK SHARMA and SHAURYA KHANNA…..
Everyone claps for them.sonal and nehal hugs mehak.otherside …mohit and vicky hugs shaurya……they both reach stage……they both congrats each other…………
Host:so hope u gyus enjoyed the fest……..so bye…….itsss time 2 return……bye ..all of u….
Listening this shaurya becomes sad……..he recalls.all his moments.with mehak……….suddenly a wide smile comes to his face…..
Shaurya(in his mind):yes finally I got her …..thnk god…..
Shaurya runs to mehak’s room……but mehak was not in the room…
Shaurya: sonal nehal…..where is mehak???
Nehal: no I dnt have any idea……do u sonal???
Sonal :yes I think she had gone to church………..
Nehal :ohooooo…………
Shaurya thinks something….
Shaurya:will u guys help me plz…..
Sonal and nehal(confused):how could we help u??
Shaurya: actually.boo… boo… I started feeling for mehak…….i wnna tell her my feeling for her……..will u help me in proposing her…….
Sonal: sorry ……to say….but…
Shaurya (confused):why???? But ……what???
Nehal: actualyyy she will not accept u ever………
Shaurya: y am I bad boy or bad looking………
Nehal: tht’s not the matter u r dashing……….but…..
Shaurya: but………. Wht?
Sonal: mehak already love her childhood frnd ……sonu…….she is mad for him………from childhood she prays god…to meet him……….so…..
Nehal: even now she had gone to pray for that only………..i knw it is childish ……….by won nhi manegi….kabhi( she will never agree)
Shaurya was in full shocked and disheartened……..he slowly start leaving…..but turns back and see mehak….all three were shocked……..
Mehak(angrily):I said na…….u all boys r same………I talked with u nicely……..so u started taking advantage…………I never thought u will be like this shaurya………….u made me wrong……….u r cheater………..get lost from in front of me……….i dnt wnna see ur face………….i hate u………..i only love sonu….he is my life………go to hell plz….leave……..leave……….
Shaurya:mehak…..listen…..
Mehak(shouts angrily):will u plzz leave……….or I………
Shaurya leaves from there…………..he was crying……….he recalls his moments with mehak……..
(…. Pyaar hain yaa sazaa.. Hain mere dil bata..
Toottha kyun nahin dard ka silsila.) shaurya cries……
Other side mehak also cries and thinks in her mind:y god……..q aap mujhe mere sonu se nhi mila rhe………(y are u not bringing sonu infront of me) she recalls her moment with sonu in childhood…
FLASHBACK…….
Mehak and sonu are playing home- home…….suddenly sonu comes n kisses mehak’s cheeks……
Mehak: hoooo …..sonu….
Sonu: wht hoo………I m ur would be husband …….u will marry me na….
Mehak : yes my would be hubby……plzzz never leave me……
Sonu : yes we will be best frnds….
After some days.due to sonu’s father transfer they left the place……from then mehak is waiting for sonu…..
FLASHBACK ENDS……..
Shaurya and mehak sleeps….sadly ..crying…….
Scene 5
@ institute
All students are leaving for their home…….shaurya’s eye searching for mehak……..but he did’nt find her……..suddenly he finds a photograph on floor…he picks it up……….he was shocked to see….
Sonal and nehal comes running there………
Sonal: hey shaurya…..plzz give that pic…..mehak will not leave us if she sees itzzz with u…..
Shaurya: y would she…..itzzz my mother’s pic…..but …..how it came to u……..
Nehal: y r u joking………itsss sonu’s mother’s pic…….mehak has kept all memories of sonu….
Shaurya : r u mad ………itzzz my mother…….
Sonal : one minute one minute…….(she take out other pic……….it’s sonu childhood pic) do u knw him shaurya?????
Shaurya(shocked):how could I not……..itzzz me only….
Nehal and sonal(with excitement):that means u r mehak’s sonu………
Shaurya:wht???? Tht means…….she is that mehak……..my childhood best frnd…………..
Sonal:areeee then go yar………go fast she is leaving for Mumbai….she is in station……
Shaurya: thanxxxxxx u guys…..
Shaurya(in mind): I m coming mehak……ur sonu is coming……….
Shaurya runs to station….. but unfortunately the same men whom shaurya beat to save mehak came there………they started beating him badly………this time shaurya could not fight…….just then vicky and mohit came……they rescued shaurya from them………shaurya ‘s head was bleeding..he was feeling dizzy……….
Vicky:let’s take him to hospital…
Shaurya :no………I have to go to mehak or else I will loose him this time also…………
Saying this shaurya starts leaving………in spite of dizziness…..he continue runnig…..
Scene 6
@ station
Shaurya reaches station ……….
Shaurya (to receptionalist):can u give imformation about Mumbai express….
Receptionalist: sorry sir , it had gone…………
Shaurya was shocked and cried…….. he breaksdown falling on his knees
Shaurya:mehak…….. I lost u once again………………
Suddenly there is a huge blow of wind…and one duppata….comes and stuck to shaurya’s face…………..
A girl come and says:soryy soryy……..plzzzzz can I have my dupatta…..
Shaurya recognizes the voice …..itzzz mehak….her mehak………
Shaurya(without removing the duppata from his face): yes but one condition………
Mehak(confused):hooo wht’s tht????
Shaurya: wht hoo………I m ur would be husband …….u will marry me na….(same as sonu said in childhood)
Mehak(shocked but happy very happy):sonu……..uuuuu……I find u everywhere……..i missed u so much………I was waiting for u for last10 years……….
Shaurya (removing duppata from face): I was here only ……with u……..from past 5 days………..but u did’nt recognize me……..
Mehak (shocked): u r sonu …..my sonu….
Before mehak could say anything else……shaurya…..pulled her n hugged her……
Shaurya: mehak I love you………I love you a lot…………u r my air…..my life everything u r I can’t live without u……….
Shaurya breaks the hug…..and kneels down…….
Shaurya:will u be mine……only mine………????
Mehak: I m urs only……….only urs………….n I love u too…….
Again they hug each other…….
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9 Comments
Wow my god… This is awesome yrrf… I mean u r so so good writer Bhut accha tha yrr… Isme sara msala tha… Bhut accha plz likhte rha kro ok….
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It’s nice…
It’s too good. Just a Perfect os.
Keep writing….
awesome os yaar….lovely…keep exhibiting ur talent…
thnxxxxxx all of u a lot……………
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superb…sorry for too late comment…