WISH SHOT 5
Part 1
31ST DECEMBER 2013
@night 10.00 p.m.
Rudra as usual was zooming everyone in the name of recording…..
Shivaay : om it’s already late come on go…
Om : shivaay I am nervous…
Rudra : o be cool it’s very easy…
Om : you wouldn’t have told this if you were in my situation….
Shivaay : om…listen to me I have been in that situation….I won’t tell it’s easy but it’s not that difficult too….
Om : why should men propose women can’t they propose us….
Rudra : bhaiya…this won’t work…what is he speaking….if you delay for some more time I think ishu will propose you…
Annika :come on om…this is the perfect day to propose the girl you love…New year eve…decorations everywhere and I am sure you would have selected a perfect place to propose her…everything is so romantic om…go ahead…
Rudra : o you are spoiling our plans too…
Shivika : yes….
Annika : wait me and shivaay are couples…but rudra whom are you going out with….
Rudra : actually…actually…me…me…I am I am going out….out…
Shivaay : so some one is there in my naughty brother’s life….and he is not ready to share with his super man
Rudra : bhaiya….not like that….actually…
Om : rudra already I am nervous…now tell me fast…
Annika : is it saumya…?
Shivkara : what?…what?….what?…
Annika : will you both stop giving echo….rudra…
Rudra : yes…..
Shivkara : really?…really?…really?….
Annika : will you two just stop it….
Rudra how did this happen?
Rudra : that…that day when om was admitted in hospital she…she…
Shivaay : kissed and hugged you….we know that….
Om : oye….I didn’t know that…
Annika : I will tell that afterwards….Rudy you tell….
Rudra : that second when she hugged me I felt…something…something very unusual inside me…sumo too felt that….and…
Shivika and om: and…
Rudra : I asked her out for a date…..and we fixed a day….
Shivika and om : then….
Annika : don’t tell me you already proposed her…
Rudra : actually…she proposed me…
Shivika and annika : what?…what?… what?….
Rudra : it’s not actual proposal…but a kind of…
Om : shivaay hold me…my head is spinning….
Shivika and rudra held him….
Shivaay : what happened…
Annika : oh god Shivaay you are a tube light….
Om : yes….
Shivaay why…
Om : I just said that to express my emotions but you two thought that I am really feeling dizzy…uff…
Rudra : O….
Om : what O….shivaay’s proposed annika …..saumya proposed you…now…I am the only one…oh my god what will I do….
Shivaay : it’s 10.30 om if you want to propose her by 12 then you have to start now…go…
Annika gave a side hug….Shivaay rudra encircled him into a solid hug…
Om was sweating profusely….
Shivaay : om why are you this much tensed….rudra get him water….
Om : no I am going…..it’s already late….
Om set out so as shivika and rudra……
Everything goes black……
@LIGHTHOUSE TOP
@11.56 p.m.
Om and ishana reached the top of the light house….wind was blowing making each and every cell in the body excited….ishana ‘s hair continuously swept past om’s face which was the best breeze according to him…..
Ishana : om where are we ….untie my eyes om…..you lifted and me and walked for what seemed like hours….
Om kept his finger on ishu’s lips….3 more minutes ishu…be silent….
Ishu : are we in beach…
Om : yes…
Ishu : but this is so much wind…om my head will break tell me where we are…
Hutch….Hutch…..
Om : ishu what happened…wait I will…
He then covered ishana’s face along with ears with her shawl…only her eyes area was left which was already covered by a cloth….om was trying hard to control his laughter….
Ishu : om…I know you are laughing…..
With my whole face covered I will looking like a mummy….
Om : okay….
He slowly removed the shawl and the cloth around her eyes….
The sky was full black….it was a full moon day…the first thing that caught her eyes was the moon…she didn’t know whether it’s her imagination or not….but she could see a girl and boy standing hand in hand in the moon….the whole Mumbai city was visible from that height…each and every corner of the city was lighted…..
“Wow” gasped ishu….om….
As she turned there was the surprise she hadn’t expected….the railing was covered with a huge sheet…..she walked closed to it…just then she realised the sheet contained a huge painting of a girl……there was something different in that painting….ishu went close then realised that it was her painting but one of her finger supporting her chin was glittering with a ring…..
Before she could turn om made her to wear a eye mask…..as she turned…the clock had struck 12.00…..
Om was also wearing the mask…only his eyes were visible through it….he was on his knees…..and without seeing ishana he took her hands in his hand and
Miss Ishana will you marry me?…
“om…am I dreaming”
Ishu I am tensed tell me fast….
“ who will reject this best man in the world “
Who is the best man here….?
“ oh my artist you are that man….I am always yours…”
Om opened his eyes…..crackers were being burst….. for the first time of that night his and ishana’s eyes met….both remembered a church a man and woman in wedding gown only eyes were seen because they were wearing masks…..
The man had tears in his eyes….the father came they exchanged rings and was declared husband and wife……
After sometime the church gathering dispersed only the boy and girl were present still having their masks on….
The girl got a call….she then went to police station and took back the case….holding the man by the collar….now you are free don’t ever try to harm any girl in your life….
Saying this she walked out…..
Om and ishu realised that it was them….
Om : you…you are that…girl…
Ishu : you are…are that…that man who cheated my friend…
Om in a raised tone….no I didn’t….
Ishana : see I was at that time a social activist and you blackmailed my friend with her pictures…don’t lie to me….
Om : see I didn’t take any pictures I actually haven’t seen your friend’s face….
Ishana : what are you saying?
Om : yes….rudra took those pics of your friend but unfortunately his close friend morphed it and used for blackmailing but rudra didn’t know that….
Ishana : but…that complaint..that day I saw you in police station and my friend pointed to you…
Om: so you didn’t even know the name your friend mentioned in complain…
Ishana : no…I don’t want to know I …I was very angry at that..time…
Om: that’s your mistake ishu…it was mentioned as rudra singh oberoi…and the only solution your friend gave as an option is to marry her….
Ishu : that’s my idea…but how…you….
Om : shivaay came to know about this problem…and he went to meet your friend and….he saw….he…actually didn’t see your face but heard you…
Ishu : heard me planning that I will swap her place in that marriage then if any problem comes we will have back up on our side so I planned for a mask theme wedding….
Om : yes…inorder to save rudra…and also you know the great Shivaay singh oberoi will not accept defeat he also planned to fool you…he was ready to swap in for rudra but his height…you know so with no other option I was forced to….that’s my first lie that too a big one….
Ishana : you mean…you and me….are
Om : are already married Mrs ishana….
Both were having stone faces….
Then ishu and om together broke into laughter…..
Ishana : omg…I can’t believe this day you asked me for marriage and in that day itself we come to know we are already married….
Om : ishu….I don’t know what to tell…but my head is spinning in happiness I think…
Before he could speak further…he fainted….leaving ishu shocked…
Next day…..
Everyone were eager to know about ishkara proposal….but to their shock…a call came from ishana…Shivaay picked up the phone….he became pale…..
@HOSPITAL
Ishana was sitting outside the ICU….her eyes dry as if there was no tear left to shed and her face pale….
Shivaay and rudra ran towards her…
Shivaay : ishu what doctor told?
Rudra : how is om is he fine?
Janvi : ishana why are you silent…
Anika : where is the doctor….?
Ishana pointed her fingers in a direction…Shivaay got up and went through that door….it was the way to the ICU ward….through the whole he saw doctor treating om….his heart was crushed into pieces seeing his brother’s condition…om was supported with supplementary oxygen and ECG running aside….what happened to him was the only question wandering in his mind….rudra sat down in a shock….
Saumya : ishu di tell us…what happened to om bhaiya….
But ishana was sitting as if her lips are tied….
Shivaay who lost patience broke into the ICU ward….somehow the doctors convinced him and sent him out…
Annika : shivaay…
Shivaay: doctor….doctor will come and tell….ishana tell us…
But ishu was sitting still…
When the doctor came out all surrounded him…..
Doctor : he is suffering from concussion…..
Shivaay : what is that?
Doctor : A concussion is caused when the brain receives a blow it may be severe or light….and from miss ishana I got to know that omkara had his head hit in a iron rod accidently a month ago…
Shivaay : yes…but he didn’t complain of any pain….
Doctor : concussion is a very complex case….it doesn’t mean that there must be bleeding or something…normal brain scan can’t detect concussion….
Janvi : this is curable right?
Doctor: it needs advance treatment….
Shivaay : you give any treatment but I want my om…
Doctor : Mr. Oberoi that’s not a problem the problem is its too late….
Rudra : what…what…do you mean by that…
Doctor: his condition is worse now…and…
Shivaay : and…
Doctor : he is counting his days…
Janvi gave a shriek sound….Dadi trembled and sat on the chair with a thud….pinky gave a loud cry…annika and saumya cupped their mouths….
Shivaay and rudra stood like stone….
Okay I thought of finishing it in this shot…but it’s going on for pages so without any other choice I divided this shot into two parts….so next shot will be updated within few hours…thank you all for the immense support…lov you all.
12 Comments
OMG….what’s happening…pls post soon
Ammmmazzzxinggggv..
Now i got the concept if wish…
Plzzz dont kill om yr….
Waiting for next
I already killed read the shot 4??????
Hawwww…i thought its frst part…
So i m reading it frst time..
Let me go n check all parts—
waw what an episode
loved it
wonderful,but dont kill Om
update soon
AMAZING BEAUTIFULL HEART BREAKING SUPERB???
It is heart touching and also breaking…
Superb…..heart touching…..i m feeling lyk crying??
Amazing update… last part was so emotional…
You made me cry dr……and this was superb….
Superb dear…
Just amazing.
Felt short of words.
So, emotional..I am a fan of yours’
Loved itt..Love ya!