WISH SHOT 5 (PART 2)
@1st January 2014
@hospital….
Shivaay couldn’t digest the fact that he don’t have a choice to save his brother….why this happened with him…there should be a way…these were the questions running in his mind….
Shivaay : I will take him to a big hospital…they can save him…
Doctor : Mr. Oberoi this is a multi speciality hospital…we have all facilities here….but if you still want to take your brother and give treatment somewhere…it’s okay….
Shivaay : I will consult with my friend he is a doctor in London…
Doctor : your wish sir….
Shivaay took his phone to call…but on seeing rudra standing like a rock all his anger frustration went out….he walked near rudra….cupped his face in his hands….
Shivaay : rudra….nothing will happen…it’s my promise…till I am there nothing will happen to him…
There was no movement from rudra…
Saumya : rudra…see everything will be alright…
Annika : rudra you must be strong…
Janvi and Dadi were crying….pinky and shakti controlling him….
Shivaay now became more afraid his one brother is lying there in the hospital bed counting his days…and another brother his baby is standing like a rock without any movement….
Shivaay ran to call the doctor….but rudra pulled him to a hug …he burried his face on shivaay’s shoulders…..
Shivaay like a mother caressed his hair….
Shivaay : rudra…our om will be alright…he can’t go away from us…he don’t have that right…
Rudra : bhaiya…my o will be alright…I know…I know that…I will…will die if he leaves me….I can’t live without him bhaiya….I can’t….
Shivaay’s heart is now broken into pieces….he has to do something…but he himself is broken….a hand pressed against his hand….it was annika who was holding him….a sudden ray of hope raised in him….
Saumya held rudra’s hand…..rudra hugged her and cried his heart out…..he closes his eyes and opens wishing that this must be a dream but to his disappointment reality never goes away on one flick….
2nd January 2014….
Om was discharged and is in oberoi mansion…everyone where happily speaking in his room….
Yes…they were hiding their sorrow inside and wearing a fake mask of happiness infront of om….
Rudra hid is face behind the camera…so that om doesn’t find out …..
Shivaay has told…actually ordered not to tell anything to om…
For om he only knows that he is weak due to less water content in his body….
Shivaay showed reports of om to world’s best doctor but all said the same that he is counting his days…with the help of medicines they can only put is death away by a year or so….
16TH JANUARY 2014…
Om now was getting dizziness so frequently….everyone tried their level best not to panic infront of him….
Annika and saumya turned out to be the support system of Shivaay and rudra…they are now half the time in oberoi mansion…Shivaay rudra and saumya somehow convinced om that they are working from home for the new project….annika however visits oberoi mansion as a staff like before….
But ishana couldn’t do so….because if she often visit oberoi mansion om will doubt something is wrong…so she herself kept away from om…due to the mental pressure she is facing…she almost looked like a patient…due to the sleepless nights thinking what will happen next…..her eyes now became lifeless…..
Anika : shivaay for how long can we hide the truth from om…
Shivaay : till I die…
Anika : shivaay…the whole family is devastated we have to do something…I know om is the soul of the house…but…but how long will you all be like this…death is not in our hands…till om is with us…
Shivaay shouted at the top of his voice….I told om will always be with me…
Annika’s face shrunk…seeing which Shivaay sat near her…and covered her hands with his…
Shivaay: annika I know…how you will feel….after all you are also a normal girl…you will be having your own wishes as to how a man should be…but but I can’t be that normal man…my omru are more important to me than anyone else….
Annika : I know that…you know what you didn’t understand me as you understand your brothers…what…keep that kanji eyes controlled…I will finish…I didn’t come here for you…I came here to take care of a loving brother who is broken inside but isn’t showing it out….Shivaay…how long will you keep your emotions to yourself…don’t think me as an outsider…I am here for you…as your better half don’t hold your tears Shivaay at least not in front of me….
Tears fell on annika’s hands…she lifted shivaay’s chin….
It’s important we keep om happy…his happiness lies in you and rudra…
You can try many doctors to give best treatment to him…but no one can give him pure happiness except you and rudra….
Yesterday I spoke to rudra…he understood…did you see him today…come with me….
RECORDING…..
O turn this side….
“ rudra get out because of you I have to start from first”
“om bhaiya what this cry baby did”
“ ask me what and all he didn’t do…I think some nuts and bolts gone missing in his brain…I know he is somewhat crazy…but now it’s confirmed he is a full time mental”
O don’t praise me so much I feel shy..shy…
“ rudra I will kill you…”
“ bhaiya what happened?”
“he broke a statue today morning….yesterday night without sleep I did it…just only finishing touches were left…but this idiot broke it….”
“ cry baby why you did that…my om bhaiya is feeling because of you…”
Sumo actually…actually….when I came to this room today morning…there was no light…that girl statue was in the middle of the room…in the dark it actually looked like a girl….
Now saumya was looking at him with anger….
Sumo don’t look at me like this…..I thought that it was you…I had a doubt my sumo is not that slim but I thought as you are dieting you would have become slim….I…ran towards that statue and hugged it thinking it was you but..it fell and broke…and suddenly from nowhere I heard this long hair creature shouting at top of his voice…and realised I broke the statue…
“ don’t keep that face I will kill you idiot…I have only one day left to deliver it”
“ rudra you are…you are…did you really thought that statue is me…do you always think of me…”
Saumya smiled seeing rudra…Rudy passed a flying kiss….
“ enough….enough…..now you both monkeys get out of my room”
Om dragged them out….and shut the door of his room….
See kids this is my o always get irritated for simple things….okay now let me introduce all to your badi dadi…
Mom where are you…sumo come with me….
Everything goes black…..
Shivika were standing hand in hand behind a pillar and watched all this…
Annika : see how rudra changed himself for om….inside he is hurt as you but I want his O to be happy….and I know you also want the same…
Shivaay : I didn’t know what I did to get such a wonderful girl in my life……
“Then don’t leave her hands Shivaay…marry her” said pinky….
Pinky : marry her….I don’t want to see this house lifeless…I heard annika speak now I am hundred percent sure that if she comes to our house this house will get it’s old charm back….
Shivaay : maa but omru…
Janvi : they are also going to get married in the same day as you…
Annika : janvi aunty..how…ishu…
Pinky : om proposed ishana…and she said okay so next is marriage
Shivaay : maa but how…
“I am ready to marry om” said ishana as she walked in…
Rudra and saumya also came in…
Shivaay : how ishana….you know his…his..
Ishana : I know he will go far away from us…but one day….only one day if I live with him as his wife I will be the most happiest person in the world even if fate separates us after that…but I will die each and everyday alive if I didn’t marry him now….what are you going to do bhaiya…kill you sister alive or give her happiness….
Shivaay with tears : marry him…
@PRESENT
LONDON
Saumya : rudra how long are you going to see these recordings….we have two kids to raise….don’t sit like this I am afraid….life plays cruel jokes on us…only people with guts and willpower to live will survive…and I know my rudra is strong….your two princess need you….they are your willpower to live….
Rudra : yes you are right from now on I will live for them…only for them…..but sumo…see here this is the last day we all were together as one happy family…
4th June 2015
Recording….
Bhabi see here…sara…sara…see me…I am your cool rudra chachu…you can call me rudy….
“rudra already she is not having milk now you are distracting her with this camera….see how she is smiling seeing you….”
“Shivaay I am so sorry to say this but I think sara will be like rudy…she smiles seeing dumbbells likes camera and moreover she likes rudra than anyone else…..”
They heard a baby crying now the sound was comming from om’s room….
Ishana was shouting at the peak of her voice…..
Om how many times I told you not to do that….
Shivaay : ishu what happened why shivika is crying like this…
Ishana : it’s all because of this artist…
Annika was holding Sara in here hands and came inside…ishu what happened?
Ishana : I told om to take these paint bottles outside…babies don’t like that smell but he said he wants it in here…I then requested him not to open the paint bottles when baby is here…but this long hair creature was happily putting the headphones and painting not even knowing that shivika is crying…
Shivaay anika rudra and saumya gave a sharp look towards om…
Om was making puppy faces…
Saumya: om bhaiya…now you have to make the baby stop crying…
As om went near to lift shivika she gave a loud cry….
Om : shivaay she is like you always showing tadi…ishu help me….
But shivika became calm only when Shivaay lifted her…..
She was happily pulling shivaay’s beard and on another side sara was kicking rudra….
Om was laughing….seeing which annika said…
Om don’t smile soon another darling will come then she or he will pull your hair and play…Rudy saumya fast…
Saumya : didi…
Just then a om felt a severe pain inside his head as if someone was hitting his head with a hammer….he held his head and fell down…..
After sometime….doctor came out from om’s room…
Shivaay : doctor how he…
Doctor : I am sorry Mr. Oberoi…his end is fast approaching….hardly 6 to 7 months are there….
Shivaay : no…no…
Annika : shivaay hold yourself….
Doctor : follow these medicines….
Ishana : thanks doctor…rudra help him out….
Shivaay sat down with shock on the sofa….annika quickly knelt down before him….
Annika : shivaay…Shivaay…
Ishana : bhaiya we know this will happen one day…..but today om is with us so why we have to worry…
Shivaay : ishana…..
Ishana : bhaiya…I don’t want to be weak infront of om…if he senses that something is wrong then….okay let’s not speak about it…come let’s see if he is fine now…
As they turned to go inside…om was standing there with blood red eyes….
Om : you all lied to me…everytime when I ask the reason why I should take medicines you lied to me saying that it’s due to my habit of taking drugs….and you ishu…why you married me…why you married a terminally ill man….why you all did this to me…
Rudra : O…O….listen to us…it’s nothing like that…we wanted you to be happy…
Om : happy? Really when you all are dying everyday how will I be happy…you all should have told me….
Ishana : what to tell you…that you will die soon…tell me what you would have done if you knew it before…tell me om tell me….
Shivaay : I will tell…you wouldn’t have married ishana you would have locked yourself in your om…we hid this for your happiness and also for us…because you are our happiness….
Om Sat down….tears fell down without any barrier…..Shivaay and rudra sat beside him….
Anika signalled ishana and saumya to leave the three brothers alone….
All three girls went out….
Om : what you two will do…
Shivaay : I can’t understand your question?
Om : after I die Shivaay….
Rudra : o if you ask this type of question I won’t speak with you….
Om : shivaay…I don’t want to leave you both…I don’t want to leave our family…
For the first time both Shivaay and rudra saw om’s this side….he has always been matured but not in this case….he really didn’t want to leave his family…
Silent tears escaped from obros eyes….
Shivaay : om sleep for a while….
Om : you two stay here….
Shivru nodded…
By evening annika came inside to wake the three but om was not there…
Shivaay got panicked and asked the guard who told him that he left 5 minutes before in his car….Shivaay didn’t want to wake rudra so he along with annika and ishana went in search of om asking saumya to take care of sara and shivika…
@PRESENT
Saumya : that was the day they left us…after that we couldn’t see them…
Rudra : I wish that accident had not happened….bhaiya bhabhi and ishana will be there with us now and today om also left us…I WISH THIS WAS ALL A NIGHTMARE…..
AFTER 25 YEARS….
LONDON
Three girls are getting ready in their bridal attires….just then they heard a knock on the door….
A man in his early 50’s entered….
All three girls encircled him in a hug….
Man : sara….shivika….ishara are you ready….
Shivika : papa…I don’t want to leave you…
Ishara : why girls should leave their parents papa…
Sara : girls…enough be brave you..are making papa cry…
Just then a lady came in….
MR. RUDRA SINGH OBEROI it’s time everyone is waiting for you outside….
Rudra : sumo don’t be angry my daughters will leave me today….what will I do without them….
Saumya : rudra they are in same city if we want to see them it’s only a 10 min walk…okay girls enough of cry baby business get blessings from bade papas and badi maas…
The three girls stood infront of shivaay – anika and om-ishana photo
Three roses fell from the photo….
The three girls smiled and hugged saumya and rudra again…this time saumya too cried….
Saumya : okay…okay you are making me cry….come it’s time..
Saumya got the three girls….
Rudra stood infront of the photo….
It’s been 25 years since you four left me…see how me and saumya have brought them up…bhaiya shivika is just like you a business woman full of tadi and not to forget annika bhabhi she has a special liking towards pani….and O ishara is totally like you….a great artist another shayaribaaz…and sara she is like me a fitness freak and athlete…today they are going to get married…o as I promised you till date shivika doesn’t know that you are her father and sara is Shivaay bhaiya’s daughter…for them I am their father and saumya is their mother…and the three princesses are our life….I WISH YOU FOUR ARE WITH US AT THIS MOMENT…..
Saumya : Rudra come…it’s getting late…….
Rudra took the camera and went on recording…..
RECORDING…….
16 Comments
Emotional update..??? thanks for such a awesome update
I don’t have words to describe this update. Such a mature rudra , I just loved it . Now please don’t make us wait for the next one
No waiting this is the last shot it’s only a 5 shot story dear and thank you so much for commenting
It was so emotional di….loved it….it really touched my heart….it was one of my best reads…words will fall short to explain hw much I liked ur this 5 shot story…especially dis 5th shot…it was fab di….
It was really really really an emotional as well as an awesome update….The last part almost made me cry yaar….Thanks for this wonderful update… Keep writing dear…????????????
I don’t have words 2 describe my feelings. While reading I was crying like hell. Very emotional.
Zst 1 thing this os the best story I have ever read. N this is my favourite stoty. I have added this into my fav list at the top…love u,love “WISH”.
N plz write more stories like this.
emotionol epi
nyc one it was
good 1. so emotional
It is so emotional dear… Aakho se balti bhar bhar k aasuo bah raha h..
Superb dear…
Way too emotional I couldn’t handle it n was crying reading this.
This was damn good……was very emotional……superb dr…..
So Emotional.. u just nailed it dear…
Emotional update
Beautiful and Excellentt
didi….no words 2 appreciate ur ff……eventhough it was tragic it was mindblowing….hatz off 2 u….i read all d part in 1 go and i cried a lot after reading it……its a speciality of some people that if they write or say something it will make a feel of seeing it…..u have it didi……really hatz off u….i am a silent reader of ur other ff too….just love it…
Thank you sree these are big words and I am glad you took time to read my ff.