I was not totally satisfied with Friday night episode, I felt Ahaan was not responding properly to Isqhi when the poor girl was laying her heart out in front of Ahaan.. SO this is my version of what I wanted to see, But mine will be on a more serious side… as comedy the serial covered very well … I hope u like it, please leave comments.
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Ahaan was worried seeing Ishqi in this drunk condition, he slowly made her walk towards the pool and made her sit there.
“Brooom.. Brooom.. Brooom.. “ Ishqi was imitating that she was steering the wheel of a car.
“What are you doing” Ahaan asked her
She comes close to him, and narrowed her eyes “I thought you could see Mr AVM, but I guess not.. ha ha.. I am driving a car”
Ahaan smiled a little “Where are you going” he played along with her
“Far far away from all of you”
His chest tightened, she wanted to go away from him
“Why” he whispered looking at her
She looked at him them, and their eyes locked.
“When you see me like this, my heart starts beating loudly… “she took his hand and placed on her heart.
His eyes widened
“Yeah, my heart beats loudly for you, instead of Mayank… when he is the one, I am marrying. These feeling scare me, that’s why I want to run away” she said innocently.
“Running away doesn’t solve anything” he sounded angry
She couldn’t understand the anger and hurt in his eyes, then realization dawned.
“I didn’t mean in literal sense AVM” she said softly
He knew she didn’t mean it, she wasn’t like his mother, she cared about family.
He slowly started removing his hand from her heart, when she held it and kept it in her hands.
“You are always there for me Ahaan, whenever I am in trouble only you are there… even without me telling you know I need you… why do you care so much for me?”
He looked down unable to answer that question,
“Look at me and answer the question”
“Because you are my best friends’ fiancée”
“Is that the only reason”
He jerked his hand from her and started getting up. But Ishqi pulled him back, and he almost fell on her, their eyes locked.
“If that’s the only reason, then why is your heart beating so loud Ahaan”
“Its not mine” he denied
She placed her hand in his and then held both their hands to his heart.
Saying he was surprised was not enough. What was he going to answer to this? Did he actually have feelings for her? He couldn’t, she was his best friends’ fiancée. Then why was his heart beating like that.
“It’s not because of you” he denied again.
“I can’t see anyone else here”
He started looking everywhere but her, and she knew he was hiding by not looking at her
“ok, just one question and then I will leave you to go”
“I am not going anywhere; I will drop you to your room”
“Why? I am not your finance, you don’t have to take care of me…” she stood up then and he stood along with her
“How do you know when I am in trouble and come to save me” she asked not looking at him but straight ahead, into the pool
He just kept looking at her, she looked so mesmerizing with the curls, and then lights falling on her made her face glow so much.
“I asked you something… “she reminded
“I just knew Ishqi, why are you making a big deal of it… “
“Because you are not telling me anything, and it’s not you who should have known, unless you feel something for me too, there is a lot of geography between us”
“Its chemistry Isqhi” he smiled despite himself
“Are you actually smiling when I am so serious “she scolded him “it doesn’t matter history, chemistry, zoology or geography, something is there between us”
“Ok that’s enough let me leave you till your room” he said and took her hand
She jerked it away “I will go by myself”
“You are being stubborn Ishqi”
“Learned it from you only” she said and turned towards the pool ignoring him
He Held her hand again and started pulling her, and she pulled back, in this tug of war both fall in the pool.
And Ishqi starts laughing.
“What the fudge” Ahaan says
“What the fudge, What the fudge, What the fudge!!!!!!” she imitates him
“Lets get out of this damn pool.. “
“But I love water, I am going to stay here only”
“Ishqi you will get cold and fever, if you stay in long here, let’s go”
“Any why do you care”
He was tongue tied again; he didn’t know what to do.
“I knew you wouldn’t answer, lets end this all here Ahaan.. even I want my feeling to get over for you” she put her finger on her cheek “How to make these feeling go Ahaan”?
That innocent question tugged at his heart, even he didn’t know how to make those feelings go, when they were so wrong. He looked at her and saw tears in her eyes and hated himself for putting them there.
His heart was hurting seeing her cry… without knowing what he was doing he held her check and wiped her tears.
“Please don’t cry, it hurts me”
“Why does it hurt you Ahaan”
He stayed silent and just looked at her… tears flowed more from her eyes because of his silence.
“Shhh…shhhh stop crying, I like you Ishqi.. you are beautiful, intelligent, respect family values and challenge me at every step. I never knew when it happened, the hate started turning to care, I would always feel whenever you had any problem, and I wanted to solve it for you immediately”
Her heart stilled at his confession, she thought he would never say it because she always felt it was mutual. Their eyes locked, they were lost in each other. He slowly bent forward, and her heart was racing like the horses in the derby. He softly kissed her on the forehead. The world stopped right there. It was only the two of them and nothing, or no one existed.
She slowly opened her eyes, not realizing when she closed them, and saw a whirlwind of emotions in his eyes, love, anger but the highest was sadness…
“But we can never be together, I can’t do that to Mayank and Riya” he said finally
“I understand, I wouldn’t want to do that to them too” she said very sad
“Let’s go, he put her hand in front of her and she took it”
He slowly pulled her out of the pool, and safely left her to her room, putting her to sleep and went back to his room.
He couldn’t sleep a wink the whole night, as to how to face her the next morning
Next morning, he met her at the breakfast table. She just smiled at him and took her breakfast, he thought she will be sad about what happened yesterday, hell even angry may be… but her normal behavior puzzled him.
“Isqhi I… “ he started but she cut him off “ Good morning Mr AVM” were they back to that again.
“About yesterday” he started
She raised her eyebrows” Yes AVM”
They way she said casually pained him a little, so much had happened yesterday
“Don’t you remember” he asked
“Yeah I was in the club then we partied, I drank the juice.. it was so yummy… and then, and then .. I don’t remember anything” she said and started eating her apple.
“Do you know what happened, did I misbehave with you” she asked
“No, nothing happened, continue with you breakfast” he said and walked away angrily
“ye AVM ka mood bhi na.. it keeps changing like a rainbow” But there was a hint of sadness in her eyes, she thought instead of them getting awkward with each other, this was the best way to pretend nothing happened.
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Thanks for reading, hope you all liked it. Please do leave your comments.. and suggestions if you need an OS with any plot in the serial.
22 Comments
Loved it…..write more like this…..ahaan confessing was nice..
Thanks Aldy,, sure i will write more 🙂 keep commenting
Archiya, I am in awe of your writing skills, your vivid imagination and your version of the episode is soooo much better, honestly.
You should seriously consider writing novels, which I am sure will be #1 bestsellers.
You go girl, keep them FF coming…
Abigail .. thank u so much dear, ur words mean a lot 🙂 i am so glad u liked it so much…
i will surely consider writing a novel 🙂 thanks for the compliments
I don’t think Ahaan will marry as he’s very principled- he will not go against his Dadi as well he gave his word to Rhea.
I am actually hoping they don’t marry right now, as I would love to see Ishqi do something with her life. Today women are holding top positions as President and Vice Presidents and even CEOs in companies. So I really hope her role develops into something like that and then see Ahaan and her interactions in their competitive roles..
Well that’s just my thoughts as I would like something different than the usual filmy story.
Awww….super.. keep it up….👍👍
hi Frozen.. thank u so much 🙂
Amazing , so lovely explanation. You killed it.
Thank u so much 🙂
👍🏻Good take on the scene!! I’m rooting for Ishqaan 😁😁😁
I just hope they end up getting married at the end of next week 🤞🏻🤞🏻
Thanks Ishqaan.. m rooting for them too, but honestly speaking i dont want them to get married so soon,.. they shld show their relation building before…
Hi mmm you left me speechless ,I also write future stories for serials but never could think so …
hi Nivolivo.. interesting name.. thank u so much 🙂
Just love it …..plz more write for ishaan
Thanks Sana.. i surely will 🙂
You wrote all those scene that i want to see on that night episode.there will be more exciting if both get drunk and confess their live in front of everyone …
hi Rabbi.. even i wanted to c something like this.. thats why wrote it. Glad u enjoyed.,,
This was way more interesting than the orginal one . You are awesome girl write more and we are there na to encourage you …. And about ishqaan I want that they get married but it should be like ahaan should get to know mayank’s reality so ishqi ko bachane ke chakkar mai he should get married to her. It would be like zor ka jatka hay zooro se laga for daadi sarli and ginni
hi Nehaaa.. thank u so much.. 🙂 it means a lot
Even i feel it will actually work in that way, Ahaan will get to know mayank reality and in order to save her he will marry her. Without her knowing, because there is no way he can force her to marry him.
But for once i dont want to see a forced marriage.. so many serials have the same thing….
i wish for a lil change.. i will write an OS as to how i want it to end 🙂
Sure please write one
Loved the OS. Ishqi and Ahaan’s confession to each other was captured really well. It was emotional as well as lovely to read.
Thanks Shesha 🙂