Hello Guys….. I am the writer of the FF Jeene Ki Tammanah Hai, with a new FF….. Yeh Dil Kya Kare…. Here a Short Intro the Main characters….
GUY 1:
I gave you a chance…..But you dint take it…You rejected me…. Now I have moved On for Good, With the Best Person……. I am 100% sure that I will be happier Than Ever….. I will show you What it Means to be Happy ….I will live my life in front of you, Making you regret you decision
GUY 2:
My Heart is bleeding Blood…. I never trusted him….. But You also saw me a waste…..I Loved you, Cherished You …. You always told me that I was the Best for You But I am left Behind…. What did I do Wrong??? I m well Off, Good Looking , Successful and Religious, Then why did you do this to Me…..
Well Done dear… You pulled me out of my Hideout and now left me naked…..Wait for me Dear, I will destroy your new world, with the very Poison you have created
GIRL 1:
My Family is My Everything…. Our Culture and Our Tradition really matters…..Yes I made the right decision to reject you….and hold on my Family …. Do whatever you may please, I wont shatter….. And will live my life… Even though I am hurt Hurting You…and still in pain
GIRL 2:
This World is useless….So am I….Betraying and being Betrayed, Not New, Not Old…..I have not betrayed any one…. But he said that I betrayed him…. I just loved Him….. and Her……….Now let Life take Me ….Where ever it pleases
So What do You Think Guys….. Should I Move On??
Who do you think These People are and How will they complete their relations??
85 Comments
Awesome but pls keep it swasan n raglak
Thank You Dear….. Hmm lets see
Hay…..I have read all parts of ur ff recently… Believe me…..U nailed it gal…. Amazing,wonderful….At one point of time swara’s entry made me jealous…. Just like ragini…..but as u made it clear that lime light will always be on ragini and d main lead is raglak…I am happy….Plzzzz don’t ever neglect raglak..and give more scenes of them …I am saying all these bcz..now ff r d ONLY WAY FOR FANS TO ENJOY RAGLAK…LITERALLY THEY R LIKE OASIS IN A DESERT
….and best part is raglaksan bonding… And I read today’s part…ragini scenes were less..but if swasan story is needed for d story line then it is fine…but plzzzz include more ragini scene more in coming episodes
And now finally….ur ff is really an epic…y I am asking for more raglal bcz I am highly disappointed by swaragini dis time…
Last but not d least these r just my REQUESTS…..IF U FIND THEM TO B CRAZY….THEN PLZ IGNORE
Thank You Dear….. Dont worry, more Ragini scenes will be back soon….. okki….Its just that we need to give a bit of SwaSan Na…. Thats why
thank uuuuuuuu for assuring
You are welcome
nice sounds superb.xx
Thank You Dear
Amazing for me pair doesn’t matter just continue asap
Thank You Khusshi
Go ahead
Okki
Superb di
Thank You…Dear
Interesting dear..keep continuing
Thank You….
Interesting…..but plz equal importance to both couple
Thank Dear…..Ofcourse… I am not like Swaragini Cvs 😛
Interesting please continue.
Thank You Dear
Interesting but want swasan as couple …
Thank You dear…. Lets See