Yeh dooriyan
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Recap : swaSan marriage date fixed. 3 weeks leap. Swasan left for shopping
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Sanskar stopped car in front of select city.
“Sanskar sir please Na why we have came to this mall.. it’s too expensive. I-i can’t afford this much expensive things”swara spoke hesitantly
Sanskar put his hand on her’s “mera Bachha you are my responsibility now.. and I can afford this for my wife”
“Sir You know my life has taught me to value feelings not money” swara said
“so shona, these are my feelings for you . See my love behind that, why are you seeing price tag behind that. I want to give best to my wife” Sanskar said
Swara unwillingly agreed.
@show room
Sanskar was selecting dress for swara for pre wedding and post wedding function. Swara was just looking at him. Sanskar was so much involved in selecting dress for her as if he himself has to wear that.
“Umm.. no show me some elegant lehngha “Sanskar ask salesman
“But m fine with this.. I like this lehngha” swara said
“You keep quiet! Let me choose for you” Sanskar scolds her
“Huh!!” She kept a big pout
Sanskar was rejecting everything, even the salesman was pissed off now.
“Show me some fuchsia pink”sanskar ask
Listening to this swara’s n salesman’s mouth turned into capital ‘O’ ??
“Sir u know what is fuchsia pink??”swara ask in curiosity
He innocently nods yes” vo I HV asked ragini about colors n combination”
Salesman burst out laughing and swara was trying to suppress her smile.. after lots of struggling sanskar finally choosed dresses for swara..and asked salesman to pack matching sherwani with them
“Are Sir u haven’t bought anything for urself” swara said angrily
“I hv selected dresses for you Na.. so I will buy matching sherwani.. simple.. “he said
“But!!”she resist
“Sshh!!” He gave her glare
“N u pack matching sherwani with these dresses” he said to salesman and drags swara to jewellery shop.
@jewellery shop
Sanskar has selected beautiful diamond set for swara. He signals salesman to pack a pair of diamond bangles unnoticed by swara.
“Swara now select mangalsutra ” he said
“Sir please Na ! Aap khud he decided Kar lo” swara said
“You will wear that na. So u should select it urself” he winks
“But u will make me wear that na !” Swara said while blushing
“Don’t blush so much yaar..!!kahi mai Bohol na jau ki hum public place PE hai” he said
“Mam look at this.. this is special mangalsutra” salesman interrupts
Swara looked at that n she loves that.. it’s locket was in shape of two doves.. kissing each other.. she wanted that , she knew a pair of doves is a symbol of love.. she secretly looks at it’s price tag’60k’
“Swara bhagwan ji paap lagayenge if u will buy this ” she thought and finally bought one with least diamond.. basically the least expensive
Sanskar noticed that too and signals salesman to pack that along with bangles..
@cafe
“Sir m tired now” she said
“Are yaar still we have to buy lots of things”he said
Then his driver came n took bags from him.. during this process the bill slips from the pack.. swara took that up n her eyes popped out
“Sir you have spent 7lakh on my dresses only” she said in shock
“Hmm.. So?” He said casually
“Sir I know, you are rich but it doesn’t mean that you spend unnecessarily”she said
“Swara this is not unnecessary. You will be Sanskar maheshwari’s wife so now be habitual of this”he said
“But, sir.. it is indeed unnecessary.. we can buy this from simple shops too.. they will also give us good quality and they are more economical than these malls..”she tried to make him understand
“Swara stop behaving like a finicky nagging wife.. I know you haven’t bought this much expensive things but now u should develop a habit of buying branded things… u r no more swara bose who use to by things from patri market.. earlier u can’t afford this but now u can” he said in flow ,and unknowingly he hurts swara alot
She suppress her tears in eyes only and didn’t utter Even a single word after that.. whatever sanskar bought she simply agrees.. he found her behavior strange but he thought itz cz she was tired..
He stopped car at mm n she quietly went in..
“Are princess come n sit with us”shlok said
“Bhai m not feeling well,so m going to room”she said
“What!! U r not feeling well why didn’t you tell me before I will take you to Doctor” sanskar asked in concerned tone while entering
” Nothing sir m just tired” she said blankly and left
It was night and swara was just sitting in her room,supressing her tears.. but as time passes her tears were threatening to flow n finally they crossed the boundary of her eyes..
“I knew it!!this will happen if I say yes to sanskar sir.. okay. I know what he said was true I use to buy things from patri.. bt m use to that.. I never had money to spend unnecessarily.. but sanskar always use branded things.. our status can’t match.. humare beech m YEH DOORIYAAN hamesha rhengi.. m not fit for sanskar sir..” she said to herself and cried
Sanskar was listening to her n cursing himself”damn.. how could I!! I know that her weak point is this only.. still I have hurted her.. ”
“Sanskar sir should marry a girl of his status, like di. Yeah.. swati di was perfect for him.. she knows how to handle this high class society.. but, ..” she can’t complete and starts to feel dizzy.. sanskar held her before falling..
“Swara!! Swara!! ” He Pats her face
She slowly opens her teary eyes and said” m fine sir”
“Sit here”he makes her sit..
“M fine sir.. sachhi” she reassures
“Swara if u are still facing these black outs why didn’t you tell Doctor today”he ask
“Ohh hoo sir m fine”she said
“M sorry swara”he said
She gave him confused look
“Whatever I said to you today.. I really don’t want to hurt you.. I don’t know how.. but I said that in flow” he said
“Sir I agree ur words have hurted me alot.. but u said truth only.. I never even entered such malls.. but I will try to keep my mouth n actions in control so that I won’t embarrass you” she said innocently
Sanskar immediately pulled her in a bone crushing hug”m sorry mera Bachha.. u don’t need to change urself.. I love you the way you are”
“But sir” he put finger on her lips
“Sshh!! First stop calling me sir.. call me sanskar.. I want to listen my name from your mouth” he said
“Ha to isme Kya problem.. I will call you sanskar sir Simple” she said
“Uff !! U r my fiance not my pa” he said
“Are but sir how can I take ur name” she said with a pout
“Ahem ahem!!” Dp n ap said while standing at door
” U guyz can debate on this later” dp said
“N u sanskar after two days ur pre wedding functions will start n after that u n swara are not allowed to meet.. “ap said
“Are bt ma.! Where will she live then.. n who will take care what her medicines n meals.. ” sanskar Said worriedly
“Don’t worry about that.. swara n sumi Bhabhi will live in shlok’s new home.. finally they hv came here permanently.. leaving Kolkata” dp said
Sanskar gave lots of excuses but all in Vain..
“Swara beta come I will help you in packing” ap said
Sanskar’s face became pale listening to this.. n he spoke.. ” at least help me her in packing”
Ap smiles n nods yes..
Sanskar was throwing her clothes angrily in bag..
” sir !! Please!!” She shouts
“Shut up” he scolds her n continue to throw her clothes
Finally sanskar packed her important things in bag with a big angry pout..
“Now u can go”he said cutely in anger
“We hv to go tmrw morning”she said
“Jana to hai Na!! Abhi Jao ya Kal” he said n sat on couch
“Aww oh god m loving his this side”she thought
“Itz just matter of few days.. after that we will get married”swara said
“I know”he said in anger
“Good night”he continues and start going out.
She immediately kissed his cheek making him shock.. “good night”
He blushes. And left..
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NEXT DAY
sumi , swara along with shlok swati n Trisha left.. leaving sanskar Sad..
@unknown place
Parvati was talking with a masked person
“Why are u you this.. Kya milega ye Kar ke tumhe” parvati ask
“Sukoon.. I will feel happy by doing this”that masked person said
“Why u hate swara this much” parvati asked
“That’s none of your business.. do as I said.. n make sure ye dawa swara ko regularly di jye” masked person said n passed some tablet to her.
Parvati nods n left
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@MM
“Areee koi hai!! Onnu !! Shonskar !! ” A lady shouts
“Masi ma.. aap” laksh greets her
“Hey !! Girlfriend!! ” Sanskar shouts..
“Hat!! Badmash” she said
“Areee Mouli tum!!” Ap greets her
To be continued…
Precap: cocktail party. N . big shock for swara
Okay! I agree I hv became damn lazy.. sorry for that!!
N secondly many of you want swara to take sanskar’s name instead of sir.. so hv patience she will call him by name but after marriage..
87 Comments
Masked man????
So parvathi is not villian?????
Angry Sanskar was very cute???
Swara hamesha ulta kyin sochthi hai???
Waiting for nxt.
Bhabhiji hamari family kahan hai???
Meri wifey toh bohot dinno se missing hai. Kahan chaligayi woh???
Meine toh mom dad ko bhi nahi deka.??
Sab kahan khogaye??
Apko dekke mein bohot kush hun
Lots and Lots of love ???
Na Na parvati is also villain
I think ur wife has left TU
Dad se to meti baat Hoti h don’t worry
But sasuma is missing
Lagta Meri wifey aur mom vacation pe chale gaye hai..huh…hame chodkar??
Kaise hai aap mere behen ke pyare pati???
Aap ke dharshan bhi bohot dino baad mile hai??
Hello saale sahab….main hu yahan….wase even i have that question ke Baki ghar wale kaha hai sab??
Awesome. Now who is this new villain in swaras life.y he hate swara? N omg wt medicines? ?omg these many questions .I’m feeling excited, scared n restless reading this .Will be waiting for next part.post asap.
This is not new.. this is that old Wala who tried to kill her earlier
Wil post asap
Awesome
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Awesome
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Awsome….. epi……???now who is the mask Person….n why the hell is he/she behind swara????
You will soon get to know divu
O god a big shock for swara ??????…update soon dear… Waiting….. N loved this episode… ???????
Thanks dear
Hey meher…how r u??…i hope u r perfectly fit n fine…now a days,u r not posting the ff’s regularly… Lazy girl..so bad…i was waiting for ur ff’s.. Try to update it regularly as per ur convenience…
Even this was a awesome episode… Loved it…
There is someone else who is against swara rather than dadi…i thought that masked man is hired by dadi..bt i was wrong…another vamp to hurt swara…what was that tablet which he gave dadi…may be drugs to spoil swara’s image infront of all…i hope that nothing bad happens to her n swasan marriage..really confused abt that masked person n his motive.. Clear the mystery behind that soon…
Sanskar’s reaction on knowing that swara is leaving for shlok’s house was funny…poor sanskar.. How could he live without her even if it is about some days matter…he was the one who took care of her all these day…so it will be worthy to watch sanskar’s antics after swara leaving mm…he will miss her madly….
Dear..what was that precap yaar..big shock for swara..omg..what will be that shock….cant wait much to know…dont separate our heavenly couples n dont give them much pain….
Update next chappy asap….also my fav kit 2 also… Eagerly waiting for that…update it as soon as possible…
R u busy now a days…or r u not well??…. Love u dear……take care
Hey dear!!
Chhooieee *puppy face* I know m lazy
I will definitely clear that mystery.. actually both dadi n that person are partner in crime
Yeah the cute maheshwari.. will throw his tantrum..
Nah swasan won’t get separate now…
I will upload kit2 day after tomorrow..
Ahh actually I don’t feel like writing nowadays.. that’s why
Ho my dear…really melted by ur sorry with that puppy face..cho chweet…bt my cutiepie…dont be lazy…come out of that soon..and be like earlier.. So punctual n regular updates… 😀 😀 …try to be regular… Waiting for ur ff’s..really miss u as well as ur ff….u will upload kit2 only day after tomorrow..i thnk thats too late…try to update it tomorrow if u can…i mean only if u r convenient with it..orelse i can wait till u update..but what to do…too much of eagerness.. 😀 : D
Awwww ???
Actually I have written that but I feel like something is missing so m just correcting it so will post tmrw
Love you
Hi meher nice episode love swasan cute scene but who is that secret person and what tablet he gives to swara and the precap is quite interesting wating for next part please update soon and stop being lazy ?????????and update soon
Lol.. sorry yaar I can’t help it..??
Wow such an awesome episide??
Thank-you
Awesome as always…
Thank-you
Awesome I loved it!! and a very big sorry that I ddin’t comment on your FF’s I am really soorry hope you remember me!!!
Coming to the chapter it was fabulous!!!
Actually I was missing you…
Finally u hv came
Thank-you
Nice episode.. 🙂
Thanks Sissy n u hvnt updated that chappie !!!
Sachhi I searched that but didn’t find..
M innocent
<3 it <3 it <3 it meheeerrrr, sanskar so cute
Thank you yaar
awesome.. who is masked man? is it shlok?
Let it be suspense dear
Awesome dear
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Awesome 🙂 Loved it
Thank-you di
awsm..
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precap is shock for us also
Hope it will give u high voltage shock?
awsm…….
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Suprb waiting for twist nd truth b out..
Thanks dear
awesome, was waiting for ur ff and now i am happy reading it. its fabulous
Thanks dear
Sorry for being lazy
Now who is this masked man.. parvati is not villian here…
Waiting for nxt part
Both are villain
So bad of u, u became so so so lethargic no no lazy,ya lazy that u r not even…,y should I say when u know it already what I vl say.
Anyways, about d story I think d masked man is d one who clicked/sent swasan pics to swathi or else should I say d person is d one who was insulated by sanskar for insulting swara,who made her quit her pt-waitress job, well I don’t remember his name.
Well,ur stories have been mysterious, as always suspense,shock,suprise are at ur right finger tips.haha lol.
Abt today’s episode, enjoyed d pouty swasan, innocence,sadness,laughter,reaction of san for d lonely n longingness n many other things.
Sanskar sometimes unknowingly hurts swara. N then making her to listen him is a tough job,haha.
N ha stop being lazy
Next post ASAP IF U R FREE ONLY
Vl wait for u dr
Chhooieee *puppy face*
Umm his name was Ashish.. let’s se he is new or old or whom?
Yeah once she get into her over thinking path itz nearly impossible to stop her.. but our hero does that
Will post asap
Wow , miss lazy latelatif is here????.Chappy is awsm.Haww,another villain???.Sanky looks too cute in anger???.Well,prcap is very shocking ? ?. Waiting for nxt babhiji.
Hehehe thank-you for the compliment
Sanky looks cute in every shade???
Awesome super duper
Thank-you
I think masked person would be Shonali- Sharmishtha’s daughter. Just a guess.
Btw its awesome. I have been a silent reader of all your fanfictions starting from kuchh is tarah season-1. You are an awesome writer.
One of the best writers of TU.
Sorry for not comenting but I have read everything written by you and one of your biggest fans too.
Let’s see who’s that person
Thank-you so much dear.. ue
Ur* words means alot to me…
Thanks for support
Love you loads
awesome
Thanks
meher loved swasan sooooo much in this part they are wonderful couple in the television industry and sissy i think u should write a novel i would love to read it and i am speechless how u get these fab ideas dear would think to write a ff with u later when i get time will u agree??? love u loads cute sweet sissy and don’t mind what is your age???
If I improve that much I will definitely write one
I would love to work with you…
I turned 19 on 16july..
thanxs a lot for saying that your 7 years older than me and by the way what u mean by u are improved your one of the best writer east or west my cute sissy meher is the best
Aww tysm sweetie..
Nopes I need lots of improvement .
Luv you?
first of all I’m anjani
awsome episode loved it & waiting for nxt part
Thanks dear
Hayeeeee thank god u updated…..varna m toh aaj police me aapke missing ki complain Marne jaa rhi this???
Well about chappy…
Hmmmmm so Dadi is not villain????
Then who is the villain???
Awesome chapter n post soon the next part..???
Phew!! I came on time.. ni to tu bekar m complaint kr dr to..
Dadi n that person both are villain
Will post asap