Hello everyone,
It is my second last episode so please comment.
THERE WAS A MISTAKE BY ME IN PREVIOUS PART, THE PRECAP SHOULD BE LOVE
REALISATION BUT MISTAKELY I HAD WRITTEN LOVE CONFESSION. I’M SORRY FOR
THAT.
The episode starts with Shivaay in his office cabin talking to himself
“You love her Shivaay”
“No how can I love her”
“But why I can’t love her I think I really love her as I can’t live a
single day without seeing her face, talking to her”
“Yeah I love her I’m sure I love her” A huge smile comes to his face.
It was 9 months now; Shivaay had deeply fallen for Annika. Now he was 100% sure that he loves Annika more than his life. He decided that when he will return his house from office he will tell her everything he feels for her.
Suddenly his phone rang, it was Om.
He said-“Bhai please come to city hospital immediately.”
Shivaay asked many questions but he didn’t reply he was just repeating
the same line.
When he reached hospital he was shocked to see everyone crying. He was having many thoughts at that time. When Om saw him, he hugged Shivaay and told him that he had become father of a baby boy. Shivaay was
thinking himself the happiest and luckiest person in the world that time but still he didn’t get why everyone was crying.
He shouts- “Why you all crying, it is time to be happy and celebrate. But first I want to talk with Annika.”
He tried to go inside the hospital room but Om and Rudra stopped him
said bhabi died. Shivaay was shocked tears were coming out from his
eyes. Omru were telling him how Annika fall from stairs and doctors were only able to save child.
Shivaay was thinking all the moments spent with her and how happy he was today but all of a sudden all things changed.
He ran towards the room where Annika’s body was kept. He was crying like hell his tears were not stopping. He shouted at her to wakeup but she didn’t wake up; he told her that how much he loves her but she was not replying. Shivaay thought to end his life but he hears the sound of crying, he turns back and found Kalyani holding a baby in her arms.
He took him and the baby stops crying and started to smile which brought a huge smile in Shivaay’s lips.
From that time he is taking care of baby as single parent. Pinky told him to marry again for his child’s sake but he never agrees as he was not able to forget Annika and he can’t give her place to anyone else.
So done with my second last episode.
I hope you all like it.
I’m really sorry for late as now I’m writing three stories so it’s taking time.
I will upload my 1st episode of F.R.I.E.N.D.S tomorrow sorry for late.
62 Comments
sumo u made my cryyyyyyyy anika died omg sad ending but u wrote well dear
*me
Thank you so much shaba
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried???
Love you ??
Ohh my gosh di how can u do like tis … This is very bad noo god plz tell tis not a sad ending plz.. I was on cloud nine when Shivaay realized his Love but wht now..??..
Thank you so much haridhara
And I’m sorry for sad ending as it is a real story
Want to knw th hpy ending…waiting for the next part.
Thank you so much bua
Awesome….. Sad ending??
Thank you so much sizuka
Love you ??
Someone asked me not to say thankyou
Btw Love you too?
Someone asked me not to say thankyou?
Btw Love you too??
Are yaha thanks allow h
Really heart touching.. teares r still on my eyes…a beautiful story bff..keep writing…love uu
Thank you so much BFF
I’m sorry becoz of me tears came on ur eyes
Love you so much ??
Kya yaar!! bohot dino ke baad tu page open kiya hai aur saare ffs maano jaise mere rone ka intezzaaar kar rahe hain….Punishment denahai kya??
Thank you so much akshaya and sorry mare vajah se aapko rona padha
It’s not a punishment
Awesome di. But please don’t let anika die.
Thank you so much dwet
Annika already died sis
Omg….It was so emotional. Loved the update but missing Anika. It was written beautifully. I could get the feelings conveyed. Waiting for F.R.I.E.N.D.S
Love ya,
Awesome update.
Thank you so much neha di
Love you ??
Sumo yaar ye kyaaa kiya…anika KO maar dala….I am crying now……BTW it was awesome…
Thank you so much anu
Ab sab log shivaay ko mar rahe the to maine annika ko mar diya???
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried
Love u??
still sobbing di… such a beautifully written episode… it touched my heart di…
felt so bad when Annika died…
this was what i expected from sad news
yet felt very bad…
good work di..
waiting for ue f.r.i.e.n.d.s….
love u??????
Thank you so much riya
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried
Love you ??
Awesome yaar?you made me cry ????
Thank you so much sam di
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried
Love you??
Awesome
Thank you so much chota don
Love you ??
Nice update… sad ending…!!
Thank you so much ankita
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Sad ending huh
Amazing
love you
take care
byee
Thank you so much ishu don
Love you so much ??
osam but little sad update
Thank you so much disha
Awesome awesome somu diiiiiiii ??
Diiii it’s really heart touching..emotional one haa..
U did sad ending??
U wrote this very nicely u know na..I don’t watch any serial except swaragini now I started watching savitri devi but u made me Shivika fan..I became there fan by your ff without watching a single episode of it.
And u are writing another new ff..yayyy!!
Take care
Love you???
Thank you so much micky
???????
Even I’m not a shivika fan as I don’t watch ib
Love you so much ??
Kya Soumya Rula diya …???
…Plz post ASAP
Thank you so much Anita
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried
so emotionalllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!! shivay realised his feeling but it was too late…..so sad ????.
Thank you so much varshini
Love you ??
arz kiya he
tune likha ye part bahut emotional
mere aakhon se beh rahe he nal ka jal
wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhh
sukriya
Thank you so much preeti
Sad ending ??… emotional ?
Love u ???
Thank you so much riya
Love you ??
Feeling really bad for him….
N as it is true story,,,so i can feel the pain,,,’my uncle has also suffered same situation….
May god bless him n child,,,..
Whats the age of child now???
Yaa i was waiting for frnds fst epi
Thank you so much dii
Love you ??
sort for commenting on the last part good epi sad too …anika died its really not good …
Thank you so much aysha
It is nice and emotional dear…
Thank you so much nikita
Y did Anika died…..and it was emotional episode…
Thank you so much arthi
Emotional ending
Thank you so much alekhika
yar apna anika ko mar diya btw
it was awesome
Thank you so much harshita
Sweet one.
As expected story.
Now waiting for last couple
waiting for Friends.
Thank you so much bhaiya
Why why why did u killed her di?? But I think only this concept makes it story a uniq one. Love it. I am crying. But awesome updt. Love u.???
Are nai marti to yeh story unique kyse banti?
Thank you so much Oreo
I’m sorry becoz of me u cried
Love you ??
No sorry di love u.???
Hi somu please reply to me!!