Hallo Lovelies.. Hw r u all.? Well i knw ki sub bhtt bz hai so no wrys,? nd m here again but 1 weak later as always late,? but m so sry 4 that, and Thank you so much 4 ur delicious cmnt,? Now enjoy reading,?
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EPISODE_5_
IN AMERICA…
At kunjs residents…At night in 9 pm…we can see Bebe and a foreign boy was shown…His name is Meckholi…He is a mid 18 and lives wid them only coz he have no parents and once his mother was maid in uvs house and she was died so bebe and all the member of house love him so much.. and now bebe was sitting in the couch wid both eyes closed relaxing herself and the boy Makkhi was giving Bebe’s foot massage…Bebe was enjoying this and scolding also to do properly her foot massage…
B~ Ahan oye Makkhi puttar thik se karna..(bebe can’t called his name properly so she called him Makkhi?)
Mk~ Ohho bhebe mai thek se kar ra huna..(note: he can’t talk properly Hindi)
B~ Uff kitni bar bolu bhebe nai hai ye bebe hota hai Nalayak…
Mk~ But m learning na,?
B~ Areh nalayak tujse accha to mera 3 saal ka pota muje bolta hai bebe…or tuje to mai teri 8 saal ki umar se sikha rai hun par tu thehri nalayak Makkhi Jo apni Zzzzzz awaj ki wajese thik se sunta nahi,?
Mk~ Nai bhebe ap ki Zzzz ki vhajese ye mujhse khuch nai shuntha,?…
B~ Kya bola tu……??
Now bebe start her bhasan and bechara Makkhi cursing himself ki why even earth he said this,? Now just then kunj and uv enter the house and seeing the scenario both give this look’s uff Not again,? so the scean was bebe is scolding Makkhi to death twisting his ear and he is pleading bebe to leave him,? Now uv called bebe so loudly and bebe look towards the door and saw kuvi was standing on the door…now both come inside but kunj was walking and uv was running to bebe..and makkhi thanked uv though his eyes 4 saving him from bebe…
Mk~ Ufff ajh tho bhal bhal bhaj gaya..
K~ Chup be makkhi ab kya kand kia tune jo bebe teri le rai thi…
Mk~ Hehe khunj bhai maine khucho na kia hai..but tq time phe anhe khe liyeh..
K~ Mension not makkhi or mera name khunj nai kunj nai ok.(he said wid sternly,?)
And now here uv run and hug bebe then leaving him running like kid..now listening to his loud voice all gathered in hall..Everyone was so confused even his little cute son also confused ki why his daddy is behaving like kid..den he run towards mahi and hug her very tight..now everyone stood there smiling and soon they cleared their throat to come back to their senses..kunj stood there only smiling to admiring all of their bond..now he spoke…
K~ Oyeh drama king ab teri ye sab drama ho gaya ha…
B~ Ha wohi to ek bacche ka bap ho gaya tu or kabse khudki bacche ke samne baccha bana ja rai hai..or ab to or ek lene ki bari agayi hai..
Listening this mahi blushes and uv get embarrassed now try to change the topic mahi spoke…
M~ Ab tum bataoge ki kya hua hai uv itna chilla kyu rai thi…
U~ Ohho haan wo batati hun ap sabke liye ek good news hai…..He said wid excitement..
B~ Good news kesa hai…
U~ Wo hum sab agle 3 din mai India shift ho rai hai hamesha ke liye or ye kunj ne decide kia hai…(saying dis broad smile)
Everyone looked at kunj and was so much happy to listening this specially bebe but mahi looking seems worry and this was notice by bebe now she spoke…
B~ Kya hua mahi puttar tu khush nai hai is decision se..
M~ Nai esa kuch nai hai mai happy hun is decision or bhai ne liya hai to kuch soch samjh kar liya hai kya..
K~ Haan mahi tu meri pyari behna haina to tere liye kuch bhi karungi so don wry or waha hume koi nai pehchane ga.
M~ Thank u so much bhai…Ap always best hi karoge…I trust u..
B~ (get emotional) Ye acchi bat kya sach bol raha tu puttar hum sab India jayenge…
K~ Ha bebe hum jayenge India or waha hi rahenge abse or dusra kam bhi hai kyuki kuch adhura kam jo pura karn hai,?(said smirking)
B~ Kya puttar kuch samjhi nai..
U~ Ohho leave all this now hum ja rai hai na to abhi se sab kuch packing karlo..or ab mahi dinner lagao m hungry uff..
M~ Ha sab chalo mai khana laga deti hun…
U~ Ha jaldhi bhuk ki mari mai thaka hari uff..
K~ Chup drama king nautanki karna band nai karega chal jake fresh ho hate hai…
U~ Huh tu bhi kya yad rakhega ki teri jija kon hai sale..
K~ Accha chal to tuje dikha deta hun ki kese had rakha jata hai…(making fist to give punch) U~ Areh sun meri sale tuje accha lage ga kya agr phirse yeri upar mera daya agaye to…(mtlb jab kunj uv ko marega tab uv end mai bolega ki daya khake mene mar khaya,hehe,?)
K~ Huh nautanky chal ab teri daya tuje bheek mai de diya…
Saying this kunj grab uvs neck and drag him towards upstair now kuvi went to get fresh and Bebe and mahi laugh seeing their tashan wala cute fight and later all had their dinner and went to their room…
The Next scean….
Now in yuhis room..Mahi was fixing their bed but looking some tensed and uv was doing his work in the side if bed now he noticed that mahi was lost in some thought..so he got up from the bed and back hugging her…
U~ Oyeh tera dhiyan kidhar hai ye tera hero idhar hai..
M~ Uffo uv don’t disturbed me…
U~ What happen jaan..?
M~ Nothing uv u do ur work..
U~ Uffo bolona tum itni pareshan pareshan pareshan pareshan kyun ho..?
M~ Nahi tum to jante hona sab kuch but m just thinking that hum sab waha jayenge..muje bhtt dar kag raha hai uv…
U~ Nahi jaan kuch nai hoga tume tab ye tumara hero nai tha na ab tumara hero haina wo sab haldle kar lenge…
M~ Ha tum ho na to muje kya tension..
U~ Haan to ab suno tumne nai suna us wakt bebe ne kya kaha (grinning naughtyly)
M~ Chup badmash bahot naughty ho gye ho..
U~ Haan to hun warna abhi kese ate..(winking at mahi and kiss her cheeks)
M~ (her mouth was O shape) Chup badmash..
U~ Haha ab tera dhyan sirf teri hero par hona cahiye to palat na…..
Saying this he turn mahi and picked her up in his arms and goes to bed end up wid beautiful night together..????
The Next scean…
In kunjs room he was standing in his balcony and thinking something so deeply…but in face he has cunning smile..and also enjoying the cold wind air blowing in his charming face cutting face..(maybe koi to JAL gaya iski charming face cutting se,?)
“KUNJ’S POV”
Love is so much painfull if I’ll knw it b4 na den I’ll never crossed this path never… Wow thats great air and also m feeling so good… Just wait uh Twinkle taneja just wait for me m coming just only 3 day’s…I’ll hurt u that much ki you won’t can even imagen that…Hahaha m coming.. Giving his cunning smile..??
PLACE AMRITSAR….
In twikis room balcony twinkle also standing there…cold wind air blowing in her chubby Cheek’s and hair’s and Moon’s light was glowing her angelistic face but she was thinking wid so much deeply…about her unexpected turn in her life…
“TWINKLE POV’S”…..
How how my life changed with one so called incident…Why love is so much pain…which it can’t be bearable with each and every time, week, month, years passed out..but never mind true love always win.. But why m feeling so weird…its feel like some1 coming who is very close to my heart will come soon to me to hill my pain who m suffering from last ten year’s… Kunj now pls come back to me…I cant wait 4 more to see u to embraced u in me…I Miss you so much…
Thinking all this she closed her eye’s and let tears flow from eyes which was only showed her love, pain and guilt filled in this beautiful eye’s…and she start to feel the cold wind..but just she knw that ki what will happen in next and what Thunderstorm will come in her life that to soon…
To be continued…….
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Hey how’s this epi.? Sry vai muje bilkul pata nai ki mene kya likha to mera koi fault nai hai ismai m very Innocent hehe,??? Now guy’s kuch notice kia hai kisi ki cmnt na hum sabki ff par 3 weaks se gayab hai or ab wo wapas agyi hai thats why now I want to welcome her wid so many chocolate,???? n (privtly to meri side se 3???or 3???,accha laga ji,?) n she is none other den Meri Adrag or strawberry si Sohi,?? ha ab adrag bolne ka raz nai bataungi mai warna Sohi uski Bakbak queen ko mardalegi (yaneki mai,?) or ek majedar news ab se Sohi tu na teri us title se loyal cmntr hata de kyuki 3 weaks se to tu TU ki kisi bhi ff par cmnt nai kia bz rehne ki karan,? Huh pehle to mere se bhi pehle sabke ff par cmnt karti thi ab jab mera ff post karna start kia to uska last mai present ata hai,? Like yes mam.? Well as always meri baton se ap sabki bheja paka dia now angry m going,,??
LOAD’S OF LOVE,,❤?❤
KEEP SMILING,,???
TATA,MU@@H,,???
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Jaan batana zaruri hai kya kaise laga
Den I think u know MY answer
Nahi bata?????
Den ofcourse amazing Superb mind blowing
Aur kamalka
Bechara uska naam makkhi haha
N bebe ke daantna
Sab funny that aur uv ke harkate bade cute the yaar
N I don’t know kunj K kya hoga but twinkle ka bhi nahi bata mujhe ?????
Aur yeh amazing that
Love u jaan
Keep smiling
Dekha mai exams per bhi itni jaldi comment kar rahi hu???????❤❤❤?❤❤❤
Ye
Wow putta????????????it was awesome fantastic putta??????????
Really I loved it to the core ??
Love you putta????????
Hayee janeman…
Kya epi tha…..????????
Wah yaar tere epi ne to mera boring mood b achha kar diya….just loved it…
And that makkhi vala part was soo hilarious….o my godd hahaha….it ws really funny…
Overall the epi was just awesome…
Post soon janeman…????
Love uh❤❤❤❤
Nice episode post soon ❤️❤️??
Nice do solve the mystery between twinj
Well meri Bak Bak Queen I still didn’t read ur ff
But thank you, thank you for a heartily welcome.
Mujhe bilkul b bura nahi laga. Ulta mujhe maza aya tera message padh kar
Waise mai adrakh kaise bani. Batana zaroor
Aur haan ab mai apna title zaroor change karungi ?
I will again comment on this post after reading the ff
Bye
Luv u my dear
ohhhhhhhh lord hubby….♥
hahahaaa……..angel matlab kahan se……….kaiseeeeee……..uffffff……..itna cute likh lete ho aap…….♥
amazing deariieeeee………♥♥♥♥♥ shoooooooo cute shooooooo marvelleous………..sooooo lovely…soooooo emotional………..♥
loved it……….♥♥
love u lods……..♥♥♥
cant wait……….☺ post nxt asap………♥
love u sis………..♥♥
Hey januuiu..
Srry late comment k liye…
Tu toh jaanti hai na…
Well the epi..
It was awesome amazing fantastic..
Just loved it…
Love u..
Kunj is cunning.. Twunkle innocent
Yuvi naughty nd mahi simple …
Post soon….
Love u…
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Hey beauty queen ?,
I m soooo glad ki tune post kra….
I was waiting for it…
Sorry Maine subse lst cmnt kra h isliye…
Teri epi k bare m Kya bolu….
Tune Mujhe apni writing ka fan BNA Diya. ..
Today’s epi was…
Awsm….
Amazing…
Wonderful….
Fabulous ….
Fantastic ….
Marvellous …..
Excellent ….
Too Funny ????
Bebe and makkhi conversation was amazing yrr….Bebe me uski waatt LGA di….?????
UV character is mind blowing yrr….I love his character in your FF…He is soo Funny and cute????….BT NT more than our kunj???…Yuhi are sooo cute and lovely couple…
Kunj and yuvi friendship is soo nice…
Jalne ka toh PTA ni….BT mera Dil garden garden ho gaya kunj k looks dekh kr…
Twinj pov were awsm…
Waiting for next epi…
Plz post ASAP….
LOVE U?????
My SEEETUUU…..
Muuahh ?????
sorry for the late comment my comment queen! actually bohot busy hun! isliye aaj,chote comment se kaam chala le! This is so beautiful! Makkhi! like seriously haha??? bebe yaar?? it was really funny!.beautifully written! just loved it!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Ayiee Amma?
Itna Accha hai ??Tum kaise itna Accha likh sakti ho yaar??Matlab yaani Fantastic??Ek hi Episode mein itna kuch?Matlab Fun ?se lekar Evilness?Sab bhar di yaar??
Amazing??post soon
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Haye Finally teri Episode parhne ko miligaya????I am so Happy????Sorry Mamma se bach ke comment kar rahi hun isiliye aise????Pehchana na mujhe jaan??????
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Episode was Amazing jaan????
Just loved it❤❤❤❤❤❤
Fantastic ???
Lovely????
Funny????
N thora scary bhi?????
Cause of Kunj???
Haye Allah yeh larka kya karna chahta hai twinkle ke saath??????
Itna gussa kis baat ka????
Uski devilness????????
Khair koi bari wajah hogi????
Warna mujhe toh choti si choti baat par isse zyada gussa ata hai????
Tu har dafa meri curiosity barha deti hai next episode ko parhne ke liye????????jaldi post karna???hope mujhe bhi jaldi parhne ka time miljaye??????
Tujhe pata hai mera hass hass ke bura haal hai??????
Ufffffff?????woh Makkhi wala part toh Amazing tha????
Marvellous Idea ????
Superb??
Loved it???
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Meri jaan tu kaamal hai yaar ?????Meri s*xy lady mujhse bhi zyada acha likhti hai tu??????
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❤?❤?❤?❤?SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT?❤?❤?❤?❤
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Aaj zyada bakbak nahi ki meine??????????Aaj thori bakbak ki bas?????Nahi shayad thori zyada?????
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Love u Meri s*xy lady ??????
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Love till infinity my Hottie lady???????????????????????????????????????????????
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Love u Meri jaan???????????????????????
Take care ????????
Keep Smiling ??????
N laughing?????????
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Sholly for late comment ??????????????????
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❤❤❤❤❤LOVE U❤❤❤❤❤
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The last one to cmt…I guesss par plz naraz maat hona yaar kya karu u know am buzy….oh god the epi was hilarious …makhi….haha..itni hashi may woh part may abhi mera stomach dukh raha hae….kya likti hae tu….superb…just don’t have any words….u left me completely speechlesss…love it..post soon chocopie♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Great epi….
Pist soon. …
Episode was soo funny especially bebe and makhi scenes and yuvis antics
I’m very curious to know this innocent girl and devil boy love story
Do continue and post soon
Bye