Hallo my lovelies.. How r u all.? You knw guy’s i didn’t expectd this much Love frm u guy’s which u all give me by ur beautiful cmnt,☺..Thank you very very much from bottom of my Heart my lovelies 4 this delicious testy wala cmnts,? Now here is the next epi.. So keep reading with ur beautiful smile,?…
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EPISODE_2
“PLACE AMRITSAR”
The same at mid night in Taneja mansion after tiring function all were sleeping but in twiki’s room chinki was sleeping so deeply but some1 was not n she is twinkle..she was just thinking about some1,, something n dat to deeply..let’s see her pov..
(TWINKLE POV’S)
Where r u.?..u knw i miss u so much…but hay babaji i don knw dat ki how will he look now..ok lemmi guess..um a Monkey or Elephant..No no maybe looking like Gorilla..haha..Aey twinkle what r u making him n all dis..(thinking all dis she giggls)..yeah he was to gud n innocent also..but seriously what i did wid him..will he can able to 4give me so easily..(now she start sobbing).Haan i did a mistake but dat not means ki you’ll 4get me 4ever..Naah.!! i won’t let dis happen never..I knw dat you’ll come back 4give also..Plz come back..m waiting 4 you..plzz..(end of povs)… (1st time pov plz bolna kesa hua).. Now thinking all dis few tears are made way in her eye’s..n soon she is drifting to sleep..
Next Day Morning…
Now sun rises up and beautifull bird was also chirping..it’s so peaceful to listening dem.. Now everyone was wake up and Leela and servent made bf and set on the table…
L- Good Morning jii..
Rt- Good mrng Leela jii..
L- Ayei jii nashta lag gaya..
Rt- Haa ok.. Accha meri dono princesses kaha hai abhi tak nai uthi kya..
L- Jii shayad uth gaye hai mai dekti hun..
Rt- Wait u stop..dey will come its ok..
L- Accha ok jii…..
Now Rt had his bf and left to his office..and leela was doing her other work..
And in twiki’s room a girl was shown..she is standing near the dressing table and was dressed up in Orange Anarkali..and in her ear she was wearing a beautiful white earring and her hair was left open looking extremely beautiful..now she was trying to wake up her sister..who was sleeping like kumb karan..but it was disturbing her..as she was sleeping so peaceful na..now she get annoyed and start to yell upon her sister..but she was trying hard to wake up and girl was revealed to be twinkle..
T- Chinkii dii uthona ap..
C- Uff kya hai twinki sone dena..
T- Nai bas bhttt so liya apne ab uthoo..(loudly).
C- Ayee twinki kan ke niche chilla mat..
T- Dii kuch din bad apki shadi hai tab bhi ap esahi karoge..nd lawyer hoke dekho to kese kumbkaran ki tara so rai ho ap..ekdin apki mujrim esika fayda utha kar bhag jayega,?..
C- Uffo chup kar..meri nai teri wale tuje dhoka dega or bhag jayega..(listening dis tw was feeling strange but bruised the thought).. or kya shadi ke bad mai apni sasural mai ese so paungi..chal hat yaha se bari ayi kumbkaran bolne wali..?..
T- Accha esa kya to thik hai mai ja rahi hun..
C- Haan jaa na roka kisne…
T- Thik hai niche jiju aye hai mai unse milne ja rahi hun..socha tha ki ap uth jayengi to unse bhi millegi..but its ok mai unko jake na bol deti hun..ki ap unse nai milna cahte,?…
C- Kya bola omg Varun aye hai or tune muje bataya nai…kya karti hai twinki pehle bata na cahiye tha na tu bhi na…mai abhi fresh hoke ati hun..hehe..?
Now twinkle is standing with her opened mouth,? that when she was trying hard to wake up her sister she was not listening now what was det,?…… A couple of mnt time ago when it all happened that time twinkle saying dis loudly she was about to go…just then chinki got up with a thud from her kumbkaran sleep listening about her to be husband..and seeing all dis twinkle was standing open mouthed face..?
But soon thinking about her Lie’s she got tensed..dat what will be its consequence..just den she grab her college bag run dis room to save of herself from dis jowalamukhi,?
AT LIVING HALL ROOM..
Now twinkle is hurriedly comedown with the staircase.. Just then leela called twinkle and asked her ki what happened that she is walking fast and later asking her about her morning breakfast..but twinkle denied..
L- Areh twinkle puttar what hapend to u.?
T- What ma nothing happened to me..
L- Accha to itni jaldhi kaha ja rahi hai tu..?
T- Wo ma m getting late 4 college.. That’s why m going fast as it would be going to late..
L- Accha ok..but at least had breakfast come..
T- No ma plz late me go if I’ll late more na den jowalamukhi will surely will be BLAST.!!
L- Ayee yaha konsa jowalamukhi hai but twinkle yeh to iceland mai barf ki niche hai na..
T- Uffo ma haina apki pati.(marmars) Accha ok now late me go plzz I’ll had it on canteen ok..
L- Accha had it on time ok..
T- Yah now can i go..(almost pleading?)..
L- Hm ok..ja puttar..
T- Haa ma bye..love u..
Saying dis she just run out of the house…and sit her bike and drove of to her medical college…yeah twinkle is final year student of medical section…..Now at far from Amritsar in Delhi…
“PLACE AMERICA”_
At nignt in Los angels…A big and large hall was shown…there was a big stage…and in there was many thing was setting like Dram’s,, Band’s guitar,, Mike,, etc was placed there with every man…seems like there will maybe happen a big concert with a big Rock star in singing world…and in the ground audience or we can see many many Lot’s of people who were just shouting…screaming…and…hooting is just 1 name in their mouth…Who is HEARTTHROB,❤of every not just girl also boy’s…Who stole their heart,? with his melody firing voice,?Now the boy is standing on start of stage and the white light was only focused on this boy…he was wearing Black t-shirts with black leather jacket and Black Jean’s…Looking damn firing hott,?…Now his eye’s is shown its also looking like fire,?but it was carrying so many thing like Hate ness…Anger…Grief…and only 1 thing and it was REVENGE… but in front of this people it didn’t showed up…and now his pink sweat yet rough Lip’s is shown which was want to tell one thing dat I’ll destroy u n dat to soon…but in front of this people its also another thing…Now he hold the mike near in his mouth and is ready to sing a song 4 his lovely fans…Now finally his face is shown he was none other then the most hottest and s*xiest guy in this world…and ovio it’s revealed to be only…?KUNJ SARNA?……
To be continued…..
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Uff finally end hua,? You knw guys kal mene epi post kia tha but yeh post nai hua,?..nd isliye tension mai mene meri Aamna n Presha in dono ko bhtt tang kia,? but in dono ne chupchap meri pareshani bardast kia,? or in dono ne kuch nai bola but support kia hamesha ki tarah,?.. Or i cant write n describe well so mene decide kar chuki thi ki I’ll stop writing..but Meri jaan…My Janu…My lovely di…My Fattu…My cutesy Wifey doll n sushmi di ke liye writing stop nai kia kyuki inko mai upset nai dekh sakti,? so yeh episode dedication ealan karti hun,?… And today epi was lttel long.. And plz tell me ki how’s hero’s entry,u like it or not?.. i hope u all like today’s epi,☺ if not its also ok coz I knw I can’t write well.. So I’ll not force u to cmnt if u all like it den cmnt only,☺…
GOD BLESS U ALL,??..
KEEP SMILING,??
LOAD’S OF LOVE,❤?❤..
SABKO TATA,??..
26 Comments
Hey januuuu???
Kya likha hai..???
Its just amazing.., ???
Loved it ….❤❤❤
Too good..??
Post soon…??
Love u…????
Loved it … Awesome . .. episode…. too good … I loved Kunj’s entry and Twinkle’s POV??? just awesome …
Want to know about Twinkle’s past …
Love you post soon ❤
Nice do post soon
Apka bahut bahut shukriya Bak Bak queen
For posting ur episode 2 times
Episode was really amazing
But to whom twinkle asking forgiveness
And why kunj is having revenge in his eyes
Do continue and post soon
Bye
Wow putta episode was awesome mind blowing marvelous and wat not really putta u did a great job
And Kunj’s entry was awesome???
Twinkle nd mahi’s conversation was nice
I loved it to the core putta
And don’t u dare to think of ending this ff OK..
Bye putta
Take care
Love you sooooooooo much putta????
hey mia
it’s awesome?loved it.post soon.???
Your plot seems to be very interesting
Keep it up and post soon
And One more thing i like to ask from you all
Will all of you be my friends?
Ya dear y not
Oye hoye meri jaan??
???????❤??❤?❤?????????????❤?❤?❤????????❤?????
Kya dhamakedaar Episode tha??
Uff Tu kaise bol sakti hai ki u don’t know to describe well??
Yaar kya Entry thi Kunj ki??
??????????????????????????????
Yaar just loved it❤❤
Uff Kunj is back for revenge ??
Haye wanna know reason for this ??
Aur Twinkle ki POV ????
Twinkle neKya kiya Yaar past mein aisa??????ke kunj wanted his revenge???????
Aur chinki n twinki ki conversation toh???????????
Just loved them yaar?????
Aurapne Hottie ki Entry toh Alaw thi yaar??????
Kafi kuch janti haiapne Hottie kebaare mein????????
Itna bara INTRO Aaj tak kisi ne nahi diya hoga???????
Kya bolu yaar??
It was fabolous… mindblowing… superb yaar??????
Just loved it ?????
N thank u for not ending it☺☺☺
N dare u even think also????
Next Episode jaldi post kariyo jaan☺☺
Love u soo much??????????????????
❤❤❤❤❤❤??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The plot seems interesting
Please post soon
Now….that’s phenomenal??????….kunj me entry toh bhaisahabb???jabardastt
….post soon ???
Hayeee…janeman…
Kya likha hai tune yaar???????
Wow wow wow…loved it…aur kunj ko to kya describe kiya…..like me to mare jaa rahi thi uss par….❤❤❤❤❤
Abb pata chala na ki tu kitni achhi writer hai….khali phokat me hi bhaav kha rai thi?????
Well srry zara late comment kar rai hu…abhi abhi apni exam de kar ayi….aur abhi uniform b change nai kiya…directly ff padha aur comment kar rahi hu…
I m double happy today..ek to meri board exams khatam ho gayi…aur dusri tune post kia…???????????????????????…
Nahi triple happy q ki abhi me tere jiju se v milne jaa rai hu????????…
Chal ab jaldi post kario….love u soo much janeman❤❤❤❤❤?????????
I just want to read more
Its really good
Post soon as it too intresting
Loads of love
Haayyeeee meri vanilla… cold coffee… my jaan.., my love… ????? first of all toh i m very very sorrrryyyyyyy … kyunke na 1st epi pe comment nhi kr paayii., sorryyy jaaan…
Coming to the epi.., it was just jhakkass ???
Mindblowing.. too awesome… amazing… ???
Chinki’s nd twinkle’s talks ????
Or fir twinkle’s pov ????? saath me hansi bhi aayi…
Itne amazing ?????
Or haan bss ker dy.. bhtt tareef ker li tu ne mere Sid ki…??????? zyada khwaab mat dekh… samjhiii.. wo sirf mera hai huhh ???
Or tu ye baar baar kya boli jaa rahi hai…??? ????
Ki tu acha nhi likhti nd alll that ?????????
U knw na it hurts me ???????
Tu baar baar yehi bol rahi hai ??????
Jaanti hai kitna achaa likha tu ne but nhi ???
U hurt me Priya jaan… ??????
Chal chod mere dukhdas… ??
Not from now.., aagy se tu kabhi aesa nhi boly gi samhjhii.. warna ?????
Post the next one asap..
LOADS ND LOADS ND LOADS OF LOVE ??❤❤???❤
Oh ho chocopie
Kya likti hae tu…muahhh
Twinki ka pov sahi tha…kunj ko tumne monkey elephant gorilla bana diya hawww…Aur hero ki entry finally…revenge time par kyu…kya kiya tha twinki ne…jaldi post kariyo
Aur hah yeh baat dimag may set karlo u r a very gud writer aur hum na tumare ff may cmt karenge…
Loads of love
Twinj
awesome intresting plot
post soon
Omg Priya ….???????
Kya likha h tune yrr…… ????
Awesome Amazing mind blowing epi yrr….
Mujhe TOH LGA ki sleeping beauty is our siyapaa Queen. ….BT Wo TOH chunky Nikki …???hehe…Or Kya yrr ye kisses itne ache naam de rhi thi????….Why was she sad…..
Or meri jaan Kya entry dikhai h Kunj ki…..Mai TOH Mar gyi uspr ?????
Kitna hot lag rha hoga….Hyeee mera hotty???…..Mar hi Dala h apne looks Se…. ?????
Jee Kr rha h ki tujhe ek Jor ki jhapi du…..???? ?Kya discribe kiya h Sid mtlb Kunj ko tune…..
BT ye BTA jaanemanh ki hamara hero angry young man kiu BNA hua h…..Kis revenge k bare m likha h yrr tune….
Or Tu pitegi how can you say that you are not a good writer….
Tu TOH. JhaaaakaaaassssssssS, fardu ,mind blowing writer h…..???????????????
Jaldi SE APNI next epi post Kr de….It an order request Ni Keti m frnd SE….. Hehehe ?????
OK khabardar Jo ISS FF ki end KRNE ka khayal v apne dimag m lya TOH….
If u think me anything then u won’t end it….
Tune dubara apne appko kharab writer bola na TOH Mai samjhungi ki Tu mujhe APNA frnd Ni manti….
Okkkk
Byeeee
Post soon
LOADS OF LOVE ????????????
MUuuaaaaaahhhh ???????????
My sweetheart u nailed it it was amazing, fabulous, marvellous and what not and u said that u can’t describe well but the hero entry u gave made me speechless??? I loved it and I love you so so so very much sweetheart ?????
Amazing awesome fabulous
Hayeeeeee jaan kya episode that ????????????
Mar hi dala
Awesome tha
Twinkle ke aankhon mai aasu bata nahi kyu hai per itna bata hai ki voh uske sadu sarna ko yaad kar rahi hai
N twinkle chinki ko jagane ke tarekka jiju aaye hai was superb
Jwalamukho se bachalena
N kunj o my God jaan uski entry tho full on fire matlab full on hot that
Superb
love u keep smiling
awesome
amazing
fabulous
lovely
fantastic
aaaaaaawwwwwiiiiiieeeeeeeee………haaayyyeee my hubby……..☺
ufff…..inna cute bt kunj toh gadbad hi gadbad Bhai sab golmaal hai bhi sab golmaal hai……..hehehe…………
apne wifey ko kitne shock dogi hubby……….
my jaan…..srsly osm marvelleous speechless amazing osm mast episode cant wait…srriiee m late………..
love u sooooooooo mch hubby……….♥